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Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: Gurung

Tue, 21 Dec 2010 09:45:28 +0000

Well done Kable Ganga dear awsome song keep it up…

Comment on अनुराधाप्रति समर्पित (गजल) - आचार्य प्रभा by: nir bahadur thami

Sat, 18 Dec 2010 08:34:41 +0000

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Comment on अनुराधाप्रति समर्पित (गजल) - आचार्य प्रभा by: basanta

Sat, 27 Nov 2010 15:36:11 +0000

i dont like this kabita yo kabita dherai purano bho ok

Comment on अनुराधाप्रति समर्पित (गजल) - आचार्य प्रभा by: arjun kumar bamjan

Fri, 26 Nov 2010 21:46:41 +0000

thanks didi anuradha mam ko lagi pransayogya hune 6 yo kabita i like it

Comment on फूल खोज्‍ने भमरा झैं.. (हास्य गीत) - नरेश माङपाहाङ राई by: मधुमल्ला-२ ,मोरङ (RAJU)

Sat, 13 Nov 2010 10:56:01 +0000

कबिता त साह्रै घत् लाग्दो रहेछ लेख्ने ब्यक्ती पनि त्यस प्रती निकै अनुभबी भएजस्तो छ,यसो चिन्जान गर्न पाये हुन्थ्यो possible want email ID please.

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: sajana grg

Wed, 10 Nov 2010 17:27:21 +0000

kumari ji tapaiko katha parkasit vayeko jhandai 1 barsa vanau aja matra maile padhne awsar paye kinaki hknepalsang parichit vayeko just 2 hapta vayo hola so aja tapaiko katha pade atyantai ramro lagyo. ajako manis aphaeima vagban ra aphaima saitan tara pani sakdo manis vayera jiunasaknunai manab jibanko sarthakta ho. thanks keep it up

Comment on वेअर्थ (मुक्तक) - मान थापा by: bijesh

Fri, 29 Oct 2010 07:05:37 +0000

muktak, gajalko niyamharu ramro adhyan garera lekdaa ramro hola ki ? dui char sadda korera, geet jasto sthayi ra antara milayera matra muktak ra gajal bandaina. lekhnu bhanda aghi niyam bujhema pangu hunu bat bachinchha.

Comment on शून्यतामा… (कविता) -उषा गिरी by: padam limbu

Fri, 08 Oct 2010 14:29:26 +0000

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Comment on शून्यतामा… (कविता) -उषा गिरी by: hem lal giri

Wed, 29 Sep 2010 11:01:37 +0000

I am really happy read your poem. So much nice i want to appriciate the same. Always try to write more then good. presently i am in study in delhi and i am also giri

Comment on एक जुग भयो विदेशिएको म (कविता) -देव गुरुङ by: arjun kumar bamjan

Mon, 20 Sep 2010 01:37:02 +0000

its good i like it…..

Comment on माटोको नयाँ गीत गाउँदै छु (कविता) - राजेश राई by: pradeep baral

Sun, 12 Sep 2010 05:55:02 +0000

kabita ta yeakdamai samasamayek 6. kabita ko lagi thank you.

Comment on सैद्धान्तिक मृत्यु.. (कविता) –अप्जसे कान्छा by: ekraj nembang

Sat, 28 Aug 2010 11:35:57 +0000

bichar-sip-anubhab-darshan ko jagma lekhiyeko kabita ..

Comment on शहीद विद्युत र श्रद्धाञ्जलि..(कविता) - दीपेन्द्र के.सी. by: rakesh shah

Fri, 13 Aug 2010 04:51:33 +0000

hi hello rayes dai ma tapai derai man parcha kin ki tapai mero man ko geet gaunu huncha tara mero matra navayera sabai ko man jitna saknu vayeko tapai naya barsa ko suba kamana cha yo dukhi vhai ko dai mero ghar dhading maidee 5 gairee ghu ma parcha la dai ok bye la?

Comment on हरामी (कविता) - विक्रम सुब्बा by: देश/ विदेशको समाचारः एचकेनेपाल डट कम » हरामी - वि�

Sun, 08 Aug 2010 14:10:50 +0000

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Comment on प्रवासतिर …(गीत गजल) - इखालु रमेश गेलाल by: Nirnjan Khanal

Sun, 01 Aug 2010 12:14:47 +0000

Malai dherai man paryo kina ki hami nepali ko real ghatanama match gareko 6,Aaja varkhar vharkhar love parekalai ta jhan.

Comment on अमरत्व प्रेमको .. (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ by: Bhawana Rai

Wed, 21 Jul 2010 17:38:43 +0000

Your POem is the Reflection of Hope inside the Betrayal. Love Hurts but life must GO ON…..

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Bhawana Rai

Wed, 21 Jul 2010 17:35:44 +0000

Krishna Jii
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Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: subarna

Fri, 16 Jul 2010 10:53:30 +0000

i like this it really true .

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: ARJUN KUMAR BAMJAN

Tue, 13 Jul 2010 00:42:47 +0000

very nice article i agree with kumariji…..

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: arjun kumar bamjan

Fri, 09 Jul 2010 05:55:33 +0000

dherai ramro 6 lamaji ….keep it up.

Comment on छ हाईकु - सकु थापा by: bahbuk yagya

Wed, 07 Jul 2010 09:35:18 +0000

kathamandu nepal

Comment on छ हाईकु - सकु थापा by: bahbuk yagya

Wed, 07 Jul 2010 09:32:40 +0000

saku ji sahitik abhibaadan
hajurko haiku sarai ramro lagyo,raamro6 a ja prayas rat kalam chalaunu hola .

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: shisam

Mon, 05 Jul 2010 06:11:43 +0000

hi, tapaiko lejh jyadai sandarbeek lagyo. khai kun sabdale samman garau hajurlai abhav 6an sabdaharu ma sanga, feri feri lekhdai garnu hola badhai 6 hajurlai.

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: geetathakuri

Fri, 18 Jun 2010 11:46:47 +0000

hajuko kabita dherai ramro 6
u r great

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: mahendra biyogi gurung

Thu, 17 Jun 2010 13:20:58 +0000

durga g tapaiko gajal malai dheri remro lagyo ra ramro cha

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: chanda lama

Tue, 15 Jun 2010 12:22:30 +0000

prasai ji tapaiko yo kabita sarai raamro laagyo,ho tapai le thik bhannu bhayo yo madhise haru le hami nepali harulai yasari ta hepachan ta?ani Prasai ji yasarai nai kabita haru lekhdai garnu hola hai.

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Tiratth

Sun, 13 Jun 2010 10:07:33 +0000

Hi Asha K cha Hajur Ko Halkhaber Malai Ekdamai man Paryo Hajur Le Lekheko Gajal Ajai Yo Bhanda Pani Ramro Lekhnu Hola Arko vhoti

Comment on माया भनिदेऊ.. (गीत गजल) - केदार श्रेष्ठ”गगन” by: aryan sharma

Sun, 06 Jun 2010 00:19:11 +0000

wow it nice

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: aryan sharma

Sun, 06 Jun 2010 00:12:44 +0000

mis Kumari jee u prickly write this all do not stop like a car without oil okey. go onnnn dont be slump byyy
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Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: Tirath Dhami

Sat, 29 May 2010 15:10:03 +0000

Hey Indira Sis Verry Good Poem I Like it And Best of luck

Tirath Dhami “pagal” Ldh. India.

Comment on संदेश - दुर्गा राई by: Tirath Dhami

Sat, 29 May 2010 15:00:09 +0000

Durga ji Malai Pani Hajur Sandesh Ati Raro Lagyo Hami haru Pradesh Ma Bhayera Pani hami Harulye yesto Ramro Lekh Haru padhna pauchau Durga Ji Aru Pani yestai Lekh har Lekhera Pathaunu hola.

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: bishnu prasad gautam

Fri, 28 May 2010 15:49:28 +0000

yo kavita ta hamra netale sugale rate jhai ratna parchh. netrito dina nasakda yasta ghatna gatinai rhanchh.

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: SURESH REGMI

Thu, 08 Apr 2010 11:33:25 +0000

aasa 6,tapai bat yastai gajal haru aairahane 6.all the best.

Comment on तिमी… (कविता) - आरती पौडेल by: sudip budhathoki

Sat, 27 Mar 2010 14:19:49 +0000

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Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: biru lama

Wed, 17 Feb 2010 02:33:34 +0000

hi lama ji tapaiko euta lekha patda molai man ek dum santusti bayo derai ramro 6 danyabad ani tapaiko interduction pauna sak6u molai email gara la ok bye

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Nagesh

Fri, 05 Feb 2010 08:01:10 +0000

kabita ta kabita jasto po hunchh ta yo ta nara bhayoki….???

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: Ganesh magar

Fri, 29 Jan 2010 05:29:50 +0000

Every 1 now start 2 learn 4rm him Coz he iz my best POET-MEN idole

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: Ganesh magar

Fri, 29 Jan 2010 05:26:14 +0000

Kabita bhaneko yasto po hunu parchha ta jo kasaile padhna sathai aansu le aakha bhijo SIR ho aaj jiwan maile chaheko kabita padhnu paauda I M VERY PROUD OF U aba ma pani sikchhu kabita lekhna hajur le jatikkai ta sakdin tar pani I’LL TRY MY BEST BECAUSE NOW I LEARNED 4RM U. Keep it up.

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Narendra Raj Magar

Thu, 28 Jan 2010 15:38:26 +0000

OH! Asha g, tapaira tapaiko gazal lai mero salam ! dherai ramro6. malai attinai manparyo ! nrajmagar@yahoo.com

Comment on लौ भन नेता हो .. - देव गुरुङ by: Narendra Raj Magar

Thu, 28 Jan 2010 15:33:08 +0000

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Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: rajesh limbu

Thu, 21 Jan 2010 15:07:02 +0000

thank u so much ma yasai email marfat aafno bichar rakhna payeko ma khusinai 6u bisea ma ke vanna chahan6u vane jati pani limbu hami 6u sabai 1 jut hunu par6 ra ak arkaprati maya ra sahayogko hat pani barauna par6 vanne mero dharana 6 ani yas kabitalai herne ho vane akdam malai man paryo ra ajhai gaubesima suhaune khalko palam git juhari vaye jhanai khusi hune thiye ra jati tara vaye pani aafno maulik saskriti ra pahichan lai laj namai biswa sami chinaunu par6 ra aafno limbu vasa vitra kunai pani halatyma bahiya danda hunu hundaina vanne malai lag6 ok thank u next bicharma hai

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: makutee

Tue, 19 Jan 2010 14:36:56 +0000

ganga lee dherai ranro gareko cha ysari nai pragati gardai janu parcha grg haru gitma matra nabhayra nepal ko har kura haru ma pragati gannu parcha

Comment on नयाँ नेपाल ! (कविता) - दीपेन्द्र के.सी. by: dinesh

Sun, 03 Jan 2010 08:24:19 +0000

sapana boki hide ko yo jiban kewal sapana, sapana nai rahane vo

Comment on नयाँ नेपाल ! (कविता) - दीपेन्द्र के.सी. by: Aaryan

Wed, 30 Dec 2009 05:21:17 +0000

Very nice kabita i like it. please add to my url, also
Happy new year 2010

Comment on पाँच हाइकु - सकु थापा by: bharat

Fri, 25 Dec 2009 09:54:54 +0000

ramro lagyo

Comment on सतीढुङ्गानेर अरूण (कविता) - नवराज सुब्बा by: bijaay thebe

Thu, 17 Dec 2009 15:08:03 +0000

hi dajju namaskar
dherai ramro kabita lekhenu vayeko rahecha mero man ma nai bijyo aasa cha tapai bat ajai yestai kabita haru sunna pau vanne aasa rakheko chu tapaiko pargatiko kamana gardhachu.

Comment on गजल -बिनय लामा by: mani

Mon, 14 Dec 2009 06:54:58 +0000

verry good gajal ok make rady

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: mani

Sat, 12 Dec 2009 08:27:04 +0000

yaha ko gajal ranro lageko chha thap prayas garthai janu hola hai
ok .
season

Comment on माटोको नयाँ गीत गाउँदै छु (कविता) - राजेश राई by: mani

Sat, 12 Dec 2009 08:19:43 +0000

hi rajest ramaro lagyo
hamile vhayi pathauj\nu mildina ta

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: jayaram adhikari

Wed, 25 Nov 2009 18:39:19 +0000

विष्णु जी तपाई आफ्नै रचना लेख्नु होला आर्क का बौधिक चोरी गरेर प्रसंसा बटुल न्ना शर्मा लग्दैना

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: HIRA G.C.

Thu, 19 Nov 2009 11:00:19 +0000

very very good i like this poem so i waste my time to write a comment.

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: बिनय लामा

Wed, 04 Nov 2009 00:59:26 +0000

किन हो मलाई नै थाहा छैन म प्रायस: लेखहरु शुरुमै पढ्दिन, coment हेर्ने गर्छु, के भनेको छ यदि राम्रो प्रतिक्रिया छन् भने म त्यो पढ्ने गर्छु। र कुमारी तपाईको पनि लेख पढ्ने अवसर पाए। खुशी लाग्यो……. राम्रो लेख्नु भएको रहेछ। keep it up
-बिनय लामा

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: alag

Sat, 17 Oct 2009 14:36:29 +0000

Hi, Kumari je,
Thanks for your nice article, really its a brilliant education for the people, keep it up,

Comment on तिम्रो प्रतीक्षामा (कविता ) - पुरुषोत्तम न्यौपाने by: Purushottam Neapane

Sun, 04 Oct 2009 15:19:41 +0000

Thanks a lot ~Suman g.

Comment on जाडो… (कविता) - ईन्द्र थापामगर by: polestar.blogsome.com :: स्वागतम :: September :: 2009

Tue, 22 Sep 2009 11:38:45 +0000

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Comment on शहीद विद्युत र श्रद्धाञ्जलि..(कविता) - दीपेन्द्र के.सी. by: polestar.blogsome.com :: स्वागतम :: September :: 2009

Tue, 22 Sep 2009 11:38:30 +0000

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Tue, 22 Sep 2009 11:38:13 +0000

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Comment on तिमी… (कविता) - आरती पौडेल by: ganesh gaire

Thu, 17 Sep 2009 18:55:08 +0000

hi aarati ,u write to much good and senti pome i read this .i went tell for u go ahead always ,best of wish.

Comment on ‘तेलखानी बिनाको नेपाल र ठमेलहरु’ (कविता) - बृत आधार by: santosh

Thu, 17 Sep 2009 10:32:07 +0000

namaste nepal

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: susma karki

Wed, 09 Sep 2009 12:01:01 +0000

hi sabita ji nice kabit always keep it up

Comment on नयाँ नेपाल… (गीत गजल) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: josef

Tue, 08 Sep 2009 16:40:32 +0000

well done bhola jee, kamse kam tapaile mari bhawanalai sabdamai bhaya ni boldinu bha cha tesaile nii ” bhawa milai sath, sath milai hat , hat milai kadth, kadth milai hidau autai path, destination hamro autai ho autai dhartii autai bas, ,,,,, bas yatinai bhanna chanchu hajur bye

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: Ganesh khadka " Pratiksha "

Sat, 05 Sep 2009 06:29:47 +0000

Thanks a lots all my frnds who comments on my creation. I hope you all will be with me forever. Thank you all so much…….

Comment on छोराको पत्र आमालाई ( कविता)- कमल खनाल by: raj rana

Fri, 04 Sep 2009 17:45:07 +0000

hello kamal jee yati ramrolagyo your poem i need to your address , email ,phone no plz send me your email phone no address this email ok

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: naren

Fri, 21 Aug 2009 14:57:58 +0000

jiwan ma sabai lai thagna dhatna sakincha tara afulay afailai kahilay pani dhatna sakindaina ani afno satya lai aru agadi prastut garna saknu afu bhitra ko iswar lai jagauna saknu parcha jo tapain le jagayera hami samakcha paskanu bhaye ko chaa yes kabita marfat tyasaile yo kabita jati padyo tyati padna mun lagdo chha. Ajhai lekhnu hola yasta kabita haru afno satya haru bicharera.

Comment on ‘तेलखानी बिनाको नेपाल र ठमेलहरु’ (कविता) - बृत आधार by: बृत्त आधार

Thu, 20 Aug 2009 11:47:52 +0000

Hari ji,
rajan ji,
amir ji,
kavita ji,
bairagi ji,

dherai dherai dhanyabaad, comments ko laagi, jasko sahayataale nai bicharharu majhindai jane chha bhanne biswas lina sakinchha. tara haalko pariprekchha ma jiwan alik kathin sangharshama byatit bhairaheko hunaale bartamaan awasthhako baarema tyati adhyan garna napairaheko hunaale kunaipani kavita ko thaalani nai nabhaeko hunale kun sirsakma abako naya kavita thalda hunchha tyas samabandhamaa yahaharuko tarfa baata sujhaav paune aashaamaa chhu.

बृत्त आधार
brit-aadhaar@hotmail.com

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: bal menyangbo

Fri, 14 Aug 2009 14:57:36 +0000

yo kabita ramro lagyo.

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: bal menyangbo

Wed, 12 Aug 2009 14:19:03 +0000

ganesh g sarba pratham badhai 6.tapaiko yo kabita le sarai man 6oyo.pragati ko suvakamana 6.pheri pheri yo hknepal ma tapaiko lekh haru sadhai herna pau.thnks alots.byyyyyyyyy.

Comment on उच्छवासले चाप्दै लग्यो .. (गीत गजल) - एकलव्य राज by: kumar yakha

Sun, 09 Aug 2009 10:57:54 +0000

hi namaskar sampurna nepali daju vai lagayat didi bahini harumaa ma kumar yakha ko tarfa bata . mero ghar dhankuta ko kurule 2 maa ho ra ma ahile uq maa chhu ani hk ma rahanu vayeko santa didi padam vena ani pabitra ,vena lagayat uk ma rahanu vayeko solti kamal lai dherai dherai samjhana ani yo mero address ho yasma mail garnu hola malai chinne sathiharu le

Comment on सैद्धान्तिक मृत्यु.. (कविता) –अप्जसे कान्छा by: Surendra

Tue, 04 Aug 2009 23:42:50 +0000

जहा मल हुन्छ त्याहा बाली मौलाउछ, अरु सवै बिर्सनु भाइ आफ्ना यात्रा जारी राख्नु, जो धेरै बोल्छ उस्ले चाहिने भन्दा नचाहिने धेरै बोलिरहेको हुन्छ। त्यसैले राम्रो र नराम्रो को निर्णयको सरोकार छैन।
सुरेन्द्र

Comment on फूल खोज्‍ने भमरा झैं.. (हास्य गीत) - नरेश माङपाहाङ राई by: Surendra

Tue, 04 Aug 2009 23:32:34 +0000

Bhai, Hasya geet ta ramro chha hai,
Keep it up.

Dai Surendra

Comment on शून्यतामा… (कविता) -उषा गिरी by: batoghare kanchha

Mon, 27 Jul 2009 09:17:17 +0000

sachi sunyata bhitra dubulki marnu bhayko rahechha sunyatao sansar beglai bhayko aabhas bhayo so thanks

Comment on धोकामा जलेको मन.. (गीत गजल) - भूपेन्द्र महत by: Surya paudel

Sat, 18 Jul 2009 15:01:54 +0000

Bhupendra mahat dai first of all I would like to thanks to you saahitya ko duniya ma kehai garna na sakee pani yes lai chuneee jamarko garnu va ko raichha khushi lagiyoo asha chha vabishiya ma yo bhanda ramraa ramraa gajal haru cornu hunee chha

surya paudel Duragaun -8 Ramechhap now in dubai (UAE) EMIRATES GENERAL PETROLIUM CORPORATION(emarat)

Comment on नरेश सुनुवार … (कविता) - हिमकला राई by: kangmang

Wed, 15 Jul 2009 11:07:02 +0000

him kala ji ramr cha kabita

tara protret kabita kasari lekhincha hameele dharai siknu parcha jatyo lagcha

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: bairaakii

Mon, 13 Jul 2009 03:49:29 +0000

जेगर्नु भएछ ठिकै गर्नु भयछ मौका मा चौका फालेर अहिले त बाहिर देस जाने भनेकोत भगवान को मुख देखेको जस्तो छ नेपाल मा, संसारमा नेपाली नभएको देस र आलु नफल्ने कुनै संसार मा छैन भन्छन तर नेपालीले तेकेको थाउमा दुबो बाहेक केही उम्रिदैन तेही भएर आजभोलि अमेरिका र इेयुरोप भनेको त नेपालीलाई सुङुर ले तारा देखेकै बराबर भाईसकेयो जो जती तपाईं हरु बाहिर जानु भयको छ राम्रो गर्नुहोस् हामीत परो बोत त भको फुल्नपनी नफुल्ने फल्नपनी नफल्ने परो है सर हो, तपाईं हरुलाई शुभकामना। यो बैराकी काइलाको।

Comment on नयाँ नेपाल… (गीत गजल) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: bairaakii

Mon, 13 Jul 2009 03:35:31 +0000

भोलाजी सलाम तपाईं एस्तो देस बनाउने कबुलमा कतै तपाईं पनि माउबादिको पीडित भयर काबुलतिर प्रस्थान भयकोत हैन, हाम्रो देस त कसो भाईसको थाहा छ काच को गलास सिमेट मा झर्दा कस्तो हुन्छ? अब बनिने वाला छैन तपाईं हाम्रो पालो आउँदै आउँदैन कतै अैहाले पनि तपाईंहामी पनि तेही हो तन्नक पोको पार्ने आफ्नो मतलब पुरा गर्ने, सोरी है भोला जि बोरी तपाईं त यो गयगुजेरेको देस बाट निस्की शक्नु भएछ उतै बन्दोबस है हजुर तपाईं हामी जस्तो ले देशको माया गरेर के गर्ने गनु पनि के पो शकिन्छ र कस्ता कस्ता खुङ्खार ले त आफ्नो मतलब ———————- गाह्रो चाँही हैन है

उदासी कान्छा (कथ्मन्दु)

Comment on ‘तेलखानी बिनाको नेपाल र ठमेलहरु’ (कविता) - बृत आधार by: bairaakii

Mon, 13 Jul 2009 00:47:23 +0000

अली भुल्नु भयछ हाम्रो देशमा पनि त सत्त्य उग को दानब जस्ता मावोबादी जन्मेकै त छ मतुवालीलाइ फसाएर नाख चुच्छे बाहुन ले करौदौ रुपैयाँ पोको पारेर जिउपछी यसि भएको गाडी चढेर मोज लिन्दै छ काठमाडौं भेली मा मतवाली भने जंगल को केन्तोन्मेन्त मा थुनियर यो गर्मिमा मछ्द्को तोकाइे। हाम्रो देस मा अब हुनुपरने केपो बाकिछर कती दिदी बहिनी को सिर्को सिउदो पुछिय कती ना बालाक बालिका हरुका आँखाको आसु सुके यो त को लाई के थाहा, खुकुरी को चोट कतिको हुन्छ भनेर अचानोलाई पो थाहा हुन्छ भने जस्ताइ हाम्रो देशमा जो जस्लाई परेको छ तेस्लाई पो थाहा छ। राती सुतेको बेलामा मतुवाली लाई मतुवालिले खुकुरी गर्धन मा राखेर लुटेको??? आखिरी को ले के पायोत? कुर्ची मा को बसो त काठमाडौं मा महल को ले किनोत यसि जदान भयको गाडीमा को त ??? यो कबिता एकदम मलाई मन परो अझै इे शब्द दर्शयको भय अझै सुन मा सुघन्ध हुने थियो। कशै लाई पिर पर्न जान्छ होला के गर्ने माफ गर्नु।

बैराकी काइला (कतार)

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: Thapa tanka magar

Fri, 03 Jul 2009 06:49:31 +0000

khadka ji , good! yo nepal ko bastabik ta ma adharit kabita ho. je chha nepalma tehichha .
Dhannebad !

Tanka
udaipure nepal

Comment on ‘तेलखानी बिनाको नेपाल र ठमेलहरु’ (कविता) - बृत आधार by: kavita ale

Wed, 24 Jun 2009 13:13:53 +0000

kavita nabujhnele ke kavita padhi rakhnu…

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: nir

Mon, 22 Jun 2009 04:40:40 +0000

hello! namaste…………..

ani kina tapaiko sayhitay haru kami mattra ma pauna thaliyo ni k lekhanai chhadnu vo ki kaso?nari vayara nriko sanman ra adhikar lai pardarson grnu pareu ni asha ji! ani ramro ramro lekha haru ko sathma bihaniko kiran sari dekhna pau harpal pargatiko paila haruma……i like it.who knows that.mitha ani gahakila sabdaru sangai mirmire bihani sangai aaidinu hola asha g……bye

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: nir

Sat, 20 Jun 2009 09:38:00 +0000

hi!asha g!namaste!
so nice gazal harpal astai prakarko gazal ani lekha haru padna paun.it is nice & great realy makes me proud yours self.
thanks malai lagchha ajhai ramro ramro ani gahakila sabda haruko sathma agadi badnuhos yahi chha mero vanai yours friends

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: nir

Wed, 17 Jun 2009 05:38:00 +0000

prem ji!namaskar…..
tapainko lekha akdamai manpro feri feri pani yestai yestai lekha haru padna pau ajhai ramro lekha haruko sathma udaunu hola

Comment on लौ भन नेता हो .. - देव गुरुङ by: Bhisma Raj YongHang

Sun, 14 Jun 2009 04:31:23 +0000

I am Bhisma Raj Yong Hang.

My dearst BROTHERS.
I would like to say some thing for our rlation.

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: Ganesh Khadka "Pratiksha"

Sat, 13 Jun 2009 22:33:36 +0000

Hey Bajra jee, Where r u these days ….? Thank u very much for sweet comments on my creation and remembering to our great past times.
Any way plz give me yr contact point or as soon as possible come in contact at -

ganeshkhadka2033@yahoo.com
matribhoomi_rangamanch@yahoo.com

OR 00248 797358

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: Ganesh Khadka

Sat, 13 Jun 2009 22:28:13 +0000

Bajra jee, plz come in contact as soon as possible.

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: Ganesh Khadka " Pratiksha "

Sat, 13 Jun 2009 22:25:13 +0000

Hey Bahra jee, where r u these days …? Thank you very much for sweet comment on my creation and remembering to our great past times which we had been spent together with a great effort. Any way plz give me yr contact point or as soon as possible contact to me at-

ganeshkhadka2033@yahoo.com
matribhoomi_rangamanch@yahoo.com
or - 00248 797358

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: HARDY

Sat, 13 Jun 2009 11:28:50 +0000

Hi! Aasha ji tapai ko Gajal Atyant Ramro chhaa gantbya tadha chhaina Ajha ramro Gardai Janu Hola. GajalParakhi Hardy Siwa-3 Udaypur {nepal}

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: Chumbak Lama Walpa

Tue, 09 Jun 2009 22:46:51 +0000

hello sir tapaeko kabita sarae ramro lagyo? tapaeko yo vanda pahile pani malaysia matapaeko kabita sunne mauka payako thiyo. kabita sarahae ramro cha aru aru pani lekhdae janu hola hajur ko sahitya yatra ma hami pathak banera sahayo garaula
bata
UAE Abu Dhabi Chumbak Lama Walpa
Securiguard middal east

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Yogendra Giri

Sat, 06 Jun 2009 04:26:37 +0000

Asa jee tapaila very ramalio kabita write vaya cha. tapaili suvakamana. FROM YOGENDRA DHUPOO 1 LEBRANG SANKHUWA SAVA KHANDABARI NOW MALAYSIA

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Yogendra Giri

Sat, 06 Jun 2009 04:21:30 +0000

Sabina jee very nice poem thank you very much. Yogendra Sankhuwa sava

Comment on फूल खोज्‍ने भमरा झैं.. (हास्य गीत) - नरेश माङपाहाङ राई by: ganesh purbachhane magar

Thu, 04 Jun 2009 15:02:59 +0000

wow what a nice poem you know that i love it so much keep it up and hope you also don’t forget to watch my poem on khotang.org or mulbato.com and also hongkongnepali.com thanx a lot keep it up

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: nil pun magar

Sun, 31 May 2009 07:15:24 +0000

गणेश जि तपाईं को कबिता लाइ तारिफ गर्नै पर्छ|

Comment on फूल खोज्‍ने भमरा झैं.. (हास्य गीत) - नरेश माङपाहाङ राई by: Purushottam Nepal

Sun, 24 May 2009 07:33:30 +0000

I am Mr Purushottam Nepal. I want to read your Poems so I request you to sent a Poem.

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: k.....palungwa

Sun, 24 May 2009 05:46:53 +0000

UH..Khusi lagyo…Dherai pachhi ko yo gajal ma Padna paye katai afulai nai bhane ko po ho ki ? Shayd yathartha harulai Gazal ma uhtarnu sakhnu nai tapai ko Bisesta paye yestai yestai padnu pau yehi chahana ho hamro …Safalta ko Suvakamana…

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: nirajan karki

Sat, 23 May 2009 15:54:30 +0000

chahiyeko kabita ta euta pani rahenacha!!!

Comment on सतीढुङ्गानेर अरूण (कविता) - नवराज सुब्बा by: bajra kumar rai

Fri, 22 May 2009 07:37:47 +0000

Arun! garbhaka padchinna haru pachhyaudai
sristika aadhar shibirharu maa
utsarga badna sikaudai
hidchhau bhane-
Oh Arun !
timi bagirahanu maa ajhai
bilamba garna hunna.
jaha jaha timi bageu ra badai janchhau
timro mul bata haru maa
timrai amaratwa kaa rata tata haruko sataha maa nai hunechhau timi
Arun! timile teslai po bagauna hunna
timro sabhyata maa-
timro sanskaar maa-
Sati jane haru ta
timro prem ko guliyo maa harayeka matra hun-
jaha malami haru ko hodbaji chalchha
manau timi Arun hunu ko sarthakta maa
ghulina chahanchhan- ti sati jane malami dunga haru.
ye Arun! aba timi le bujheu bhane-
sati jane premi sath haru
timi bagda bagdai narokkiye hunchha.
thokkiyeko hintabodha maa
najhukkiye hunchha.
kinki-
timro mahanta ko kunai simabandhi chhaena.
Arun! timi nirbadha bagirahu-
bhugol timrai ho Arun
matra timro.

Comment on छेकिएका हिमश्रृंखलाहरु.. (कविता) - डा.मधु माधुर्य by: rajan kafle

Wed, 20 May 2009 09:12:03 +0000

sir namaskar,

abba hamilai tapai ko kabita ko kitab chahiyo ta ki hami pani tapai ko jasto uccha tabar le kabita korna sakauu.

rajan
Cambarly
uk

Comment on ‘तेलखानी बिनाको नेपाल र ठमेलहरु’ (कविता) - बृत आधार by: Amir Thapa

Tue, 19 May 2009 21:54:19 +0000

ma pani rajan ji ko kura sanga sahamat rakhchhu. brit aadhaar k naam ho thaha pauna sakiena. kabita ta jhanai jhur chha. ajhai bani parisakeko chhaina jasto chha. k lekheko artha na byarthako

amir

Comment on बैँस (कविता) - टंक वनेम by: rajan kafle

Mon, 18 May 2009 23:45:54 +0000

Tanka ji tapai ko kabita ma Dhan nachha chai ke misaunu nai parne ho? alik morden type ko kabita lekhe ma tapai lai sabai le manne thiye tara ajja samm tapai ko kabita padhda ta khai story ko kura tapakka tipera kabita banayeko dekne gareko chhu yeso nagari dinu hola.

sewaro

Comment on सैद्धान्तिक मृत्यु.. (कविता) –अप्जसे कान्छा by: rajan kafle

Mon, 18 May 2009 23:42:18 +0000

tapai ko kabita Lahure parako vayoo ni ali ajjako Uttaradhunik kal lai pani bujera lekhema ramrai hunethiyoo ki.

thanks

Comment on धोकामा जलेको मन.. (गीत गजल) - भूपेन्द्र महत by: rajan kafle

Mon, 18 May 2009 23:40:13 +0000

ke ko mathi ko timile yehi gajal ta bujeu ki bujenau.

bujeu vane antim dui haraf ko tatparye khulau.

thanks \

Comment on ‘तेलखानी बिनाको नेपाल र ठमेलहरु’ (कविता) - बृत आधार by: rajan kafle

Mon, 18 May 2009 23:31:33 +0000

ha ha Brita Adhar Nam kalpanik vayejastai kabita pani nun binako tiuna jastai chha. what is a man subject of this poem? upph!!!
ajaka kabita ke kabita. na mithas chha na sabda snjal nai!

Gadhhe vasako barkhilap nagarau bina aadhaar.

rajan
Farnborough

Comment on ओछ्यान, संम्भोग र समाधि… (कविता) - टंक वनेम by: rajan kafle

Mon, 18 May 2009 23:25:33 +0000

ke pratikriya dida pani Limbuvasha ma nai dinu parchha ra Tembe ji. timra pani aba na chabako gajal napadeko hoina.

rajan

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: bajra kumar rai

Sun, 17 May 2009 14:59:44 +0000

oh! ganesh ji ! kati barsha pachhi ho .tapai ko pic .dekhe .mero samjhana ko ganesh tyahi tiwari bhanjyang maa netritwa garthyo.aaja tyaha pugechha. samakalina samay maa bhojpur ko dherai khola nala,pahad ,gaun basti haru maa balidan ko katha sunaiudai hedeko hami kata pugiyo ko kaha ko kaha bhaye tara aaja ganesh lai chahi bhete euta kabi ko rup maa. kabita ko maa uhi bhawana rahechha .jo ganesh le bokera hedeko thiyo tyo samakalina samay maa.tyahi bhawana ko marmahat abhibyakti haru pokhnu bhayechha .hamro bibasta ka katha haru yestai chhan ganesh ji yeslai hami le kahile jitna sakenau .kabita lekhnu bahek ko ladai ladda laddai sakenau hamile .tyahi samakalinta ko samjhana ganesh lai.go a head....

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: laxmi nischal

Tue, 12 May 2009 23:59:36 +0000

Varat lai Nepal dida kay hola parsai ji
altimet ta hami varatiya nai hau
alfabet pani milchha?
ki kaso?

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: priya sharma

Tue, 12 May 2009 23:56:28 +0000

Kati sahanay varat ko dabab?
sab Nepali aama bechu haru hoinan
Nepal ko maya vayaka haru lay tapai ko kabita man parauchan pakkai
badhai chha feri pani

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: priya sharma

Tue, 12 May 2009 23:54:12 +0000

Jay Nepal parsai ji
Tapai ko kabita lai jaslay jay vanay pani vasa salin chha
kura sab lay bujayka chan
day by day hami nepali haru ko lagi yo kabita ko sandarvikta badh dai gayako chha
sala madhesay haru dalal hun india ka

Comment on ‘तेलखानी बिनाको नेपाल र ठमेलहरु’ (कविता) - बृत आधार by: HIRA CHHANTYAL

Thu, 07 May 2009 13:46:15 +0000

hello tapai ko yo lekh derai ramro cha

Comment on जाडो… (कविता) - ईन्द्र थापामगर by: HIRA CHHANTYAL

Thu, 23 Apr 2009 03:38:45 +0000

mero email (chh_s2002@yahoo.com)

Comment on जाडो… (कविता) - ईन्द्र थापामगर by: HIRA CHHANTYAL

Thu, 23 Apr 2009 03:35:59 +0000

Hi bro
ramra ra bastabik sabda haru ko samyojan sangai manabiye jibana ka kehi bastabik kura sahittik pana ma utarnu bhayeko rahecha tapaiko sahittik yatra ko safalatako kamana garna chahanchu
(HIRA CHHANTYAL BAGLUNG )

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: pancha thaing limbu

Thu, 16 Apr 2009 10:36:35 +0000

ramro lagyo hijo new nepalko kalpana taman nepalile socheka thie tyasto hun sakeko 6ina.ajha badi naya nepalko charko nara ghankaune netaharuko bebhar herda jun jogi aye pani kanai chireko vanne ukhan sabit hune van vai raheko6.

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: deuman limbu

Sat, 11 Apr 2009 07:25:45 +0000

HI dear miss kumari gi / IM DEUMAN LIMBU FROM DHARAN NEPAL !!

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ani hajur ka yi amuliya sabadhale lekhiyeka kabati ka vab malai yatina ram ro lagiraheko6 jars ma hajur lai so thanks .. kina ki manb giban ma hajarau charko haso haruma vautariyaka hun6n kewol …..ok bye see u soon my ( limbu_deuman2008@yahoo.com ) ok kumaro gi add garnu la byeeeeeeeeee

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: dewan

Sat, 11 Apr 2009 07:15:14 +0000

Comment on लुट्यौ श्रीपेच …- देव गुरुङ by: रमेश खड्का

Mon, 06 Apr 2009 10:01:52 +0000

देब दाई तपाईले भन्नुभएको कुरा मलाई एकदम ठिक लाग्यो त्यसकारण तपाई यस्ता कुराहरू लेख्दै जानुहोला हामी तपाईलाई साथ दिने छौ।

Comment on झर्को फर्को तिम्रै ठूलो… (गीत गजल) - भूपेन्द्र महत by: sanu thapa

Fri, 27 Mar 2009 14:25:04 +0000

bises gari hongkong ma basnu hune aarat gurung raxh6egurung ankal ko 6ori englone ra arati gurung jordan ma basnu hune sampurna mitra jan haru lai namaste

Comment on झर्को फर्को तिम्रै ठूलो… (गीत गजल) - भूपेन्द्र महत by: sanu thapa

Fri, 27 Mar 2009 14:23:45 +0000

hi ganga g kati ramro lekhnu hn6 hai lekhdai janu gardai janu abasse sikhar ma pugne 6 yehi kamana sibaye dina ta ma sanga kehi 6ena yehi kan=mana lai yeuta upahar samjhera hat tha[pi dinu la

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: bisnu bantawa

Sun, 22 Mar 2009 06:04:13 +0000

DERA DURGA SIR TAPAU KO LEKHA RA KABITA NEPALI SYITEKAR KO LAGI MAILE TAPAI KO LEKHA LAI ATI MANNYETA DINE CHHU | RA MA MATRA CAST KO NATA LE HAINA lekha ko karan le dhannye badh dinu chahanchhu huna ta ma pa foreiner jurnalist hu kati paye mero name haru ta dunnu bhaye ko chha bhaye pani ma mero bare ma hajure lai teti ramri thah chhaina hola thankq

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: salman limbu sanba-7 taplejung

Fri, 20 Mar 2009 18:32:39 +0000

kumari lama g tapaiko ghar add kata honi ? kinaki maile enter net ma jahile pani butiful photos haru herne garchhu . but aaja sammama tapai jati ko butiful girl ko photo dekhna paye ko thiina .plz tapai ko aad & email id mero emai id ma sms garidinu hola. (mr_handsome45@yahoo.com)

Comment on आई लभ यू - देव गुरुङ by: leena

Fri, 20 Mar 2009 16:50:29 +0000

ur writting nice poem keep it up hai. im from arizona.

Comment on लांकुरीको रुख अनि म ( कविता)-आशा भुटिया by: sanu thapa

Fri, 06 Mar 2009 14:53:36 +0000

hi ahsa g namaste call me plz this my no 0060167266425 sanu thapa bye asha………………………………………….

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: sanu thapa

Fri, 06 Mar 2009 14:51:11 +0000

hi asha g namaste ma sanu thapa magar hajur kojallai thax sibaye dina ta k nai sak6ura hai my no0060167266425,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,okbye asha?

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: sanu thapa

Fri, 06 Mar 2009 14:44:15 +0000

hi kumari lama g hajurle ta kya gajab ko lekh ani rachanalai yo hknpl bicha paskanu vaye63 ati khusi lagyo rasadai lekh ani rachana lai paskirahanu ma hajur ko lekh rachana lai padi basne chhu hajur lai vetna nasake pani la ?

Comment on तिमी… (कविता) - आरती पौडेल by: sanu thapa magar hal malaysia

Tue, 24 Feb 2009 12:44:56 +0000

hi arati ju kya swadilo kabita lekhnu vaye6 feri feri pani lekhne garnu la bye arati g?

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: sumitra ijam

Wed, 18 Feb 2009 02:42:02 +0000

malai yaha tapai ko sabai pratikriya herada bises limbu daju bhai haru le tapai ko kabita mathi garbha gare ko ullekh payyyyyye ra ma pani k bhanchu bhane hajur le yo limbu sabda bata suruwat garnu bhaye ko kabita prya limbu saskriti kai adhar ma lekhe ko paye yasma ta hami ek damai khushi chau ra tapai prati aabhari pani chau kina ki hajur jasto yeauta aryan saskriti ma hurkera pani limbu haru ko bhab lai kabita marfat prstayunu bhaye ko cha yasari hami jaati chuttai bhaye pani ek arko ko bhab lai bujhnu ho bhane des kati santi hune thiyo hola tara yaha tapai jaso byakti chainan limbu mag parati khilli udauchan bahiri ruple sath ta dinchu bhanchan tara bhitra bhitra arkai sadyantra rachau chan tesaile tapaile dinu bhaye ko udaharan lai herera khi sikos bhanne aasha rakhda chu ra hajur le pani yasari nai annya kabita haru lekhdai janus tapailai safalta ko agrim subhakamana
sumi

Comment on बैँस (कविता) - टंक वनेम by: sumitra ijam

Wed, 18 Feb 2009 02:22:33 +0000

hajur tanka jeu hajur ko kabitale ta malai sarai gaughar ko yaad dilayo katiramro saili ma lekhnu bhaye ko kabita baisa ko bare ma tapi ko kabita ko bhab haru pani nikai man chune khal ka chan yasari nai sadai hami majh yasta bhab haru lyaudai janus taai lai yahi nai anurod ra sujhab cha mero hami yakthum pani sadai harek kura ma aagi hunu parcha hai
sumi

Comment on शहीद विद्युत र श्रद्धाञ्जलि..(कविता) - दीपेन्द्र के.सी. by: Rosy China

Sat, 07 Feb 2009 15:33:46 +0000

good !!! nice peom

Comment on जाडो… (कविता) - ईन्द्र थापामगर by: Rosy China

Sat, 07 Feb 2009 15:31:36 +0000

Hi bro !
nice peom keep it up….
Dunai ko barema sunna pauda kata kata mero purkheuli gharko yaad ayo…….yestai kabita haru audo din ma pani sunna paune chhu bhanne aasha gardachhu.
thank you

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: ruben pun

Thu, 05 Feb 2009 11:51:38 +0000

gharko chhano bhanda mathi nilo akash ani tehi akashko para para samma najar nadaj garna sakine kshitij ani tyo bhanda pani tadha kebal dhan kamaune sapanako euta mitho sansar tehi sansarma paene pida chot ani sangharsako adhi behari bhitra jibanka atit dekhi bartaman baljhida manka bhawana haru prasfutit hunchhan tehi prasfutit bhawana euta mitho sahitye bhaera janmanchha yestai parsfutit bhaana haru lai nirantarta dinus prem bro mero lakhau shubha kamana kabita dherai ramro chha KEEP UP IT contineu. ruben pun magar
baglung
now : malaysia

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: raj shrestha

Wed, 04 Feb 2009 10:14:52 +0000

hi asha
raj here
how are you
it is so nice GAZAL it really makes me proud yourself becaues this is all about the situation whiat is going on with nepaliese society,hanks very much and keep on writeing
thanks bye for now
your friend and bro raj

Comment on शताब्दीकी नायिका ! (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: rijan rai

Mon, 02 Feb 2009 22:32:24 +0000

wow…nice article,keep it up.
maya_namara8@yahoo.com

Comment on तिमी… (कविता) - आरती पौडेल by: rijan rai

Mon, 02 Feb 2009 22:28:21 +0000

very very nice article,keep it up.
maya_namara8@yahoo.com

Comment on शून्यतामा… (कविता) -उषा गिरी by: rijan rai

Mon, 02 Feb 2009 22:24:52 +0000

nice article,keep it up.
maya_namara8@yahoo.com

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: rijan rai

Mon, 02 Feb 2009 22:17:59 +0000

adhyaro vo jindagani manko diyo nivda,
binaayo bho jindagani sadhai dukha khipda.
jiuna khatir ajhai dui din afthyaro bho
othmaa kritim haanso lipdaa.
wow…asha ji.!!hajur bata thulai asha rakhna sakinchh ki bholika din haruma yesatai istariya articles didai janu hola.badhai chha subha kamana hajur lai.keep it up.
maya_namara8@yahoo.com

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: rijan rai"abhagi'

Mon, 02 Feb 2009 21:48:28 +0000

asaanti chha man vari timle basai sare pachhi,
mero manko lekh bata,eklai besi jhare pachhi!!
wow…narthunge dajai…!it’s realy heart toucher”article…geet-gajal”any way thats khotange man ofcourse it is nice.keep it up.
maya_namara8@yahoo.com

Comment on नयाँ नेपालको बृत्त चित्र.. (कविता)- गणेश खड्का ” प्रतिक्षा” by: Bijay Begha

Mon, 02 Feb 2009 15:31:04 +0000

Excellent, i like this poem, hamro desh ko yatharthata bokeko cha, nice nice….

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: Ananda kadel 'nirjanbagar'

Mon, 02 Feb 2009 14:40:55 +0000

namaskar , samaya ko artha lai sandarbhik dhanga le prastut gari diyako le hajur prati HARDIK KRITAZYATA PRAKAT gardachho ra aajha prakat garne jamarko pani chha hai. namaskar

‘’NIRJANBAGAR'’

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: aemx

Sat, 31 Jan 2009 05:00:49 +0000

waaaaaaaaaa aja ka nari good
dhakune cha banaune cha ane key gara dhakunu cha good
i like humm

keep see its NariNepal.com
more about nepalinari

Comment on माया भनिदेऊ.. (गीत गजल) - केदार श्रेष्ठ”गगन” by: sabina

Mon, 26 Jan 2009 10:07:09 +0000

wa kati ramro lagyo.aghai ramro lekhnula.

Comment on आँखा भित्र राखें तिमीलाई ( गीत) - कृष्ण गुरुङ by: Rajendra Khanal

Mon, 26 Jan 2009 06:14:00 +0000

माया को बाटो के हो ? कहिलेई गएर त हेर’
सधेई हसाछोऊ तिमी’ कहिले रुवाएर त हेर !
आखामाँ भारियेछ, मायाको समुन्द्र’
न पताये माँ कहिले माया ब्तायेर त हेर !!

चादनी पाऊने इच्छा सबको भयो’
प्रश्न यो छ ? आफुलाइ चादनी बनाएर त हेर !
पानी परदा ओरालो माँ बग्ने गर्छ ,
जानने भए आफु लाइ बगाएर त हेर !!

आवाज बंद छ नजर संग हुदैछ बात’
कहिले काही नजर संग नजर मिलाएर त हेर!
दौडी अओने छू काखमा म तिम्रो,
माया भएमा मलाई भोलायेर त हेर!!
माया पनी अचम्मेइ को हूदो रहेछ ‘ राजू”
बुझने भए एक पल्ट माया लगाएर त हेर

राजेंद्र खनाल

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: Loyem

Tue, 20 Jan 2009 22:38:48 +0000

100%OK

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: h.gurung

Thu, 15 Jan 2009 01:30:19 +0000

Hi ganga bahini its relly good ,

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: bantawa

Sun, 11 Jan 2009 08:19:32 +0000

hoso_h2006@yahoo.com

Comment on क्षणिक हाँसोका वीच अलमलिएका मानिस - कुमारी लामा by: bantawa

Sun, 11 Jan 2009 08:17:30 +0000

allmaliya ka manisha chanig hasoma sarai sandarbik lekkanu bhaya ko rahe6 maile khuse sathi stady garna paiyo yasko lage thanks hajur lai ,

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: Prasad Gurung

Wed, 07 Jan 2009 13:55:44 +0000

Dearest sister Ganga,
I am very happy with you because of your tamu song. thank you very much for your love to our culture. write many more songs in upcoming days also. thanks

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: lalbahadurgrg

Tue, 06 Jan 2009 14:34:56 +0000

Nani ganga.dherai dherai dhanya wad timi le lekheko Gurung bhasa ko geet dherai ramro lagyo,pheri pheri lekhnu hola,But euta kura maile timi lai chinna sakena bhujikot bhane pachhi maile chinnu parne ho mero ghar pani makan pur ho.timi kasko chhori ho nani.Hal ma pani dulegaura ma baso bas gardai chhu.laut dherai badhai timi lai.
Best wishes to you JAITAMU

Baje
lal bahadurgurung

Comment on तिमी… (कविता) - आरती पौडेल by: kumbh rashi

Sun, 04 Jan 2009 14:10:08 +0000

ani tapai ta kabi po hunu hudo rahechh
thaha nai bhayen
good

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: Nagesh Kulung

Sun, 04 Jan 2009 13:23:25 +0000

Salpalai samban gari Kabita lekahne dai Bimal ra (sabwat didi) Hema lai derai danyabat chha. ma dherai khusi chhu, Mero khushi yasmane ma ki ma Paslakai basinda hu ra net yo kabita pardai garda barambar Salpako jhaljhali yada aairahyo

Comment on प्रवासतिर …(गीत गजल) - इखालु रमेश गेलाल by: Rosy China

Thu, 01 Jan 2009 06:21:29 +0000

Nice poem Bro keep it up. thank you.

Comment on सतीढुङ्गानेर अरूण (कविता) - नवराज सुब्बा by: rai top

Sat, 27 Dec 2008 04:05:57 +0000

हजुरको कबिताले एक पटक घरछेउको अरुण अनी सतीधुन्गाको याद दिलायो कबिता सारे मार्मिक छ .

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: ramchandra

Fri, 26 Dec 2008 00:04:07 +0000

very nice kabita .
sala madhisay haru desh bechuwa hun
badhai chha prasai ji

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: good

Thu, 25 Dec 2008 04:29:39 +0000

ki pani belai chyamba mu ki prishye kwe pani belai chyamba mu.

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: Bimal Giri

Wed, 24 Dec 2008 06:53:09 +0000

Sampurna mera kabita heridinuhne srastaharu prati shubhakamana.

Comment on लांकुरीको रुख अनि म ( कविता)-आशा भुटिया by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Tue, 16 Dec 2008 22:48:35 +0000

Aasha g!
matrai kabita lekhiechha

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: Om Ghale

Sun, 14 Dec 2008 06:05:59 +0000

Sarpratham Ganga Bainima Safaltako Subhakanama!

Tapaiko Geet ekdaam maarmik chha yesari nai afno pahichan banauna safal hos Tamu Sansar ko pratinidhi bhayera ahile yo chhetrama paila tekna lagnu bhayekoma feri pani safaltako subhakamana.

Om Ghale
Tamu Sansar Pratinidhi
Saudi Arab

Comment on लांकुरीको रुख अनि म ( कविता)-आशा भुटिया by: Amar

Fri, 12 Dec 2008 01:59:30 +0000

Ma ta first time hknepal ko pathak huna pugeko chhu. malai thahei thiena sathile bhaneko ho. sarai ramro raicha. malai kabitaharu padna man parcha, yo kabita sarai ramro lagyo. karan 1 ta mero gauma pani lakuriko jangal cha dosro kura mero jibanma pani yestai kehi bhaeko thiyo. kabi lai dhannebat chha. tara euta kura mathi git gajal lekhne kabi pani uha nai hunuhuncha ki arkai almalma pare. thank you. Assam, India.

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: RATIVA K.C. Canada

Fri, 12 Dec 2008 01:42:25 +0000

After long time, i could be able to read your beautiful creation. Thanks a lot. Every time you give very touchy expression in you writing that gives slight pat in heart. Although, this gajal hurts some DAJU-BHAI, (sorry for that) I am impressed and I really enjoyed it thinking it will give lesion to them who, unusually, think that they are much more…. than women. Pheri pani padhna pai rahun. Thank you. - Prativa, canada

Comment on माटोको नयाँ गीत गाउँदै छु (कविता) - राजेश राई by: ganga ser rai

Wed, 10 Dec 2008 13:26:01 +0000

rajesh dai tapai ta sachikai rastra bhakti bokeko byakti hunuhudo rahechha tes prati bises dhanyabad yasari nai tapaiko rasta bhakti bhawanama kahilya pani tusarapat naparos.

Comment on माटोको नयाँ गीत गाउँदै छु (कविता) - राजेश राई by: Padam Rai 'Yuddhabiram'

Tue, 09 Dec 2008 07:23:05 +0000

Kaslai mann pardaina matoko gandha?
Kaslai nadukheko chha janajati bhudako hepai?
Ko chahanchha ajhai bachna thichomichoma?
Ko chahanchha ajhai asamabeshi huna??
Uttar sabai yahi chha!!

Comment on माटोको नयाँ गीत गाउँदै छु (कविता) - राजेश राई by: mahen

Sun, 07 Dec 2008 01:17:30 +0000

Badhai chha kabitako lagi , kabita ko jastai jutnu parchha aba hami .

Comment on हंगकंगभित्रको मेरो नेपाल ! (कविता)-प्रकाश के.सी. by: Y Rai

Thu, 04 Dec 2008 12:52:44 +0000

Publication of such a piece of work containing language that readers might find offensive, is deplorable and breach of ethics.

Comment on माटोको नयाँ गीत गाउँदै छु (कविता) - राजेश राई by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Thu, 04 Dec 2008 12:03:53 +0000

Rajesha g!
Kabita lekhnu ramro ho.

Comment on ब्वाँसाहरु… (कविता) - केशर थुलुङ by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Thu, 04 Dec 2008 11:57:34 +0000

Keshar g!
Kabita jehos lekhiychha.

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: Deepen Garbuja

Wed, 03 Dec 2008 13:51:18 +0000

Hi Ganga, This is Deepen! How R U doing? I’m very glad 2 C U on this website. I don’t understand the language anyway, keep writting on…at last may this Christmas and New Year bring to you, your families and friends full of happiness, I wish you good health 4eva….. and let all your dreams come true! Marry Chritmas and Happy New Year!

Your Truly Friend
Deepen Garbuja
Email deepen_garbuja@yahoo.com

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: thaman gurung

Tue, 02 Dec 2008 12:19:08 +0000

namaskar maile aja samma gurung geet lai padeko thiyena aja padnu paunda khusi lagyo tara k garne bhujhena anyway it’s good news u r sharing some words to gurung families.
hope more and more gurung geet from you
thaman

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Tue, 02 Dec 2008 11:43:19 +0000

Bahinee Ganga!
Jateey bhashako lekha rachanale desha ra jateeko bikasa hunchha ko…………….bodha hos hami sabaima
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Comment on ‘पेन’कविता महोत्सवमा ..(कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: Bhuwan Tamang (under-ground)

Mon, 01 Dec 2008 04:09:21 +0000

Sorry Homnath Subedi ji

My address is:

Bhuwan Tamang
Galan Gaun, Budhabare - 2,
Jhapa zone, Nepal

Comment on ‘पेन’कविता महोत्सवमा ..(कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: Bhuwan Tamang (under-ground)

Mon, 01 Dec 2008 04:07:47 +0000

Poet Homnath Subedi ji

I managed to read your poem, I can’t understand the meaning of poem, but I understood meaning of your poem. If I have your books of poem I can read more. If possible please send in my address or inform that where it will get in the market ?

Best regard.

Bhuwan Tamang

Comment on तिमी… (कविता) - आरती पौडेल by: Bhuwan Tamang (under-ground)

Mon, 01 Dec 2008 04:00:37 +0000

Arati Poudel ji

Thank you for posting your sweet peom. Poem is short and sweet exressing your feeling to …. .

Because of my little knowledge, may I request you for the meaning of “Sej” which you wrote after Sapanaka ….

Thank you.

Bhuwan Tamang

Comment on परदेशीलाई देशको पत्र (कविता) - टोपबहादुर राई by: शिखर गुरुङ पोखरा नेपाल

Sat, 29 Nov 2008 13:42:57 +0000

sarai ramro lagyo k garnu hamro deash nepal ko halat yastai chha jasto paile thiyo aile pai ra aagha kaile sama yastai hune ho kehi taha chaina la ta aaile lai bida hunchhu kabita ramro lagyo tasko lagi thanks ra feri feri pani yastai nepal aama lai chune gari kabita haru kordai garnus la bye aakash gurung
iraq baghdaad
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Comment on तिमी… (कविता) - आरती पौडेल by: शिखर गुरुङ पोखरा नेपाल

Sat, 29 Nov 2008 13:34:04 +0000

हाइ आरती ‘’
तिम्रो कबिता पढे यक्दम राम्रो लाग्यो! आफु सबैमा यस्तो कला हुदैन जुन कला आफु मा छ! आफुलाई त केही पनि कोर्न आउदैन शायद सबैले कोर्न थालो भने त हेरिदिने र बुजी दिने पनि कोही हुँदैन तेसैले म मात्र अरुले लेखेको लेख हरु हेर्न मात्रै आउछ र मलाई लेख्न न आयपनी अफुहरु ले यसरी नै मिठा मिठा लेख हरु मन छुने यस्तै यस्तै कबिता हरु कोर्दै गर्नु ल मेरो लागि भय पनि प्लिज ल ………………..
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Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: खेम गुरुङ

Sat, 29 Nov 2008 13:09:44 +0000

हाइ गंगा आरामै ?हम्रो भेट न भएको पनि लामो समय भयो तिमी नेपाल कैले जाने अब अस्ती को पालो मा तिमी नेपाल जादा म पनि नेपाल मै थिय तर तिमी सँग कुरा हरु गर्न पाएन आज तिम्रो HK नेपालडट्कम् मा तमु भाषा को गीत पद्ढा यक्दम खुशी लाग्यो राज ले मलाई मेल गरेको छैन ओन लाइन मा पनि भेट भको छैन आफु सग कुरा हुन्छ होला खेम लाई aakash_grg222@yahoo.com मा मेल गर भन ल।।।
गंगा यस्तै यस्तै तिम्रो गुरुङ गीत हरु पढ्दै गर्न पाइयोस भन्दै आउनै लगेको हप्पी क्रिसमस को शुभकामना दिदै बिदा हुन्छु !नेपाल तिर आफ्नो परिवार को याद आएमा मेल गर्दै गर ल मेरो कुरा भाई राक्छ nepal तिर अब nepal छुट्टी जाने बित्तिकै म तिमीहरु को भुजीकोट जाने हो यक्दम रमाइलो लाग्यो राज सग गएको रात भरी नाचेको भुजिकोट बाट पोखरा बजार कती सुन्दर देखिन्छ हगी ल बाँकी कुरा मेल मा गरने ल ……….. खेम गुरुङ लेखनाथ-१३ पोखरा नेपाल
मोबाईल ००९६४-७७०९४०५५५९ हाल- ईराक बग्दाद

Comment on मन भन्छ हाटै बजार जाँउ… (गीत) - नरेश माङपाहाङ्ग by: mohan soltee

Fri, 28 Nov 2008 18:13:33 +0000

dherai dherai dhanyabat geet ko lagi .wish you good luck
numbari mohan

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: firefly

Thu, 27 Nov 2008 16:07:37 +0000

Really appreciate u r rite!! keep it flowing Asha. .

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Lara

Thu, 27 Nov 2008 07:00:41 +0000

Asha Di,
Simply great “gazal” loved it and expecting as always to read more from you.

Bahini

Comment on ब्वाँसाहरु… (कविता) - केशर थुलुङ by: chankhe

Tue, 25 Nov 2008 21:22:24 +0000

ammbo geet ta sarai radds rahechha ni ta. … kya ho … apat parera manchhe guhareko ho? ke ho manchhe marera ruyeko ho??? la la hunchha… asu puchne rumal taimosanko danda bat lyaunu hai sis..

chankhe
uk

Comment on ब्वाँसाहरु… (कविता) - केशर थुलुङ by: thulung

Tue, 25 Nov 2008 16:58:54 +0000

bro k bita chai daami 6 tara, thulung vayara vaasaa bolna aauchha ki aaudaina ho? khotang tira ko thulung lai ta sankha nai lag 6 .

Comment on माटोको नयाँ गीत गाउँदै छु (कविता) - राजेश राई by: ashok

Tue, 25 Nov 2008 09:44:43 +0000

rastiyata parti prem jagi rahos

Comment on परदेशीलाई देशको पत्र (कविता) - टोपबहादुर राई by: Jhilke

Tue, 25 Nov 2008 08:46:53 +0000

mero bhannu kehi chhaina

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Bhuwan Tamang (under-ground)

Tue, 25 Nov 2008 07:11:28 +0000

I shared your poem with my some of friends immediately and we finally concluded that this type of poem is negative poem, it would be resulted negative impact, people want to see and read the poem in the form of civilized language, neither we are pahade nor madhesi, we all are nepalese.

We just expressed our opinion and suggestion is not only for you, but for all poets.

Bhuwan Tamang and friends

Comment on सतीढुङ्गानेर अरूण (कविता) - नवराज सुब्बा by: Bhuwan Tamang (under-ground)

Tue, 25 Nov 2008 06:25:54 +0000

Takaiko kabita padeko chhu Biratnagar ma. ahile nepalgunj ma chhu. Ahileko samasamayaik bisayama lekhieko yo kabita ramro lagyo. Sayad sati dhunga bhanne chha hola, arun kholama. manis le kunai thaunko kunai khas chinha samjhana gare jastai tapailai pani sati dhungako khubai yad ayachha. malai pani mero gaunko cheuko kali khola yad aunchha.

Arko kabita lekhnu hola
dhanya bad

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Bhuwan Tamang

Tue, 25 Nov 2008 06:13:18 +0000

Krishna ji,

Wonderful poem. Such a bravy peom. I never seen this type of peom.

But, fact is that India wants to make madesh china too.

Please do not stop writing. Good lock

I am also writer as follows:

1) Novel - Ainselu - self
2) A bullet Assey - self
3) Himpari - for child - Ekata Prakashan, KTM

Bhuwan Tamang (under-ground)

Comment on सतीढुङ्गानेर अरूण (कविता) - नवराज सुब्बा by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Mon, 24 Nov 2008 20:40:19 +0000

Nabraj sir!
tapai yasari almaliyar aajko yatharth sahityako pyas kasri metaun saknu huncha?

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Mon, 24 Nov 2008 20:30:14 +0000

Bahinee Aasa!
Gazal lekhiecha yo gatilena kalam agadi jawas

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: poonam gurun

Sun, 23 Nov 2008 22:27:55 +0000

kewol ganga gurung ko gurung geet padna pauda khusi chhu

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: a.tamu

Sun, 23 Nov 2008 22:04:51 +0000

tamu koi chhyanba mu

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: binita grg

Sun, 23 Nov 2008 21:56:34 +0000

ganga baini pragati gardai jau mero subhakamana

Comment on शब्दातीत मान्छेका विरुद्ध .. (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: krishnachamling

Sun, 23 Nov 2008 20:31:56 +0000

prasai g kabita dherai estreya chh malai ta sarai man paro sayad sabai bathak lai pani malai jastoi man paro hola . yastoi kabata lekhdai janu hola hami padera yasko artha bugdai monorangan gardai jane chau . ani parsai je tapai HANGPANG taplejung ko parnu bhoo ke khanan ko parsain holane? yati batai denu bhaya maro man ko khulduli pura huntheyo .

Comment on ओछ्यान, संम्भोग र समाधि… (कविता) - टंक वनेम by: krishnachamling

Sun, 23 Nov 2008 13:29:42 +0000

टंका दाई कबिता सरोई राम्रो लागो , तपैन को कबिता हरु प्र्राया सबै इस्तेरेय हुन्चन , तपैन जस्तो शयेता कर श्रस्ता को नेपाली भासा को उठान को लगी अत्ति अवासयक छ लेक्दै गर्नु होला , तपैन को बुदिबोजू भने कथा नेपाल पत्र माँ पड़ने मौका पयाको थेय सरोई राम्रो लागो एके बसेहरा एमी कसोरी एअक्लाई बचने अद्यामा आत गरेकी थीयु

Comment on ब्वाँसाहरु… (कविता) - केशर थुलुङ by: sanila

Fri, 21 Nov 2008 10:24:12 +0000

hi kesher!
u r great poet
ur all poem r very nice n touchable
wish u,
alawayes b success…..

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: Radha gurung

Thu, 20 Nov 2008 23:11:51 +0000

hello ganga, dherai dherai samjhana chhutti namileko le garda vet nabhayeko dherai bhayo, gurung geet sarai ramro lagyo ani feri feri yestai ramro geet sunna ra padna pau,

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: bharu pal

Wed, 19 Nov 2008 22:26:24 +0000

it is simppy a supurb gajal. I liked it and I believe every paathak loved it. wish you good luck

bharu pal
uk

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: hariman gurung

Tue, 18 Nov 2008 21:38:59 +0000

केवल गंगा बहिनी लाई धेरै धेरै बधाई
तथा उत्तरोत्तर प्रगतिको शुभकामना
तिमीमा भएको कलाले सधैं स्थान
पाउन भन्ने मेरो अत्त्मिय भावना
कला भन्ने कुरा सबैमा नभए पनि
उपभोग गर्ने हुन्छ सबैमा चाहना
त्यसले म भन्छु तपाईंको कलमको
कहिल्यै नाआओस अल्छिको बाहना
अन्तमा बधाई पछी फेरी शुभकामना

–श्री हरिमान गुरुङ (नेपाल कास्की धम्पुस )
हाल बेलायत
hmggurung@yahoo.com

Comment on ब्वाँसाहरु… (कविता) - केशर थुलुङ by: lokendra

Tue, 18 Nov 2008 14:57:05 +0000

well done bro. keep it up.

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Abhimat

Mon, 17 Nov 2008 08:49:18 +0000

Raj Shreshta ko kurama ma sahmat chhu.
ani ho ek lekhika lai sayad dherai samay nahuna sakchha dherai fan harulai lekhna wa samparka garna maile pani dherai nai palta
asha ji lai yahi nai kura dohoryaudai aayeko chhu.
ended i ll wish you all the best. Asha ji.

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: tamu rajendra

Sun, 16 Nov 2008 11:07:22 +0000

Ganga to tai kyolai sairi pir akido sukha dukha tanlaina grien go sai akrodo kyola mail add,musya nglai pido ng kyolai mail lasyo ngmi belle sai tosi mo kyo tamu bhasr bai kroi mrosi kyo sada nesyosi prado bhagemani nadu babu

Comment on खैवा जिन्दगी … (गुरुङ गीत) - केवल गंगा गुरुङ by: Navin Gurung

Sat, 15 Nov 2008 15:10:50 +0000

Ganga bahini kihla pribai kwe chhyaba mona mai cha kwe kheba na ka ngala sai bele krona mai chhalen Lhen kwe banidid aau tai bisa dari ngalai den kulamin aau mail lasi uttarotar pragati bai kamana mu kihlai bahini
chu Kanchhha tamu khaba parbat… kihla jindagi aladau barbad……

Comment on शताब्दीकी नायिका ! (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: NAGEN RAI

Fri, 14 Nov 2008 11:04:23 +0000

hi sabina g, tapai ko kabita malai yedamai man paryo. tapai ko utter utter pragiti ko kamana la bye.

Comment on माटोको नयाँ गीत गाउँदै छु (कविता) - राजेश राई by: NAGEN RAI

Fri, 14 Nov 2008 11:00:59 +0000

rajes g, malai tapai ko kabita sarai man paryo tapai lai dherai dherai dhannebatha la. tapai ko uttar uttar pragati ko kamana la. bye

Comment on ओछ्यान, संम्भोग र समाधि… (कविता) - टंक वनेम by: Mijash Tembe

Thu, 13 Nov 2008 15:10:46 +0000

Sewaro Kapobe,
Manna ho then ni kesaptukedeshu ga ho, Na:re Aa ho kapobe, Fungsaapeng ga Panu nu ba chok ro ho. Kong Funsaap pen yammu sappma pong hekkele cha;ric nuba pong ro kapobe.
Kenusa,
Mikhak Maktangba

Comment on सतीढुङ्गानेर अरूण (कविता) - नवराज सुब्बा by: Atharaili

Thu, 13 Nov 2008 14:21:28 +0000

Swa ro,

the poem is touchy, now You Have to write a poem Powe of ARUN river to product Electricity how we get out from LoadShadding problem in Nepal … continue your writing.

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: परिहास सुब्बा

Wed, 12 Nov 2008 17:59:52 +0000

आशा जी तपाँइ, पाठकहरुका लागी जहिले सुन्दर बिषयबस्तुहरु शब्दहार भित्र उन्नु हुन्छ। जो साहजै सित मगजहरु संग ठोक्किन्छन्। तपाँइको लेखनमा मलाई मन पर्ने पक्ष पनि यहि नै हो।

परिहास सुब्बा
parihass_subba@yahoo.com

Comment on कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: raj shrestha

Wed, 12 Nov 2008 05:40:05 +0000

hi asha
this is raj shrestha from nepal
i really like your GAZAL the way you wrote, you are 100% write all the nepali wopmen are always dominated by the man because they always think they are most powerful in the world, but i do not think so and i totally do not agree with them the way they think, i know i am also a man but it dose not matter, what i am it dose not make any different to you, but your GAZAL owoooooooooo ……it really makes me so happy and make me so proud we have women such like you who can fight alone with all man who has really negative thinking about women, and you gave them really great lesson i personally requested to all man to read this GAZAL and please don’t do those kind of activities which makes really hurt to our nepali women, at last would you mind to be my friend? if yes please mail me i will be waiting to your reply. let me say hi not bye till next coments.

Comment on माटोको नयाँ गीत गाउँदै छु (कविता) - राजेश राई by: dr nischhal

Tue, 11 Nov 2008 08:18:32 +0000

aba hami mato ko geet gauna jati bela pani ready hunu parchha.

Comment on केही हाइकू -मकाउ कविता यात्राको - लारा by: bharupal

Mon, 10 Nov 2008 09:38:18 +0000

laxmi ji,

tapaiko bela belama ayeko poems, article prati hami prawasi sahitya samaj rini chhaun. you have got your own stile and that is unique !

lekhanlai raphtar dina nachhodnu hola. mero sandhai shubhakamana !!

Comment on ओछ्यान, संम्भोग र समाधि… (कविता) - टंक वनेम by: Khajum Bhima

Mon, 10 Nov 2008 06:34:29 +0000

Wow! breathtaking creation…. History.
Tanka Adangaba dai,
This poem is really touchy. I am wondering how systematic order of words to explain the truch….

Comment on सतीढुङ्गानेर अरूण (कविता) - नवराज सुब्बा by: Khemsing

Mon, 10 Nov 2008 06:15:05 +0000

नवराज दाइ,
सवारों
धेरै पछि तपाईको रचना पढ्ने मौका मिल्यो .
कतै अरुण भएर अल्मलिए पनि साहित्यको बाटोमा भुलेर पनि नअल्मलिनु होला

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Gururg Kanchha pahade

Wed, 05 Nov 2008 04:52:29 +0000

yaha haru le pratikriya lekhda pls savya bhaasha prayog garnu holaa. ani yo pasai le chahin k vannu khojeko ta? Lugaa lagaunu najaneko karan le dhoti lagaune le Nepali bhasha ma k lekhya? turunta maaf kaagnu nai ta haami pani Dosro II WW Biswa yudda ladeka baau baajeka naati santati hou pachhi hatne chhainau, jhagadako biwu umarne try nagarnu ok ! prasaai mannu napaulani arko Dashain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: Dhiraj Rai

Fri, 31 Oct 2008 07:05:28 +0000

hi, i am dhiraj rai from dubai.nepal in my home Bhojpur Hellunchha- 7 i am lovely,honesty&funny boy if you want to make me friend i am ready…………………

Comment on देखेपछि आँखा मार्दै (गीत गजल) - छबिलाल कडेल by: madhav

Mon, 20 Oct 2008 05:49:47 +0000

sarai dami chha ho sathi yo ta ek dam reyal ho

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: P.Rai

Sun, 19 Oct 2008 08:38:27 +0000

Malai ekdam man paryo. Ra mero aphuno jiban sita mel khane bayekole dil chuyo. dhannebad. P. rai, malaysia.

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: P.Rai

Sun, 19 Oct 2008 08:32:30 +0000

Thik ho sachai dil chune gajal lekhnubhayocha. tyesko lagi dherei dhannebad. P. Rai, malaysia.

Comment on लांकुरीको रुख अनि म ( कविता)-आशा भुटिया by: P.Rai

Sun, 19 Oct 2008 08:27:01 +0000

Manai chhoyo. Sarei ramro. dhannebad. P. Rai, malaysia.

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Delip subba

Wed, 15 Oct 2008 14:26:21 +0000

Krishna jee

Yo kabita ho ki rosh??
Maile ali bujhina!! kunai ek samuday ra jati lai arop lagaye ko jasto lagyo, Madeshi harulai, Madesi haru pani nepali hun ni yo ta ali bhadkau wadi kabita jasto lagyo!!

Comment on देखेपछि आँखा मार्दै (गीत गजल) - छबिलाल कडेल by: Giri Grg.

Tue, 14 Oct 2008 16:40:42 +0000

Not Bad !!!
chhontto-mittho
Thoraie bhaye ni dhyan akrashan garyo.
keep it up…

Comment on राष्ट्रपति कसलाई ? (कविता) - हरिकृष्ण न्यौपाने (घायल) by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Mon, 13 Oct 2008 18:46:21 +0000

Nyapane g!
Tapaile pani agadi rajaneeti nikai khednu bho jasto chha ni

Comment on छेकिएका हिमश्रृंखलाहरु.. (कविता) - डा.मधु माधुर्य by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Mon, 13 Oct 2008 18:39:59 +0000

Madhau sir!
Tapaile thatta nagarnu bhayo ni!

Comment on धोकामा जलेको मन.. (गीत गजल) - भूपेन्द्र महत by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Mon, 13 Oct 2008 18:27:28 +0000

bhupendra g!
gajal lekhiechha aba yo bhanda alik …….mathiki!

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Mon, 13 Oct 2008 18:18:16 +0000

Prem g1
Yo tapaiko kabitama rela ki sachai bolnu bhaeko arko choti kalam bhet bhae hunthyo

Comment on रातको वेश्यावरण ! (कविता) - शिव प्रकाश by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Mon, 13 Oct 2008 18:09:40 +0000

Shiba g!
aba durgandit shhar lai pakhalne euta kabita chahiyo

Comment on केही हाइकू -मकाउ कविता यात्राको - लारा by: Ikhalu Ramesh

Fri, 03 Oct 2008 21:25:09 +0000

Lara jee Haiku Bhanera lekhni bhayachha tara e ta hailku bhayann ni. Ki .Yadi haiku nai bhannu hunchha bhane Artha na bartha gobind agai hola hai……………………. Haiku should be in 5-7-5

Comment on शताब्दीकी नायिका ! (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Chandra Tamang, Sindhuli

Tue, 30 Sep 2008 04:02:16 +0000

Another nice poem by Sabina bahini. keep it up. we expect more in future from you.

Comment on यात्रा निरन्तर .. (कविता) - मोती चाम्लीङ by: sunita

Wed, 24 Sep 2008 04:56:10 +0000

namaste… moti dai ko poem malai sarai man parchha .. kabita sunaune kala pani sarai nai suhaudo ra sunna sarai aanaanda aauchha…

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Ram KC

Tue, 23 Sep 2008 21:37:56 +0000

kavi ji
Tapai ko kavita samasamaik chha.
Yo mausam tapai ko lagi thik chha.
sala madhesay.
Ram KC

Comment on अमरत्व प्रेमको .. (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ by: krishna

Mon, 22 Sep 2008 07:39:30 +0000

ramro6

Comment on केही हाइकू -मकाउ कविता यात्राको - लारा by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Sat, 20 Sep 2008 07:49:45 +0000

Bahinee Lara!
Ati ramro ho kheti garnu kalamko tar kam kuro ukatir ke jati boki thimi tir po lagiyo ki haikoo ta matri (5/7/5) tin lainma satra aksharko samrchna ho

ko bodha hos hijo thiyo le aaj hami chauo

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Sizen shrestha

Fri, 19 Sep 2008 12:46:30 +0000

whaaaa………………
kya kabita
Sala madhesay haru desh bechei sakay.
kasto haram haru chan
Sizen

Comment on कुमारी .. (कविता) - केवल गंगा गरुङ by: santosh paudel

Fri, 19 Sep 2008 06:59:13 +0000

tapa e ko kabita padna paya khushi chu astai aru pani lakhadai ganu hola maro suvakamana.

Comment on देखेपछि आँखा मार्दै (गीत गजल) - छबिलाल कडेल by: santosh paudel

Fri, 19 Sep 2008 06:22:13 +0000

tapa e ko poem ramro 6 aru pane lakhadai garnu hola.

Comment on अमरत्व प्रेमको .. (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ by: jaskumar

Thu, 18 Sep 2008 09:06:41 +0000

prem ko muskil katha nai jeewanko naya goreto ho ? pratik sir your good poetry . with good feelings

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: keshav

Wed, 17 Sep 2008 09:16:53 +0000

prem g……namate….!
tapai ta khapis hunuhudorahechha……..100% right u sir because …wastabik k ho tiyo sanga tapaiko kunai hichkichhahat bina saral jindagi sanga sametiyeako kabita lekhnubhayeako rahechha …….thanks verry much feri feri pani padhane pratikchhama rahanchhu……..pic chahi narakhnu hola keyyyyyy darlagdo rahechha ni ha…..wwwwwwww.
……………. singapore…………( ktm …a.v.m. chook )

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: bantawa......

Wed, 17 Sep 2008 08:42:58 +0000

himkala cheeli namaskar…….
bimal g ko kabita ko saathai tapaiko kabita padhana pauda sarai khusilageun ……..sonma sugandha bhanejaai …..tapai haruko prayas nirantar rahos samayale saath diwas tapaiharuko kabitale salpa pokharilainai bokera sansaarma nai failiyos r saara manchhe ramnasikun……..bye.
ilam maipokhari ( singapore m.v.c )

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: bantawa......

Wed, 17 Sep 2008 08:10:56 +0000

thanks ……..bimal g……
tapaiko kabita le saara nepalilai biunjaauchha or biunjaaunechha.maile pani suneko thiya salpa pokhari ko barema aati sundar prakritikle sajeesajaauchhare……tapaiko kabit sagai malaipani jagaunu vayakochha ……ani maile kasampani khayako chhu marnu vannda pahile 1..palta salpa pokhari sanga face to face haaskhel gari aatmik n vautik valakusari gari farkane yojana garisakekochhu.
prakritik nai eswar—-eswar nai prakritik , sundar sansaar rachana gariyako chha .
antama …….bimal g tapaiko prakritiksanga ramne kabita sadhai ,sadhai padhan paun go……head……..thanks bye.
singapore m.v camp ……..

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: pritam

Tue, 16 Sep 2008 14:42:09 +0000

sayed tapaiko jasto soch sabai nepali ko hunthyo bhane ?????????…desko yo halt hunthen hola madhesi le,,,,,,,,,,
dhanyebad

Comment on ‘पेन’कविता महोत्सवमा ..(कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: Chandra Gurung

Tue, 16 Sep 2008 11:09:05 +0000

Homnath ji, Namaskar !
Nice description of the various activities of INSL, given the form of a sweet poem.
Great !
Homnath ji, tapaei laei USA ma mero 5-6 ota kitab cargo garchu bhaneko hernus na… Kaheli ke Kaheli ke. Life is like that in Nepal…
Hope very soon I would send you my anthology of poems. Hope your add has not changed.

With regards, Chandra Gurung from Nepal

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: bibhor harkali

Mon, 15 Sep 2008 22:57:24 +0000

BImal ji tapaile sarai ramro kabita lekhnu bhayechha ma pani hotyastai prakritisaga ramne manchhe ho. ajha bhannu parda ti khola nala dada kada atinai man parchha. ma pani ahile abudhabima chhu tara tapaile “shalpa” bakitama silichung ko nam pan ilekhdata ma gaunmai chhu jasto lagyo. lata bimal ji tapaile aru yastai kabita lekdai garnu hola dhanyabad. namaskar.

Comment on नेपाल एक दिन फर्कन्छु ..!( कविता) - दिनेश खरेल by: baniya

Mon, 15 Sep 2008 03:54:53 +0000

sarai ghata lagyo Dinesji. mero manko kabita tapaile chornu bhaya chha.

Comment on धामीको आव्हान र घोषणा-पत्रको प्रतिक्षा - अशोक ‘’खलानको मान्छे'’ by: PIDHIT BARGA

Sat, 13 Sep 2008 14:44:19 +0000

JARMANI NANI TIMILAI K BHANU HAAAAAA…! MAKAI JAISI NABAN……AARKAKO DESMA GAYEARA ……HARUWA KUKUR HAAU, HAAU VUKEJASARI…….. ! AAAA LATE JAAKRI BANJAAKRI CHHITO AAFNU DESMA AAYEARA TI SABAI NIKOPAR HAI……….!

Comment on नेपालका प्रथम राष्ट्रपतिहरु (कविता) - मोती चाम्लिङ by: Rosy China

Fri, 12 Sep 2008 17:28:12 +0000

Kabita mitho ra ramro pani chha,
tara dherailai bujna garo pareko huna sakchha, bujne lai sirikhanda ra nabujne lai khurpako bhid bhane jhai hunchha, tesaile hajurko pargatiko kamana gardai aru pani dherai kabita haru padhna paune aasha gardachhu.
thanks

Comment on यात्रा निरन्तर .. (कविता) - मोती चाम्लीङ by: Rosy

Fri, 12 Sep 2008 17:16:49 +0000

Yatra ma lamki rahanu bhayeka mitra,
Mitho kabita lekhnu bhayeko rahechha, ajhai pagarti gardai janu hos bhani kamana gardachhu, thanks
Rosy

Comment on केही हाइकू -मकाउ कविता यात्राको - लारा by: omkar wambule

Tue, 09 Sep 2008 12:05:39 +0000

bado gajabko artha 6 baieee, H. Aggyatko haikuma. Aggyatjilai jati lokpriya 6 ARAJAK sabdako, malai utikai mitho lag6. hey!!

Comment on एक्काइसौं शताब्दीका भगवानहरु (कविता) - भरु ‘पल्’ by: sijan shrestha

Fri, 05 Sep 2008 04:32:10 +0000

Kavita ta lekhnu vayo
Tara ramayan ra mahavarata ko ramro ra gahiro gyan rahayna chha tapai lai.
Ek patak padhna ma sallaha dinchhu.
Tapailay samayako bisaya ra prstuti chai thik chha

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: sijan shrestha

Fri, 05 Sep 2008 04:18:41 +0000

Very excellent poem
sala madhesayharu lay garnu garay Nepal lai
Nepali haru pani bikuwa vaya pachi kay garnu?
best of luck
Sijan shrestha
DC
USA

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: bimal giri

Thu, 04 Sep 2008 17:51:16 +0000

हिम्कला जी
नमस्कार,तपाइ ले साल्पा कबिता पढेर
पुन कबिता लेख्नु भएकोमा धन्यवाद।
आज मात्र तपाईं को सुन्दर शब्दहरु
पढे,खुसी लाग्यो। मेरो पुरानो घर
भोजपुर दोभाने -२ मा थियो,ऐले
झापा मा। आमा को न्यानो काख
छाडेको पनि ७-८ बर्ष नै बिती सक्यो।
तपाईं राम्रो सुन्दर लेख्नु हुन्छ,लेख्तै
गर्नु होला लगातार बाचन गर्न पाइरहु
तपाईं को उत्तरोत्तर प्रगती को लागि
शुभ कामना। बिमल गिरी,ब्रुस्सेल्स

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: amir uprety

Thu, 04 Sep 2008 10:58:50 +0000

your poems are very very excellent. they are realistic, logical and spiritual. i have read many of your poems at other sites . thank you very mush may your good thoughts increase. Keep on writing poems like this.

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: ramesh prasai

Thu, 04 Sep 2008 10:47:56 +0000

hello dai
ramro kabita lekhnu bhaecha aajai yesto leknuhola.
best of luck

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Ram kumar

Thu, 04 Sep 2008 10:44:35 +0000

hello krishna
i9 loved your poems which brought soverignty in my heart.
anyone who reads your poem with enthusiatically like it i wish you would prosper in such poems.
jay nepal

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: Himal(limbu)

Wed, 03 Sep 2008 18:04:12 +0000

Hiu khaniko hiu hoina ma
tehi pani timilai chiso mausham dina man lagcha!Bagaicha ma Phuleko phul hoina ma,tepani timilai suvash dina manlagcha!!Mayama ghoka hoina timi lai.Jibanko antim swash samma sath dina man lagcha!!!Thanks

Comment on अमरत्व प्रेमको .. (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ by: KHUSHI RAI

Tue, 02 Sep 2008 10:38:41 +0000

यस्तै प्रगती को कामना
खुशी राइ
काठमाडौं

Comment on धार (कविता) - कृष्ण बजगाईं by: bijay limbu

Mon, 01 Sep 2008 14:40:40 +0000

it,s too true match in all people,s life.i hope i,ll find like this pome in comeing days

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Ram chandra Deupa

Mon, 01 Sep 2008 07:13:44 +0000

very excellent poem
please keep in touch same poem
Deuba

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Giri Gurung

Sun, 31 Aug 2008 15:01:13 +0000

A re ke Bhanchha yo Krishna Bhaie-ya
Je lekhnu bho thik lekhnu bho Krishna Bhaie-ya
Hajur ko shabda baan le yi Bharat mukhi Bie-ya
haru garchhan hola Aie-ya…Aie-ya…Aie-ya
A re ek gana suna-na Bhaie-ya..?
Geet:-Oaie hoie goariya-Ab tooaa jawan hoie gawa..
(Film:- Lobhi-Papi, Ma-Ha Jodi)
Gauna chhadi Thet Nepali Madhesi Geet
Ganuchhan ini..
Chal chhaniya-chhaniya–Chal chhaniya-chhaniya..
Wah-Wah bhaieya wah….
Noon Nepal ka khate he…Gana Bharat ka
gate he..
Sangeet ko kunaie sima chhaina..
hamraie Nepali haru le pani gun gunanuchhan
Tara eauta singo Nepal hankne Garimay pad ma pugeka thula haru le shapath pani Hindi bhasha ma
Shapath grahan garda yo eauta Tito Sattya ho.
Kapuri-Ka, Kharayo-Kha…Nepali Barna Mala..
(Jun Hindi Barna Mala sanga milchha)
Hamra Nepal ka Rashta Pati hunu Bhaye ka Neta jue laie abashya pani padna anuthyo hola
Hoina Ra…?
Nepali haru ko Maya,Sath,Sahmati,Mat paye ra naie
chuni-nu bhaye ka neta jue le Nepali Bhasha ko
it-jat rakhera Nepali bhasha ma shapath lekhna lagaera Shapath khanu bhayeko bhaye Sara Nepali haru laie santushti ta milthyo…
Athwa thet Maitheli Bhasha ma naie shapath khaye
Jastaie..Maitheli ma- Hamar,Tohar,Eahari Awa,
Oahri Jawa,Bhaat kha bhaila it-tyadi it-tyadi..
Hindi..Hamara,Tumhara,iadhar Aao,Udhar jao, chawal kha liya It-tyadi..Very simple…
Dosh kasko…..???
Afnaie Ghar ko Parivaar ma samajh dari,Bishwash, ekta,Maya Na bhaye pachhi..
Tesaie le Krishna Jue..
Bela Bakhat ma hajur ko..
Bachan Rupi kalam ko baan chalaunus…
Sabie laie thaha chha…
Sati le sarape ko desh hamro..
Huna ta kehi hune wala chhaina…
Taie pani yesta mitha-mitha..
Shabda ko Prahar hani..
Mann ko Chit-ta matra bujhaunus..
Great Job Krishna ji Keep it up..
Jay Desh…Jay Jay Pashupati Naath
Jay Jay Masi-Kalam

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: santosh thapa

Thu, 28 Aug 2008 12:35:48 +0000

hiiiiii aasha ji
man mutu lai nai chirera tapai le yo jun kabita lekhnu bhayo teslai herda ta sarai ramailo lagyo
kahan kahan bata man bata sohorera lekhnu bhayo hola hai
j hos saaaaarai ramro chha ani
sadhai yestai ramro kabita haru aaosh tapai ko man ma dherai tapai lai safalta ko sathai samman haru prapt hos yehi chha mero manokamana uhi SANTOSH ALAPATRA TAJ INDIA

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: santosh thapa

Thu, 28 Aug 2008 12:26:13 +0000

hiiiiiiiiiii lara ji kati saaaaaro man mutu ko chot haru lai nicharera tapaile poem banaunu bhako hau ?? herda ta kahan kahan aafani hal aru bata sunna paye jasto lagne aafnai anuhar aina ma here jasto lagne j hos ramro lagyo !!!
thanks hai

Comment on अमरत्व प्रेमको .. (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ by: santosh thapa

Thu, 28 Aug 2008 12:18:27 +0000

hiiiii kati ramro sahittek hau pratik chamling ji ko !!

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Raias

Thu, 28 Aug 2008 11:28:01 +0000

Great work!!! Krishna Prashai Ji,

Right poem, at a right time, excellent!!!

I hope this poem reaches to all Nepalese far and wide.

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: (delh) jayaram adhikarii

Mon, 25 Aug 2008 12:06:42 +0000

krishna ji ko kavita vastu gat yatharta ho tito satya bhane ko yehi ho…. natra nepali pm .. parchanda china frist ghayo bharat ko nimtran lai an dekhi gharayo ani parm para tode ko bhandai kina aalochana garne ha….. ke afnu desh ko kura ho ke aba hami le sas ferna pani dhoti haru sag sodhera ferne hami nepali ko kohi ashtitto 6eena ra jani jani bish hale ko mithai khane olmpic ko abshar ani samaroh pani bhako ma nepali pm china gako ma bharat nikat ka dhoti harulai kina aapatti hune indian media haru le yo subject lai yti dharai mashala gholera parsharn garnu kina ki nepali lai dash ko rup ma herne kam bhai n ra6 hamro china pani chhimeki ho ani bharat pani 2 ma kehi farak 6eena tara hamro har kurama dakhal andaj garne bhart ra bharat premi madshe haru schai aafulai nepali ho bhanne ra manne ho bhane tesh ko birodh garnu parchha

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Bhisan pun

Sun, 24 Aug 2008 19:42:18 +0000

excellent kabita i really respect your talent thank for sharing your talent.

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: sunita

Fri, 22 Aug 2008 07:40:25 +0000

hi Him Kala sis ,,, mitho samjhana… tapai ko kabita haru jata tatai paddna pauda khusi lageko chha yesari nai tapaiko kalam narokiyos vanne aasa rakheki chhu ,,, thank u .. dd sunita younlong nibasi…

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: shankar kumar khadka

Fri, 22 Aug 2008 07:39:54 +0000

sale pahadiya ke bhancha bol ko kabita ahileko sam samayik bisay ma ramro r satik tarikale byanga garna khognu bhayako cha, Tapai lai muri muri dhanyabat
shankar

Comment on नेपाल एक दिन फर्कन्छु ..!( कविता) - दिनेश खरेल by: Tareli Gurung

Tue, 19 Aug 2008 14:19:22 +0000

Dinesh Jee ! Kabita marmik sathai samay sandarbhik lagyo. Sunaulo bhabisy tatha sukhmay jiwanko sapana sajayera bidesiyeka sampurna Nepali dajubhai-didibahiniharuko katha, betha ani badyetalai sametna saphal… ‘ Dhan-sampatti yestai rahecha kahiley dherai nahune…Jiwan pni testai rahecha bhane jasto kahiley nahune…Maanbhari janmabhumiko maya, aakhabhari babuaama sathisangi ko chhaya…Jindagi yesari nai bitirahecha dherai Dineshharuko…Nepal ekdin pharkanchu bhanne aasha ho ki baacha(!?)
Subhachintak: Tareli Gurung, HK

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: santosh adhikari

Tue, 19 Aug 2008 13:31:22 +0000

hi than x a lot 4 urs suitable poem.
i am proude of u and us craation.
go ahead and achieve the goal of creation.ok

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: पिताम्बर राई

Tue, 19 Aug 2008 12:16:58 +0000

बिमल जि को कबिता हेरे पछि जो कोहिलाई पनि कबिता लेखु लेखु त अबश्य लाग्ने नै रहेछ किन भने उहाँको कबिता सारै मन छुने र ह्रिदय स्पर्शि छ ।

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Bhuwan Rai

Mon, 18 Aug 2008 15:12:13 +0000

Prasaai Ji tapaain le saarai ethartha laai sametera lekhnu bhaeko kabita dohorayera padhegn jyadai ramro chha. Euta Nepali ko chhora bhayera Nepal prati ko chinta jaagera Nepali lai sachet garne jun chhemata tapaain ko chha esto ajhain aru pani lekhnu hola ko aasha garda chhaun. Dherai dheai dhanne bat chha

Bhuwan
UK

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: Him Kala rai

Sun, 17 Aug 2008 01:05:31 +0000

Namaskar Hajur ! ma Him Kala Rai HONG kONG bata. Hajurko Salpa kabita herera malai pani lekhoun lagyo ra lekheki 6u .Kripaya annyartha sochnu hunna bhanne socheki 6u. Hajurco kabitale aankha kholiyekoma hajur prati hardik aavhar …….Ramro , shandes mulak kabitako aasa gardei bida DHANNEWAD . Him Kala Rai Hong Kong.

Comment on शताब्दीकी नायिका ! (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Fri, 15 Aug 2008 21:11:53 +0000

bahinee sabina!
kalam ajhai tikharindai jawos jasle narisarshtaharu lai uraja milas

Comment on देखेपछि आँखा मार्दै (गीत गजल) - छबिलाल कडेल by: Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar

Fri, 15 Aug 2008 17:50:15 +0000

chabilala g! dhanybad
gajal lekhiyacha yo ati gajab ho chori cheli mathi kalamle dharm darsaiyacha yastai kheti tira pheri pani januki

Comment on ‘पेन’कविता महोत्सवमा ..(कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: arjun

Fri, 15 Aug 2008 14:18:40 +0000

there are so many people doing there job
there are so many people having hug
no way to excuse no one can find out that
who is best n who is frod.

Comment on अमरत्व प्रेमको .. (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ by: Reshma

Fri, 15 Aug 2008 05:33:25 +0000

you’r poem is very very good rai bro. good luck for next poem.

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: loyem

Thu, 14 Aug 2008 20:48:22 +0000

krishna g !
sahity samajko darpana ho aba tapai aphai bhannu hos tarai wa pahadko anuharma lageko kalo moso tapai dwar nirmit darpanako sahayogle puchna sakincha ya sakindain arko kura alikati yaha kalamko dharm pura bhayo hola?

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Jayant Koirala

Thu, 14 Aug 2008 13:14:25 +0000

Dherai dhera dhynya bad tapai ko byangayatmak kabita ko lagi. Yo ahile nepalma basera chimeki ko anusaran gardai utai ko gungan gaudai Nepal ra Nepali nai birsi Madhes ra madhesi bhandai lagne li ramro jhataro haneko 6. Pheri pani yesto lekh ko aash gareko 6u.

Jayant koirala

Comment on शताब्दीकी नायिका ! (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: yashoda

Thu, 14 Aug 2008 08:03:10 +0000

hello saina jee ;
hajurala lakhnu vayko kavita la maro man saari choyako chha yada dina haruma pani yasti ramra ramra kavita haru lakhdai januhola vana suvkamna keep it up.

Comment on अमरत्व प्रेमको .. (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ by: yashoda

Thu, 14 Aug 2008 07:58:39 +0000

nice poem

Comment on ‘पेन’ हङकङमा… (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: yashoda

Thu, 14 Aug 2008 07:55:36 +0000

homanath sir ‘
hajurala saari ramro kavita lakhnu vako raichha yaspali tasila hajur ko pargatiko kamna saaita best of luck .

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: हिमकला राई

Wed, 13 Aug 2008 17:55:07 +0000

-कबिता
साल्पाको सम्झनामा
मलाई आज एक शब्द लेखौ लाग्यो साल्पाबारे
साल्पा जाँदा जे जे भोगे त्यसैलाई यँहा कोरे ।
टुकु टुकु म साल्पा गाथें तेह्र बर्ष उमेरमा
बेसार, फूल, बत्ती,अक्षता,भेटी टपरामा ।

जंगल, झाडी जुकाको तांती बाफ्रे ! डरले आत्तीएथें
साउने झरी ,लेकको बाटो बाफ्रे ! जाडोले बिजोग भांथे ।
क्या स्वाद आउँथ्यो मोहिको डल्लो सेरगम खाँदा
बेस्वाद लाग्थ्यो गन्योला खेल्ने डुंडको पानि पिउँदा ।

कतै चौरी, कतै भन्ज्याङ उसै उसै मनै हर्ने लोभ्याउने
कतै जंगल डरमर्दो, कतै भिर मुटु थरर कमाउने ।
कति रमाईलो लाग्थ्यो भेडा चौरीको बथान देख्दा
नरमाईलो लाग्थ्यो गलेको माथि छेपारी दुख्दा ।

पानी, झरी, जुका पर्छ जीउमा टकटकाउँदा हैरान
बिसाउनी छैन दिन भरी हिंडाइ गलेर लखतरान ।
झरीको मौसम, लेकाली दाउरा आगो बले मर्नु
पाक्दैन भात भेाकले प्याक्प्याक् मन हुन्थ्यो के गर्नु ।

आइया भन्दै, कष्ट खेप्दै बल्ल साल्पा धाम पुगियो
पूजा सकि बत्ती बाली बल्ल टपरा पोखरीमा चढाइयो ।
वरीपरी डाँडै डाँडा बिना बारबेर माझामा छ पोखरी
पूजा सकि पोखरी घुमाउँदा खसीयला भन्ने तरहरी ।

छङ छङ गर्दै र्झछ पानी बग्ने ठाँउ खोज्दा देखीदैन
पानी छ अचल काँ बाट आउँछ कतै मुहान भेटिदैन ।
कुलो न मुहान पोखरी देख्दा सब्लाई आश्चार्य लाग्छ
त्यंहा भन्दा उभो पहाड छैन बिद्वान पनि छक्क पर्छ ।

बर्षाको याम म सानी देख्दा शर्ेर्पेनी आमा छक्क पर्नु भो
बर्षा याम मा हैन ए सानी नानी ! बैशाखमा आउनु भन्नु भो ।
बैशाखमा दर्शनार्थी, धामी, झयाक्री, लस्कर लाग्छन् ।
ढ्यांग्रो ठोग्दै, सै सै भन्दै सबै नाच्छन्, गाउँछन् ।

बैशाखमा चिमल, गुँरास फूल्छ बनै भरी ढकमक
हुलका हुल दर्शनार्थी हिँड्छन् फूल टिपी टपटप ।
चौरी, भन्ज्याङ, बन पाखा झल्मल् लाग्छ घाम घमाईलो र्
दर्शनार्थी, धामी, झयाक्री, बस्तु,गोठाले, हुन्छ सारै रमाइलो ।

केन्द बिन्दु हो यो साल्पा सोलुखुम्बु भोजपुरको ।
संखुवासभा खोटाङ गरी जम्मा चार जिल्लाको ।
लौ है नानी ! बैशाखे मेला सुकिलो बेला साल्पा साल्पा धाम पोखरी
जसरी भएनी सबैलाई भनि आउनु है कसैगरी ।।

(नोट:- एचकेनेपाल डट कममा विमल गिरीको “साल्पा” कबिता हेरेपछि मलाई पनि केहि लेखु लेखुं लागेर यो कविता लेखेको छु)
हिम कला राई
रतन्छा ७ खोटाङ्ग
हाल - हङकङ
२/८/०८

Comment on शताब्दीकी नायिका ! (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Nir magar "Alone"

Wed, 13 Aug 2008 13:56:16 +0000

Tapaiko kabita ramro chha !abaka dina haruma pani yasari nai lekhdai janu hola !!

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Sabita sailee

Wed, 13 Aug 2008 11:19:07 +0000

whhh………………..aaaaa
Kati excellent kavita.
sailee

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: ram chandra neupane

Tue, 12 Aug 2008 06:06:35 +0000

x ci leent poem thats great …touch in heart

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: sankar vai

Mon, 11 Aug 2008 06:14:49 +0000

very excellent poem of this month.
Ramro chha
Sankar

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Kaji Bantawa

Mon, 11 Aug 2008 06:09:11 +0000

kati ramro kabita lekhnu vayako?
Tapaiko kabita lay ma huna samma marmahat vaye.
Nepal lai ta garnu garo varat lay.
Sab biki sakay neta haru
Tapai lai mero man ko kabita lekhnu vaya ko ma sadhubad.
thanks a lot
Bantawa vai

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: shankar

Mon, 11 Aug 2008 05:58:52 +0000

Very excellent poem kabi ji,
Tapai ka rastra vakti ka kavita haru aaja voli dherai aayaka chan.
bastav ma aajavoli nepal najuk samaya bata gujrirahay ko chha.
Tapai lai badhai
Shankar U.K.

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: kumar moktan

Sun, 10 Aug 2008 09:09:24 +0000

Excellent ! hope your write again about SALPA POKHARI.

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Amar JUng Gurung,lamjung,kolki-2(haal malaysia,seremban)

Sun, 10 Aug 2008 08:29:35 +0000

krishna prashai ji kabita ko sadhubaad! tapai le aja nepal ko tito yethartha lai mitho kabita marfat jagaran ko jun abhiyaan chalaunu bhayeko chha tes lai muri muri dhanyabaad ko patra hunu hunchha.aaja bibhinna parti bata galahtyera,kaam nalagera athawa satta ma huda brammha lut gari aafno kukarya lai lukauna chupauna,bharatiya bistar baad ko gulami gari bharat ko isharama tandav naach nachhadai janamanas ma bhram ko,bhayeko kheti gardai hidne kehi madheshi haru lai chadkan diyeko cha tapaiko kavita le,bastav ma satya tito nai huncha,j hos agami din haru ma pani tapai bata yestai bicharmula,sandesmulak kavita haru sarjak haruma puryaunu hunecha bhanne kamana ka saath puna dhanyabaad!!!

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: dense

Sun, 10 Aug 2008 06:55:28 +0000

och bro le lekhna chai dami lekheko hai

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: suryadarsan rai

Sat, 09 Aug 2008 14:03:28 +0000

I like poiem sala pahadiya really good poiem I encourage to write like that poeim to writer………. its all

Comment on धार (कविता) - कृष्ण बजगाईं by: Ramesh Pallav

Sat, 09 Aug 2008 02:00:23 +0000

Short and sweet poem. This poem really touched heart. Wishing you all the best.

Ramesh Pallav
California, USA

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: U K

Fri, 08 Aug 2008 07:04:19 +0000

Prasai Baje, Kabita Jastai Bhayepani Shirshak ‘ SHALA PAHADIYA KE BHANCCHA’ Le Nakaratmak Rup Lina Sakccha.Tesaile Aainda Yesto Nahos Bhanne Chahancchu.
KATHA BAHUN.

Comment on गजल बिनाश …. - दुर्गा राई by: saramsha dhital

Tue, 05 Aug 2008 13:13:29 +0000

trash vitra aash huncha ladhi janu
ak muthi sas rahunjel agadi badhi janu
bishwas ko mahal atal huncha
andhi huri jati aayapani sikhar chadai janu

Comment on देखेपछि आँखा मार्दै (गीत गजल) - छबिलाल कडेल by: saramsha dhital

Tue, 05 Aug 2008 13:10:03 +0000

chabilal kandel ji gajal lai maya gardhi ajha utkrista gajal lekhna tira lamkanu tapai lai shubhakamana cha.

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: KIrant UK

Mon, 04 Aug 2008 20:02:23 +0000

What a fantastic and reality poem,, deep heart touching POEM for every Nepali Janatas But nothing for our BAKAMFUSE NETAHARULAI (useless leaders) well done Mr, Krishna Prasin Jee ! and commenter No 4 Mr, J Rai and commeter No 5 Rai UK.

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Bharat

Mon, 04 Aug 2008 17:32:31 +0000

ramro lagoooo

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Bharat

Mon, 04 Aug 2008 17:18:34 +0000

sarai ramro cha tapai ko gazzal.

Comment on च्वास्स मुटु दुख्दो रैछ …(गीत) -बिमल गिरी by: Bharat

Mon, 04 Aug 2008 17:10:45 +0000

Tapai ko kabita sarai ramro lago. tapai ko lekhan sailee ra salalaaa bageko kabita sarai ramro cha.sabai pathak haru ko maan chune cha yesle.
Thank you
Bharat

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: laxman pandey butwal nepal now korea

Mon, 04 Aug 2008 14:31:38 +0000

कबिता को लागी धेरै धेरै धन्यबाद साह्रै राम्रो कबिता मुटु नै छूने खालको जाती प्रशम्षा गरे पनि कम हुन्छ /

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Chandra gautam

Mon, 04 Aug 2008 08:09:52 +0000

keep it up

Comment on शताब्दीकी नायिका ! (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Chandra gautam

Mon, 04 Aug 2008 08:07:11 +0000

nice poem keep it up

Comment on धोकामा जलेको मन.. (गीत गजल) - भूपेन्द्र महत by: puspa

Sun, 03 Aug 2008 12:10:39 +0000

it’s nice jazzal

Comment on साल्पा (कविता) - बिमल गिरी by: Kripa Rai

Fri, 01 Aug 2008 19:57:38 +0000

saarai raamro kabita.dherai dherai dhanyabaad.

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: Manoj Thapa Kamal

Thu, 31 Jul 2008 15:14:22 +0000

नमस्कार दाई
अति अति ……..अ…अ.अ..अ.अ.अ.राम्रो ….थैंक्स …….

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Dirgha Raj Prasai

Wed, 30 Jul 2008 11:14:20 +0000

I extend thanks to all H.K. Nepal group that you are spreading real nepalese nationalism. Reading the poetry of my dearest Krishna Prasai I am very happy. Thank you.
Dirgha Raj Prasai

Comment on नयाँ नेपाल… (गीत गजल) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: Reshma

Wed, 30 Jul 2008 08:45:49 +0000

helloo bhola dai you’r poem is really beautiful and keep it up. And good luck for you’r next creation.

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: ukhang limbu

Tue, 29 Jul 2008 16:53:09 +0000

oooooooooooo prasai soltiji, tapaiko kabitalai sarsati padda dherai naramro ra aasoddha sabdaharo chan. Tara yo tapaiko kabita mancheko paddaima bhar parcha prasaiji. yedi tapaiko kabita sakaratmak roopma padneho bhane “yo kabitale madhesilai chadke haneko cha ra aaba testo nahosh bhanne kora pani aawcha” tara tapaiko anta garne lekh aasodda cha jasle garda tapaiko kabitalai sarsati nakaratmak roopma lancha ra kora bojhda yesle “madhesi lai howsala diyeko chara pahadi moloklai naramro dristikodma rakhiyeko cha”. Tesaile prasaiji “ewta gana rachda jasari mancheko swor, sabda, sangit, kala, bhawana iityadi chahincha, testai kabita lekhda pani kasto sabda thik cha ra kasto sabda thik chaina sochera matra lekhno hola”

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Rai UK

Tue, 29 Jul 2008 10:01:22 +0000

Newar Bigryo bhoja le, Janjaati bigryo moja le ra Chhetri-Bahun bigryo Lobha le. Thik 6 Madheshi ra Bihari ma kunai pharak chhaina akai babuko santan. Aba Nepal lai Bihar-India banaununai parcha.

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: J Rai

Sun, 27 Jul 2008 10:42:35 +0000

Sala pahadiya kya bhanchha
Gachhyadar bhaiyako pani pradhanmantri banaidinu
ani ta Lalu, Pappu khushi bhai halchha
tes pachhi ta madeshiya khushi bhai halchha
Tik chha krisna prasai ji

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Mritunjaya

Sun, 27 Jul 2008 08:46:13 +0000

Kabita ramro 6, tara yo had samma gali garna alik thik bhaya na. Hami pahade haru bigat ma Madheshi prati kasto thiyou, tyo pani hernu par6. Rastriyata ko nam ma man6e prati yo ghrina alik suhayana ki ?

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: chhuchi keti,USA

Sun, 27 Jul 2008 04:18:25 +0000

EXCELLENT POEM. I AM PROUD OF YOU. IT IS REALITY OF NEPALESE ‘S RELATIONSHIP WITH MADESHI AND PAHADIYA.
WE HAVE TO AVOID THIS CONCEPT OF THOSE CRUEL MADESHI’S .

Comment on साला पहाडिया के भन्छ ? ..(कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Moti Chamling

Sat, 26 Jul 2008 15:31:49 +0000

Kya srijanaa., dherai dherai padna paau, ajhai yastai. Sayed bichar kabita maa salin dhanga le sayar garne niyam tapaiko kabitaa le prayog gareko chha. Very proud of you krishna sir.
Yours
Moti Chamling

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Nabin sagar sapkota

Mon, 21 Jul 2008 07:56:15 +0000

Dear reader If all of our leader thinking standard will be as krishna parsais then no naxal war like terai and limbuan .he is really higher level thinker and great liturature of nepal.
nabin sagar sapkota

Comment on केही हाइकू -मकाउ कविता यात्राको - लारा by: manoj

Sun, 20 Jul 2008 13:22:51 +0000

thanks la mansun2036@yahoo.com

Comment on केही हाइकू -मकाउ कविता यात्राको - लारा by: kiran

Sun, 20 Jul 2008 05:26:26 +0000

you na kabita na haiku , you must understand rules of haiku, haiku start fro 5 letters first, secont 7 letters and third end with 5 letters.

what a joke

Comment on अनुत्तरित चित्र (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ by: moti didi

Sat, 19 Jul 2008 04:37:15 +0000

Bhai ko kabita dharai ramro lagyo. yasari lekhdai jau
timilai suvakamana cha ajhai ramro ledai janu.

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: mohan pun

Fri, 18 Jul 2008 12:21:49 +0000

Prem solti tapaiko poem padhera ma ekdamai attractive vaye.jun tapaile chahi harmro real history lai poem ma dhalera lekhnu vayoko maa thanks.yestai aru pani padhna ko lagi sadabahar tapaiko pertikksha ma basne chhu. GOD blese youuuuuuu

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Chandra gautam

Thu, 17 Jul 2008 10:45:20 +0000

hi ! Sindhu how are you ? m’ very happy to read ur nice poem.

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Chandra gautam

Thu, 17 Jul 2008 10:41:47 +0000

nice

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: destinypunmagar

Wed, 16 Jul 2008 14:12:45 +0000

heloo dai is reallly nice descripton of reality….glad to read ur article good luckk..

Comment on ‘पेन’ हङकङमा… (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: kum shahi

Tue, 15 Jul 2008 10:10:40 +0000

होमनाथ सर
नमस्कार /
१९५ औ भानुजयान्तिको अबसरमा ‘पेन’ बेल्जियम नामक कबिता मार्फ़त हामी यहाका कार्यसमितिका साथीहरूलाइ अझ एक पाइला अघि बढेर काम गर्ने उत्साह प्रदान गर्नु भएकोमा हामी तपाई प्रति आभारी छौ /.

कुम शाही
(कोषाध्यक्ष)
अंतररास्ट्रीय नेपाली साहित्य समाज बेल्जियम च्याप्टर /

Comment on शब्दातीत मान्छेका विरुद्ध .. (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: sabbu bharadwaj

Mon, 14 Jul 2008 13:42:45 +0000

Dherai Ramro chha kabita.

Comment on केही हाइकू -मकाउ कविता यात्राको - लारा by: Venomous

Mon, 14 Jul 2008 13:03:44 +0000

Hi koo is 5, 7,5 words creation, as I come to know. Anyway nice to read. Muri Muri Dhanyabaad.

Comment on छेकिएका हिमश्रृंखलाहरु.. (कविता) - डा.मधु माधुर्य by: Pravakar Satyal

Sun, 13 Jul 2008 07:43:12 +0000

Sarai ramro kavita chha. jata baata jasto artha laaye pani hune.
Malai yestai kavita man parchhan. Thank you Madhu Madhurya.

Comment on देखेपछि आँखा मार्दै (गीत गजल) - छबिलाल कडेल by: Sarkari

Sun, 13 Jul 2008 00:53:49 +0000

i like the chudkila

Comment on वाशिङ्गटनमा ‘र्‍याली’ (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: sanu thapa magar

Fri, 11 Jul 2008 14:14:20 +0000

der sir arati n liza nam ki yek meri sathi hk ko id ma vayeko sathi thiyo ahuile kaha hola kasari vetna sakin6 hola waha sanga ma waha sanga vetna chahan6u pls help garna mil6 vane

Comment on वाशिङ्गटनमा ‘र्‍याली’ (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: sanu thapa magar

Fri, 11 Jul 2008 14:12:05 +0000

arati meri man ki hau timi jaha vayepani matra meri hau yo janam matra houina timi satau janam meri hau yo mero man ko git yehi git sangai bitne vayo mero preti kina yeti sarho hooooooooooo malai kina garhoooooooooooooo hooooooooooooo nanu meri nau mayalu houuuuuuuuuu timi matrameri hauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Comment on यता ले, छिट्टो दे… (गजल) -परिहास by: Tufan

Fri, 11 Jul 2008 05:09:42 +0000

Parihas jee, what a million dollor Bchar tapai ko

hamile hamra aagrag haru lai samman garu parchaa… yedi imandar srasta ho vane … tara…eeuta kura ta pakka ho nepali sahitya ko yes time ma aayera pani uhi hamra aagarag haru ka parampargat Niyam haru lai nai puja garea basne ho vane voli hamro Pooja kasle garchaa ni ta… aaru le gari sakeo kaam garnu thulo kura hoina ni ta.. sungur le sadhai jamin matrai herera marne bela ma aakash dekhera danga bha jhai hunu vanda lets brek da rule and think beyond the limit hoina ra

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: Jaya

Thu, 10 Jul 2008 05:16:49 +0000

Hi,
Nice poem and i liked it , keep it up . thank you .

Comment on नयाँ बर्ष २०६५लाई खबर.. ? (कविता) - जीवन मुकारुङ by: bhawaani

Thu, 10 Jul 2008 01:41:55 +0000

jiwan ji….tapaaikaa dherai geet suneko chhu, malaai auodhi man parchha , ahile poem pani padhe raamro laageu, tapaaiko lekhan saileemaa baastaviktaa jhalkeko bhetinchha pheri pheri yestai naayaa geet ani kabitaa haru sunna, ra padhana paau pragatiko laagi shubhakaamanaa………bhawaani

Comment on नेपाल एक दिन फर्कन्छु ..!( कविता) - दिनेश खरेल by: Mr. Thapa

Sun, 06 Jul 2008 14:02:34 +0000

Hahahaha…Nice comment Mr. Hansing ! But poem also not bad……Keep it up writter !

Comment on नेपाल एक दिन फर्कन्छु ..!( कविता) - दिनेश खरेल by: Mr. Thapa

Sun, 06 Jul 2008 13:59:45 +0000

Hahaha Nice Comment Mr.Hansing…….But Still Poem also not bad…Keep it up writter.

Comment on खुशी हुँदा पनि साथ… (गीत)- प्रेम पुन by: sak kumar

Sat, 05 Jul 2008 15:01:11 +0000

tapai sanga yati ramro ramro kabita geet haru rahechhan pachhi gaerr tapaiko kabita geet haru le abisya pani thulo thau ogatne chha bhane purna asha badi ma chhu

Comment on च्वास्स मुटु दुख्दो रैछ …(गीत) -बिमल गिरी by: sita

Thu, 03 Jul 2008 08:38:46 +0000

yo geet malai derai mon paro.Mero man ko kura yo geet bata milna gayo. Pheri pheri yestai lekdai janu hola.
thank you,sita

Comment on च्वास्स मुटु दुख्दो रैछ …(गीत) -बिमल गिरी by: sangita

Thu, 03 Jul 2008 08:35:22 +0000

This is very nice song.I like it. Keep it up

Comment on केही हाइकू -मकाउ कविता यात्राको - लारा by: Laxmi

Wed, 02 Jul 2008 16:54:51 +0000

Hi Kelkey Bro/Sis ???
Absolutely right point. It’s more than real hi-koo. It’s something high-ku. Thanks for good pointing. Do write more. I am impressed.

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: lali poon

Wed, 02 Jul 2008 06:47:07 +0000

nice poem .god bless u my fren

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: sagar gauchan

Tue, 01 Jul 2008 22:33:52 +0000

mathi lekhnu bhaye ko kabita bhanu ya muktak ya git saharai ramro lagyo prem ji sayed tapai le ma lai chinnu hunnu hola. ma pani tapai kai jastai gau ma hurke ko sikha gau basi nai hu ra yedi yo sano comment paunu bhaye ma mero mail add su_ gauchan yahoo.com la

Comment on केही हाइकू -मकाउ कविता यात्राको - लारा by: kelkey

Tue, 01 Jul 2008 17:30:26 +0000

Hi De… sorry to say …. word’s sound not like real Hi Koo , you guys dragging on nepali style , i think you guys need to ……take a look .. japanes hi koo for creating many meanings of word power .

Comment on देखेपछि आँखा मार्दै (गीत गजल) - छबिलाल कडेल by: KADEL YAM LAL

Tue, 01 Jul 2008 16:05:57 +0000

TAPAI PANI MA JASTAI DANGA, CHORI MARTA HOINA CHORAKO KO PANI SUNNU DANGA.—
BIHAN 7.30 MA MA KAAM MA JANE BATO MA DEKHCHU- NISKINE GHAR BATA HATMA CHUROT LIYERA,
SALKAUNE PARA KO GALLIMA GAYERA,

ANI ANUHAAR CHA RATBHAR NA SUTEKO JASTO,
KAPPAL HERDA BHRKHAR BHUTLYAYE JASTO,

DRESS CHA SETO SHIRT R KHAIRO PAINT JHOLA CHA KITABKO,
KE BHNNU SCHOOLE CHATR R CHATRA KO.

PARKA MA JAU BHNE SUNNA NASKNE BHASA TINKO,
KE RAKHUN TINLE IJJET BBAU R AAMA KO,

AILE TINI RASLILA MA BHULE R HIDCHAN SABAI BA\RBAAD BHISAKE PACHI ANI MATRA AANKHA KHOLCHA,

TESAILE NANI HARU -MAUKA AAUCHA PARKHIDAINA BAGEKO KHOLA FARKIDAINA, TAKE CARE ON THE TIME………./

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: kingstone

Tue, 01 Jul 2008 08:39:09 +0000

hi pun ji namaskar
thanks alot & verry good poem. keep it up good luck

Comment on छेकिएका हिमश्रृंखलाहरु.. (कविता) - डा.मधु माधुर्य by: Mani Bahadur

Mon, 30 Jun 2008 19:51:02 +0000

Namaste Madhu Sir !
Thanks for excellent poem with sentimental expression of various part of the life.

Comment on ‘पेन’ हङकङमा… (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: Moti Chamling

Mon, 30 Jun 2008 19:31:49 +0000

Homanath Sir,
namaste,
Thanks for your message and appropriate advices. HongKong chapter always takes positively such good advices. We are trying to do our best.
Thanks alot.
Yours
Moti Chamling
INLS HK

Comment on ‘पेन’ हङकङमा… (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: लक्ष्मी

Mon, 30 Jun 2008 09:21:11 +0000

होमनाथ सर,
नमस्कार ।

मोती चाम्लिङ्ले तपाईंको निक्कै तारिफ गर्नु भएको थियो । आज मिठो रचना एबम तस्बिर सहित देख्न पाइयो ।

धन्यवाद ।

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Gajendtra Lawati

Mon, 30 Jun 2008 08:24:02 +0000

Krisna ji Big NAMASKAR and Thank you for very good out standing KAVITA. Your message via KAVITA must undersand by all Nepalese People Specialy LAST GHINGLAGDO NEHTAHARULE
BUJHUNU PARCHHA.

Comment on नरेश सुनुवार … (कविता) - हिमकला राई by: rai_ho@yahoo.com

Sun, 29 Jun 2008 11:34:23 +0000

namaste/ khushi lageko cha / harhaina jeewan timro jetkai katha vanni gara[ bantawa.

Comment on नरेश सुनुवार … (कविता) - हिमकला राई by: rai

Sun, 29 Jun 2008 11:28:36 +0000

namaste harhaina jeewan timro jetkai katha vanni gara ] hemkala bahini khuse lageko6,

Comment on जीवन, सपना र मृत्यु.. (कविता) - नरेश सुनुवार by: dipak yonghang

Sun, 29 Jun 2008 08:37:20 +0000

Ramro6

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: ishwori pun

Sat, 28 Jun 2008 17:32:50 +0000

balla aaja comment lekhdai chhu mind nagarnu holoa hai .anyway satte kura lai lai kabita ma utarera sabai ko samu lyaunu bhayeko ma khushi lagyo yesai gari kahile geet ta kahile kabita lekhdai garnu hola pragari ko kamana gardachhu.

Comment on नेपाल एक दिन फर्कन्छु ..!( कविता) - दिनेश खरेल by: hansing

Sat, 28 Jun 2008 06:59:32 +0000

Haina Yo Chitthi ho ki Kabita?

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: Dipa Roly Poly

Fri, 27 Jun 2008 01:10:39 +0000

Yesto ho ni kabita bhane ko satte ma adharit yekdam ramro chha.

Comment on केही हाइकू -मकाउ कविता यात्राको - लारा by: Mani

Thu, 26 Jun 2008 11:21:59 +0000

Hi Lara
I read your few poem. I really like. Your way of presentation is unique .Faboules peom. Keep it up.
With best wishes.

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Dr Lal Rapacha

Wed, 25 Jun 2008 11:18:40 +0000

Dear poet,

Naturally, now your desires and dreams should bloom in Limbuwan since you’ve such age-old relationships with the Kiranti-Yakthung people. You now once as poet enter into their souls and explore you yourself there what it is like to bloom unlimitedly without any bias, supressive and assimilative policy of the Hindu State in the past. Leipzig, Germany

Comment on नयाँ नेपाल… (गीत गजल) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: leon

Wed, 25 Jun 2008 06:53:34 +0000

ramro 6 hai bhola ji. ajhai aghi badnu paro.

Comment on नयाँ नेपाल… (गीत गजल) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: bhola bikram rai

Wed, 25 Jun 2008 05:24:23 +0000

sampurna aadarniya pathak mahanubhabharuma mero namaskar
yahaharuko healthy comment nai mera sirjanako shrot hun, tesai le yahaharuko comment ko pratiksha sadhai garirahane chhu. mera kami kamjori ani maile sudhar garnu parne kuraharu lai comment ma lekhdinahuna anurodh gardachhu. antyama malai direct kehi kura bhanna chahanu bhaema malai mail garna saknu hune chha. dhanyabad.
bhola bikram rai
khotang buipa, 1
hal: afghanistan, kabul
email: rai_bb2005@yahoo.com

Comment on राष्ट्रपति कसलाई ? (कविता) - हरिकृष्ण न्यौपाने (घायल) by: netra

Tue, 24 Jun 2008 21:48:50 +0000

hari ji tapaiko kabita sarhai marmik lagyo.
thank you.

Comment on जीवन, सपना र मृत्यु.. (कविता) - नरेश सुनुवार by: Rosy

Tue, 24 Jun 2008 11:56:47 +0000

nice peom Dai,
keep it on
Thik bhanu bhayo mirtyu junai sukai bela ma auna sakchha, tesaile mutyu lai birsera … paisa paisa matrai bhanera jiunu hudaina… kahile ra kun bela mutyu bharnan hunchha thaha hudaina ni haina ra../?
Rosy

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: Rosy

Tue, 24 Jun 2008 11:28:10 +0000

Namaskar !
Very nice poem, Garibile chyapeko ra bal bastha ko bare ma bhayeko ghatna haruko ajako yo din samma ayeko khulasta Kabita marfat sunna pauda sarai khushi lagyo,
Anyway dai…. Ma pani tehi aune future plan chha, ke hune hola mero abastha ?? ra ma pani tehi Astityo harayeko manchhe hunu ta parne hola ni hai dai ???

Rosy

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: sak kumar

Mon, 23 Jun 2008 14:29:01 +0000

tapaiko kabitale aruko man ma chot lagaus wa nalagaus tra mero jiban ma tapaiko kabita le thulo thau ogateko chha

sayad derai paisa kamaer sukhako jiban yatra garne sapana chosne hami npli haruko jiban ma ekdamai mel aeko chha tapaiko kabitale

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: sak kumar

Mon, 23 Jun 2008 14:22:18 +0000

dai tapaiko lekhai ekdamai satyama adharit chha jo kohi hami prabasi nepali haruko lagi

tapaile tapaiko pratibha lai lukaer naraknus ajhhai man bitra ko kuna kunama bhaeko partibha harulai niranterta didai jhaun yahi mero asa chha

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: milan pun

Sat, 21 Jun 2008 10:26:30 +0000

wow !!! bro lai ta aafno bhavana kabita bata pani pokhna aaudho rahechha, malai ta aaudaina bro. pls write many kabitas i’m waiting….bye

Comment on किताब (कविता) - विक्रम सुब्बा by: dipak yonghang

Sat, 21 Jun 2008 08:30:41 +0000

hi bikram yo sandesh mulak kabita dharai ramro6. yeto kabita sqabaile padnu par6 very very good.

Comment on परदेशीले पानी खाने पंधेरी.. (गीत) - विष्णु खालिङ किरात by: UMESH LIMBU

Sat, 21 Jun 2008 07:47:15 +0000

hello bishnu g tapaiko pardeshile pani khane padheri geet ahileko samaya sapekchha 6 yo pardesh ma yasari basnu bhanda aama baba didibahini ra gaughar ko maya boker chhitai ghar pharkao bhanne sandesh diakoma
thank u

Comment on नरेश सुनुवार … (कविता) - हिमकला राई by: UMESH LIMBU

Sat, 21 Jun 2008 07:26:23 +0000

namaste himkala g aja maile pani tapaiko kabita herne mouka pana ramro lagyo nepali panako abhash bhayo jhan maiti sabda le jhan malai pani partinididbya garaa jasto lagyo yasori nai tapaiko kalam tikhardai janu bhanne shubhakamana 6.

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: prem pun

Sat, 21 Jun 2008 00:01:48 +0000

hello man ji, tapaiko barema lekhera email garnu hos la,ma replay garula ni hai,(prem_pun2000@yahoo.com)

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: man p

Fri, 20 Jun 2008 18:25:24 +0000

HI! Prem your poem is fatastic and it’s related to those who are and were from remote village i am from a same back ground and same vilage you might recognize me if i tell proper name i really like your kabita thanks.

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: sajja

Fri, 20 Jun 2008 15:26:51 +0000

namastey .. sarai ramro lagyo yo kabita malai ta . .. man ra mastiskama harek kura haru nachhirahyo … nikkai ramro kabita rachhanu vayeko ma hajur lai subhakamana … ma hk bata

Comment on नयाँ नेपाल… (गीत गजल) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: SOM THAPAPIDT MAGAR

Fri, 20 Jun 2008 14:14:51 +0000

nice lyrics keep it up Bhola rai ji and keep safe your self in afganishtan see you next time

Comment on नयाँ नेपाल… (गीत गजल) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: SOM THAPAPIDT MAGAR

Fri, 20 Jun 2008 14:14:09 +0000

nice lyrics keep it up Bhola rai ji and keep safe your self in afganishtan see you next lyrics by

Comment on म अस्तित्व हराएको मान्छे…(कविता) - प्रेम पुन by: man p

Fri, 20 Jun 2008 04:35:43 +0000

Oh! what a nice kabita you wrote and i really like your poem don’t worry god will look after you, r you sure from Doba? i really happy if you r from Doba thank you bye2.

Comment on छेकिएका हिमश्रृंखलाहरु.. (कविता) - डा.मधु माधुर्य by: Moti Chamling

Thu, 19 Jun 2008 16:11:53 +0000

hello Madhu sir
Yatika samayasamma madhu madhurya sir ko lekh kabita herna padna napaye pani yo kabita le laamo taltal metiyeko chha.

Aru pani yastai jiwanta kabita padna paau.

Subhechhuk
Moti Chamling

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: badan yonghang [limbu]

Thu, 19 Jun 2008 10:21:59 +0000

sewaro prasai jee kabita nikkai mehenat garer lekhnubha rahechha sotantrata ra samantako pani lekhnos hi prasai jee

Comment on नरेश सुनुवार … (कविता) - हिमकला राई by: badan yonghang [limbu]

Thu, 19 Jun 2008 10:12:51 +0000

Himkalajee maitiko mayako barema lekhnubho dherai khushi lagyo
chodi jane ;ayaluko barema lekhnu bhaye ajh ramro hune thiyo
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Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: rai kaharman

Thu, 19 Jun 2008 01:44:18 +0000

thanks a lot dai

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: rai kaharman

Thu, 19 Jun 2008 01:42:17 +0000

dherai ramro chha dai ko kabita.

Comment on स्व. ईश्वर वल्लभ र देउरालीको फूल… - टंक वनेम by: Narendra Raj Prasai

Wed, 18 Jun 2008 17:22:01 +0000

Rastra kabi Iswar wallav bare samagri prakash garera sarai ramro kam garnu bhaeyo. Tanka ji lai dherai dhannebad chha.

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: ukhang limbu

Wed, 18 Jun 2008 09:00:14 +0000

ooooooooooo solta, kabitata babaal lekhno bhayo, tesma malai khusi cha. Tara aaja aayera tapai jasto manchele yesto kabita lekheko dekhda dherai dukha lageko cha. Ke ho bhai, aaja limbule limbuwan magda deshnai tokrincha bhanne ke pramard cha. Ani limbule limbuwan magda timilai kina aasar paryo bhai? Madhisele panita madhes mageko cha, pasimma pani dheraile aafno rajjya mageka channi. Yedi tapailai, aaroole aafno rajjya magyo bhanera dukha lagcha bhane, hamro dharma, sanskriti, ritiriwaj, parampara, iityadi harowdai jancha bhane, bhai Rana kaalma limbuharolai aafno bhasa blona didaina thiyo, aafno parampara, ritiriwaj, sanskriti manowna didaina thiyo, tetibela kata harayo tapaiko kabita. Aaja limbulai kabitale chadke hanne aat cha bhane, tetibela Ranalai chadke hanne aat kata gako thiyo. Aaja limbuharole gareko kaam dekhda nakaratmak lagcha bhane, Rana ra Shahle gareka kamlai chai kina nakaratmak dekhno bhayena????????? Tapailai limbuharoko barema dherai thaha rahecha, oonoharoko sanskriti, dharma, ritiriwaj, paramparako bare dherai thaha rahecha, tapalai limbuharoka yi koraharole dherai khusi lageko thiyecha ra aaja aayrera hami chotina sakchow ra yi kora pheri dekhna paidaina bhanera dukha lageko rahech. Khusi lagyo. Tara bidambana malai dukha lageko cha, tapaile kina 1900 bs (Rana kalin), 2007 bs, 2017 bs, 2036 bs, 2046 bs ma kina aafno deshlai bachowne prayas garno bhayena???????
Issmariyad rahos, yo kora bojne garnoski limbule limbuwan magdaima, nepal tokrine hoina ra aafno sanskriti, dharma, ritithitiharo harowne hoina. Ra ma ke pani bhancho bhane, hamra limbu daju bhai harole limbuwan ko lagi laddai chan bhane, tapai sanga chottincha bhanne dharana narakno hola.

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: kalu

Tue, 17 Jun 2008 12:21:09 +0000

KC ji, bujhnelai shreekhanda nabhujhnelai khurpako bid,….ho ……..

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: kalu

Tue, 17 Jun 2008 12:20:28 +0000

KC ji bujhnelai shreekhanda nabhujhnelai khurpako bid,…………

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: KC

Mon, 16 Jun 2008 18:52:03 +0000

yoo kabita padhyera mayro alikati bhayeko dhimagh pani bodho bhayo……

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: sabbu bharadwaj

Mon, 16 Jun 2008 09:46:18 +0000

Kabi ji
Tapai lai badhai chha
yesto ramro kabita lekhnu vaya ko ma.
bastav ma jatiya bivajan khojnay haru lai tapai lay ramro danak dinu vaya ko chha. sarai ramro para lay
tapai Nepal ko ramro kabi hunu hudo rachha.
Bharadwaj Sabbu
U.K.

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: dipak yonghang

Mon, 16 Jun 2008 07:14:11 +0000

hi this is very nice poem i enjoy.

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Kaji bista

Mon, 16 Jun 2008 05:48:30 +0000

very excellent poem that i got it around one year later
kaji bista

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: limbu dai

Mon, 16 Jun 2008 02:19:28 +0000

- ramro lagyo prasai ji, tapaiko kabita yo kabita sarsati paddha tapai pakai limbuwanma janmera hurkeko hunuparchha. limbuwanko mato, bhir, pakha, nagi, chauri, jharna, kholaharu sathai madendai , nembangdai,thebe daiharu sanga tapaile miteri saino gasisaknubhaeko prasta hunchha yo kabita bata, tapailai mero sujhab .sathdinuhos ti daiharulai nadaraunuhos krisnaji , 7salko jastochhainan thebedai, 17salko jasto chhainan maden dai …tesaile sath dinu paryoni ….prasai bhai. ek mana gundruk, ekpathikodo sanga jamin chino satera bhae pani limbuwanma miteri saino laisaknu bhaekochha. tesaile mit dai harulai sathdinu mai tapaiko bhalai chha………..kabita ramo chha …thanks keep it up…………..

Comment on नेपालका प्रथम राष्ट्रपतिहरु (कविता) - मोती चाम्लिङ by: Kripa Rai

Sun, 15 Jun 2008 19:10:43 +0000

Pratibha prasts jhalkanchha raamro kabita ma.

Comment on नरेश सुनुवार … (कविता) - हिमकला राई by: Kripa Rai

Sun, 15 Jun 2008 19:04:25 +0000

Raamro kabita.Dhanybaad.

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: Kripa Rai

Sun, 15 Jun 2008 19:01:11 +0000

Beautiful poem.Saarai raamro.Kirati haru laai raamrari chinnu bhayeko kabiji hunu hundo raheccha.Dherai dherai dhanyabaad.

Comment on गणतन्त्र कि कुर्सी तन्त्र ? (कविता) - हरिकृष्ण न्यौपाने by: asha bm

Sun, 15 Jun 2008 11:59:07 +0000

hellow neupane g hajurko kabita ramro lageu,samai ssssandarbuik6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: SOM THAPAPIDT MAGAR

Sun, 15 Jun 2008 05:46:41 +0000

VERY GOOD KEEP IT UP KRISHNA PARSAI JI

I LIKE TO READ IT SO HAPPY TO READ THIS KINDS OF POEM

SOM THAPA PIDIT MAGAR
FROM HONG KONG

Comment on सेवारो है सेवारो * (कविता) - कृष्ण प्रसाई by: saugat

Sat, 14 Jun 2008 15:29:20 +0000

bichara kisna lai sarai parechha ki kya ho.ramro kabita lekhechha ha……………..u. thanx hai kabi ji.

Comment on गजल बिनाश …. - दुर्गा राई by: PHUPOO us

Sat, 14 Jun 2008 11:22:27 +0000

wow great job dhurga dai keep it up

Comment on आफ्नो संस्कार (कविता) -रामकृष्ण वान्तवा by: Dhyan Rai

Sat, 14 Jun 2008 03:48:41 +0000

कबिता आती राम्रो. संदेश मुलक छ.

From Dhyan uk

Comment on तोक्मामाथि ढाकार राखी .. (गीत) - विष्णु खालिङ by: Paribesh Chamling

Fri, 13 Jun 2008 07:11:43 +0000

बिष्णु जी हजुको गीत सारई राम्रो लाग्यो , जून गाऊंघरलाई सर्लकई उतर्नु भको रहेछ , मनाबिये सम्बेदनाहरु बस्तबिकतालाई ध्यानमा रख्नु भएको रहेछ , एदी अनुमति दिनु हुन्छ बहने यो गीत बनायेरा म स्वयेम गाउन चहन्छु प्रतिक्रियाको लागि chamling_02@yahoo.com म पठाउन्नु होला , पाठक

Comment on नो ! न्यू ईयर… (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: KHUSHI RAI

Mon, 09 Jun 2008 12:04:07 +0000

Namaste hajur ko poem ramro6. kasailai yo poem le asar garyo hola hai? dukhi bannu hudaina. man6e ko jiwan ma dherai apthayaro ani dukha haru hun6n astai ho.
hajur ko ramro ramro kabita haru herna pau hawasta
namaste
khushi
ktm

Comment on बाटो कुर्ने आँखा.. (गजल)- भूपेन्द्र महत by: Dil kumari budha

Sun, 08 Jun 2008 14:29:00 +0000

it,s nice gajal Mahat bro!!!

Comment on कुमारी .. (कविता) - केवल गंगा गरुङ by: raj robat ajnabi

Sun, 08 Jun 2008 10:54:32 +0000

kabita ramro lagyo malai. thanks

Comment on गुनासो पोख्दछन् रातहरु… (कविता) - नगेन्द्र ईङनाम (आठराईली) by: Dil kumari budha

Sun, 08 Jun 2008 09:07:44 +0000

wa..wa…wa..huna ta maile chineki chhaina hajurlai…yo kabita marfat chinna pauda khushi lagyo.
Hi Nagendra dai hajurko yo kabitale kaha chhoyeko chhaina ra !!! Hajurko yo kabita padhda, yeuta Ukhan ko yaad ayo, (Bujne lai shiri khanda, Nabujne lai khurpako bhid) bhane jhai ho, bujne lai hajurko kabita le kaha chhoyeko chhaina ra? kabi dekhi liyera kalakar smma, Manabko jiwanko suruwat dekhi liyera antye samma, sukha ke ho ?dukh ke ho ? jiwanko yatrama bhaye ghateka ghatnaharu dekhi liyera Nepal Aama ko baayan haru…. Aha….. Aaha…. kati ramro kabita…. Ajhai pani yesto kabita haru lekhdai janu hone chha bhandai Badhai dina chahanchhu.
Dil kumari budha Surkhet,hal:China

Comment on खुशी हुँदा पनि साथ… (गीत)- प्रेम पुन by: Tapta from paris

Sun, 08 Jun 2008 00:19:13 +0000

hi prem solta verry nice song.congratulation!!!!!!! continue do it. and keep it up. geet le vitta chhune chha.hahahhaa…………………..

Comment on प्रभात प्रवासको ..(कविता) -ईश्वर चाम्लीङ्ग by: Bis

Sat, 07 Jun 2008 21:47:49 +0000

weldone!

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: hepen kirat

Sat, 07 Jun 2008 14:42:32 +0000

hi chamling sister,very good poem ,i like it but it would be better if your expression has touched the solution of the view at the end of poem.ny way ,best of luck…….hepen uk,shorn cliffe uk

Comment on तोक्मामाथि ढाकार राखी .. (गीत) - विष्णु खालिङ by: scimitar,Ivory Tower

Sun, 01 Jun 2008 21:27:48 +0000

Namaskar Solti raja,
Tapai ko tyo “tokma mathi dhakar rakhi bhanne”Kabita ekdam ramro ani marmik pani chha. aani yestai yestai kabitaharu ko shristi marfat nai jiban ko satyata haru khojne tyo tapai ko khubi haru jhan-jhan srijanshil paila haru aagadi lamki rahos.yesta srijana haru pheri-pheri hami majh pakinu safal hunuhosh yahi nai mero subhakamana chha.Dhanyabaad.

Comment on मन भन्छ हाटै बजार जाँउ… (गीत) - नरेश माङपाहाङ्ग by: KHUSHI RAI

Sun, 01 Jun 2008 12:05:18 +0000

Hajur namaste
hajurko geet pani dherai ramro 6 yo kaile kahi gauna pani dinu bhayako6? ki hajur gaunu pani hun6 ki? ramro hos hajur ko lekhai h aru
hawasta
khushi Rai
ktm

Comment on तोक्मामाथि ढाकार राखी .. (गीत) - विष्णु खालिङ by: KHUSHI RAI

Sun, 01 Jun 2008 11:52:07 +0000

Hello Namaste hajur ko TOKMA MATHI DHAKAR poem padhera sarai dukha lagyo. k garnu hajur sabai ko afnai afnai dukha6. lekna ta kati sajilo6 tara bokne lai kati garo6. tayo ta hamile dekheko matra. bichara bhanera k garne hai sabai man6e ko autai hudaina. hajur ko pheri pani aru lekh haru herna pau tapai ko sadhai saphaltako kamana …………
bye
khushi Rai
kathmandu

Comment on गुनासो पोख्दछन् रातहरु… (कविता) - नगेन्द्र ईङनाम (आठराईली) by: PHUPOO

Fri, 30 May 2008 09:47:54 +0000

WOW PREETY MARMIK AND WONDERFUL TO SUBMITED THE WHOLE SEASONAL ITAMS GREAT JOB.

Comment on गीतैमा रोएं, बेदना धुन… (गीत) - दिलिप योन्जन by: Rai Madan

Wed, 28 May 2008 05:55:12 +0000

Eh..!!! Hajur yo geet ta Gopal Yonjan lai sumpiya kaso hola?

singapore

Comment on नो ! न्यू ईयर… (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: Rai Madan

Wed, 28 May 2008 05:51:20 +0000

Namaste…!! Bhola Bikram dai,
Dai …yahan tapainko rachana haru samaya samaya ma padhna paunda khusi lagekochha, Tapainle ta malai abasya chinnu hunna nai tara ma tapainlai ramrai chinchhu….because I cant forget The “BUIPA”. Dai aber nai bhyapani HAPPY NEW YEAR ta bhanna man thiyo tara tapainko yo kabita padhera………..
ha ha ha …….!!!!!t

Madan rai
Gurkha Contingent
singapore-367828

Comment on तोक्मामाथि ढाकार राखी .. (गीत) - विष्णु खालिङ by: Rai Madan

Wed, 28 May 2008 05:03:53 +0000

Namaste….!! Khaling sir…
I liked your poem”TOKMA MATHI DHAKAR RAKHI”, Its really heart toucher….specially for them, who know about that……
please….keep it always up…Go a head….All the best…..!!!!

Madan
Singapore

Comment on मन भन्छ हाटै बजार जाँउ… (गीत) - नरेश माङपाहाङ्ग by: Mijash Tembe

Sun, 25 May 2008 11:55:25 +0000

नमस्कार नरेश सर,
रचना अत्यन्तै स्तरीय छ । लेख्न नछोड्‍नु होला । अवश्य कुनै दिन तपार्इको लक्क्ष्ामा पुग्नुहुन्छ ।
तपार्इको शुभचिन्तक
मिजास

Comment on खुशी हुँदा पनि साथ… (गीत)- प्रेम पुन by: kali

Sat, 24 May 2008 15:05:46 +0000

nice song keep it up

Comment on खुशी हुँदा पनि साथ… (गीत)- प्रेम पुन by: destinypoon magar

Fri, 23 May 2008 08:49:31 +0000

dai is nice compose of you…i wish all of ur compose may be able to reach with all of publics…good luck…

Comment on रमेश पौडेलको ‘आभासित आलाप’ भित्र - राजेश राई by: Bhadragolkirati

Thu, 22 May 2008 05:00:54 +0000

ramesha dai lai badhai safaltako subhakama kritiko lagi.aawaj,kalam,kuchi chalaunu akai janale garo kura ho.safaltale chomolungma chumos…..rajeshji ko patrakarita ko pani tarif garnai parchha uhalai pani danyabad.

Comment on स्व. ईश्वर वल्लभ र देउरालीको फूल… - टंक वनेम by: Ningwahang

Tue, 20 May 2008 17:23:12 +0000

Sewaro Chumme,
ko ho tapailai bhasama kamjor bhanne ? I thik usle tapaiko sahityik bhasa bujhena hola, Iswar Ballav jasto mahan sahityakarko barema yati mitha bhawanaharu kornubhayeko chha , i love to read it again……. Tanka g , donn’t be worry, Yauta rammro lekhaklai yasari comment garnu irsya ra garib mansiktako upaj matra ho.
Mitra Ningwahang

Comment on स्व. ईश्वर वल्लभ र देउरालीको फूल… - टंक वनेम by: tamu

Tue, 20 May 2008 17:10:25 +0000

NAMASKAR TANKA DAI,
Brigade of gurkhas ko 200 years lamo Historyma Tapai jasto Baudhik Lekhak Brigadema Dherai kam chhan. Yaha Ta kabal Affno Naamko Lagi NECK Thapne ani hunchha bhane bicharma bechine sathiharu matra chhan, I am proud of u dai tapai nai paltane sahityako pratinidhi sahityakar hunuhunchha… keep it up dai….
tapaiko shubhachintak
bhai tamu

Comment on यता ले, छिट्टो दे… (गजल) -परिहास by: jhaij subba

Tue, 20 May 2008 14:59:17 +0000

oh I need love song ok byeeeeeeeee

Comment on यता ले, छिट्टो दे… (गजल) -परिहास by: jhaij subba

Tue, 20 May 2008 14:58:07 +0000

I like you song…..
M going to get one pop album so I need your help.
2,2 LINE YASARINAI.
Majja ko word hos.mero mail address
khalle_jaimale@yahoo.com
Plz yaha send garnu hola+tapaiko orginal nam.+pp size ko photo pani.Ok best of luck.
From finland.

Comment on तोक्मामाथि ढाकार राखी .. (गीत) - विष्णु खालिङ by: umesh limbu sambahamphe

Sun, 18 May 2008 09:04:03 +0000

sewaro bishnu khaling g tapaiko tokmamathi dakar rakhi title poem malai dherai nai man paryoo ra nepalko sandarvama yo kabita dherai nai sandarvik 6 auda dinharuma pani yasari nai tapaiko rachana haru padna paiyash bhanne kamana gardai bida magne anumati magda6u . ¦.

Comment on लांकुरीको रुख अनि म ( कविता)-आशा भुटिया by: Deepak rana Magar bhanu-8 turture

Sun, 18 May 2008 04:28:51 +0000

अनायासै के भो मलाई
तिम्म्रो कवितामा हराइ सकेछुम
दर्पण भयो वेदना मलाई
आफैलाई त्येहा पयेछु म
………
निर्णय रहेछ ज़िंदगी
मुटुको चिता जल्ने नै भयो .
येस्तै हो भने ज़िंदगी
चादनी रात ले पोल्ने नै भयो .

Comment on परदेशीले पानी खाने पंधेरी.. (गीत) - विष्णु खालिङ किरात by: Deepak rana Magar bhanu-8 turture

Sun, 18 May 2008 02:40:58 +0000

निर्णय रहेच्छ ज़िंदगी .
मुटुको चिता जल्नेभो .
येस्तई हो भने ज़िंदगी .
चादनी रात ले पोलने भो .

Comment on जिन्दगीलाई मैले… (गीत गजल) - भुवन सुनुवार ‘भानु’ by: Deepak rana Magar bhanu-8 turture

Sun, 18 May 2008 02:25:26 +0000

Comment on जिन्दगीका पीडाहरु .. (गजल) - दुर्गा राई by: Deepak Rana Magar bhanu-8 turture

Sun, 18 May 2008 02:23:26 +0000

निर्णय रहेच्छ ज़िंदगी .
मुटुको चिता जल्नेभो .
येस्तई हो भने ज़िंदगी .
चादनी रात ले पोलने भो ..

Comment on परदेशीले पानी खाने पंधेरी.. (गीत) - विष्णु खालिङ किरात by: D Chmaling

Thu, 15 May 2008 06:14:25 +0000

Hi Bhojpure dai tapaiko song ramrai nai lago

thanks

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: D Chmaling

Thu, 15 May 2008 06:12:12 +0000

Chmaling sister ko poem mann paro but alik badi nai lamo vayanara? and tapaiko pahard ma jasari vayapani pugnu hos vanne suvakamana and pahard chai ko ni?

Comment on गुनासो पोख्दछन् रातहरु… (कविता) - नगेन्द्र ईङनाम (आठराईली) by: Saagar Rai

Wed, 14 May 2008 00:34:12 +0000

Brother I like the SHAMBHU Rai’s connection of this poem nice to read I enjoyed it keep it up ….. …………Saagar

Comment on आँखा भित्र राखें तिमीलाई ( गीत) - कृष्ण गुरुङ by: Rajendra Khanal

Mon, 12 May 2008 08:10:48 +0000

Jivan ko Sath sab sang hunnchh
tar jivan jivane yaha ko chha ra
aaf no pet sab le bharekei chhan,
aaru ko bhok yeha kasle dekhe ko chha ra,
0091-9780255968

Comment on रमेश पौडेलको ‘आभासित आलाप’ भित्र - राजेश राई by: Amber Limbu

Sun, 11 May 2008 12:06:51 +0000

बहु आयामिक कलाकार रमेश पौदेलज्युको अझ अरु प्रगतिको लागी शुभकामना ब्याक्ता गर्दछु .

Comment on कुखुरी काँ…(कविता) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: umeshchandra sambahamphe uday

Sat, 10 May 2008 10:40:03 +0000

namaskar dai tapaiko kabita ajako samay sandarvik lagyo ra derai ko man chun safal hos banne kamana gardai bida chahanchhu

Comment on कुखुरी काँ…(कविता) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: umeshchandra sambahamphe uday

Sat, 10 May 2008 10:40:03 +0000

namaskar dai tapaiko kabita ajako samay sandarvik lagyo ra derai ko man chun safal hos banne kamana gardai bida chahanchhu

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: sammar khadka.

Fri, 09 May 2008 16:07:02 +0000

hello jagat Gi’
namaskar,
perhaps u 4got me,boz u r not here wth us bt your creation is indeed wth me and around our climate that touchs the innercore of the human soul.i’m your classmate from haungchur VDC.we had taken part in the debet and open poetry programme in the headqarter of our khotang District and u had won that title,and i was the second only.anyway i’m gald to get your poetry here in this web site.thanx and best of luck in the days to come.if u see this comments just mail me or try to remind me that we were best fren in the past and will be in the future as well.where r u nowadays……….
just keep in touch as a historical fren to me.take care.good luck’.

Comment on स्व. ईश्वर वल्लभ र देउरालीको फूल… - टंक वनेम by: sudha

Wed, 07 May 2008 01:47:55 +0000

dai late ishor dai ko barema lekheko article poem sabai padhe. malai thaha thiyo onem dai nikkai vabuk ani article ra poem pani lekhu hunchha bhanne, tara tapai kabi ki lekhaka ki ani purana bichar dhara bokeko yeuta Budho lahure? ma chelilet bujnai po sakina. ani tapai teti sarho lekne manchhe vasama alik dhyan puryaunu hola.
hawas ta pachhi vetaula
tapai ki bahini
sudha

Comment on मन भन्छ हाटै बजार जाँउ… (गीत) - नरेश माङपाहाङ्ग by: sakia

Tue, 06 May 2008 19:42:39 +0000

it is so nice song that i like it. naresh dai keep writting it and you will get your answer one day. i really prefer it please keep it on and good luck.

Comment on गुनासो पोख्दछन् रातहरु… (कविता) - नगेन्द्र ईङनाम (आठराईली) by: gelimbu

Tue, 06 May 2008 18:48:00 +0000

khai yo kavitale ke vanna khojeko ho koni puranai haru chha jasto po lagchha padera ta

Comment on खै! शान्ति.. (कविता) - दुर्गा राई by: sunil

Mon, 05 May 2008 06:13:12 +0000

oh manche kaha bata aayeko yesto lekhna yar….ramro cha yar……

Comment on कुमारी .. (कविता) - केवल गंगा गरुङ by: hemanta rai

Mon, 05 May 2008 04:18:21 +0000

tapaiko kabita jadai ramro chha kosis garnu vayo vany abasya tapai 1 din saphal banu hune6 jati tapai kalam ko madhem bata lekhnu hun chha tati real life babhar ma utrnu hos aba kala hoina jindagi bolnu parne samayako chha badala le hoi badliyara kam garnu parchha aba tapai ko harek sabdama dhoka haresn na vayara jos ra utsha hune khalkho kabita gajal lekhnu hola hai huna ta malai gajal kabita ma zan chaina tara tasto khalko kabita padhera apho jibanma utsha thapera ajadi badhaunu sakin chha jasto lagchha

Comment on रातदिन मलाई सम्झी रुन्छौ रे नि निरु (गजल) - परिहास by: umesh uday limbu

Sat, 03 May 2008 07:15:35 +0000

hi frind PARIHAS .Iam very impressiv for your gajal.I wishess your literacherlife success . I want talk to you plese call me no.0164376728 .thanks.

Comment on स्वतन्त्रताको उपचार.. (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: shiva kumar rai

Thu, 01 May 2008 21:00:02 +0000

NARESH, i read your poem it;s really great. keep it continuous you can do it and let another go. All the best. shiva HARROW, WEST LONDON.

Comment on नयाँ बर्ष २०६५लाई खबर.. ? (कविता) - जीवन मुकारुङ by: shiva kumar rai

Thu, 01 May 2008 20:51:25 +0000

thanks, for newyear poem. one of the best poem i hahe read.welldone and keep it on probably u will be best of the best one day. from kiati shiva west London.

Comment on राजाले पनि चुनाउ लड्नुपर्छ … (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: L.Manoj

Thu, 01 May 2008 15:18:52 +0000

gole ko gana gajjap lago.

Comment on अनुत्तरित चित्र (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ by: jas

Wed, 30 Apr 2008 09:06:17 +0000

pratik jee
kabita jaydai meeto cha . gindagiko nata dukha sanga matrai atut huncha tara khushi sanga choto huncha . tara choto khushiko ni bhakhan dherai gare kaso hola ra ?
your jas

Comment on राजाले पनि चुनाउ लड्नुपर्छ … (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: pagal

Sat, 26 Apr 2008 17:18:03 +0000

gole dai thanks

Comment on जिन्दगीलाई मैले… (गीत गजल) - भुवन सुनुवार ‘भानु’ by: GURUNG GIRI

Sat, 26 Apr 2008 16:28:55 +0000

Bhanu ji gajal bhanu ya geet je artha laye ni ramro mann sparsha garne khal ko rahichha sathaie dherai chot khaie bhitri bedna haru geet marfat pokhaunu bhaye jasto chha tesaie le take it easy ani yestaie ramra ramra geet gajal haru bhabishya ma pani kori rahnu hola thanks keep it up..

Comment on यतिबेला मेरो देश र मनहरु (कविता) - केशर थुलुङ्ग by: Rai yang pitang chhu

Thu, 24 Apr 2008 12:40:19 +0000

ThulungG tapaiko kabitale ta mero man chhuyo.

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: anunaya adhikari

Thu, 24 Apr 2008 00:45:27 +0000

नमस्कार लारा जि .
म अनुनय दुबइबाट तपाईंको कबिता वास्तवमै प्रसम्सा गर्न लायकको छ .
तपाईंले हरेक सव्दको ख्याल गर्नु भयको छ यस् कबितामा तर मेरो एउटाइ गुनासो भनेको कबितामा मौलिकता हुँदा हुँदै पनि आफ्नोपन नभयको पाय । कबितामा सव्दहरुको सम्मिस्रन त यती राम्ररी गर्नु भयको छ कि यस्को बयन म यहाँ गर्न सक्दिन तर मेरो गुनासो भनेको अन्य भाषिक सव्दहरु हुन ,तेस्ले तपाईंको कबितलाई धेरै हद सम्म खोक्रो बनाएको छ । तपाईंको कबितामा एक प्रर्क।रको तडप हुँदा हुँदै पनि भित्रएको शव्द ले तेस्लाई आलिकती आमौलिक अनी छ।ड। बनाएको छ ।
यस्लाई तपाईं मेरो गुनासो सम्झनुहोस् यू मेरो पाठक पर्तिकिर्य मात्र हो । नरिसौनु होल तर वास्तवमै तपाईं लेख्न नछड्नु होला ।

Comment on कुमारी .. (कविता) - केवल गंगा गरुङ by: ram

Thu, 24 Apr 2008 00:04:56 +0000

i want to upload my feelings ,how could it possible?

Comment on राजाले पनि चुनाउ लड्नुपर्छ … (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: naresh rai

Wed, 23 Apr 2008 17:26:59 +0000

vok lagdaa kuraa auchhaa vaat rakhhhajjaa ko.
sangit metho hunchha vareity cohrous rabaajjako.
kuraa garnu vaako rahechha janata ra raajaa ko.
sarei ramro words tapei ko hejoo vanda ajako.

keep going with it and thanks again from me naresh mangpahang rai panchther now uk bata.

Comment on कुमारी .. (कविता) - केवल गंगा गरुङ by: कृष्ण थापा

Wed, 23 Apr 2008 15:09:56 +0000

तपाइकेा कविता मन पर्येा ।

Comment on राजाले पनि चुनाउ लड्नुपर्छ … (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: Gole Dai

Wed, 23 Apr 2008 06:53:17 +0000

आँखा चिम्लेर भक्ती गीत गाउनेहरु
मोहोर बोकी दक्षिण ढोका धाउनेहरु
सबैले देखिसके कसैले केहि भन्नै पर्दैन
चुनाव लडे भने राजाको मत गन्नै पर्दैन

Comment on नो ! न्यू ईयर… (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: Chudamani Gautam

Wed, 23 Apr 2008 03:19:35 +0000

Excellent your nice Article so that I am too much happy. But I am worry about M4 because you forget your Personel weapon ok. I think at the future you join your M4 also ok. now take care. bye

Congratulatiion Bhanja, I am happy of your Poem ok. thanks bye
Gyan- Gurkha lead ( Dyncorp)

Comment on नो ! न्यू ईयर… (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: Raj kumar CTC

Wed, 23 Apr 2008 03:15:07 +0000

Ok Thanks bro but why you forget your M4 ok. Please you don’t forget your personel weapon M4 ok. HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ok nice . take care

Comment on अनुत्तरित चित्र (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ by: raifromtexas

Tue, 22 Apr 2008 14:17:09 +0000

not bad…..keep it up

Comment on राजाले पनि चुनाउ लड्नुपर्छ … (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: Deepak Bista

Tue, 22 Apr 2008 10:34:47 +0000

Nice poem.

Comment on गजल - विनय लामा by: naresh mangpahang rai

Tue, 22 Apr 2008 10:01:08 +0000

i like your gajal sarei ramro chha keep it on and make it longer like book not like magagiine.

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: shyamkaji shrestha

Tue, 22 Apr 2008 07:25:10 +0000

ramro chha

Comment on जिन्दगीलाई मैले… (गीत गजल) - भुवन सुनुवार ‘भानु’ by: shyamkaji shrestha

Tue, 22 Apr 2008 07:22:43 +0000

tapai ko lekhakiya chhemata ramro chha

Comment on कुमारी .. (कविता) - केवल गंगा गरुङ by: Suman limbu

Tue, 22 Apr 2008 02:13:26 +0000

Bahini ko kabita saral ra ati ramro chha.keep it up.

Comment on कुमारी .. (कविता) - केवल गंगा गरुङ by: hariman

Mon, 21 Apr 2008 13:39:48 +0000

Ramro chha ani ramro lekhdai jau mero suvakamana.

Comment on यतिबेला मेरो देश र मनहरु (कविता) - केशर थुलुङ्ग by: Hastecheu

Sun, 20 Apr 2008 14:28:28 +0000

Your poem is lively, touching and speaks truth my brother do not stop writing.

Hastecheu

Comment on राजाले पनि चुनाउ लड्नुपर्छ … (कविता) - होमनाथ सुवेदी by: Justice kumar

Sun, 20 Apr 2008 14:19:37 +0000

Yes raja has to win the vote of the public to be the next prime minister or president of Nepal and stop commenting the general public becoming a true supporter of Raja if he was true professional and had loved his country and his people I think the Nepali Junta would have died for him and his clan but nobody you can find in support of him and his clan. Your title of the poem RAJA LE PANI CHUNAU LADNU PARCHA” sounds fair and justifiable but the rest you have put inside it is rubbish learn to live with the facts Mr Subedi.

Comment on अनुत्तरित चित्र (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ by: kalkey

Sun, 20 Apr 2008 07:57:07 +0000

Dear Camling ,
I’m impressed about your poem , keep going on .
GOOD LUCK

Comment on कुमारी .. (कविता) - केवल गंगा गरुङ by: grg

Sun, 20 Apr 2008 07:35:45 +0000

DD kasko yad ma ho? lala ramro 6 hai

Comment on गजल - परिहास सुब्बा by: chris

Sat, 19 Apr 2008 12:49:18 +0000

nepalese guys have good literary taste. i like ü guys. could u contribute more . cheers.

Comment on यता ले, छिट्टो दे… (गजल) -परिहास by: saugat

Mon, 14 Apr 2008 14:10:32 +0000

realy ho….. aba population dherai bhayo yesari nai 3-4 word ma gajal lekhnu ra gaaunu parchha.

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: thapa netra

Sat, 12 Apr 2008 16:47:02 +0000

thanks lara didi you got huge heart for us .

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: Chandra

Sat, 12 Apr 2008 15:43:04 +0000

Hi… LaRa
Its really wonderful Poem. YASTO MUTUNAI CHHUNE KHALKO KINA KASARI LEKHE KO HO?

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: sathi_bhai

Fri, 11 Apr 2008 23:42:01 +0000

didi kasto kasto manche bhetido rahecha yo duniya maa k boleko hola tyo pani bolne tarika ho

Comment on मलाई अधरपान गरायौ.. (गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: hom raj rai

Wed, 09 Apr 2008 14:47:41 +0000

your gajal is best

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: Dhan purja

Wed, 09 Apr 2008 12:54:59 +0000

Dear lara thapa

I study your poem .its really wonderful & best of all.your

skill power is best & high.i hope to your another poem.i wants

to your bright futher & sucsses your plan.

parbat nepal. now s korea.

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: kamal budathoki

Tue, 08 Apr 2008 21:18:00 +0000

lara ji kabita bhabuk chha k garnu yastae ho giban hoina ra?chhoma parti sadarnanajali samarpan gardachhu

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: shiva

Tue, 08 Apr 2008 12:04:52 +0000

indira g, tapaiko aim sarai man paryo yatrako lagi subhkamana la

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: Deepak Magar

Tue, 08 Apr 2008 04:18:40 +0000

Hi, it’s excellent . carry on…!

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: Mani

Mon, 07 Apr 2008 12:10:50 +0000

Dear Lara,
I read your poem, its really wonderful. Keep it up. Wish you all the best.

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: Ramesh

Mon, 07 Apr 2008 05:53:23 +0000

I have been seeing you since ten years in a program show doing host,you had a saloon,i uesd to come and cut my hair.I knew you very well but i didn’t had a chance to introduce myself to you.We did when i came to your saloon but that was just like i was your customer.After you sold[told me by someone]your saloon i haven’t seen you.May be i move to h.k side [but i frequently came to kowloon side] or you vanished for a while.We have our own story with us in our heart.Now in this couple of month i saw you either in the news paper or in the media[web site].I read your…. I know that you wrote from your heart rather than your mind.Keep it up.One day you would get a meaning ful title in font of your name.

Comment on एक जुग भयो विदेशिएको म (कविता) -देव गुरुङ by: saraswoti pun magar

Mon, 07 Apr 2008 05:46:19 +0000

Dev jee
namskar

Hajur ko yo kabitale mero man sarai 6oyako 6, ma harek patak net ma bas6u hajur ko yo kabita nakholi ma basna sakdin, kinaki hajur ko kabitama maile aafno bastabikta payaki 6u. ho man6e rahar le predesh aaudain usko majaburi le ho? ho ma pani aaja tehi majburi le garda bidesma 6u.

Hajur lai ma many many thanks bhanna chahan6u r aaudo future ma pani hajur ko yo kalakarita aaja nikharidai jaos bhani ma kamana garda6u.

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: Kumar Karki

Sun, 06 Apr 2008 18:44:53 +0000

Mijas ji!!!

Keep it up.

Kumar

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: Kumar Karki

Sun, 06 Apr 2008 18:35:52 +0000

Lara ji,

Kavita tyo bela janmanchha taba man ma bhawana haru ukus mukus hunchhan, sabda haru chhatachhulla pokhna man lagchha. tyo bela manle euta paribartan khojeko hunchha ki kamana garera kehi bolna khojeko hunchha. Dherai bichar haruko ukus mukus pokhai nai euta kavita ho.

Chhoma ji ko hatyale tapaiko manma bhawana ubjyo tyastai hajarau Nepali haruko manma ubjeko bhawanalai tapaile kavita bata prasfutan garnu bhayo. Tyasma mero purna sammati chha. Ti kavita ka haraf harule Chhoma ko atmako shanti khoje jastai sampurna Nepali haruko atmale pani yahi pukar garos.

Euta Nepali ko dukhama rune arko nepali po bastabik Nepali ho ta. Tapailai mero Sadhubad chha.

Kumar Karki

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: chandra waiba

Sun, 06 Apr 2008 14:49:23 +0000

lara diju,namaskar
hajurko yo kabita pade pachhi malae k aanubhuti bhayo bhane kabita ma singo kasaeko kathalae ujagar garnu bhako chha jaslae bujna ko lagi yak chen kavita ma haraunu parchha …..ani kaehi manle veteko mahasus hunchha…

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: JAGDISH GRG

Sun, 06 Apr 2008 04:16:44 +0000

Lara ji ! Namaste;
Tapai ko kabita utkrist chha. Ek manish le bhoge ko pida lai ujagar gare ko kabita ko pristh bhumi ma painchha. Chhoma baini ko atma lai abassy shanti dilauchha yes kabita le. Pheri pheri yastai mitho kabita padna painchha hola bhani aasha rakhda chhu.
jagdish gurung, Afg

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: sagar

Sat, 05 Apr 2008 22:36:44 +0000

khai ke garne maile khojeko jestyo kahile nahudo rahechha tara man ma ta thiyo ni malai dar lagachha ? pachhi bhanaula hai ok byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: puskar

Sat, 05 Apr 2008 19:11:05 +0000

hello sis i like ur poem thanks

Comment on मलाई खाँचो नुनको भयो .. (गजल) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: GURUNG GIRI

Sat, 05 Apr 2008 18:29:01 +0000

SADHARAN-SAJILO BUJHNA SAKINE SHABDA MITHO GAJAL…HAMRO PYARO DESH NEPAL… 60% NEPALI NAGRIK SHIKCHHA DEKHI DHERAIE TAADA..DHERAIE SHIKCHHIT NAGRIK HARU PANI SAHITTYA SHABDA HARU DEKHI TAADA….NEW GENERATION WESTERN CULTURE TIRA DHALKANE PRAWATI ETC.KO KARAN LE GARDA HAJURKO YO THET GANULE BHAKA ATHWA GAJAL KO SHABDA HARU ATI NAIE RAMRO HUNA GAIE DHANNYABAAD KO PATRA HUNU BHO….TESAIE LE MISS/MRS.INDARA JUE BHABISHYA MA PANI ESTAIE SAJILO BHUJHNE SHABDA KORI HAMI LAIE MITHO GAJAL LEKHI RAKHNU HOLA…. ANTA MA YAHAN LAIE BADHAIE SATHAI SHUBHAKAMNA….(HK) NA HARA TIMI…. JINDAGI DEKHI… NIRDOSH LAIE EASHWAR LE PANI HERCHHA… SAMAYE TA ANUCHHA JANCHHA… KUNAIE DIN…? SAMAYE LE PANI AAWASHYA KOLTO FERCHHA…

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: amrit gurung

Sat, 05 Apr 2008 13:39:06 +0000

thanks sis when i study yours poet top 2 bottom its touch my heart really thanks again lara sis [ s-korea ]

Comment on स्वदेशको माया कति.. (गीत)- दिनेश कार्की by: Udaya

Sat, 05 Apr 2008 00:18:44 +0000

raamro…saral sabdaharu ma.. sundar rachana…nirantarta rahos.

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: chilim bir

Fri, 04 Apr 2008 13:25:54 +0000

Oh ramchandra kaam ma jau ta geet po leknu thalechha bhokai hunchau hai bharai raati pheri putali line ma chada kukur le lakhetda kudnu na sakau la saathi malai chinnu bhayena patti po dhake chha kurai ho kaam ma jau.

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: Yubaraj Gurung

Fri, 04 Apr 2008 11:39:42 +0000

No doubt it is very heart-throb and lively poem.You are able here to describe very clearly clear pictures when someone be in great deal of sorrows in their life.That is the poem which carry our true feelings in word to word on a writer’s writing.I find it very emotional when I read it.
“Don’t drop your tear on my dead body even I am dead and don’t buy a flower in mistake even though that is rose because there be lots of throne.'’

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: tej man rai

Fri, 04 Apr 2008 00:32:27 +0000

LARA ji tapain ko kavita le mero man chhuyo , Marmasparsi,Hridayevidharak kavita lekhnu hundo rahechha mero muri-muri subhakamana chha tapain lai. Agami din haruma pani yestai kavita haru prasphutit hos tapain ko antaratma bata. DHANNEBAD. T.M.

Comment on मदिराका बुंद छन् कि… (गजल) - भूपेन्द्र महत by: kishor, stafford, uk

Thu, 03 Apr 2008 22:22:51 +0000

such a great gazal..
really touchy, keep it up

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: ramchandra

Thu, 03 Apr 2008 01:13:32 +0000

pheri pani hai mero tarfa bata euta maile lekheko geet

Ekanta ko suseli maa timrai sangeet khoje
Sur maa dhun namilera pheri sargam roje
Dhun tipi dulthyou haami dukhesiko dhaari
Eklai yaha boki aaye aafnai geet ko bhaari

Aljheko chu ma ta hajur geet samai-samai
Geet sanghai bhaka tipi dhun maa ramai-ramai
Geet sanghai duli basthye ma ta ghari-ghari
basuriko dhun boki bashtye jeevan bhari

Dhun sanghai gaauthyou haami sur layi-layi
Tyahi surko dhun sanghai basthyou geet gayi-gayi
udashi yo jeevan mero rahecha ghaam paani
basuriko sur ko dhunai rahecha zindhagani

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: ramchandra

Thu, 03 Apr 2008 01:02:32 +0000

Ke hou laxmi didi malai chinu bhayena hola ma pani utai dharan tira kai bhai ho guess garnu hos la ma ko ho,ani tapai ta programe tira allaounce matrai garnu hunthyou ta tara yo geet kavita chetra tira ahile dhekhi parnu bho hou ek choti jitu nepal,prasant auda interview linu bhayeko ek dum ramro lagheko thiyo,maile programe herna napaye pani net maa he re tyati khera ma nepal gayeko thiye

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: gajendra limbu

Wed, 02 Apr 2008 18:13:30 +0000

hi dd
how r u i from saudi

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: www.limbu.saugat

Wed, 02 Apr 2008 13:57:54 +0000

30%matra hai lara ji. tyo hindi sabda haru ramro lagyo tara yeti lekhi sake pachhi.translate garera nepali mai lekhnu bhaye sunma sugandh hune thiyo. piunda piundai jindagi yo…….
rittyauna chaahanchhu ma………..yin sabda haru nepali haru ko laagi jiundai mare ?lara ji arko kabita ramrari lekhnu hola hai……… mero saaaano anurodh hajoor lai.

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: suresh bhandari

Wed, 02 Apr 2008 13:01:26 +0000

i think u r such kind of poet .

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: jit budhathoki

Wed, 02 Apr 2008 10:24:04 +0000

lara ji sarbottam tapaiko kabitalai.ae sachai sartaj sarbottam.

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: sagar rai

Wed, 02 Apr 2008 09:08:21 +0000

out standing and a meaningful. atleast someone is here who writes for other ( to late chhoma ) otherwise all just bother to use pen for LOVE or HURT . may god keep her soul in peace,
sagar rai
bantawasagar@yahoo.com
norway

Comment on जिन्दगीको पथमा… (गजल) - आशा राई ‘विदीर्ण’ by: aacharya prabha

Tue, 01 Apr 2008 22:20:55 +0000

गजल लेख्न्नु हुने सम्पूर्ण महानुभाव हरुमा आचार्य प्रभा को शुभकामना /त र गजल बिग्रेर कही फजल नाबनोस /गजल को मान मर्यादा भित्त्र बसेर गजल को श्रीजना गर्नु होला /रदीफ़, काफिया लाई ध्यान दी गजल को भावना लाइ बहन दिनु भये गजल ले अझ झागिने मौका पौउने छ./
आचार्य प्रभा

Comment on मायाको बास्ना.. (गीत) - राकेश कार्की by: aacharya prabha

Tue, 01 Apr 2008 22:08:11 +0000

राकेश जी को गीत मिठास पूर्ण छ /यसले संगीत को सहारा पायेमा अझ सुनमा सुगंध हुने थियो /लेखन छेत्र लाइ माया नामार्नु होला /
आचार्य प्रभा

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: sp

Tue, 01 Apr 2008 00:16:03 +0000

laxmi dd dherai ramaro pome ko lagi really telented. na jawab ihet,s up you dd keep it up. thanks.

Comment on देश बिछ्टै दुखेको छ (कविता) - भरत लिम्वु by: sajja

Mon, 31 Mar 2008 23:26:23 +0000

namastey… sarai nai ramro lagyo yo des dukheko kabita naya barsa ko feri pani yestai kabita ko aapeksha rakhadai …. subha kamana … naya barsa ko …. from hongkong

Comment on यता ले, छिट्टो दे… (गजल) -परिहास by: Parihas Subba

Mon, 31 Mar 2008 14:51:42 +0000

Dear commenter
chhadambhesi ko rup ma naaiediye maile sayad answer dina sakthe ki….

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: D Chmaling

Mon, 31 Mar 2008 07:00:15 +0000

Hi
Lami Rai thapa ji tapai ko poem ramro lago and tapai ko news reporting pani but poem dharai lamo vo jasto lago thesto poem lai story nai vani dida kaso hola ni

Thanks

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: Dhruba Dutta

Mon, 31 Mar 2008 04:29:28 +0000

LARAJI NAMASKAR you are the best ,keep it up didi. bhai Dhruba dutta

Comment on यता ले, छिट्टो दे… (गजल) -परिहास by: hello

Mon, 31 Mar 2008 01:25:56 +0000

ke ho yesto yaar ke photo rakhna lai matra lekheko ho ki ke ho?
yeta le
chito de
maninash bhane
dinchu laat le
tyattikai
pugkcha ke
lukayeko cheeeeeeeeeeez
yeta le
maninash bhne
dinchu laat le
la la mero pani photo rakhna paryo lol

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: Anti Rhitik Roshan

Sun, 30 Mar 2008 19:02:06 +0000

Lara ji tapainko…..patra…………… kina banauna hunna mitho lagyo tara ma mero ………………. tapainlai banaudina kina ki tapain le mero naam ma gaunthali ko chiribiri nai lekhi dinu bhayo bhanay mo ta golkhadi sidhai janchu. I believe you have years of experience in the field of poetry writing very few writes the poetry like yours in Nepal and outside and I cannot rest in peace without saying that you are a genious poetry writer. Your tapain ko ……… touches the heart deep down of anybodys’. Finally, you do not look that old in your passport size meaning you can write million more excellent poetries for Nepal and all the Nepalese before to say farewell to your loving fans. Looking forward to see your poetries published in the internet or wherever soon.

Anti Rhitik Roshan

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: Bijay Begha

Sun, 30 Mar 2008 14:57:25 +0000

Wow laxmi dd kabita ta utkrista cha. Yo Hennessy Road ko Pakistani bhaiya ko barema hangyug agyaat le pani lekheko jasto lagyo. La la dd kavita chuak lagyo.Best of luck..

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: tashi sherpa

Sun, 30 Mar 2008 10:38:27 +0000

hi
how are you

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: tashi sherpa

Sun, 30 Mar 2008 10:35:37 +0000

hello how are you? brother and sister i am tashi sherpa my form malaysia now i m here in singapure ok bye bye no time see you next time

Comment on चोट… (गीत) दुर्गा राई by: BJ Bantawa Rai

Sun, 30 Mar 2008 08:57:39 +0000

khusi lagyo dherai kinaki saahityalaai hridayako gahirailai sametera pokhnu bhaeko ma. God bless you.

Comment on परदेशीले पानी खाने पंधेरी.. (गीत) - विष्णु खालिङ किरात by: BJ Bantawa Rai

Sun, 30 Mar 2008 08:50:58 +0000

excellent Song BIshnu khaling ji sadhai yastai katah ra bythale otprot bhawana haru kornu hola, God bless you.

Comment on तपाईको कविताको पात्रा मलाई पनि किन बनाउनुहुन्न ? - लारा by: Chandra Gurung

Sun, 30 Mar 2008 08:08:02 +0000

Lara ji,
Namaste!

Have been reading your creations in the various blogs and websites. I really appreciate your writing skill. And also this above poem of yours is fascinating one too.

Keep it up~!
With regards,Chandra Gurung
chandu2007.blogspot.com

Comment on मलाई खाँचो नुनको भयो .. (गजल) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: BJ Bantawa Rai

Thu, 27 Mar 2008 08:19:54 +0000

सातसमुन्द्रपारीबाट पनि नेपालसम्झि हरपल हरेक सन्जाल मार्फत नेपालको सम्झना गरिरहनु हुने चेलि इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ तपाईको मिठो गजल पढ्न पाउँदा धेरै नै खुसि छौ र भबिस्यमापनि यस्तै समय शान्दर्भिक रचन हरु पढ्न पाईरहुँ भन्नेकामना गर्दछु।

Comment on मदिराका बुंद छन् कि… (गजल) - भूपेन्द्र महत by: mridul

Thu, 27 Mar 2008 02:59:12 +0000

Mahat ji ko gajal sarai man paryo. he is really writer
thax

Comment on संदेश - दुर्गा राई by: Chuda Thapa, New York

Wed, 26 Mar 2008 22:18:39 +0000

Ye meri “Talash” ka
“Jurm” hai,
Ye meri “Wafa” ka
“Qasoor” hai,
Jo dil k “Jitney”
“Gareeb” hai,
Wo “Nazae” se utna hi
“Dur” hai,

Comment on रगतको आँसु बहाउँदै (कविता) - ईश्वर चाम्लिङ्ग by: Chuda Thapa, New York

Wed, 26 Mar 2008 22:02:46 +0000

Bhai, please keep on writing and may God bless you along HKNepal.com, pariwar.

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: crazy

Wed, 26 Mar 2008 09:02:44 +0000

यहाँ देशको सुरक्षामा खटिएकाहरु
शत्रुसँग मित लाँउछन ।
हिंजो रोडका जडयाँहा भातेहरु
आज देश चलाऊने मन्त्री बन्छन ।
यहाँका पढन्ते विद्वानहरु
यूरोप र अमेरिकातिर भाँडा माझ्न जान्छन।
नेपालभरि भारतीय धोत्तिले
छाति फुलाई गुण्डागर्दी र आतंक मचचाउँछन ।
पाहाडेहरु टन्न जाँड खान पायो भने
म स्वर्गमा छु थान्छन।
शहरिय दिमागदारहरु आतंककारिलाई
शरण दिन्छन।
अमेरिकी साम्राज्यबादीहरु र
भारतिय बिस्तारबादीहरु नेपलका
कुना-कुना जरागाड्न खोजिरहेछन्
अनि नेपलको बिकाश कसरि हुन्छ?
सबै नेपलीजतिलाइ झाडा पखला
लागेपछि।

Comment on तिमीसंग बोलुं बोलुं लागेको छ (कविता) - नगेन्द्र ईङनाम “आठराईली” by: BJ Bantawa Rai

Wed, 26 Mar 2008 08:54:26 +0000

Hello Nagendra ji

tapaiko kabita dherai ramro chha sayad Aathrai tira parnu bhaeko le hola, bhabisyama pani lekhdai janush tapaiko naulo naulo sirjanako bhikhaari

Comment on मौसम गजलको…. ..(गजल) -नगेन्द्र ईङनाम ‘आठराईली’ by: S mukhiya

Mon, 24 Mar 2008 02:27:18 +0000

atharaili ji,

nice to C ur gajal Y not writing more poems, wanna C more ur poems than Songs & gajals.

Keep it on……congrats………

mukhiya

Comment on मलाई अधरपान गरायौ.. (गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: dr nis6l

Sun, 23 Mar 2008 08:46:23 +0000

haina daju,gajal ta pir byatha sabai bokayara jane nisthuri premikalai thauka thaumai ladaune dialogue jastai 6 ta! ke tapaiko jiban ma pani yasto 6n aayo jabaki yo gajal bata badala linu vo?

Comment on मौसम गजलको…. ..(गजल) -नगेन्द्र ईङनाम ‘आठराईली’ by: Sarita

Sun, 23 Mar 2008 05:09:53 +0000

Oho baje,

Kya gajal hai man paryo tara kasari samaya nikalnu hunchha hum… patrakarita, kavita, geet, gajal, samajsewa ani afno kam mata chhak parchhu

natini

Comment on मौसम गजलको…. ..(गजल) -नगेन्द्र ईङनाम ‘आठराईली’ by: anti rhitik roshan

Sat, 22 Mar 2008 20:02:59 +0000

Your superb Weather Forecast tells everyone to go for a ride on the toy train of darjeeling (been there once). Life is wonderful to some but hectic to some and betrayal from someone you love demands bhir bata haam falnu but I won’t do because life is for living kalo jancha goro anucha why worry.

Comment on धोकामा जलेको मन… (गीत /गजल) - भूपेन्द्र महत by: anti rhitik roshan

Sat, 22 Mar 2008 19:47:46 +0000

Yahan dekhe ko le hunna lekhe ko ma jiwan ko suruwat huncha geet/gazal ramro chha kasailai chhunay kasailai geet banau banau lagnay, dukhay ko mun lai yathartha bujhai dinay keep writing.

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: sumni

Sat, 22 Mar 2008 14:15:15 +0000

HI PREM NAMASTE NICE SONG BEST OF LUCK….

Comment on काम छोडी आउनु है …-(गीत) - चोक गुरुङ by: chok gurung

Sat, 22 Mar 2008 08:47:54 +0000

hi all my friends.
Thank you very much for comment me. I will tray to write other more songs and poems. thank you again for all my frieds from chok gurung uk camberley.

Comment on खोपडी र बाटाहरु… (कविता) - परिहास by: bhuwaneshor sharma

Sat, 22 Mar 2008 05:06:40 +0000

Dear Parihash,

Your poem touched me. I am really impressed. You have written so beautifully.

Bhuwaneshor sharma
INLS Australia

Comment on मौसम गजलको…. ..(गजल) -नगेन्द्र ईङनाम ‘आठराईली’ by: Desh Subba

Fri, 21 Mar 2008 16:44:30 +0000

wow.. . Dai,

Kavita ta bahut ONLINE dekhinthyo ABA Gajal pani WA…. WA….
HOLI ko bela kasailai Sabdako LOLA le hanne sur ki, KASO ?

Keep it on Dai, gajal Saral Ra Contemporary chha.

subhekshuk,
Desh kumar Limbu

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: chokgurung gothane

Thu, 20 Mar 2008 11:23:18 +0000

hi mijash ji namaskar.

It`s great words and real kabita wel done!

from chok gothane

Comment on जिन्दगीको पथमा… (गजल) - आशा राई ‘विदीर्ण’ by: DESHBHAKTA

Wed, 19 Mar 2008 10:36:50 +0000

Jyadai man paryo nana. Jasari pani lekhna chai nachhodnuhola. Asti maile phone gareko thie uthaunu nai bhaena. Nepalbata hamro nanale tapailai sodhdai hunuhunthyo hai.

Comment on जिन्दगीको पथमा… (गजल) - आशा राई ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Prativa K.C. CANADA

Wed, 19 Mar 2008 10:32:24 +0000

Wow ! Fantastic. Ashaji, tapaiko aru rachanaharu jastai yo pani ati nai ramro lagyo. Tapai sahrai bhabuk kisimle lekhnuhunchha, Tyo malai man parchha. Chadai nai Nepalese literature ma tapai sthapit hunubhaekochha. Keep it up. PRATIVA, Canada

Comment on आँखा भित्र राखें तिमीलाई ( गीत) - कृष्ण गुरुङ by: daisy

Tue, 18 Mar 2008 15:59:38 +0000

wow its damn gud em really impressed by this poem and very true

Comment on जिन्दगीको पथमा… (गजल) - आशा राई ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Parihas Subba

Tue, 18 Mar 2008 14:46:30 +0000

Suruma tha bhayena… paila chali halnu bhayo …. pacchhi tha bhayo napugine kura… aaba tapailai suggestion - tapai afno track change garnuss , tyo yatraa choderaa…. - just kidding and i hope you will not stop writing… yo mero tapai prati ko ‘AASHA’ ho
- परिहास

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Rai yang pitang chhu

Tue, 18 Mar 2008 01:45:53 +0000

AshaG tapaiko aru gajal jhai yo gajal pani ati utkrishta 6.

Comment on जिन्दगीको पथमा… (गजल) - आशा राई ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Rai yang pitang chhu

Tue, 18 Mar 2008 01:37:07 +0000

ati utkrishta 6 gajal.

Comment on आँखा भित्र राखें तिमीलाई ( गीत) - कृष्ण गुरुङ by: Anti Rhitik Roshan

Mon, 17 Mar 2008 15:55:12 +0000

Geet ramro chha recording garnu bhayo kaslai gauna dinu bhayo sayad rajesh payal rai hola! ramro geet ko nimti tapainlai badhai chha.

Comment on जिन्दगीको पथमा… (गजल) - आशा राई ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Anti Rhitik Roshan

Mon, 17 Mar 2008 15:50:36 +0000

Sayad tysailay nai tapain ko now ni asha bado ramro naam ani gazal. prerna banay holan kohi sulta ulta duwai bicharnay lai bhanay sahanubhuti darsawnay niskayla gazal lai tapain ko zindagi yastai rahecha bhani, tara mo tapain hoina tapain mo hoina mero man mastisk le je soncha tyo tapain le kahilay sochay ko na huna sakcha yathartha mero aphnai chha tapain ko aphnai ani yo gazal bhitra ko yathartha khai ke bhannay. Anyway I like your gazal which explains lot of things that happens truely in our short and sweet life. Keep writing and be an encouragement to others.

Comment on रातदिन मलाई सम्झी रुन्छौ रे नि निरु (गजल) - परिहास by: ASHA 'Bideerna'

Mon, 17 Mar 2008 11:08:30 +0000

kanma ajhai unkai rodan sunchhau re ni neeru,
‘Parihas’ ko yadlai ajhai tunchhau re ni neeru.
Sarai mitho Ghajal. Pheri pani yastai rachanaharuko apechhya gardai…. -Asha.

Comment on मलाई खाँचो नुनको भयो .. (गजल) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: Prabin

Sun, 16 Mar 2008 20:08:37 +0000

तिम्रो शब्दहरु जादुलाई मेरो क्रांतिकारी लाल सलाम .
साहित्यामा यसरी नै तिम्रो यात्रा अगी बडोस
प्रबीन मोक्तान

Comment on गर्जंदै उर्लने बर्खाको खहरे होइन म.. (कविता) - सागर राई by: prakash rai Malaysia

Sun, 16 Mar 2008 04:46:23 +0000

sagar g! utkristha sreejanko lagi muri muri dhhanyabadddd !!!! tapai bata hamile sadhai sadhai yastai sreejanko sreejan bhai rahosss mero suvkamana 6

Comment on जिन्दगीको पथमा… (गजल) - आशा राई ‘विदीर्ण’ by: prakash rai Malaysia

Sun, 16 Mar 2008 04:43:12 +0000

Aasha g!!!!! khubai marma sparshi gajal pokhanu bhaya chha khushi lagyo bholika dinaharuma pani tapai bat yastai yastai sreejana study garn paune aasha gardachhu.antya ma safaltako kamana.

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: bishnu

Sat, 15 Mar 2008 13:48:37 +0000

bhawuk manche haru yatharthako kalpanama tarsinegarcha hai chamling g. kinaki bhawana bina sahityako janma huna sakdaina, tara himmat bhanda arko kutkilo chaina kunai safaltako sikhar chumne

Comment on छिन्ताङ्ग (कविता) - राजेश राई by: bishnu

Sat, 15 Mar 2008 13:42:27 +0000

ragat tato paitalaharuma metiyeko chaina ajhai yo satya ho, tara katinjel arkakolagi matrai ragatko khola bagayera inkalb ko nara ghankai rahane? ke hami afno lagi 1 thopa ragat ajhai bagauna sakdainau raa? hami sadhai arkaiko lagi mari raheko chau ladi raheko chau sayad yo time bhaneko 1 choti aafnai lagi marne ho ki?

Comment on बन्दरगाहमा… (कविता) - लारा by: bishnu

Sat, 15 Mar 2008 13:38:07 +0000

khai kina ho nana thinga ubbhine?sayad hami sabaile yo bhujeko chau ra pani hami nabujhea jhai lato bhai diyeko chau ,hami sabai chinchau tara najikina sakdainau jasari tapai korea aauda namaste nana bhanna sakina, kinaki hamro nakh sanghai dimag pani thepchiyeko cha chyaptiyeko cha

Comment on संसद र सिंहदरवार (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: shiva kumar rai

Fri, 14 Mar 2008 20:23:24 +0000

nares kabita padnu paera khusi chhu.dhanyabad hami sabai bata
, harrow ,

Comment on जिन्दगीको पथमा… (गजल) - आशा राई ‘विदीर्ण’ by: tej man rai

Thu, 13 Mar 2008 21:11:26 +0000

Asha ji tapain ko gajal le mero pani man chhuyo sahrai marmik gajal lekhnu bhaechha tara yeti chhitai na attinu hola kosis gardai janu hos sahed tapain ko path badli garda lakkhya pugna saknu hunchha ki prayas gari hernu hos ta……………

Comment on देशको तापले पग्लियो हिमाल (राष्ट्रिय गीत) - दिलिप योन्जन by: Raj

Thu, 13 Mar 2008 18:02:09 +0000

Dilip Ji ko rastriy geetale jhai, nepal ma pani paribartan aosa, nepali le nepalilai marna chadau ani desako bikasa ra maya mamta ma bhacna sikau, thanks, i am waiting your new articals.
Raj

Comment on आउँदा जाँदा मुस्कुराउथी (गीत गजल) - दिलिप योन्जन by: dammar gurung

Thu, 13 Mar 2008 10:05:26 +0000

ma lai hajur ko gajal man paryo sayed awasye hajur uchcha chhulima pugnu hunchha tara kahile kahi bichar garnuhola hai ???

Comment on मलाई खाँचो नुनको भयो .. (गजल) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: Nilam Kumar Thaoa

Wed, 12 Mar 2008 23:06:53 +0000

Wow Miss Chamling This is a great Gajal. sadharan shabda haruko garaa lagayera euta sunaulo ani sundar gajal fulaunu bhayechha. I liked that. Thank you very much and it is a very beautiful Gajal. Keep it up.
Wahsington DC

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: dr nischhal

Tue, 11 Mar 2008 11:17:46 +0000

Dear sis Indira, I read your your poem.It is very good.Keep it up!!
congratulation!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: Rupa

Tue, 11 Mar 2008 05:44:33 +0000

Wah! yesto po kabita.Mana bhitra dekhi sahasha jagaaune.Congratulation!! Indra ji.Keep it up.

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: pardasi_yoman@yahoo.com

Mon, 10 Mar 2008 22:06:44 +0000

hi
congratulatipn,Indira ji tapi lai.. yastai sunder kabita haru write ghardai janu hola? best off luck

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: Numa Rai USA

Mon, 10 Mar 2008 20:53:59 +0000

Sis Indu,
Congrats to you being 4th place .keep writing.

Comment on मलाई खाँचो नुनको भयो .. (गजल) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: Man kaji

Mon, 10 Mar 2008 05:57:20 +0000

Thanx for nunko gajal,Indira ji lai. Indira ji more rachnu hos nunko gajal, man kaji boki aaune chha ghankane madal. gajalma basi new parichaya garamla, man kaji sanga jurema jiwan sangai rakhamla. Man kaji nunko gajalma aaunchha re,mitho mitho maya dinchha re…..!

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: Man kaji

Mon, 10 Mar 2008 05:34:15 +0000

congratulation, Indira ji hajur ko kabi rachana nai ramro,kabi rachana bhanda timi hami nai ho hamro,kabi kabi gari hunu mahakabi,timi lai nai ma mitho comment garchhu tyo aatma bhori.

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: biswokajee rai

Sun, 09 Mar 2008 13:25:26 +0000

chammling ji tapaiko bhabisya atyantai ujyalo ra farakilo chha

sundar fatko bato ma hidna pani nachadnu hola
tehi hidai ma sabai bhule pani kapi kalam nabhulnu hola

gantabya tapaiko sunischit chha.

BISWOKAJEE RAI

CURRENTLY AT LPH CYPRUS.

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: swapnil

Sat, 08 Mar 2008 20:08:15 +0000

lekhnu nachodnu hai
kangmang naresh uk

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: Encouragement

Sat, 08 Mar 2008 08:34:14 +0000

Miss Chamling I thing this is the right time for you to start your journey but where you going! You mention the hills but where our land is full of hills and mountains, volcano? You mean in Hawaii don’t you think lava is too hot, may your dream come true. Best of luck.

Encouragement

Comment on मलाई खाँचो नुनको भयो .. (गजल) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: benjaminohonoo rai

Sat, 08 Mar 2008 07:20:20 +0000

wau!!! indira rai g thank u for yo gajal ko lagi sarai mitho machhune rachana garnu bhaya6. in future ma pani yo bhanda dherai ramro sreejana study garnu paune aasha garchhu hajur bata la . ani k ma hajur ko goodfriend huna sakchhu? yadi hunchha bhane plz mail me [benjaminohoo_xx@yahoo.com]

Comment on मलाई खाँचो नुनको भयो .. (गजल) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: prakash rai ipoh perak malaysia

Sat, 08 Mar 2008 01:27:03 +0000

thanks 6 hai indira g hajurlai! yatee meetho marmsprsheee ani samay sandarvik kabita ko lagi.

Comment on मलाई खाँचो नुनको भयो .. (गजल) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: Babai HK

Fri, 07 Mar 2008 23:23:53 +0000

Thanks for nice gajai.Go ahead with ur beautyful rachana.

Comment on यात्रा शुरु गर्छु.. (कविता) - इन्दिरा चाम्लिङ by: samer

Fri, 07 Mar 2008 08:03:40 +0000

indira ra g tapai atma biswas garnu hoss
sabai pura hunchha mero pani hajur lai subhakamana
chha ra tapai ko kabita malai man paryo aru dherai kabita
haru lekha dai janu hola hamile hajur lai maha kabi indira chamling bhanera kunai news kunai web side ma dekhanu pau hai

Comment on काम छोडी आउनु है …-(गीत) - चोक गुरुङ by: padma

Wed, 05 Mar 2008 20:15:52 +0000

hello namaskar.
o it is great and beautiful words os i love it chok ji continue fallow up. p…uk

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: jit budhathoki

Wed, 05 Mar 2008 11:27:27 +0000

bhogeko kura ho tapaile pokheko,jehos mijas chai chha hai

Comment on काम छोडी आउनु है …-(गीत) - चोक गुरुङ by: shyam

Tue, 04 Mar 2008 14:44:34 +0000

hi
frend it`s nice song i like this song. voise also great. kunti didi is wel singer so how you found kunti didi in nepal? your music also great my hard is brock now.

Comment on भेलेन्टाइन र सिपाही (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: rai ram

Tue, 04 Mar 2008 14:39:58 +0000

hi
naresh ji it`s good and wel kabita i like keep it up..

Comment on के छ खबर, हजूरको अचेल (गजल) - मिजास तेम्बे by: kapol

Tue, 04 Mar 2008 14:30:28 +0000

hi
mijash ji it`s so nice i like this so wel kep it up.

Comment on काम छोडी आउनु है …-(गीत) - चोक गुरुङ by: kapol

Tue, 04 Mar 2008 14:28:26 +0000

hi
chok ji it`s very nice and fantastic words here so keep it up hai. i like it..

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: Roshan Rai

Sun, 02 Mar 2008 11:18:31 +0000

Wow ! the poem is great .

yeah ! human life is full of ups and down ,struggle ,pain , sometime happiness is all part of our life no matter how wealthy a person is.how we perceive all is a great concern to humanity.

Dhurja ji ,keep it up.

Comment on धेरै भो बन्द हड़ताल.. (कविता) - सहदेव पौडेल by: Nagesh Rai

Sun, 02 Mar 2008 09:38:30 +0000

Dherai bho banda describes the true colour of present Nepal and the sufferings of all Nepalese. I had the impression that in our country Nepal Bahun Chhetri never thinks of Tamang, Rai, Limbu, Gurung Mangar and the rest jaat jatis but you being one of the Bahun through your Dherai bho banda, if, tries to tell all the daura suruwalays and guneu cholis that not all bahuns are racists, and thinks Nepal is a country where all jaat jatis have equal rights and are to get together and stand as a national force, makes everyone to realise that time has changed and we as Nepalese update of brains and think and again think that we can fall if we apart and stand if we all be together. Your Dherai bho banda is an inspiration, encouragement to all the Nepalese of Nepal and outside i.e. Darjeeling, Sikkim, Manipur, Dehradun, Assam, Nagaland and UK, HK, USA, Brunei, Middle East and mainland Europe. Good Work and keep writing.

Nagesh Rai

Comment on उज्यालो भो पूर्व दिशा (गीत /गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: phul Tamang, malaysia

Sun, 02 Mar 2008 02:08:46 +0000

12 ghantako kamma khatera pani malaysiama sahityako aadhi chalayako murimuri dhannebad.

Comment on देश बिछ्टै दुखेको छ (कविता) - भरत लिम्वु by: radha

Sat, 01 Mar 2008 05:36:38 +0000

namaskar poet je,

Woow it’s really very nice poem.keep up it and best of luck for your creativity.

Comment on गजल - सञ्जय राई ‘छुच्चा’ by: radha

Sat, 01 Mar 2008 05:32:16 +0000

woow so nice gazal. best of luck for your creativity .

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: Surendra Ingnam

Sat, 01 Mar 2008 05:17:12 +0000

मिजास भाइ सबैको प्रतिक्रिया हेरे
मान्छेको बुझाइमा फरक त्यसैनै आउछ
कलम चलाइ राख्नु, हामी जहा रहे पनि सदा एकताको
भाव राख्नु पर्छ। अन्त्यमा स्याबास मिजास भाइ
दाजु सुरेन्द्र इङ्नाम
डोवर, वेलायत

Comment on काम छोडी आउनु है …-(गीत) - चोक गुरुङ by: Surendra Ingnam

Sat, 01 Mar 2008 04:52:47 +0000

Weldone chok Bhai i hope you will bring another Album soon
Daju Surendra Ingnam
Dover England

Comment on रगतको आँसु बहाउँदै (कविता) - ईश्वर चाम्लिङ्ग by: Surendra Ingnam

Sat, 01 Mar 2008 04:50:29 +0000

Mitra ji, you requested me to listion once when you were writting, but i didn’t realize that it wil be that good. it is true, every single migrant people have own problem, no matter whatever they say but in our heart we have pain, hurt, and seek for our country Nepal. keep it up people may understand how our pen writes insted being L……….. Weldone ani diptiya bainee too, coz helping my Numbaree being Passion.
Surendra Ingnam.
Dover, England

Comment on संसद र सिंहदरवार (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: swapnil

Fri, 29 Feb 2008 11:29:43 +0000

hamro dheshko bastabik anuhar boleko cha yo kabita le yestai kabita lekhne kabi haru chahiyeko cha keep on naresh kang

Comment on संसद र सिंहदरवार (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: khagendra

Fri, 29 Feb 2008 11:16:14 +0000

yestai kabita lekhnu hai naresh neta haru lai samjhaunu paryo ni haina

Comment on संसद र सिंहदरवार (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: raj

Fri, 29 Feb 2008 11:13:40 +0000

dheshko bastabik anuhar boleko cha yo kabita le great kabita

Comment on संसद र सिंहदरवार (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: dev raj

Fri, 29 Feb 2008 11:12:39 +0000

dhesh bastabik dharatal boleko cha great kabita

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: sita

Fri, 29 Feb 2008 11:10:55 +0000

jahile pani shree mati harule bhne ra bolne gareko sadharan sabtha prog garera naya aayam thiyeko cha yo kabita le jastyo lagcha gajago / kabi tanka haina@

Comment on भेलेन्टाइन र सिपाही (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: sita

Fri, 29 Feb 2008 11:07:48 +0000

naresh good kabita yeastai lekhnu hola

Comment on भेलेन्टाइन र सिपाही (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: sandesh

Fri, 29 Feb 2008 11:06:06 +0000

bhelentine dayko utkhanan garera nikalnu bhayeko ma ……………….keep on

Comment on रातदिन मलाई सम्झी रुन्छौ रे नि निरु (गजल) - परिहास by: radha

Fri, 29 Feb 2008 05:12:02 +0000

namakar poet je

wow it’s very nice and so nice verse.i like it. so pls keep it up best of luck for your creativity.thank you.

Comment on गीत -परिहास सुब्बा by: radha

Fri, 29 Feb 2008 05:02:12 +0000

woww it’svery nice poem ……..

Comment on रगतको आँसु बहाउँदै (कविता) - ईश्वर चाम्लिङ्ग by: radha

Fri, 29 Feb 2008 04:41:49 +0000

Namaska daju !!!!!!!

wowwww …….. your poem is absoluteley nice. i like it. daju it’s really truth i think there is more reality on this poem because our nation is as like same.we are poor people ………………. but we are supressing by our government…………………… lets’ see now ……….. what ……. ?????

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: pardasi_yoman@yahoo.com

Thu, 28 Feb 2008 21:57:26 +0000

hi sabina
tapai ko kabita la man choyo.dhanyabad dena ko lagi particriya ma tapai lai thanks la? pardasi life huna la yasto kabita la man nai chuncha ne. thanks again

Comment on रगतको आँसु बहाउँदै (कविता) - ईश्वर चाम्लिङ्ग by: BISWOKAJEE RAI

Thu, 28 Feb 2008 07:07:21 +0000

REALLY A VERY TOP CLASS POEM,,, WITH NEPAL AND NEPALEESE REALITIES….. MANY THANKS AND WELL DONE DAI KEEP IT ON…..

BISH NICOSIA CYPRUS.

Comment on उज्यालो भो पूर्व दिशा (गीत /गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: prakash babu thulung rai"Adhuro"

Wed, 27 Feb 2008 15:08:20 +0000

sarba pratham indra dailai namskar!!!! krantikari b4 ani rastra premlai Gajalma pokhidinu bhayako thank u ani safaltako suvkamana 6 !!!!!!!

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: Hem Tembe

Mon, 25 Feb 2008 02:59:18 +0000

Great ! Great ! Kaka, keep it up. I really appriciate your creation and message.

Hem

Comment on कागजमा दस्तखत (कथा) - नीलम कार्की निहारिका by: j gurung

Sun, 24 Feb 2008 07:46:32 +0000

What a heart touching article!!!!!!!!!!!!! wonderful.

Comment on काम छोडी आउनु है …-(गीत) - चोक गुरुङ by: dada ghare kaila

Sun, 24 Feb 2008 03:28:12 +0000

saro ramro lagyo
keep it up

Comment on कागजमा दस्तखत (कथा) - नीलम कार्की निहारिका by: nirajan

Sat, 23 Feb 2008 02:34:47 +0000

i appriceate it

Comment on रगतको आँसु बहाउँदै (कविता) - ईश्वर चाम्लिङ्ग by: kamal budathoki

Thu, 21 Feb 2008 21:06:04 +0000

kabita ram ro chha best of luck……13thum -jaljale-9

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: G. Tamu

Thu, 21 Feb 2008 20:33:56 +0000

Mijash bhai

Well composed! said rather but hummmm, lets keep some of our secrets a secret shall we? Look forward to read more….
well done

Comment on रगतको आँसु बहाउँदै (कविता) - ईश्वर चाम्लिङ्ग by: Rai yang pitang chhu

Thu, 21 Feb 2008 15:00:28 +0000

kabita maarmik ani utkrishta pani 6.

Comment on रगतको आँसु बहाउँदै (कविता) - ईश्वर चाम्लिङ्ग by: Nagesh Rai

Thu, 21 Feb 2008 10:19:22 +0000

Bhai Ishwar don’t go anywhere stay and work in UK yes of -course to receive blessings from your elders once a year or in three go to Nepal.

I like your poetry RAGAT KO ANSU ………. which describes everything, keep writing.

Daju Nagesh

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: jwalasing

Wed, 20 Feb 2008 22:57:23 +0000

bhai le aphnai baremaa lekheko hoina ra?
sathiharu ta tyasai bhanchhan ! timro dautari haru pani moro mijasle aphai bigat ukele chha - bhani rahanchhan ta… ee mijash bhai
nadhati bhannu paryo ki sachchai yo kabvita aphnai barema lekheko ho???

Comment on काम छोडी आउनु है …-(गीत) - चोक गुरुङ by: sakia

Wed, 20 Feb 2008 19:33:46 +0000

thankyou, chok gurung, it is so nice song that i read it. it came to my hurt with my past and which send me back to my village. it is so touchable song and thats words goes to everyone who loves eachother.
lastly, chok gurung , please keep going on your writting songs and be with us same as singer as well as writter thank you,

Comment on उज्यालो भो पूर्व दिशा (गीत /गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: yubaraj sampang 'jetha'

Wed, 20 Feb 2008 02:46:34 +0000

ramro 6 samaya sandarvik

Comment on गर्जंदै उर्लने बर्खाको खहरे होइन म.. (कविता) - सागर राई by: sagar

Mon, 18 Feb 2008 22:23:42 +0000

I really want to give thousands of thanks to all those hearts which go on the same way as my feelings do, and thanks for all your comments, or you can drop it directly at bantawasagar@yahoo.com yours sicerely SAGAR

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: shiva kumar rai

Mon, 18 Feb 2008 20:20:48 +0000

bhai jagat bhet nabhaeko lamo bhaepani tapaiko sahityik rachana herna pauda yo chhatti garbale phuleko chha.paltanko khabar kehi thaha nabhaepani tapaiko lekh haru padhnu pairahu .bhabisyako sadhai ujjwal subakana. shiva ani pariwar.

Comment on काम छोडी आउनु है …-(गीत) - चोक गुरुङ by: prachi

Mon, 18 Feb 2008 13:07:56 +0000

namestay malai tapai ko git sarai man paryo tapaiko sabdha ra sailey ak damai mithas chha good luck in your future.

Comment on नपुंसक समयको विरुद्ध .. (कविता) - लारा by: Lhorung Rai

Sun, 17 Feb 2008 21:13:20 +0000

Nice poem, speaks a lot about present ….

Comment on गर्जंदै उर्लने बर्खाको खहरे होइन म.. (कविता) - सागर राई by: deep

Thu, 14 Feb 2008 23:43:04 +0000

nice poem which goes through the inner core of my heart

Comment on तिम्रो प्रतीक्षामा (कविता ) - पुरुषोत्तम न्यौपाने by: suman ranabhat

Mon, 11 Feb 2008 15:33:23 +0000

kabita ramro chha tayo bhanda pani bhaba ra presentation ramro lagoyo

Comment on अनाम छापामारको नाममा (कथा) - इच्छा पूर्ण राई by: BJ Bnatawa Rai

Mon, 11 Feb 2008 09:11:12 +0000

malai dherai khsui lagyo yasto katha haru padhna feri feri pani paiyosh kepp it up.

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: Mijash Tembe

Mon, 11 Feb 2008 06:50:37 +0000

Adaraniya mera kabitaka pathak jyuharulai sarba pratham pratikriyako lagi danyabad dina chahanchhu. Anya ramra ramra kabitaharuko sadhanama chhu yahaharuko lagi ma chadainai arko kabita pathaunechhu. byaktigat pratikriya dinuhunchha bhane mijash@gmail.com ma pathauna pani saknuhunchha.
dhanyabad
Mijash

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: sajja

Sun, 10 Feb 2008 09:06:50 +0000

hey rata makkai ,,, astai kabita aaye ta mu dinvari padera basthey bhat pani nakhai kana kya ,,, chiito feri janmaunuhola hai kabi ju asto kabita k ,,, heheheheheh

Comment on गर्जंदै उर्लने बर्खाको खहरे होइन म.. (कविता) - सागर राई by: subhadra subba

Sun, 10 Feb 2008 06:59:36 +0000

tapaiko pome khub dil chune lagyy malai,dherai dherai man paryo.

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: subhadra subba

Sun, 10 Feb 2008 06:18:20 +0000

oh…..god dherai dherai majja lagyo tapaiko kabita padhda,bhannu namilne tara bhannun parda yahi ho tesai le feri feri pani astai kabita lekhnu nabhulnu hola thanks,

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: chok tamu

Sat, 09 Feb 2008 13:31:42 +0000

kabita thik thikai ho . kosis garnu paryo. keep it up.
cholaram

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: babu ram aryal

Thu, 07 Feb 2008 17:00:01 +0000

hi tapai la lakako kabayata malai ramro layago yagha ramro ladakai janu la ta best of luck

babu
muscat

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: Okhaldhunge Bhai

Tue, 05 Feb 2008 08:59:25 +0000

Hi !

Prem Dai , Namaste !

Tapai ta really Kabi nai hunuhudo rahe chha .
Yo kabita Malai ati nai man paryo.

Tapai ta ek samaj sevi kabi bhanau wa sachikai socity person hunuhudorahechh Yestai rachna haru rakhdai garnush.

Hash Ta tapaiko shubhachintak
Ram Bdr.Tamang (Okhaldhunge Bhai )

Comment on नपुंसक समयको विरुद्ध .. (कविता) - लारा by: kanchhi uk

Mon, 04 Feb 2008 14:28:05 +0000

hi lara D tapai ko lekhai ko fan nai vane pani hunchha maile hajur ko junai pani lekha haru padne garchhu ani hamro Asha D ko pani Asha D le hijo aaja lekhanu nai chhadnu vayo kina hola kuni? j hos hajur ko kabita ra lekhaharu ati nai ramro chha tesaile aauda din haru ma padhirahanu pau… yehi aakha rakheko chhu
thanx D
kanchhi

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: jemsktm ekanta kuna

Mon, 04 Feb 2008 11:33:32 +0000

kabi mijaas jiu ko

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: jemsktm ekanta kuna

Mon, 04 Feb 2008 11:29:39 +0000

kabi jiu ko( kabita saspen lagyo )

Comment on फक्ताङ्लुङ्की रानी….(गीत) - लोकेश याक्थुङ्बा by: Rai yang pitang chhu

Sat, 02 Feb 2008 07:38:02 +0000

hau Lunga,kabita ta sahrai mitho kornu bhae6 ni hau.

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: sajja

Sat, 02 Feb 2008 03:40:15 +0000

oho … sarsarti aakha matrai dulayeko thiye ta ra aja kabita le mutu nai choyo , kati matmik ani sandarvik rahechh yo kabita derai nai nepali cheli lai ghat ma lagne kabita janmechha real nai chha durustai nai chha ani bastabik nai chha khub man paryo … yo kabita .. thnak u hai kabi ju lai … feri pani yestai kabita ko aapeksha ma … bye from hk bata ma sajja

Comment on रातदिन मलाई सम्झी रुन्छौ रे नि निरु (गजल) - परिहास by: Dolman Limbu

Fri, 01 Feb 2008 16:13:25 +0000

Like it PlsKeep it up, I mean Ramroooo Chha Hajurko Saabdaharu.

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: raj robat ajnabi

Fri, 01 Feb 2008 03:05:28 +0000

tapaiko gajal lai mero sahityik salaam…..!
raj robat ajnabi INLS malaysia chaptor

Comment on एक्काइसौं शताब्दीका भगवानहरु (कविता) - भरु ‘पल्’ by: raj robat ajnabi

Fri, 01 Feb 2008 02:59:56 +0000

kabita ko arkai aayam ho yo, bisaya chhanaut ra lekhan saili le malai attinai pravabit banayo.
raj robat ajnabi INLS malaysia chaptor

Comment on के छ खबर, हजूरको अचेल (गजल) - मिजास तेम्बे by: raj robat ajnabi

Fri, 01 Feb 2008 02:53:24 +0000

mijas g gajal ati nai ramro chh pragatiko kamana
raj robat ajnabi INLS malaysia chaptor

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: raj robat ajnabi

Fri, 01 Feb 2008 02:49:07 +0000

pida boki baachnu parda jiban dukhdo rahichha
parelimaa aai aasu aafai sukdo rahichha.
dont worry,

Comment on गजल - सञ्जय राई ‘छुच्चा’ by: raj robat ajnabi

Fri, 01 Feb 2008 02:41:59 +0000

gaja ta yesto po hunu parchh ta sahityamaa sada sarbada des dukhnu parchh maya prem vanda pani, susta dukheko chhaina nepal sarkarlai tara sahityamaa atti dukhyo susta,

Comment on उज्यालो भो पूर्व दिशा (गीत /गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: raj robat ajnabi

Fri, 01 Feb 2008 02:34:17 +0000

gajal ramro chha pragatiko kamana

Comment on रातदिन मलाई सम्झी रुन्छौ रे नि निरु (गजल) - परिहास by: chandiraj

Thu, 31 Jan 2008 10:01:44 +0000

wow ! what a fantastic gajal

Comment on नपुंसक समयको विरुद्ध .. (कविता) - लारा by: prakashsunuwar@hotmail.com

Wed, 30 Jan 2008 16:35:10 +0000

kada chhae, kei hunchha kita-aba, pakkaipani hunchha jasto nai chha hai-lahaibari-lai, hurraaaaa……

Comment on “एक दृष्टि” मुक्तक - टंक वनेम by: darshan bantawa

Tue, 29 Jan 2008 13:38:27 +0000

Wanem dai, tapai ko kabita muktak haru ma praye nachhutai kana padchhu. aru ko bhanda nikkai stariye lagchhan tapaika srijana haru. ajhai pani tapai ka kabita muktak haru paddai jane dhoko chha. lekdai rahanu hola. Gud luck!!

Darshan Bantawa

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: raifromtexas

Tue, 29 Jan 2008 08:26:32 +0000

great !!!!!!!!

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: raifromtexas

Tue, 29 Jan 2008 08:20:16 +0000

Great ……..!!!!!!!…the great !!!!!!
Mijas
keep it up
go ahead……i want to see u r in top of the summit….

Comment on नपुंसक समयको विरुद्ध .. (कविता) - लारा by: phung:lep makkhim HK.

Fri, 25 Jan 2008 05:15:18 +0000

lara G”kavita ramro 6.but nepali lai osama bin laden hoina,nepal ko jiundo jagdo kam nalagne,kursi ma gadiyera basne 3-4 jana MULA haru gindna euta NATHURAM GODSE matra utpadan gare pugne chha. bhatuwa dog maobadi haru jungle ani bagar ma tesai jyan phalchhan tara euta mula pani gindna sakdaina pani marua hagi ?

Comment on संसद र सिंहदरवार (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: mohan soltee

Thu, 24 Jan 2008 18:15:37 +0000

great ! great !! grea!!!
its really nice ,i have no any sentences to expalne any thing , your are the great , keep going , all the best
mohan soltee

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: sanjay rai 6uchchaa

Thu, 24 Jan 2008 12:30:25 +0000

sounds great..! i wish u a comment like above…

Comment on थुइक्क ! जाली लोग्ने मान्छेहरु ! (कविता) - मिजास तेम्बे by: Lara Nana

Thu, 24 Jan 2008 05:11:17 +0000

Finally a man voice out against the men Mijash bhai, Tapai ko ‘kabita ko awaj’ ra tapailai mero ‘chatke-salam’ appreicated! that writing such a touchable creation from the ‘banduk ko naal’ indeed I am inspired with you guys. Don’t let your pen down.

With my best wishes
Lara Didi

Comment on भेलेन्टाइन र सिपाही (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: Lara Nana

Thu, 24 Jan 2008 05:06:27 +0000

Dear Naresh
Nice poem! as always and kee writing…..all my wish to you with hope for new ‘KRITIMAN’ achievements.

NANA

Comment on संसद र सिंहदरवार (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: Malik Ram Rai

Thu, 24 Jan 2008 02:12:09 +0000

Bhai Narash
yo kabita malai sandarbhik ra gahan lagyo yastai soch ra bicharle matra naya nepalko kalpana garna sakinchha natra khokro aadarsha matra hun sakchha . netaharuko khokro aadarsha ra aadambaripanle naya nepalko kalpana garna sakindaina. bhaiko yasta kabitaa aru pani suneko chhu bsbf radi ukbata , aru pragatikoi kamana gardachhu huhin dai malikram

Comment on ` रणभूमिबाट ‘ (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: Bishnu prasad Gautam

Wed, 23 Jan 2008 16:36:03 +0000

matako doodh sisulai siksha marti bhasama
prabhav parch sristilai prakashko gatima

Comment on भेलेन्टाइन र सिपाही (कविता) - काङमाङ नरेश by: niroj

Wed, 23 Jan 2008 13:06:10 +0000

naresh ji k cha ho
hajur ko kabita sarai effectic lagyo keep it up

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: pun kt

Wed, 23 Jan 2008 06:37:01 +0000

hi pream ji tapai lai kasko lagyo dar geet ko sabda ta ramro chha tara aafai darayera lekheko jasto chha lekhada pani daraunu bhayeko thiyo hola hai

Comment on नपुंसक समयको विरुद्ध .. (कविता) - लारा by: Rai yang pitang chhu

Tue, 22 Jan 2008 14:57:51 +0000

j hos bahini Laxmi,tapaiko kabita utkrishta 6.maitiko tarfabaata yahi shuva kamana 6 ki tapaiko lekhale nirantarta paos.

Comment on ` रणभूमिबाट ‘ (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: Rai yang pitang chhu

Tue, 22 Jan 2008 14:50:58 +0000

utkrishta kabitako laagi kabi Rai bholaGlai murimuri dhanyabaad aauda dinharuma pani yastai kabitako aasha gardachhu.

Comment on कस्तो पत्र लेखूँ ? ( कविता) - लारा by: 6uchchaa SANJAY

Mon, 21 Jan 2008 12:14:00 +0000

maadal ra damfuko kura samjhan6au……really nice creation for present. hope it ll be continue to creat by a person which makes all to fell over the nation.

Comment on ` रणभूमिबाट ‘ (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: sabina

Sun, 20 Jan 2008 17:23:30 +0000

tapai ko kabita ekdam ramro lagyo .yasari nai tapai ko naya naya kabita padhana pau.

Comment on ` रणभूमिबाट ‘ (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: luija gurung german

Sun, 20 Jan 2008 16:15:07 +0000

Tapaiko kabita ati ramro lagyo mannai chhoyo mero .tapaiko yo kabita pader tapaijastai hajarau nepali dajuharule pakkai pani aafno priyako yadd pakkai pani garyo hola .yo kabitama sachikai tapaiko wastabik pida lukeko jasto malai lagyo .tyasari nai aafno priyako mayako koseli sangali rakhnu hola aani ranabhumima jasari ladirahanu bhayako chha tyas pailama tapai lagayat sampurna nepali dajuharuko safalatako lagi bhagawan sang prathana pani gardachhu .antama yastai-yastai kabita padirahanu bhanne aasha pani gardachhu .

Comment on ` रणभूमिबाट ‘ (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: S.J.KARKI

Sun, 20 Jan 2008 13:33:27 +0000

Bhola ji,
Thanku tapaiko yo sirajna ati ramro lagyo feri yestai naya naya sirjana haru hami prabasi nepali haru ko majh ma layunu huncha bhani asha ka sath ahilay lai bida tapaiko din haru shuvan bitos bye bye.

S.J.KARKI
MACAU

Comment on उज्यालो भो पूर्व दिशा (गीत /गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: dibya -----------bhai

Sun, 20 Jan 2008 11:55:54 +0000

srinkhala baddha rup ma aaun chetana ka jhilkaharu. dherai jhilka milera rako banna hami pani saghaunechhaun. badhai chha INERA SIR.
dibyachurabhai@yahoo.com
dunsari.
hal;malaysia.

Comment on उज्यालो भो पूर्व दिशा (गीत /गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: dr nischhal

Sun, 20 Jan 2008 05:37:27 +0000

daju, sarai ramro 6 .prabasma euta sahityako itihas korna aatur tapaiko kalamlai mero lakh koti koti salaam !!!!

Comment on नपुंसक समयको विरुद्ध .. (कविता) - लारा by: Mijash Tembe

Fri, 18 Jan 2008 15:58:53 +0000

Lara Didjyu……..
Atleast u have a courage to write like this poem. You are great didi, This is what our nation is looking for. And we are looking for like this thought in todays poems. keep it up . Wish you all the best. Bye.
Mijash Uk.

Comment on उज्यालो भो पूर्व दिशा (गीत /गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: 6uchchaa SANJAY

Fri, 18 Jan 2008 12:00:46 +0000

badhai 6 malaysia maa sahittyek aandhi lyauna safal mero dost narathunge lai…

Comment on ` रणभूमिबाट ‘ (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: Biyan Rai

Thu, 17 Jan 2008 12:07:33 +0000

भोला जी बाराफमाया काबुल को जीबनसँग मिठा रचना गर्नु भएको रहेछ बधाई छ अझ धेरै यस्तै खाले मन छुने अरु कबिताहरु लेख्न्नु होला

Biyan
Kabul UK MOD
WH-1
biyanr@yahoo.com

Comment on लांकुरीको रुख अनि म ( कविता)-आशा भुटिया by: BJ Bnatawa Rai

Thu, 17 Jan 2008 11:39:38 +0000

Assha sis tis is really very nice to know your feelings all as a poem, which people can explain his/her feelings from the bottom of heart really that is a one nice poem or nobel. Very nice poem keep it up.

Comment on गर्जंदै उर्लने बर्खाको खहरे होइन म.. (कविता) - सागर राई by: BJ Bnatawa Rai

Thu, 17 Jan 2008 11:34:03 +0000

nice poem, keep it up

Comment on ` रणभूमिबाट ‘ (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: ram chandra neupane,bagram

Wed, 16 Jan 2008 07:01:42 +0000

wow wonderful i gave to him thanks .i read it and really its touch my heart hoping soon he also creat like this article 4 us …..in last i also gave him thanks again and again .i said thats in my innercourte of heart u r really poet bhola

Comment on ` रणभूमिबाट ‘ (कविता) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: seesangrg

Tue, 15 Jan 2008 19:40:35 +0000

pakka daaami …………

Comment on गीत - दिलिप योन्जन by: chok tamu

Sun, 13 Jan 2008 21:37:13 +0000

dear sir.
it`s very popular web hknepal.com i like very much i am always open it all the time but i was send 2 Nepali songs. that is not show on in web why? i was send to hknepal2@gmail.com so this emil is correct or rong i dont no.any awy it is very wel web.

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: tirtha raj pun

Sat, 12 Jan 2008 14:07:54 +0000

first of all namaskar ko sathi dhilai bhaye pani nava barsa 2008 ko hardik mangalmaye subhakamana tapai ko geet yeso herda tapai desh ko halat dekhera nikainai gambhir hunu bhaye jasto lagyo ra sathai dukhi pani j jasto bhaye pani geet chahi ekdam ramro chha ani arko kura geet matra lekhnu hunchhaki geet pani gaunu hunchha yedi geet gaunu hunchha bhane ek dui geet net.ma hali dinu paryo antama subhachintak tirtha raj pun.

Comment on बन्दरगाहमा… (कविता) - लारा by: Mijash Tembe

Fri, 11 Jan 2008 13:29:15 +0000

Hi Lara Didjyu,
Very very nice poem. It reminds me late poet Parijat. There is a hidden power in your pen. Beautifully crafted with strong mythological thought. I love u didi , keep it up.
Bhai Mijash

Comment on गीत - गजल.. - बुद्धि तेम्बे “माइला” by: saru

Thu, 10 Jan 2008 15:04:55 +0000

hay ! Maila Keep it up. ur Dai from uk

Comment on गजल - सञ्जय राई ‘छुच्चा’ by: saku thapa

Thu, 10 Jan 2008 14:11:26 +0000

maya ghar bhitra bhanda ghar bahira hunda anubhab hundo rahechha. ratriyeta prati chinta ratra bhitra rahanda bahira basda hundo rahechha, mayalu, pariwas sanga dadha rahanda uniharuko mayale sataudo rahechha, sachchai rastra bhitra baser shasan garnelai ratriyeta prati khasai chinta nai chhain, kursi, paisa, pad mai chha. sari mitho lagyo tapaiko gajal ani bhitraka bhan
saku thapa
charkhandi, bhaktapur

Comment on नपुंसक समयको विरुद्ध .. (कविता) - लारा by: dj

Wed, 09 Jan 2008 05:17:36 +0000

great poem keep it up.

Comment on बन्दरगाहमा… (कविता) - लारा by: dj

Wed, 09 Jan 2008 04:56:28 +0000

woow it’s great poem i really enjoyed. tara lara ji eutaa sabda bujhna sakina,saayad ma literature maa kamjodi bhaerahola.’maachinde’ ko artha kehola? kripya bataai dinu hunchhaki…..dhanyabaat.

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: दिल पुन

Tue, 08 Jan 2008 18:38:14 +0000

पशन ज्यु, धेरै दिन पश्चात एउटा मीठो र मर्मस्पर्शि कविता पढ्न पाइयो । खुशी पनि लाग्यो दुख पनि लाग्यो । गरीबी हुनुको नियतिले हामी नेपालीले जता पनि दुख पाएका छौं । सम्मानजनक नेपाली भएर बाँच्नको लागि पहिले त देश समृद्धि हुनु पर्यो । यो दिन कहिले आउंला ?
दिल पुन, जर्मनी

Comment on बन्दरगाहमा… (कविता) - लारा by: hello

Tue, 08 Jan 2008 02:09:46 +0000

hello phung.’lep(tika)
are you tika thapa , ke ho testo lara ji sanga behetrai gunaso gare ramro hola baru

Comment on के छ खबर, हजूरको अचेल (गजल) - मिजास तेम्बे by: saru

Sun, 06 Jan 2008 11:03:36 +0000

Hay Mr. keep it up u r doimg gre8…………………..
ur saru

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: bhim thapa

Sun, 06 Jan 2008 06:10:00 +0000

prem tapai ko yeas gheet ma real bastabiktA CHHA -THANKS ……..HAPPY NEW YEAR / FROM MACAU

Comment on हावासँगै उडिदिन्छ.. (गीत) - सुरेन्द्र इङ्नाम by: Sangita Subba

Sun, 06 Jan 2008 01:22:47 +0000

Geet t ramro lekhnuhudo rahecha. It is good to see your artical on web, keep it on,

Comment on तिमीसंग बोलुं बोलुं लागेको छ (कविता) - नगेन्द्र ईङनाम “आठराईली” by: nisam

Thu, 03 Jan 2008 08:38:47 +0000

congratch sir ! sewaro hai .tara ma rai la ..lekhai ma dam chha hai ani afno bhanne kurako ati khayal rakhnu bhako ma .. don take any commercial break on it bhanna chahanchhu..ani khuse ko chi hatma samtne matrai badi maja lagejasto chha ni khutta chalauna majja hunara sakela sili ma..?

Comment on एउटा चिठी परदेशीलाई (गीत) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: nisam

Thu, 03 Jan 2008 08:31:24 +0000

khai kati eutai kura lekhu akhira lekhne kura pani ta tyahi nai ho sir dukhkha namannu hola ma sabai janako bhanai prati 100% sahamati chhu .k ma euta prasna garna sakchhu?yadi sakchhu bhane….k yo tapai ko sabda kohi nischit byaktiko lagi ho?compose ra vocal ko lagi haina bhane k malai din saknu hunchha..?n i would like to thankz for hknepal.

Comment on अमेरिका तान्न साथी (गीत) - राकेश कार्की by: nisam

Thu, 03 Jan 2008 08:22:04 +0000

Hi Rakes G!naramro ta bhannai mildaina..ajha udangine prayas po garna parla ki !!! heart touching ..i agree with sameer..ani Anita g ko bare pardes ko marma pardeshilainai thaha hudo raichh…aile prabasi nepali ko palo jasto chha palo nachhutaunu hola sir …tyaha baserai bhaepani aafno pan chhadnu bhachhaina kusiko kura haina..????/

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: januka thapa

Tue, 01 Jan 2008 11:13:50 +0000

prem ji tapai ko geet ma sachikai jiban ko basbikta lukeko chha malai ta ekdamai man paryo aasa chha chhitai arko geet padhna paune chhu bhanera.

Comment on गजल - सञ्जय राई ‘छुच्चा’ by: dr nis6l

Mon, 31 Dec 2007 04:08:22 +0000

daju jyadai ramro gajal lekhnu vaya6. khusi lagyo. pragati le sikhar chumos.I wish u all the best.
yours dr nis6l

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: maya lama

Mon, 31 Dec 2007 01:04:00 +0000

prem hajur lee sarai ramro geet lekhi dinu bhayechha sarai nai khusi lagiyo jiban ko bastabik kur rhecha hajur lai thanks a lots..n happy new year………

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: pooja

Sun, 30 Dec 2007 22:19:40 +0000

what a nice song ? i liked it. keep it up la prem ji.

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: kumar

Sat, 29 Dec 2007 02:46:32 +0000

prem ji mero manko kura lekhi dinu bhayechha dhannebad tapailai,ma pani aafnai aafanta haru bata dherai thagiyeko chhu,

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: binu grg

Sat, 29 Dec 2007 02:36:21 +0000

wow nice song keep it up prem

Comment on खै कसको पर्ने हो भर ? (गीत) - प्रेम पुन by: Birahi Maila

Fri, 28 Dec 2007 13:25:33 +0000

WOW Prem ji tapaiko geet ma sachii kai yetharta pan lukeko chaa thanks a lot……………..

Comment on गजल - परिहास सुब्बा by: subba BK

Wed, 26 Dec 2007 17:48:03 +0000

Parihas ji
fortunetly i got chance to read your ethnic (book) collection of 65 gazals. really a great gazals you have written… हुनेलाई रात बिरात निंद खोस्ने सुन बेईमान

भरियाको नाङ्गो आङ पिल्स्याई दिने नुन बेईमान

रङ्गसँगै मुस्कुराउँछ फूल फुल्दा माया पनि

याद खुल्दा अझ धेरै बहकाउने जून बेईमान keep it up wish all the best of you.

Comment on बन्दरगाहमा… (कविता) - लारा by: www.phung;lep (tika)

Mon, 24 Dec 2007 02:41:55 +0000

Lara ji kabita sunen maile. ramro lagyo.but jasari lekha, jasto lekha, je bhana,jaso bhana.antya ma gaali chahin momy lai nai kina ?Agyat ji le ta lekhhi nai halnu bhayo but hajoor pani………..sayed chhori ko janma ……………….bhanera purkhha harule free of charge bhannu bhaye ko hoina rahechha ni lara ji ?aba mero coment herera bhannu hunchha hola.I am uttar aadhuneek kaal ko saahitya kar female bhanera.but ek patak aafai bhitra dubera hernu hola who is the momy…………………………..e >

Comment on गजल - सञ्जय राई ‘छुच्चा’ by: DIBYA RAJ

Sun, 23 Dec 2007 09:59:17 +0000

Badhai chha sanjaya sir. samaya lai pachyaka nepali hoina nepali lai pachyako samaya sandharbhik gajal ka lagi. baru aaunda din ma pani yastai ra aajha ramra gajal padhna paune apekchhya gardachhu. Dhanyabad.
Parichit mitra
(Dibya”chura”bhai)
sunsari, tarahara
Hal; Taminjaya, malaysia

Comment on के छ खबर, हजूरको अचेल (गजल) - मिजास तेम्बे by: Mijash Tembe

Sun, 23 Dec 2007 09:50:40 +0000

Hello Kumar g & kasasang
I read ur comments and i m very happy. thank you very much for giving me such beautiful comment.
Mijash Tembe

Comment on के छ खबर, हजूरको अचेल (गजल) - मिजास तेम्बे by: Kumar Karki

Sat, 22 Dec 2007 17:10:56 +0000

Mijas ji,

Ma tapailai kasari bhanau tapaiko gajal ma ke ke cha bhanera. Ma afu nai tadha bhaeko bela hajur le sachchi nai malai nai samjhera ta lekhnu bhaeko haina yo gajal. malai tyastai lagyo hai Mijas ji. jey hos ma tapaiko safalta ko kamana gardachhu,

Keep it up………

Kumar Karki
kumar1985karki@yahoo.com
Doha, Qatar

Comment on बन्दरगाहमा… (कविता) - लारा by: sauram

Sat, 22 Dec 2007 14:32:15 +0000

Srijanatmak Nai hunuhudorahecha.
Prayas gardai januhola.

Comment on के छ खबर, हजूरको अचेल (गजल) - मिजास तेम्बे by: Kasasang

Sat, 22 Dec 2007 11:00:30 +0000

Hi Jagalgo!
very Beautiful Gazal. Keep it up… ………………

Comment on तिम्रो प्रतीक्षामा (कविता ) - पुरुषोत्तम न्यौपाने by: Sangeeta Sharma

Thu, 20 Dec 2007 16:53:49 +0000

yasari ghurki lagauneko pachhi k parirahanu bhaeko ni?hami pani k kam chhau ra.ek patak matrai I LOVE YOU bhannusna Im ready for you.hahahahahahhahahahahahahhah ………………. sachchai bhanne ho bhane mero e-mail ID pathai dinchhu hai………..la?

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: कान्छा

Thu, 20 Dec 2007 08:19:09 +0000

पशन ज्यू मन छुने कविताको लागि धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद , कलमले निरन्तरता पाइरहोस् , यही शुभकामना । गुरूङहरू साहित्यमा धेरै न्यून छन् त्यसमा तपाइको उपस्थितिले त्यो अभावलाइ पुरा गरोस् भन्ने चाहन्छु । प्रगति र सफलताको कामना सहित
कान्छा तमु
पोखरा

Comment on घोडचढि अनि घोडा (कविता) - मोती चाम्लीङ by: yogen

Thu, 20 Dec 2007 06:28:20 +0000

kabita ko mukh kata farkeko ho bhanne bujhna kathin paro chamling ji.
anyway kabiko man sanga hubahu kasaiko man pani mildaina.
nice poem keep it up

Comment on रातो सूर्य (कविता)- रमेश पल्लव by: कान्छा

Tue, 18 Dec 2007 22:25:26 +0000

Nice poem Ramesh ji , please keep on writing.

Comment on बन्दरगाहमा… (कविता) - लारा by: कान्छा

Tue, 18 Dec 2007 22:22:43 +0000

राम्रो कविताको लागि लारा जीलाइ धन्यवाद , लेख्ने कलमले विश्राम नलियोस् है ।

Comment on अनाम छापामारको नाममा (कथा) - इच्छा पूर्ण राई by: कान्छा

Tue, 18 Dec 2007 22:17:09 +0000

धेरै राम्रो कथा पढियो ,,। अहिलेको नेपालको वर्तमान घाउहरू बल्झेको छ कथामा ।

Comment on तिम्रो प्रतीक्षामा (कविता ) - पुरुषोत्तम न्यौपाने by: prakash pandey

Mon, 17 Dec 2007 17:32:29 +0000

HI purushottam dai tapaiko poem malai chitta bujho yarr.ktko ghamandalai chahi todna saknu parchha yasari nai.all the best

Comment on तिम्रो प्रतीक्षामा (कविता ) - पुरुषोत्तम न्यौपाने by: Keshab Khadka

Mon, 17 Dec 2007 17:28:00 +0000

J hos girl friendlai ghurki lagauna jannu bhaeko rahechha Purusottam g tapaile khushi lagyo.ani malai pani yasari nai ghurki lagauna maan lagyo.

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Mon, 17 Dec 2007 02:18:59 +0000

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Comment on अनाम छापामारको नाममा (कथा) - इच्छा पूर्ण राई by: देश/ विदेशको समाचारः एचकेनेपाल डट कम » अनाम छापा

Sun, 16 Dec 2007 10:17:30 +0000

[…] - इच्छा पूर्ण राई यो कथा होइन र पनि कथा भएको छ । यो कथा सहरले नसुनेको कथा हो र सहरबाट केहि टाढाको कथा हो। पूर्वको प्रसिद्ध डाँडा ट्याम्के र मैयुँको विचको सानो गाँउको कथा हो। यो गाउँ हिउदमा हिउँमा सुतेर विताउछ अनि वर्षामा हुस्सु र भूइँ कुहिरोले घ्याप्प ढाकिएको हुन्छ। यो गाँउको नाम छैन र अनाम भएको छ। आफू अनामे भएर पनि स्वच्छ, शान्त र पर्यटकीय छ। तर सदियौ देखि हासेको छैन। हाँस्न सकेको छैन। सानो गाउँ जहाँ वस्ने प्रत्येकको खुट्टा हरिनाठले पटपटी फुटेको छ भुइचालोले पृथ्वीको धाँजो फटाएको झैं। ती फुटेका खोपिल्टाबाट हल्का रगत वगिरहेको हुन्छ तर पनि वास्ता छैन। ती हरिनाठे खालि खुट्टाले कालो तुषारो र हिउँमा छ्याम छ्याम टेकेर हिड्दा लाग्छ वनमान्छे हिडेको हो। यो रहर होइन वाध्यता हो। र, यो कथा पनि होइन यथार्थ हो। यो संघर्षशील अनाम गाउँ पिखुवा वगेदेखि मलबुक वगेदेखि छदैछ। तर अझ सम्म ६० घर भन्दा बढ्न सकेको छैन। (more…) […]

Comment on गजल - सञ्जय राई ‘छुच्चा’ by: debendra khapung

Fri, 14 Dec 2007 07:40:38 +0000

ramro lekhnu bhayechha, tara yaspalta hamilai naunai hknepalma pathaunu bhayeko ma dhanyabad.
pragati garnus hai

sangaiko sathi
kl, malaysia

Comment on गजल - मिजास तेम्बे by: nYn

Tue, 11 Dec 2007 21:26:37 +0000

well, this gazal is not created by poet. it’s from someone’s collection book Mizas g, so sorry for u. don’t COPY hai from now on. u r really perfect in this gazal section. SAME gazal is written by someone already in my collection book,…!!?

Comment on पाँच हाइकु - सकु थापा by: nYn

Tue, 11 Dec 2007 21:22:20 +0000

well, nice try, but not related with ‘HI-KU’ rules,so those 1 & 5 hikuz are must b out..!! however wishing u all the best for further more days. nYn from uk.

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: Devraj Rai

Sun, 09 Dec 2007 09:23:06 +0000

Gurga dai tapai ko yo kabita dherei ramro chha ajhei yastei kavita haru ajhei pani lekhdei janu hola tapai lai mero suvkamana chha .

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: Paru

Thu, 06 Dec 2007 10:54:15 +0000

So sweet i like this poem
thankx

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Paru

Thu, 06 Dec 2007 10:50:52 +0000

Very Nice

Comment on देवकोटा बनेर आए - (गजल) होमनाथ सुवेदी by: Paru

Thu, 06 Dec 2007 10:44:30 +0000

How nice i like it
Really u r Gajal kar u know ??
very nice .

Comment on पैंचो (गीत जगल) - दीपक जडित by: Paru

Thu, 06 Dec 2007 10:40:49 +0000

Deepak Jee i want give to thankx becouse it;s nice Gajal . I like that . Really Life is that . thankx

Comment on आउँदा जाँदा मुस्कुराउथी (गीत गजल) - दिलिप योन्जन by: Paru

Thu, 06 Dec 2007 10:19:52 +0000

Yestai ho delip jee man6ay haru sabai jana selfish hun6n. dont worry. gajal ramro 6 aajha ramro lekhnu hola thankx

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: Paru

Thu, 06 Dec 2007 10:15:14 +0000

Kasto maya layou kalay birsana lai garo bhayo
kun dinama ayou kalay birsanalai garo bhayo

hidda diddai dobatoma harauda
kaslay dhoka diyo kalay bhanalai garo bhayo

…………………………………………..
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FILL IN THE BLANKS

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: Paru

Thu, 06 Dec 2007 10:10:02 +0000

Hello Your Gajal very cut & sweet i like that . But dont to be seriour coz all human beings are thats . ok

Comment on वेअर्थ (मुक्तक) - मान थापा by: Man Thapa

Wed, 21 Nov 2007 11:47:53 +0000

oh thanks pasan G
really a first article in my life which took place at ur dynamic site.
but no one know wot abt this muktak mean….!

Comment on छिन्ताङ्ग (कविता) - राजेश राई by: rai aanko

Wed, 21 Nov 2007 07:57:33 +0000

first of all thax alot for a chhintang kabita,
hamile birsana lageko chhintang kandalai aaja kavi rajesh raijiule kabita marphat samjhaidinu vakoma, aaune dinharuma pani yestai utkrista kabitaharu herna pau jun kavitamarphat hami pathak harule k hi sikne nd janne mouka pauna sakou.thanku

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Nitanta or purushottam

Tue, 20 Nov 2007 20:03:13 +0000

Thanks pashan dai for your heart touching poem.All the best.

Comment on आवाज दबाउन खोज्ने - राकेश कार्की by: k20 thapa

Tue, 20 Nov 2007 15:54:46 +0000

bahut ramro cha aajhai pryash garnush hai

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: Rai yang pitang chhu

Sat, 17 Nov 2007 05:56:22 +0000

utkrishta gajalko laagi Gajalkar Jagat navoditjilai kasari dhanyabaad diu ma sanga upayukta shabda nai 6ina.

Comment on तिमीसंग बोलुं बोलुं लागेको छ (कविता) - नगेन्द्र ईङनाम “आठराईली” by: preeti ingnam

Sun, 11 Nov 2007 18:34:28 +0000

daju namaskar kabita dherai ramro rahechha keep it on

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: rai bdr

Fri, 02 Nov 2007 15:27:39 +0000

Jagat g namaste uk ko halkhabar thikai hola haina g .tapaiko kabita ramro thiyo ra 6 keep on writing all the best pathekalee now Iraq

Comment on अनेसासद्वारा वासिंटन डिसीमा देवकोटा जयन्ती by: Bidur Devkota

Fri, 02 Nov 2007 07:21:10 +0000

I am glad to browse sites in Nepali.

It would be better if the fonts used be more readable.

Thank You

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: bhogen

Thu, 01 Nov 2007 00:13:16 +0000

Nathunge jee, geet bina sangeet nai sangeet maye chha, pragatiko shubhakamana ani badhai.

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: Dip prakash Rai

Mon, 29 Oct 2007 13:51:02 +0000

hajurko gagal ta bahut ramro lago tara tapaiko radif la kafiya autai vhayakole badda kata kata namileko jasto anu vhaw vhayo. yaslai alikati maehanat garera milainu vhaya sunma sudhanda hunthoki?

Comment on छिन्ताङ्ग (कविता) - राजेश राई by: Dip prakash Rai

Mon, 29 Oct 2007 13:23:24 +0000

Itihasle nabirsepani itiharsko panamanai simit rahana lageko Khuku Chinting Kanda carntiko auta jowalanta udharahan ho. Dudha umle panichi pokhincha vhanne ukhan jastai soja sagha janta mathi sahi jallad harule ladeko manokhushi hepaile nimtayako unmukti ho.
Kabita ramo cha badai cha hajurlai

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: Sirjana

Sun, 28 Oct 2007 17:13:57 +0000

अशान्तिको खेतबारीमा
शोकको फूल फूलाउनेहरु
साधुको भेषमा हत्या गर्नेहरुको
रातो हातहरुलाई सेता बनाउने
रिपोर्ट लेखकहरुका काला अक्षरहरुले
दाल पुरै कालो भएको पुष्टि गरिसकेको छ
तर
सयौ वर्षदेखि
भारी बोक्ने बानी परेका गधाहरु
भारी बिसाउन जानेकै छैनन्
त्यसैले त
भारी नपुगेर उनीहरु
कहिलेकाहि रुने पनि गर्छन् ।

Comment on एउटा चिठी परदेशीलाई (गीत) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: preema

Sun, 28 Oct 2007 12:31:05 +0000

hello
bhanja ji sarai ramro man chhune geet lekhnu bhaya chha
thanks la anyway i am ur chhayma
diktel

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: preema

Sun, 28 Oct 2007 12:25:40 +0000

sorry
jagat sir
in the place of j
g bhayako ma

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: preema

Sun, 28 Oct 2007 12:23:47 +0000

hello,
Gajat sir namaskar
its a very good poem
keep it up
i am ur student of s.s.h.s.s diktel

Comment on आउँदा जाँदा मुस्कुराउथी (गीत गजल) - दिलिप योन्जन by: Rai yang pitang chhu

Fri, 26 Oct 2007 14:55:00 +0000

ati utkrishta gajalko laagi gajalkaar Dilip Yonjanji dhanyabaad ani
aauda dinaharuma pani yastai mitha gajalko aasha gardachhu.

Comment on घरको चिठ्ठी (कविता) - देव गुरुङ by: PRAKASH KUMAR ROKA

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 10:17:50 +0000

Hi !!
It’s me prakash kumar now from New Delhi (INDIA)…………..
Ilike to read your poem …………….
And Isaw your all kinds poems ………………………
It’s are very very good and nice ……..

Thanking so ver much
“DEV RAJ GURUNG JEEE”
Keeep alway’s prakash

“FRIENDLY”

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: dharma datta dhakal

Mon, 15 Oct 2007 03:25:00 +0000

hi asha ji thank u so much .malai gajal man paryo .

Comment on छिन्ताङ्ग (कविता) - राजेश राई by: Rajesh Rai

Sat, 13 Oct 2007 17:56:53 +0000

Dear all
thanks for respoms
writer_bhumiputra@yahoo.com

Comment on मन राखेर माया दिएं (गीत) - दीपक जडित by: KUNNI

Fri, 12 Oct 2007 05:45:56 +0000

THE LYRIC OF THIS SONG TOUCH MY HEART…..IF YOU GET A GOOD COMPOSER MAY BE U CAN GET SUCCESS…KEEP IT UP…

Comment on गजल - परिहास सुब्बा by: sumi lmbu ktm thamel

Mon, 08 Oct 2007 08:53:18 +0000

tapai ko gajal dhyrai ramro lagyo aasha cha aajhai pani yasta gajal haru padna paincha bhanne

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: sumi

Mon, 08 Oct 2007 08:47:45 +0000

ramrocha tapai ko kabita

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: Chetana

Mon, 08 Oct 2007 03:20:57 +0000

jagat dai namaste
tapai ko poem 1year ko antaral ma padheko yo 1st poem ho.its very interesting poem .nepal ko jaldo baldo samsya ko kura haru ani nepali ko baniko barema bebgyatmak kura dherai nai ramro lagyo .hunata tapaiko pahilako poem haru pani ati nai ramra thiye.yo chahi best lagyo .
All the best
Chetana

Comment on समय नायक (कविता) -कृष्ण बजगाईं by: Krishna Bajgai

Sat, 06 Oct 2007 20:51:37 +0000

Thanks Ramesh Bhai.
Krishna
bajgaikrishna@yahoo.com

Comment on समय नायक (कविता) -कृष्ण बजगाईं by: Ramesh Niraula

Sat, 06 Oct 2007 03:50:08 +0000

Krishna dai! Thanks a lot for your good poem. I am so happy that you are in Belgium and you have been continuing your articles in literature.
Ramesh Niraula (Homnath’s Bai), California, USA

Comment on छिन्ताङ्ग (कविता) - राजेश राई by: BKC

Sat, 06 Oct 2007 02:28:32 +0000

jaha samma maile sune anusar rajas ji chintang kanda Dhankuta jilla ko khoku chintang bhanne thau ma surya bahadur thapa ko pala ma bhayeko ho yasko kartut ma swayam thapa pani parnu hunchha ra bristit khoku chintang dukyo ki arun susauda bhanne git ko bol lay pani dida chha……kabita ramro chha khoku chintang birsine choina itihas lay……………

Comment on आउँदा जाँदा मुस्कुराउथी (गीत गजल) - दिलिप योन्जन by: kishor, stafford, uk

Mon, 01 Oct 2007 18:06:35 +0000

really really nice ghazal… keep it up
xx

Comment on एउटा चिठी परदेशीलाई (गीत) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: mohan rai

Wed, 26 Sep 2007 12:28:28 +0000

Dear Bhola g
i would like to say thank you very much for your beautiful song. Its yeally really great . keep it up. I hope u will provede againg such kind of song , thank you
mohan rai
uk

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: indra jijibisha

Mon, 24 Sep 2007 05:01:57 +0000

jagat g , tapaiko kalam uk pugera pani na rokiyeko ma khushi lageko chha . kalam chalaudai janu hola .

indra jijibisha ( diktel 9 solma)
now malaysia

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: tika makkhim

Sat, 08 Sep 2007 17:48:15 +0000

hindekaa chhan dui tuppa jaraa jameenmaa tansera,
kaiyaun kaiyaun sajiv pancha tattwako bot //
herdaa hanshilo,rashilo, sukilo, khaailagdo,…….tara…,
sabaile bokera heendekochha sayaun chot //
ASHAA g tapaaiko geet, gajal, kathaa, kabita sabai herna
padna paaiyo tara muqtaq napa undaa merai muqtaq dwaaraa hajoorlaai taarifko bridge lagaai diyeko chhu.rachanaa haru sabai raamro chha keep it up hai ashaa di…..//

Comment on एक्काइसौं शताब्दीका भगवानहरु (कविता) - भरु ‘पल्’ by: tika makkhim

Sat, 08 Sep 2007 17:14:46 +0000

kabita bajandaar chha bharu G. tara k garne aajako jamanama yesto marma kasle bujh chha hola ra.cos.1600hundred gopini sanga lila rachne KRISHNA.aafnaai srimati laai sankaako bharmaa agni parikchya line RAM.chhorilai bhandaa chhoralaainai badhi kaakhi chyapne aamaharu.ANI no smoking ariama dhhuwan uda une.shu nagarnu bhhaneko thhaunmaa sh……….uuuu garne thhu nagarnu bhhaneko thaaunma thh…..u. thukne nagarnu bhanekai kurahru garneharuko haali muhaali bhaye pachhi.BHARU g manma peer ta parnenai bhayo yo mann tessai marnenai bhayo…..o ,thanks keep it up.

Comment on आउँदा जाँदा मुस्कुराउथी (गीत गजल) - दिलिप योन्जन by: bikram thakuri

Thu, 06 Sep 2007 16:38:28 +0000

aauda jada muskurauthi dherai mitho laggyo thank u

Comment on अमेरिका तान्न साथी (गीत) - राकेश कार्की by: anita

Sun, 02 Sep 2007 12:20:43 +0000

hello, rakesh sir,
i like ur geet, really u feel like that life in america
anita

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: anita

Sun, 02 Sep 2007 12:16:33 +0000

hello, dai i m anita from taman candana. i like to ur gajal.but why din’t u call to me.
anita

Comment on जानलाई त आको हजुर मकाउलाई भनेर (गीत) - नबिन बिक by: surya rai ''laxmi''

Sun, 02 Sep 2007 04:37:15 +0000

nabeena ji !!
yahale yasari nirasa nabhai aatma bala ra tapai satha raheka sabai meelera prayasa garnu hola. chhito\dilo hun6. yasko faisala hun6.yasari lekha press garnu bhayakoma hamilai pani kehi sajilo hune6. kinkee pahile nai hami hosiyari rahane chhau.

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: surya rai ''laxmi''

Sun, 02 Sep 2007 04:16:55 +0000

indra jee!!
‘’geeta gajala'’ lekha ko lagi ramro sabda samayojan garnu bhayakoma yahalai thak. we cann’t live without love.

Comment on गजल - दुर्गा राई by: dibya "chura" bhai

Fri, 31 Aug 2007 08:00:24 +0000

Dharai khusi lagyo
yatiramro gajal
padna payako ma
Dhanyabad………
DURGA JI

dibyachurabhai@yahoo.com
hal:MALAYSIA

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: aalu

Fri, 24 Aug 2007 11:18:14 +0000

KABITA AATI RAMRO
CHHA,
PROBABLY, BOY ALSO HANDSOM HOLA
GD LUCK

Comment on देश बिछ्टै दुखेको छ (कविता) - भरत लिम्वु by: jwalasing

Fri, 17 Aug 2007 00:19:59 +0000

nice one man, desh ko yatharthata boleko chha.
keep on writing !!!!

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: rama

Thu, 16 Aug 2007 22:54:04 +0000

hey jagat dai,
gosh u really have such a talent..u know im proud of you..just keep it up!!!
rama

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: jyoti sharma, germany

Thu, 16 Aug 2007 17:20:54 +0000

hi jagat
very good poem
well done
wish u good luck
keep on writing
all the best

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: Larag

Thu, 16 Aug 2007 12:25:24 +0000

Dear Jagat ji

I know how hard to touch the people’s heart but simply your creation has something that easily can drag the attention from the reader moreover, I should say……….you are superb! and fantastic writer among other contemporary writer. Love to read more creative writing.

Fan forever,
Lara g

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: Iswor Chamling

Mon, 13 Aug 2007 12:23:17 +0000

Jagat its a very nice poem… where are u hau AAJVOLI…
would u email me ur ext. no
Daju

Comment on एउटा चिठी परदेशीलाई (गीत) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: Iswor Chamling

Mon, 13 Aug 2007 12:19:34 +0000

Bhola g
I am quite not sure, r u the one i know or not? if you r or if u know me drop some words in i.chamling@gmail.com ….. i surprised u r in Kabul…
Geet ekdam ramro lagyo…

Iswor chamling

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: phul tamang, bakachol

Sun, 12 Aug 2007 04:15:05 +0000

Thanks for ur beautiful song

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: daure

Sun, 12 Aug 2007 03:53:18 +0000

Laure
dai ko kosis ramro chha.
God bless…..

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: kedar sunuwar"sangket"

Fri, 10 Aug 2007 02:32:52 +0000

yes, i as niyara reader and writer, many many congratulations, but i am not able to buy from any where!. so, could you please send me a address tha i can buy it and read.

cheairs

sangket

Comment on एक्काइसौं शताब्दीका भगवानहरु (कविता) - भरु ‘पल्’ by: biru881

Sun, 05 Aug 2007 10:06:59 +0000

भगवानको बारेमा औंला ठड्याउन खोज्ने यो मान्छे पक्का पनि बडो निडर होला।
हा— हा— हा—-!!!
just kidding hai भरुपल जि, जे होस् कविता राम्रो छ। जो कोहिले यस्तो subject choice गर्दैनन्, त्यसैले कबिजी धन्यवादको पात्र छन्। बधाई छ!!!

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: birendra rai

Thu, 02 Aug 2007 07:05:23 +0000

timi bina maro jiven jandaki nai hoina .
charai tera adharo cha ujalo nai chaina.
jharna pakha royo hola maro mana ruda
kasto bhayo maro man maya tada huda.
dada kada sunea bhayo hawa pani rokeyacha
hardai gaya bata haru beach bata ma ro kiyacha.
timi bina maro jiven jandaki nai hoina
charai tera fulai fulai cha tara basana nai chiana
hasu bhani hasnu bhanchu nasro chan e othes haru
chare pani dekhediana e atama ko chot haru.
yatra gardai jada jadai do bato ma chutteo .
mara man ko sapana haru sisa jastai phuteo .

Comment on छिन्ताङ्ग (कविता) - राजेश राई by: pushpa raj sapkota

Mon, 30 Jul 2007 09:51:29 +0000

your try is the best .that’ a best poeam.

Comment on छिन्ताङ्ग (कविता) - राजेश राई by: Raias

Sun, 29 Jul 2007 05:21:52 +0000

Chintang ko kanda bhanera ta suneko thiye. Kabita pani padey, tara bastab ma key ho tyo thaa bhayena…… kasailay khula parnu huncha ki..?

Comment on जीवन कस्तो-कस्तो? (कविता) - शिव प्रकाश by: aems

Sun, 29 Jul 2007 04:02:30 +0000

waa dame cha la ek damm ramro lago ne mali ta good

Comment on एक्काइसौं शताब्दीका भगवानहरु (कविता) - भरु ‘पल्’ by: nayan

Tue, 24 Jul 2007 23:47:01 +0000

Nice poem, congrates to Mr bharupal!!!!!!!!!

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: raj shrestha

Mon, 23 Jul 2007 14:24:56 +0000

hi pasan ji
thanks a lot for a such a great poem i like d very much your poem it is really great , what ever i know your poem has reality that is the good thing and that i always look f or in every poem that i found in your poem keep writing and creating such a poem and you are the rising star of nepali poeat , and i want to be your friend or any one if want to be my friend you people can mail me in thiks address my address is trnirash2002@yahoo.com and my contact no is 00977 9803180194

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: jp simkhada, usa

Sat, 21 Jul 2007 18:20:08 +0000

what a poem u wrote jagat! there is no words to explain the power of your writing. it just fantastic n marvellous!….keep it up

wish a good luck ahead

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: subas/ simrik/seema

Sat, 21 Jul 2007 18:15:45 +0000

dear jagat nabodit
namaste!
we are great fan of your writing. it so nice to go through your words which touches our heart. please keep going. we are sure you will be a great writer one day.

all the best

Comment on कस्तो पत्र लेखूँ ? ( कविता) - लारा by: subas

Sat, 21 Jul 2007 18:10:58 +0000

hi lara g,

making creation is more difficult than to do normal things. it is more more difficult to create good creation n u have done it…. congratz…..

with best wishes …..

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Prem Kumar

Tue, 17 Jul 2007 21:46:21 +0000

Pashan ji, Nice poem. Please keep writing .

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Prem Kumar

Tue, 17 Jul 2007 21:04:31 +0000

Pashan ji, Very nice poem pls keep writing .

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: ram yakha rai

Tue, 17 Jul 2007 13:47:21 +0000

hi aasha sis…
i know ur kabita is verry nice like maile lekheko jasto but wher r u now i think u r now in hongkong rite?it’s ok 4 me coz i like ur kavita.n thats a grate sis….bye
from
kl selangor

Comment on एक झल्को प्रेम - लघुकथा - मिजास तेम्वे by: Chandra Gurung

Fri, 13 Jul 2007 06:25:07 +0000

Sorry! In the above comment, I don’t mean to say CONTRACTING. Plz, read the same word as CONTRADICTING.

With thanks, Chandra Gurung

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: Chandra Gurung

Fri, 13 Jul 2007 06:20:40 +0000

Sorry! In the above comment, I don’t mean to say CONTRACTING. Plz, read the same word as CONTRADICTING.

With thanks, Chandra Gurung

Comment on एउटा चिठी परदेशीलाई (गीत) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: RAJENDRA BHATTA

Wed, 11 Jul 2007 13:22:41 +0000

Dear bhola jee
Pradeshma rahanu bhayakya sampurna nepali dazu bhai haru lai ma pardesi mitra RAJENDRA KO TARPHA Batahardik mangalamaya subh kamana .
tapaile lekhnu bhayeko PARDESOKOMAYA
namak kabita sunera manmughda bhaye
yasko lagi hardik dhanyabat

Regards
Rajendra Bhatta

Comment on एक झल्को प्रेम - लघुकथा - मिजास तेम्वे by: chandra gurung

Tue, 10 Jul 2007 11:29:44 +0000

I have been reading your creations(poems, gajals, stories) in the various websites and blogs from time to time.
It is nice to see that you people write very beatiful poems, gajals, stories; managing time beside your busy army life. “Gun” and “Pen” are two contracting powers, but you have been trying to bring both of them to a meeting point. Surely, that point is a beautiful sight.

Great! Keep it up
Chandra Gurung From Ktm

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: chandra gurung

Tue, 10 Jul 2007 11:27:09 +0000

It is nice to see that you people write very beatiful poems, managing time beside your busy army life. “Gun” and “Pen” are two contracting powers, but you have been trying to bring both of them to a meeting point. Surely, that point is a beautiful sight.

Great! Keep it up
Chandra Gurung From Ktm

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: nirmal

Tue, 10 Jul 2007 05:18:27 +0000

ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे G Hajur Le Ta Geet Ta Sarai Ramro Lekhnu Hudorahecha Ni Hai ? Lekhnu Ta Bhayo ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे G Tara Voice Kasto Cha Ni Hajur Ko ? Aadi Voice Pani Ramro Bhayako Bhaya Aaba Gayan Chetra Ma Prabes Garda Hunthiyo Ki

Comment on रिसाई दिंदा (गजल) - राकेश कार्की by: raj shrestha

Mon, 09 Jul 2007 12:26:17 +0000

rakesh, ji,
your gajal is really beautyful, it has reality of peoples life , it is happining now a days in peoples life but we can not say to any one you have done really good job, i hope to read your, creation in coming future as well,
one thing i want to tell you this poem you wrote for me it is related to my life, and your poem gives good education to those people who can not understand others problem and they only want to live comfertabley and they do not care of there responsibility, thanks a lot for your such a nice poem
raj shrestha from nepal

Comment on आगो (कविता) - स्नेह सायमि by: caspina

Mon, 09 Jul 2007 10:56:23 +0000

sayemi dai, namskar, malai sayed samjhanu hunan yehale tar maile birseki 6na tyo sahitye sandhya ko jamghat,dai eutee vugol ka hami aghee vannu parda tapaiharukee sadvab ma hurkeki maile yesari yeteerekha ko aafantaharulai electrryka tar haruma khojnu parda dukha lageko cha vane sanggee sukha ko pani aavas gariraheki chu kin ki tyo hajurlai sabee bidesiyeka aankha harule pani padna paunu vayo,dai samjhanu huncha vane malai hajurko contact chodidinu hola yeho comments box ma, hajur kee uhi abhagee bahinee ………………….

Comment on म जलेको टुकी (कविता) -प्रतीक चाम्लिङ्ग by: sunita

Sat, 07 Jul 2007 14:12:34 +0000

HI PRATIK RAMRO 6 HAE.,,

Comment on अमेरिका तान्न साथी (गीत) - राकेश कार्की by: Sameer Subba

Fri, 06 Jul 2007 16:31:46 +0000

Very nice, heart touching Gazal.

Comment on एउटा चिठी परदेशीलाई (गीत) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: Narendra Prashad Bhatt

Fri, 06 Jul 2007 08:02:51 +0000

Dear friend
I am very Happy .I saw your song in HK Nepal . Ma timi lai dharay Dhanyabad dinu chahanchu kin ki pardesh ma basda man chahi taistai huncha . je bhaye pani pardeshi ko man bujhaidiyai timi le

dharai dharai dhanyabad ch
Narendra
nabinnepal2006@yahoo.com

India gurgaon

Comment on मन राखेर माया दिएं (गीत) - दीपक जडित by: Tallaghare

Thu, 05 Jul 2007 23:29:29 +0000

I like it hai lie bhayechha , sorry .

Comment on मन राखेर माया दिएं (गीत) - दीपक जडित by: Tallaghare

Thu, 05 Jul 2007 23:28:27 +0000

Nice song Deepak Jadit . I lie it . Keep it up .

Comment on आउँदा जाँदा मुस्कुराउथी (गीत गजल) - दिलिप योन्जन by: wanem, hong kong

Wed, 04 Jul 2007 17:08:11 +0000

Beautiful gajal ! keep it up.

Comment on एउटा चिठी परदेशीलाई (गीत) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: malati rai

Wed, 04 Jul 2007 13:33:12 +0000

thanks for the nice creation.

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: hom / prakesh

Wed, 04 Jul 2007 03:06:56 +0000

K 6 ENGLAND KO KHABAR,
“PARBATE “MA PANI DEKCHHU,
ANYWAY…
KEEP IT UP..
PRASESH JOSHI N ME BATA SAMJANA N..
GD LUCK…..

Comment on हामी गधाहरु भारी बोकिरहेछौं (कविता) - जगत नवोदित by: bharupal /united kingdom

Tue, 03 Jul 2007 22:38:41 +0000

सधैं नबिनतम श्रीजना पाठकलाई दिने एक होनाहार कवि तथा गजलकार जगत नबोदित, वास्तवमै सत्यनिष्ठ साहित्यकार हुन्।
उमेरले तन्नेरी तर ज्ञान र चिन्तनले पाको भैइ सक्नु भएका कवि नबोदितको रचना यो HKNEPAL मा पढ्न पाउदा खुशी लगेको छ। वहाँको कविताको म ज्यादै नजिकको पाठक हुँ।
सरल भैइकन पनि गहन अर्थ बोक्ने, ज्यादै गहिरो बिषय बस्तुलाई सरलिक्रित्(चिरफार गरी) भावनात्मक तरलतामा परिवर्तन गर्न सक्ने वहाँको दक्षतालाई योपाठक सधैं कदर गर्दछ।
एक्कासौ सताब्दिको संघारमा अैइपुगिसक्दा पनि देशका हामीहरु केवल गधाको नियती भोगिरहनु पर्दाको स्रिंखलाबद्ध यथार्थताको उजागर कविज्युले अत्यन्तै कलात्मक ढंगले प्रस्तुत गर्नु भएको छ।
साहित्यकार जगत नबोदित ज्युको अन्य रचनाहरु फेरी पनि नियमित रुपमा पढन पाउं।

Comment on देश बिछ्टै दुखेको छ (कविता) - भरत लिम्वु by: rajesh thapalia

Tue, 03 Jul 2007 14:13:31 +0000

the poem itself speak out the true bitterness of our nation. desh dukhu ra nepaliko man dukhnu eutai ho. ahile ta deshle naya muhar pherdai chha. asha garau, bharupal ji ko kavitale pheri yastai niyati bhoknu pardaina hola.
kavita, jyadai markik chha. just keep it up !!!!!!!!!!!

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: jiwan kuma rai

Mon, 02 Jul 2007 19:05:59 +0000

कबिता
फुल्दै कोपिलाहरु झरी रहयो पातहरु
कस्तो नाता गासी दियौ दैब
येउटा बाङ्गो अर्को बाङ्गो
मिल्दै नमिल्ने आत्माहरु।
मिलन हुन धेरै लाग्छ भन्थे भन्नेहरु
बिछोड हुन एकै छि न भन्थे भन्नेहरु
बिद्रोहले बास लियो आत्मा भित्रन
कङ्गाल बने तिम्रो मेरो प्रेमहरु आत्माहरु।।
जीवन कुमार राइ
आम्चोक ७ चित्रे ईलाम

Comment on एक्काइसौं शताब्दीका भगवानहरु (कविता) - भरु ‘पल्’ by: ramala/Iceland

Mon, 02 Jul 2007 18:02:11 +0000

very nice poem. desh ko yathartha boleko chha.
kavi jyu lai mero badhaii chha ani I wish him bery best of luck wahabat pheri pani yastai kavitako apeksha garinchha ..

Comment on छिन्ताङ्ग (कविता) - राजेश राई by: rai yang pitang chhu

Mon, 02 Jul 2007 01:52:36 +0000

utkrishta kabitako laagi rajesh raijeelai muri muri dhanyabaad.

Comment on एउटा चिठी परदेशीलाई (गीत) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: deepak rai

Sun, 01 Jul 2007 16:32:47 +0000

pardesh ma raheko pardeshi haru lai ghardesh bata afno priyasi haru ko bhawana lai sametera lekhiyeko yo geet sarai mitho lagyo.yasko lagi bhola g lai thanks.

Comment on एउटा चिठी परदेशीलाई (गीत) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: r.c.neupane bagram ,afganistan

Sun, 01 Jul 2007 13:21:09 +0000

साहित्य प्रती रुची राखेने मेरा मित्र भोला जि लाई म कसरी दीउ धन्यवाद नेपालि शब्द कोस मा नै मैले पाइन शब्द मन अनी मुटु छुने ओहा को गीत ले हामी बिदेस्मा बस्ने अनी साहित्य प्रती अभिरुची राक्ने को लागि उदाहरण बनेको छ ।ाआफ्नी जीबन सङिनी लाई चतक्क्कै छाडेर बिदेस्मा रमाउने को लागि सङिनिले लेखेको पत्र सर्सर्ती पढ्नलाई कहाँ सकिन्छ र मन अनी मुटु लाई सम्हालेर पढ्नु पर्ने ति शब्द साचैहाम्रा लागि उपहार हुनेछन र अन्त मा म ओहा को अर्को गीत को प्रतिक्षा गर्दै फेरी ओहा लाई धन्यवाद दिन लाई चाहन्छु ।

Comment on कस्तो माया लायौ सानु (गीत गजल) - ईन्द्र नारथुङ्गे by: bishnu Prasad luitel

Sun, 01 Jul 2007 07:24:14 +0000

bahut ramro lagyo kavita padera yesari nai pathididai garnu hola aani pirrty phont ko yesma menej hudo rahenchha ki kyaho maile pathune kosis gare tara mile na kehi sujhab bhaye pliss mali mail gari dinu hola

Bishnu luitel
thumpokhara 7 tamadi syangja nepal

Comment on एउटा चिठी परदेशीलाई (गीत) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: shasi Paudel

Sat, 30 Jun 2007 05:57:24 +0000

Thanks a lots for your nice song go head do growth again in your future time .

Comment on एउटा चिठी परदेशीलाई (गीत) - भोला बिक्रम राई by: s.jung karki

Sat, 30 Jun 2007 05:45:29 +0000

भोला जि
नमस्कार
फेरी पनि तपाईं ले हामी प्रबसी नेपालि हरु माझ नयाँ सिर्जना यच के कम मार्फत पढनपहुँदा एक दम खुशी लागेको छ र यसको लागि म फेरि धन्यबाद् दिएको छु
र यो गीत ले पनि पहिला को झै मन छु ने खाल को छ
र यस गीत ले बिदेश म बसी बिदेसी रमझम मा भुली आफ्नो मुटु भन्दा माया लाग्नी संगी लाई भुली बिताउने हरु लाई यो गीत लएे अबसे मन छु एको होला र उनी सङि हरु ले भन्न् नस्केका मन क कुरा यस् गीत ले भनी दिएको छ यस् गीत् लय् हामि जो भुलि बसेक छौ धेरै साम्ये सम्म् तेस् लै पनि झस्कएको छ अब आशा छ फेरी अर्को तपाईं को सिर्जना ले फेरी नयाँ सन्देश बोकेर हामी प्रबासी नेपालि हरु यच के क् म्
माझ अौछ भनी आशा का साथ् र नयाँ नयाँ सिर्जना हरु को लागि अग्रिम शुभ कामना
एस् ज् ग कार्की
हाल मकाउ

Comment on छिन्ताङ्ग (कविता) - राजेश राई by: Chandra Gurung

Fri, 29 Jun 2007 03:46:41 +0000

Chintang Killing- which took place during Panchayat Regime will be always remaining as a black spot in Kirati History. I am sure the bitter memories of this incident would be always inspiring the Kiratis of Eaastern Nepal to stand up and fight against the wrong and bad masters.
I salute Kishore Thulang , who sang a very touching song on this incident. And also thanks to Rajesh Rai ji for writing a nice, short and sweet, poem on this massacre.
Regards, Chandra Gurung

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: HARI GURUNG

Mon, 25 Jun 2007 16:21:45 +0000

Bhola Ji, It is too nice song who r lok song lover.when i sing it,actually i reach own my lovely villege. In this song i donot get any comment.So thanks a lot. AT last, Such this, another song will be make same type of song in coming future.

Comment on मेरो सपना (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ्ग by: sunita

Sun, 24 Jun 2007 14:32:13 +0000

HI
pratik g.tapaiko kabita sarai mitho lagyo.yestai sadhai bhari unnatiko paela aghi badho la.uhi sathiiiiiiii …….

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: Sharan jung karki

Sat, 23 Jun 2007 06:28:19 +0000

Bhola ji
Sarbapartham bola ji lai namskar ra tapako sahitay pati ko ruchi ra ani get sangit parti ko moha ra ani tapai lay sirjan gareko geet padhna pauda harsa lay ek dam bhivor vayeko chu ra yes geet padhan pauda tapai lai hirdaye dekhi nai dhanybad diyeko chu ra asha cha feri tapaiko aru naya sirjana haru padhan paunechu ra yo tapai ko geet lay hami bidesh ma basne sampuran nepali haru lai afno gau thau sathi sanghi haru ko yad puran tajapna gareyeko cha sayed malai jastai aru bidesh ma basani daju bhai didi bhaini haru lai pani vayeko cha hola ra asha cha tapaiko aru naya sirjan haru padha pauchu ma lagyeta sampuran aru bidesh ma basne sathi haru lay ra antim ma tapai ko yo geet sangit parti ajha falos fulos vane asha ka sath ma tapai lai yes Hk .com marfat suvakamna ra yesri hami bidesh ma basne sampurna sorat majha purai diyeko ma dhanye bad dinchanchu HK.com pawiwar lai.
Sharan karki

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: sumlima rai

Sat, 23 Jun 2007 06:24:34 +0000

hi bhola dai tapaile kasto ramro git gaunu bhako tapaiko gile mero gaughar ko yad ayo ra tapaile yesari gauko yad haruma git lekhnu bhako ma dherai dherai dhannya bad cha hai agami din haru ma pani yestai git haru lekhnu huncha bhanne pura asha lidai biha la uhi sis
sumlima
hal hongkong

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: pardhesi_kanchha

Sat, 23 Jun 2007 06:19:14 +0000

hi bhola ji tapaiko gitle ta malai mero gauko yad ayo yestai yestai git haru tapaile agami din haruma pani rachana garnu huncha bhanne pura asha cha ra tapailai dherai dherai dhannya bat cha git lekhnu bhako ma ra tapaile bharsak gaunu pani huncha hola la bharsak tapaile recarding pani garnu hola ra agami din haruma tapaiko gana sunne asha lidai bida la
pardhesi kanchha hal japan

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: Hari thapa magar

Fri, 22 Jun 2007 12:12:17 +0000

la bhola ji dhilai bhaya pani tapai lai derai derai dhande bad chha bidesh ma basera bhaya pani sachinai nepal ko bhir pakhama basera maya priti lagaune khal ko git lekhanu bhaya cha to git ka sabda haru samjhadata sachinai gau pakha haru ma gayara git gau gau jasto lagayo yasai gari desh dekhi bideshma basne haru ko man jitnush tapailai yahi nai subhkamana

” hari thapa magar”

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: Gopal Bartaula

Fri, 22 Jun 2007 12:11:17 +0000

दुनियाको जिन्दगीमा फूलिदिने बाह्रमासे फूल हौं कि तिमी ! बिश्वास घात गरि मुटु घोच्ने शुल हौं कि तिमी !! तिम्रो सानो मुटुको टुक्रा बाड्छौं कति जनालाई ! प्यासीहरुको तृष्णा मेट्ने पानीको मुल हौं कि तिमी !! afghanistan kabul gopal bartaula chitwan nepasl

Comment on देश प्रेम (कविता) - मोहन गुरुङ by: Dilu gurung{DIL}

Tue, 19 Jun 2007 06:23:07 +0000

da,mohan dherai rammro chha yesari feri pragati gardai janu abase safal hune chha thanks,,,,Dilu grg,kerabari 1gorkha

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: RC neupane,bagram,

Sat, 16 Jun 2007 03:19:34 +0000

Thanks a lot thats artical which was creat by bhola bikram rai .i dont have any comments ……keep and touch heart .how can i give to him thanks i dont have any words……god bless to him in his future ..hope so comming soon we need another same as like …..i said that in my innercourte of heart he is great.

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: deep

Thu, 14 Jun 2007 16:19:35 +0000

thanks for nice song.

Comment on पैसा देखेपछि महादेवको तीन नेत्र (कविता) - विष ‘हारूवा’ by: pushpa raj sapkota

Tue, 12 Jun 2007 07:56:41 +0000

hi ke chha .daji ramro chha hajur ko prayas

Comment on देश प्रेम (कविता) - मोहन गुरुङ by: pushpa raj sapkota

Tue, 12 Jun 2007 07:51:36 +0000

hi bro very nice . i respect u .u go ahead

Comment on तिमीसंग बोलुं बोलुं लागेको छ (कविता) - नगेन्द्र ईङनाम “आठराईली” by: Raj Kumar phombo

Mon, 11 Jun 2007 18:32:57 +0000

KABITA SARAI RAMRO 6 HAI KUNGBA ! KEEP IT UP!! PLZ.

Comment on आगो (कविता) - स्नेह सायमि by: ananta shrestha

Sun, 10 Jun 2007 05:59:43 +0000

i bought your poem collection pul ra parkhakharu and found the poems are excellent.

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: santosh grg

Sun, 10 Jun 2007 04:55:50 +0000

ohooooooooo bhola bikram rai jii,tapai ko geet le ta malai ghar jau jau jasto po lago,…………
tanahun,damauli
haal-Doha,Qatar

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: sanu

Sat, 09 Jun 2007 13:39:37 +0000

nice

Comment on एक्काइसौं शताब्दीका भगवानहरु (कविता) - भरु ‘पल्’ by: shuBha chinTak

Sat, 09 Jun 2007 12:58:23 +0000

pakKa dami chha…keeP it up…

wish yO’ all da bEst..

aRu pani hErna paunE asha ma ahiLe lai bidA

frm

shuBha chintak

Comment on हाक्किम र हाक्किम्नी (कविता ) - परिहास सुब्बा by: nikita

Fri, 08 Jun 2007 22:42:13 +0000

malai ta timra harek article haru mann parchha….. hehehehe

Comment on लौ न हो साथी हो (कविता) - कृष्ण के सी “छाल” by: bimal

Fri, 08 Jun 2007 10:56:46 +0000

Krishna
Ramro cha lakhadai gara na la

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: yang pitang chhu dharan haal hk

Thu, 07 Jun 2007 15:35:40 +0000

atinai utkrishta geetko laagi bhola bikram raijeelai muri muri dhanyabaad didai aauda dinharuma pani yastai ramra geet-haruko apechha gardachhu.

Comment on एक्काइसौं शताब्दीका भगवानहरु (कविता) - भरु ‘पल्’ by: mr. vishowakarma,korea

Thu, 07 Jun 2007 13:07:54 +0000

ATEANTAI WASTAVIK,
KASAIKO AKHA NA PUGEKO POINT MA YEDARTHA HALERA LEKHNU VO AUDI RAMRO

Comment on देश प्रेम (कविता) - मोहन गुरुङ by: mr. vishowakarma,korea

Thu, 07 Jun 2007 12:56:08 +0000

MOHAN JI
VERY NICE.GO AHEAD

Comment on “विलोमा पल्केकाहरु” (कविता) - रुसाहाङ चेम्जोङ by: chandra gurung

Tue, 05 Jun 2007 11:11:14 +0000

I have been reading your poems and articles in the various websites. You have been coming up as a good poet.

With best wishes,
Chandra Gurung/Ktm

Comment on एक्काइसौं शताब्दीका भगवानहरु (कविता) - भरु ‘पल्’ by: chandra gurung

Tue, 05 Jun 2007 11:09:12 +0000

Creativity is essential for the creation of a wonderful poems. In this poem, the writer has scaled the height of the creativity.

Regards,
Chandra Gurung/Ktm

Comment on देश प्रेम (कविता) - मोहन गुरुङ by: chandra gurung

Tue, 05 Jun 2007 11:07:30 +0000

Ramro Kosish!

With best wishes
Chandra Gurung/Ktm

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: Chudamani Gautam

Sun, 03 Jun 2007 15:32:04 +0000

Congratulation to you Mr. Bhola Bikram Rai. This is soul of Laure. I accept like this other song also. So that please try others song also. Thanks

Comment on पर्देशीलाई कति धेरै .. (गीत) -भोला बिक्रम राई by: sunil kumar pradhan

Sun, 03 Jun 2007 04:03:42 +0000

bhola bikram rai ko yo geet dherai pardeshi haru ko man chhune khal ko chha . yasto mitho geet ko lagi rai g lai dherai dherai dhanyabad chha.

Comment on लौ न हो साथी हो (कविता) - कृष्ण के सी “छाल” by: akle

Fri, 01 Jun 2007 09:01:18 +0000

के सी जी दलरले च्‍याप्‍दाको पिँडा पहिले पर्देश आउनुहोस अनि थाहा होला ।
thanks

Comment on तिमीसंग बोलुं बोलुं लागेको छ (कविता) - नगेन्द्र ईङनाम “आठराईली” by: Raini Khushe

Fri, 01 Jun 2007 08:17:05 +0000

La ramro limbu dai ko suseli haru lai ‘raini’ khushe (kanchhi) Simma (thuli) harule sunchhan hola. Ho ta ni kina kuri rakhne jabo valentine baru ‘Sakela’ ‘Chasok Tangnam, nai aha kya ramro hunchha……………haat nai samatera nachna pahine kya kaida!!!
Next year bhetual hai………………….Sewaro Adangbase!!!

Comment on हाक्किम र हाक्किम्नी (कविता ) - परिहास सुब्बा by: Nogen Hang

Wed, 30 May 2007 22:38:40 +0000

great poem…. keep it up parihas ji

Comment on एक्काइसौं शताब्दीका भगवानहरु (कविता) - भरु ‘पल्’ by: Nogen Hang

Wed, 30 May 2007 20:25:22 +0000

भरूजीतपाईकोलेखाईसािचकैबलियोछयसकवितामा। i love such kind of poems, which has strong feelings. thanks for your great poem and keep on writing….

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Bikal Gurung

Wed, 30 May 2007 17:49:29 +0000

Pashan jyu,
Tapai ko kabita ekdam marma sparsi lagyo. yastai kabita lekhdai garnu hola.

Comment on कवि टंक वनेम, साँघुरी र बुढासुब्बा (समीक्षा) - मुलीवीर राई by: Tej kumar Rai (sampang) 30.may.2007

Wed, 30 May 2007 17:48:30 +0000

mulibir jee ko samikchhya manan yogya chha.kabee tanka jee ma yasta dherai sambhhawana dekhhinchha.jho in future ma ramra ramra kabita haruko appekchha garchhau.

Comment on बैँस (कविता) - टंक वनेम by: Tej kumar Rai (sampang) 30.may.2007

Wed, 30 May 2007 17:16:51 +0000

Tanka jee
Keep it up Sweet poem hopely we see in future more and more.Thanks
I wish you the best.

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Jyoty

Fri, 25 May 2007 21:56:34 +0000

Great Poem, keep on writing.

Best Regards
Jyoti, UK

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: kamal

Fri, 25 May 2007 21:49:42 +0000

Pashan jee, tapai ko kawita sarai marma sparshi lagyo. lekhdai garnu hola.

Thanks

Comment on पैंचो (गीत जगल) - दीपक जडित by: Bishu

Thu, 24 May 2007 08:03:17 +0000

gajal vanda pani priya ko comment po mindblowing lagyo ta. yeso ta gajal pani kam chhiana. Jadit ji wel done !

Comment on २४ घण्टा (कविता ) - दिलिप योञ्जन by: dipak tamang

Wed, 23 May 2007 09:11:29 +0000

hi dilip je,
welldone! nice poem.life is same as your poem.there is a one saying in hindi ‘JO NAHAI KHAYAHE USKA LALCHI HE,JO KHEYE HE USKA KO POSTA HE’.life ma ke huncha ab ke huncha bhanera hido phagat kehai huncha tara soche jasto kaile hudaina.but life is full of optimistic and be optimistic.struggle to exist.just struggle.

thank you!

Comment on लुट्यौ श्रीपेच …- देव गुरुङ by: Manoj Lamichhane

Mon, 21 May 2007 15:38:37 +0000

Tyo Taa Ho Hai !!!

Comment on देश बिछ्टै दुखेको छ (कविता) - भरत लिम्वु by: Chandra S. Gurung

Sun, 20 May 2007 07:04:15 +0000

Bharatmani Chanwang ji,
Namaskar!

Read your comment on my poem. And scrolling down, came across this peom of yours. Great yar. Actually, It is difficult to know that Bharupal is the real Bharat Limkbu. hahaha.. ……Anyway, recently I came to know that you have your own anthology Swadesh ko Yatra also. I can say that you are a good poet, full of potential. I would like to have your email. So, that we can furture continue our friendship for the mutual benefits.
Keep up your writing process…
Regards, Chandra S. Gurung
chandu_901@hotmail.com

Comment on रोगग्रस्त देश (कविता) - चन्द्र सिं गुरुङ by: Chandra S. Gurung

Sun, 20 May 2007 06:24:34 +0000

Sammukh, Bharupal, Nilan Bhai, Rik and Jyoti Ji,
Thanks!
For the positive and inspiring comments on this poem of mine. Actually, I am not that good in playing with the words to give birth to the beautiful poems. This poem is just a skeleton representing the present condition of our Motherland. I tried to focus on a problem out of many faced by our Nepal.
Bharupal (Bharatmani Chonwang) ji, just recently I came to know that you have an anthology titled (SWADESH KO YATRA) in your credit. Hope to read some of your beautiful poems in the coming future.
Nilan Bhai, also writes good poems. Hope you have been utilizing your good time in creating wonderful poems these days. Thanks to all, once again.
Regards,
Chandra S. Gurung
chandu_901@hotmail.com

Comment on रोगग्रस्त देश (कविता) - चन्द्र सिं गुरुङ by: Rik gurung,pkr.

Sat, 19 May 2007 13:24:40 +0000

this pictorial poem of present Nepal is very real indeed.
thanks alot for beautiful poem n’ keep it up,wish u all the
best for future creation.

Comment on पैंचो (गीत जगल) - दीपक जडित by: Priya

Thu, 17 May 2007 04:56:25 +0000

wah ! wah ! Deepak Jee sarai ghatlagdo geetgazal lekhnu bhayechha . lekhdai januhola .shubhakamana. “AAJA RAAT PANI TA KOLTE FIRDA FIRDAI BITYO” mitho lagyo.

Comment on रोगग्रस्त देश (कविता) - चन्द्र सिं गुरुङ by: jyoti chhetri,belgium.

Wed, 16 May 2007 15:55:01 +0000

hello chandra ji,dherai ramro lagyo.yesari nai tapai ko ramro man kabita ma prastut garera hamilai pani sikcha ra aananda dilaudai garnu hola.dhanyabad.

Comment on रोगग्रस्त देश (कविता) - चन्द्र सिं गुरुङ by: Nilan

Wed, 16 May 2007 14:19:39 +0000

Excellent poem! Yakdam ramro Samaya Saapaykchaa !

Comment on पैंचो (गीत जगल) - दीपक जडित by: Binay

Wed, 16 May 2007 07:17:34 +0000

nice ghajal.keep writting

Comment on भूपिको सम्झना (कविता)- चन्द्र सिं गुरुङ by: Chandra S. Gurung

Tue, 15 May 2007 02:36:49 +0000

Devchan ra Nogen Limbu ji,
Namaskar!
Thanks for the encouraging comment. From the language point of view, the poem is not that powerful, yet thought of writing this poem in the sweet memory of the Late Poet Bhupi Sherchan, as a tribute to his service to our society and literature.
To be added, Bhupi Sherchan had written a request letter to the Editor (Rochak Ghimire )of Rachana bi-monthly literary magazine to mention his name as भूपी, but in this poem it is written भूिप. Hope it doesn’t make any difference.

Regards, Chandra S. Gurung

Comment on देश बिछ्टै दुखेको छ (कविता) - भरत लिम्वु by: santosh/japan

Sun, 13 May 2007 12:57:29 +0000

भरूपलको नवबर्षको कविता ज्यादै मन पर्‍यो। समसामयिक बिषयमा श्रीजीत उक्त कविताले हामी प्रदेशिलेलाई सांच्चै देश दुखाएको महशुस गरिरेहेका छौं।
देशको बागदोर सम्हाल्ने सरकारमा माओवादीहरु पुगिसक्दा सेमत बेनी रोएको आभास अैइरहेछ।
हांङ्देवा र ओलङ्चुगोला उस्तै अभावमा बाँचिरहेछ।
नयाँ बर्ष एक दिन पिएर के भो र? बिकराल अभावहरुले त हामीलाई पलपल पीइरहेको हुन्छ।
कविता बढो सान्दर्भिक छ, कवि जी! बधाई छ।

साम

टोकियो, जापान ।

Comment on म जलेको टुकी (कविता) -प्रतीक चाम्लिङ्ग by: jaskumar rai

Sun, 13 May 2007 07:51:52 +0000

तपाई को कबिता राम्रो लाग्यो ।

Comment on म जलेको टुकी (कविता) -प्रतीक चाम्लिङ्ग by: jaskumar rai

Sun, 13 May 2007 07:47:28 +0000

pratik jee khushi lagyo ni …….tapaiko choto kabita sundar kabita ko tuki jasto gindagi , hami bachi rahechou ………… kun khushi ko lagi bachi rahecho tha chaina ma pani utter khojee rahechu ……..wish u all the best its me jas kumar (9841215672}

Comment on रोगग्रस्त देश (कविता) - चन्द्र सिं गुरुङ by: bharupal

Sat, 12 May 2007 10:17:10 +0000

कबितले देशको यथार्थ बोलेको छ। आफु पनि यथार्थबादी बिचार लाई प्रशय दिने स्रस्ठा भएको नाताले बधाईको दुई शब्द कोरेको छु।
देशलाई यसखेर सांच्चै अप्ठ्यारो ठाउँमा पिलो आएको छ।
एकतिर देशका प्रबुध्द नेताहरु भनाउदाहरुले देशको मुटु दुखाई रहेका छन् भने अर्को तिर एक्काशौं सताब्दिका भगवानहरुले (राजा ज्ञाने र यसका पुछ्रेहरु)
ले देशलाई टी बी लगाइ रहेछ।
तर अब देशले अबस्य नै निकाश खोजिरहेछ।
अब तराई पहाड र भवार चुरे प्रदेश होइन - देश दुख्नु पर्छ।
बाहुन-क्षेत्री, जनजाती, अछुत कामी दमैइ होइन- मानबता दुख्नु पर्छ
सांच्चै अब राजतन्त्रको पिलो निचोर्नु पर्छ।
अब नेताहरु को खिल निकल्नु पर्छ।
यती मिठो यथार्थ पराक कवितका लागि धन्यवाद कवि जी ।

Comment on रोगग्रस्त देश (कविता) - चन्द्र सिं गुरुङ by: sammukh

Sat, 12 May 2007 02:13:51 +0000

jyadai gatilo kabita rahechha.

Comment on पैंचो (गीत जगल) - दीपक जडित by: Lilu Bastola (Morang,Koshi,Ithara-7,Nepal)

Fri, 11 May 2007 17:23:39 +0000

Great !!! Bro i am intested this songs

Thanks,
Lilu

Comment on २४ घण्टा (कविता ) - दिलिप योञ्जन by: Laxmi

Fri, 11 May 2007 07:25:41 +0000

Hi Dilip
This is Laxmi…….your high school mate hey buddy! nice creation, lovin’ it and wish to read more creation form you.

Comment on २४ घण्टा (कविता ) - दिलिप योञ्जन by: indra wanem

Thu, 10 May 2007 09:52:50 +0000

Dear Dilip
This is the best gajal typed kabita you ever published, I like it.
wel done !
keep it up.

Comment on देश बिछ्टै दुखेको छ (कविता) - भरत लिम्वु by: radha khanal

Thu, 10 May 2007 06:51:18 +0000

bharat limbulai dherai badhai chha
kabita ramero lago

Comment on “मेरो इतिहास टिष्टाले सुसेल्छ” (कविता )- रुसाहाङ्ग चेम्जोङ by: Bhab

Wed, 09 May 2007 22:49:53 +0000

Rusah hang ji it’s a nice poem… keep on writing…..
and

Daer all
just check it out http://bhab.wordpress.com/

thank you

Comment on “मेरो इतिहास टिष्टाले सुसेल्छ” (कविता )- रुसाहाङ्ग चेम्जोङ by: रुसाहाङ चेम्जोङ

Tue, 08 May 2007 11:34:19 +0000

हो नि मित्र इतिहा न त मागेर पाउछ न त खोसेर नै खोसिन्छ इतिहास इतिहासनै हो वतर्मान होइन । तपाईको हौसला नै म र म जस्ता कलम चलाउनेहरुको प्रेरणा हो । र इतिहास सम्मालने र भत्काउने जिम्म वा अधिकार तपाइ र हामिहरुको हातमा सुम्पिएको छ । अब हामि निकै माथि उक्लि सकेका छौ त्यसैले हाम्रो पुर्खाहरुको इतिहास अर्थात भाषा सहित्य धर्मलाइ सम्मल्ने काम म र तपाइ जस्ता युवाहरुको हो । तपाईको हौसलालाई आत्म सथ गर्दै म निरन्तर अगाडि बढन सकु आगामि दिनहरुमा पनि तपाई र तपाई जस्ता भवना बुजेदिने व भवनाका महाजनहरु प्रस्सत भेटन सकु भन्दै तपाइलाई ह्रदय बटै धन्यवाद दिन चाहान्छु ।
रुसाहाङ चेम्जोङ

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: suku limbu

Mon, 07 May 2007 09:46:37 +0000

Hi Aasha didi I love you very much ,
how are you thear i hope you fine

hajurko kavita maile here kasto ramro lagyou ma uk aayera pani hk nepal ko sahayale didi ko sabai lekh rachana haru hernu payekoma ma aafulai dherai vagyamani samjhinchu . didi lekh haru yasarinai sadhai vari herirahanu pau vandai bida chahanchu . bye nad teke care

suku

Comment on मुक्तक -शिव शर्मा चञ्चल by: deepak pandey

Sun, 06 May 2007 12:54:55 +0000

SHIVA JI TAPAIKO MUKTAK ATI NAI RAMRO CHA RA BHABISYA MA AJHAI RAMRO BANAUNE KASOSIS GARNU HUNCHA BHANNE ASHHA RAKHEKO CHU RA AHI MERO TAPAILAI NEW YEAR KO SHUBHAKAMANA.

Comment on मुक्तक -शिव शर्मा चञ्चल by: kishor

Thu, 03 May 2007 22:51:59 +0000

nice one!!
kishor, UK

Comment on गजल - कुमार कार्की by: kishor

Thu, 03 May 2007 22:50:32 +0000

what a class!!! keep it up
kishor, UK

Comment on “मेरो इतिहास टिष्टाले सुसेल्छ” (कविता )- रुसाहाङ्ग चेम्जोङ by: sammukh

Thu, 03 May 2007 15:14:44 +0000

राम्रो रच्नु भएछ । के गर्नु, तपाईं हामी आफ्नु पुर्खका गौरव् गर्छो । तर आजका नेपाली युबहरु भात्काउन लागि परेका छ्न् ।ितिहास् मेटाउन लागेका छ्न।

Comment on देश बिछ्टै दुखेको छ (कविता) - भरत लिम्वु by: suman/united kingdom

Tue, 01 May 2007 22:16:32 +0000

bhaupal ji ka, rachanaharu maile aghadi pani nikai padheko chhu. waha derai ramro lekhnu hunchha. ‘desh bichhattai dukheko chha’ kavitale pani desh ko katu yatharthata bokeko chha.
hamro deshle bhognu pareko niyatilai wahale suksham rupma chitran garnu bhayeko chha. wahako kavita padhda waha yatharthabadi kavi hunuhudo rahechha. rachanaka lagi dhanyabat chha.
suman uk

Comment on देश बिछ्टै दुखेको छ (कविता) - भरत लिम्वु by: phombo limbu

Sun, 29 Apr 2007 18:14:28 +0000

Limbu ko kabita le gau ghar ko yad dilayo hau !!!!
kabita ramro 6 keep it up!!!
yours -
lisibung@yahoo.com

Comment on शुभ-कामना, देशलाई ! (कविता) - शिव प्रकाश by: jyoti chhetri,belgium.

Sat, 28 Apr 2007 18:54:13 +0000

perfect,carry on.

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: narjit rai

Wed, 25 Apr 2007 22:59:58 +0000

aadarniya sahitya prrmiharu
namaskar
ma durra likhit AAKASH KHOJDAI JAADA niyatra tapaiharu le padnu bhayar sahayog garnu bhayako ma dhhannebad sathai yo comment box ma malai subhakamana dinu hune mitraharu ma pani dhhannebad dina chahanchhu. mero pustak padhe ra tapai haru bata ajhai partikriyaharu aai rahosh bhhanne chahanchhu
address
narjit_8@hotmail.com
thanks

Comment on जानलाई त आको हजुर मकाउलाई भनेर (गीत) - नबिन बिक by: mr. vishowakarma

Wed, 25 Apr 2007 11:50:09 +0000

ramro chha . bro. sahitya ma. koshish ajhai garnu la

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: DHAN

Mon, 23 Apr 2007 17:11:49 +0000

KEHI BHASIK TRUTI SACHINE HO BHANE KABITA UTTAM HO, KABIYATRI LAI BADHAI .

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: sk rai

Mon, 23 Apr 2007 07:45:02 +0000

badhai chhai hai narjit jee

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: bijendra paagal

Thu, 19 Apr 2007 16:48:37 +0000

Security ko posak dekhiyo bhandaa chahi man manai haaso uthe pani kehi farak pardaina. junsukai pesa ra samaysanga bagirahane sahitya laai anek partisthiti swikarya hunchha. I hope that a new creation will be studied any one day whenever on hand.
badhai chha srastaa laai
new year sangai subhakamanaa harek paila maa safaltaa milos
bijendra

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: shabnam

Wed, 18 Apr 2007 12:20:28 +0000

hi me shabnam rai if u want 2 join me than do add me in this add shabnam_rai2000@hotmail.com

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: pb thapa

Wed, 18 Apr 2007 11:19:36 +0000

bachhana ko lagi des bedes bhotarinu nai aakaash khojnu rahe chha thanks narjit

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: PRATIVA K.C. CANADA

Tue, 17 Apr 2007 08:43:52 +0000

Namaste, ASHAJI. Tapaiko kavitale malai aphno gaunko samjhana garayo. Mero gaun pani pahadma nai parchha. Katipaya thauko nam ta merai gaunko thau sanga mileko pauda ta jhanai mero pyaro gaun samjhera naramailo lagyo. Ekai chhinma udera gaun pugau jasto lagyo. Thanks a lot for such a touchy poem. most of the people from PAHAD will prefer it and will thnk you, because, you deserve it. Thank you. Yours, Prativa.

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Subhadra Ghimire

Tue, 17 Apr 2007 07:00:09 +0000

Sabina jee ! web site search garda tapai ko kabita padhna paye. Kabi ta hoina ma . Taipaini pathak ko nata le bhanda

kabita Dheri Ramro lago.

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Barsha

Tue, 17 Apr 2007 06:53:25 +0000

Ramro chha kabita !!!!!! Keep it up .

Comment on मेरी माया कस्ती छिन्? - नवीन वि.क. by: surendra

Mon, 16 Apr 2007 16:50:58 +0000

hi
i like u
meri maya kasti chen

Comment on मुक्तक -शिव शर्मा चञ्चल by: bharu pal

Sun, 15 Apr 2007 21:52:21 +0000

शर्मा जी, यो मुक्तक हो कि लघु कविता हो ?
जे होस्, लेखनलाई जारी राख्नु होला! शुभकामना छ ।

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: sabee

Sun, 15 Apr 2007 10:52:31 +0000

hello narjitji,
aakash khojdai jada tapaiko kriti prakasit garnu bhayekoma hardik
badhai chhar ra yesaigari aru kritiharu pani prakasit garnu hola
shubha kamana chha.
thanks.

Comment on मेरो सपना (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ्ग by: p.k.alone

Sat, 14 Apr 2007 15:54:35 +0000

sapana kebal sapana heo yo kailei satyata banni sakdaina re heo pratik gi yedi heo bhane mero sapanale kun mod linchha holla yo jimma hajur lai sumpidai tapaiko sahityak yatra safaltako lagi dherai dherai suvakamana.

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: tanka

Sat, 14 Apr 2007 04:56:38 +0000

hello baje namaskar,,,
Aja tapaiko kitab aakash khojdai jada bazar ma ayeko sunda ekdamai khusi lageko cha.jhos keep it up baje.wish u all the best always frm my side…. last words….derai derai badhai cha .yasari nai aaru pani kitab haru lekhdai janu hola ………bye.c u in next book

Comment on कवि टंक वनेम, साँघुरी र बुढासुब्बा (समीक्षा) - मुलीवीर राई by: Chandra S. Gurung

Sat, 14 Apr 2007 02:54:21 +0000

Banduk chalaune haat harule kabita, tyo pani ramra ramra kabita haru, korenu dherai dherai ramro ho. I appreciate it.
Banduk bokne Nepaliharu ko mutu komal hunchan, yo naei tulo pramaan ho. We are not willing to hold the guns and fight for the foreigners, but it is our helpness.
All the best for the poet.
Regards, Chandra S. Gurung

Comment on आगो (कविता) - स्नेह सायमि by: Chandra S. Gurung

Sat, 14 Apr 2007 02:38:53 +0000

Just recently happenned to read your anthology “Pul ra parkhalharu”. The most fascinating poem was “Kaeisa hota hai” It is a nice collection of fantastic and artistic poems . The language is simple and easy to understand and the poems carry the real features of our ppl and society.

All the best to you in the days to come.
Regards, Chandra S. Gurung from Ktm/Nepal

Comment on रिसाई दिंदा (गजल) - राकेश कार्की by: rajan

Thu, 12 Apr 2007 15:10:40 +0000

it is nice creation so we have to appriciate his creation

Comment on आगो (कविता) - स्नेह सायमि by: meera rai

Thu, 12 Apr 2007 05:34:42 +0000

Very strong expression which every nepali should read whether it is in diaspora or in hometown. please send other poems also

Comment on आगो (कविता) - स्नेह सायमि by: Devi Subba

Wed, 11 Apr 2007 16:13:57 +0000

I really impress with it,reason is i like present situation write, right a way through poim.Please keep going,i wish to see you.

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: mani k.rai[jpt]

Wed, 11 Apr 2007 03:26:19 +0000

akash khojdei jada kirti prkasan urnu baakoma hardik badhai tatha shubh kamana. antma utar utar prauatiko kamana urdachhu /

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: dante mohani

Tue, 10 Apr 2007 16:07:29 +0000

deurali ani dada harulai sachhi rakhi khayeko bacha haru timile birshe pani yo man le ta kaha birshana sakdo rahechh ra?

Comment on जानलाई त आको हजुर मकाउलाई भनेर (गीत) - नबिन बिक by: Gyan thapa

Mon, 09 Apr 2007 15:34:26 +0000

Naveen ji
Ggarma family ko yadle nasataune chahi hoyeina
tara drink garne bani naramrai ho ma pani testai bhayako
chhu.
INDIA
GURGAON HARYANA.

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: sweta

Mon, 09 Apr 2007 12:46:35 +0000

kriti prakashan garnu bhayako ma hardik badhai gyapan gardachhu

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: roj

Mon, 09 Apr 2007 12:42:18 +0000

pargati ko kamana garda chhu.
thanks

Comment on गजल - कुमार कार्की by: kumar barma

Mon, 09 Apr 2007 10:42:59 +0000

hiiiiii thik chha

Comment on जानलाई त आको हजुर मकाउलाई भनेर (गीत) - नबिन बिक by: netra thapa uk

Sun, 08 Apr 2007 21:47:30 +0000

thank you nabin ji . its very nice

Comment on आगो (कविता) - स्नेह सायमि by: samjhana limbu

Sun, 08 Apr 2007 12:34:59 +0000

MR. SAYAMI , A NICE POEM

Comment on आगो (कविता) - स्नेह सायमि by: अदिती राई

Sun, 08 Apr 2007 08:45:44 +0000

प्रिय सायमिज्यू,
तपाईंको धेरै कबिता सुने । तपाईंको कबिता सन ग्रह पुल र पर्खाल हरु पनि पढे । तपाईंका राजनैतीक र ब्यङ अनि प्रेम क कबिता अति राम्रा छन ।
तपाईंका मुक्तक हरु अझै मन पर्छन मलाई
मैले त तपाईंको एउटा मुक्तक लाई प्रेम पत्र बनाएर पठाएँ

Comment on आगो (कविता) - स्नेह सायमि by: priti paudel

Sun, 08 Apr 2007 08:35:39 +0000

The poem is political and relevant with present Nepali situation. Ithink we should make a program to listen high quality political poems as this poem.

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: dj

Sun, 08 Apr 2007 08:32:22 +0000

hahaha……….tejko office ma ho kothatama hoina yar…..hehehe…photo matra herne hoina yar padne kam pani garauna ho khapun sir.

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: khapung

Sun, 08 Apr 2007 00:49:22 +0000

Hoina ho pustak ko bimochan pani kotha tirai hune raichha, kam sek kam tyo security ko uniform ta lukaunu ni ho ……..

Comment on ‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा… ‘ विमोचित (+Photo) by: jeeban (dil r)

Sat, 07 Apr 2007 11:37:49 +0000

नर जित जि, बधाई त्तथा शुभकामना,
‘आकाश खोज्दै जाँदा ‘ कृति प्रकाशित गर्नु भएकोमा । & I hope such creations in futuere.

Comment on मेरो सपना (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ्ग by: nishan

Thu, 05 Apr 2007 12:47:15 +0000

pratik chamling jyu kasko sapanako lagi

Comment on माछो, एक्वेरियम र परिधि (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: प्रमोद दहाल्,

Thu, 05 Apr 2007 04:31:49 +0000

‘’आफ्नै गोडाले उभिन पाए
आफ्नै स्वरले बोल्न पाए
चिन्न पाए आफ्नो अस्मिता
मान्छे भएर बाँच्न पाए ।’

‘वास्तबमा सविनाले चाहेको जीबन त्यो जीबन हो
,जहाँ मानवता होस् नकि माछो जस्तो जीन्दगी
र एक्वेरियम्को पर्खाल् भित्र मात्र बाधिएको घेरिएको ।

यो कवितामा नारी स्वतन्त्रता र उतथानको
सुरिलो आवहान् पोखिएको छ । उनी नारीको
पक्षमा वकालत् गर्ने पछिल्लो पुस्ताकि कवि
हुन्।कविता प्रटिकात्मक छ जहाँ

नेपाली समाजलाई एक्वेरियम सँग दाजेकी
छिन ।कविता
पठनिय छ ।नारी पिडा र मर्म उनको
मुल लेखानिय हो ।
उनीलाइ अझ उत्तर उत्तर प्रगतिको कामना गर्छु,

प्रमोद दहाल्,
कोरिया
जन्जु विस्वबिद्यालय, जन्जु साईट ।

Comment on माछो, एक्वेरियम र परिधि (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: प्रमोद दहाल्,

Thu, 05 Apr 2007 04:29:39 +0000

‘वास्तबमा सविनाले चाहेको जीबन त्यो जीबन हो ,जहाँ मानवता होस् नकि माछो जस्तो जीन्दगी र एक्वेरियम्को पर्खाल् भित्र मात्र बाधिएको घेरिएको ।

यो कवितामा नारी स्वतन्त्रता र उतथानको सुरिलो आवहान् पोखिएको छ । उनी नारीको पक्षमा वकालत् गर्ने पछिल्लो पुस्ताकि कवि हुन्।कविता प्रटिकात्मक छ जहाँ

नेपाली समाजलाई एक्वेरियम सँग दाजेकी छिन ।कविता
पठनिय छ ।नारी पिडा र मर्म उनको मुल लेखानिय हो ।
उनीलाइ अझ उत्तर उत्तर प्रगतिको कामना गर्छु,

प्रमोद दहाल्,
कोरिया
जन्जु विस्वबिद्यालय, जन्जु साईट ।

Comment on मेरो सपना (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ्ग by: sneh sayami

Wed, 04 Apr 2007 10:07:26 +0000

कबिता धेरै राम्रो छ ।

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: gopal magar myagdi beni hal doha Qatar

Wed, 04 Apr 2007 05:53:18 +0000

गोपाल मगर> छैन जीवन को भरोसा नराख कसैलाई झुतो माया को आस्वा सन मा ।
नराख कसैलाई आफ्नो दोधारे जीवन को पर खाइ मा केही गर्नु छ यो अ्उल्ले जीवन मा । ।

Comment on भूपिको सम्झना (कविता)- चन्द्र सिं गुरुङ by: Devchan

Mon, 02 Apr 2007 16:46:19 +0000

Great work chandra ji. Nice tribute to Bhupi Serchan. Reminds me vividly of GHUMNE MECH MATHI ANDO MACHE. I would certainly read the whole book again today.

Regards
Devchan.

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: man

Sat, 31 Mar 2007 13:25:46 +0000

आशाजी,

कति गहिरो,कति उच्च छ
जति पढे पनि फेरि मन पर्छ

रचना साह्रै राम्रो खुलेको छ
मानौ आँखामै गुराँस फुलेको छ

मातृभूमिको असिम माया रहेछ
कर्मभूमिमा छाँयाले पछ्याएछ

कलमले साँचो लेखेको छ
स्रस्टालाई सम्पत्ति देखेको छ

मन
सिंगापुर्

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: narbahadur

Fri, 30 Mar 2007 10:08:31 +0000

आशा जिको कबिता धेरै सुन्दर छ यसअर्थमा छकी कला बिम्ब र बिचारको सुन्दर तरिकाले समायोजन गर्नु भएकोछ हामि नेपालिहरुमा हुनुपर्ने गुनछ। thanks hknepal from nepal

Comment on माछो, एक्वेरियम र परिधि (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: narbahadur

Fri, 30 Mar 2007 08:55:46 +0000

सम्भबछ पहाड भएर उक्लिन नदिभएर बहन केबल चाहाना हुनु पर्‍यो सविनाजी नियाल्न सकिन्छ सुन्दर बिहानि च्यात्नसकिन्छ अध्यारो पर्दाहरु र स्वतन्त्रताको झन्डा समाउन सकिन्छ बोक्न सकिन्छ स्वभिमान नारिको झन्डा सकिन्छ आफ्नै गोदाले उभिन नाघ्न सकिन्छ एक्वेरियमको तानाशाह परिधिहरु तपाईंको जस्तै सुन्दर चाहना हुनुपरयो सबैको। thanks hknepa from nepal

Comment on मेरी माया कस्ती छिन्? - नवीन वि.क. by: yam (Tanahun)

Thu, 29 Mar 2007 15:44:13 +0000

very nice,i like it
yam1987_pardesi@yahoo.com

Comment on प्रवासबाट श्रद्धाञ्जलि रंग र अक्षरमा (कविता) - मोति चाम्लीङ्ग by: narbahadur

Thu, 29 Mar 2007 10:36:49 +0000

आमाको छातिमा दुधको नदी बग्नु पर्ने मोति तर आजमात्र होइन लामो समयदेखि रगत बगिरहेकोछ ति गोली र खुकुरिको चोतमा पत्तिहरु बाध्ने दाक्तरहरुनै हराए जस्तोछ कलीला नानीहरु तितर बितर भएकाछन बाल्ने ग्यास छैन मत्तितेल छैन आवत जावत् गर्न दिजेल र पेट्रोल छैन पकाउने चामल छै सडकहरुमा चैत्रको धुलो अनि त्रासको साम्रराज्य बाहेक केहिछैन बसन्त रितुको आगमन सगै अनेकौ फुलहरुको बिचमा रमनु पर्ने नानिहरु तर छातीभरि पिडा अनि आँखाभरि आशुलिएर आफ्नि आमालाइ दोबाटो र जगल्, खोलाको किनार प्रत्यक गल्लिहरुमा खोज्दैछन नानिहरुले देखेछौ यो हरिबिजोक धन्यवाद मोती तिमीलाइ लाखौ लाख । thanks hknepal from nepal

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: man

Thu, 29 Mar 2007 05:16:53 +0000

आशाजी,

आशा राखेको भन्दा पनि धेरै मर्मस्पर्शी रचना
झरना बगेको जस्तै कन्चन्,पबित्र भावना

आशा मात्र होइन पूर्ण बिस्वास् नै छ
प्रत्येक अक्षरले नसा-नसामा प्रबाह गरेको छ

मन र साथीहरु

Comment on आमा (कविता) - भोगेन ‘एक्ले’ by: man

Thu, 29 Mar 2007 04:47:32 +0000

भोगेनजी,

तपाईको कबिता संग्रह प्रकाशित् भए पछि भक्कु पढ्नु पर्ला। साथै हिमकलाजी र नारायणजीको पनि बेजोड नै छ भनेर शङ्का छैन। हजुरहरुलाई संयुक्त रुपमा बधाई अनि धन्यबाद!

स्याबास्!

ट्याम्के छायाँ परिवार
सिंगापुर

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: bharu pal

Wed, 28 Mar 2007 00:08:01 +0000

आशा जी, मलाई तपाईंको शैली मन पर्‍यो । बिशेष मलाई गजल त त्यसै राम्रा छन्। सृजनाको क्षेत्रमा मलै यंहाको कविताको भविस्य उज्जल देखेको छु। मैले पनि यंहाको कमेन्ट्मार्फत् एउटा कविता पठाएको छु - कृपया, प्रतिकृया दिनुहोला।।।

साथी ‘मिशाल्’

साथी मिशाल्,
अब कसले भन्छ र - मेरो देश
सुन्दर शान्त र बिशाल
नेपाली हिमालको
पावन्दी चुम्ने तिम्रा लालयित ओठहरु
तराईका हरियाली फांटहरु टेक्ने
तिम्रा उत्साहित पाउहरु,
अब मेरो देशको लागि स्विकार्य भएन,
चाहेर, या नचाहेर,
घनिष्ट मित्रताको नाताले भनौं,
या त, सच्चा नागरिकताको हैसियतले भनौं
अब मेरो देशका लागि - तिम्रो आगमन
कदापी स्विकार्य भएन
मेरो सुन्दर देश् अब - सुन्दर रहेन।

हिजो,
मेरो सगरमाथालाई ‘तिमी’ जस्तैहरुले
अलिकति हगेर बिगार्यौ,
खन्ने र पुर्ने नाजायज आयोजनाहरु,
या बोक्नै नसक्ने अनमोल ऋणका सौगातहरु
गरिब नेपाली थाप्लाभित्रका,
धमनी, शिरा र केशिका हुदै
बगेर बिगार्यौ
अलिकति,योद्धा कलमवीरहरुलाई ‘तिमी’ जस्तैहरुले
लगेर बिगार्यौ,
साच्चै भन्नु पर्दा
मेरो देशको सुन्दरतालाई
यदाकदा, ट्वाके घंनटौके नेताहरुले खाए
थोरबहुत्, भगवान र वेत्ताहरुले पनि खाए,
मित्र, मिशाल्!
नेपालको सुन्दरता कसैलाई हजम भएन
मेरो शान्तिको देश अब - शान्ति रहेन ।
शान्ति खोज्नैपर्दा,
सेती जस्तै गहिरिएर,
कतै नेपथ्यतिर बगेकोछ
पाहुनाहरुले
अलिकति ‘शान्तिहरु’ मुंबैइ लगेको छ,
थोरबहुत्, हङ्कङ
अलिकति, साउदी र बैकंक लगेको छ
आफ्नै, आफैभित्रको बिरासतहरुले,
मेरो कैयौं ‘शान्तिहरुलाई
ठग्न सम्म ठगेको छ,
जात अनेक्,मुटु एकै नेपालीहरुको कहिले भएन
बेच्न र बेचिन्, मार्न र मारिनु
मेरो देशका लागि कुनै दुर्भिक्ष कम भएन,
साथी, मिशाल !
तिम्रो आगमन मेरो देशका लागि स्विकार्य भएन । ।
भरु ‘पल्’
नोर्थ योर्कशायर

Comment on प्रवासबाट श्रद्धाञ्जलि रंग र अक्षरमा (कविता) - मोति चाम्लीङ्ग by: ekendra

Tue, 27 Mar 2007 22:09:28 +0000

Nice peom, thanks alot and we hope such creations in futuere.

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: yang pitang chhu dharan haal hk

Mon, 26 Mar 2007 14:52:29 +0000

ati utkrishta ra atyanta marmasparshi kabitako laagi kabitrilai hridayadekhinai dherai dherai dhanyabaad.

Comment on प्रवासबाट श्रद्धाञ्जलि रंग र अक्षरमा (कविता) - मोति चाम्लीङ्ग by: K. Rai

Mon, 26 Mar 2007 13:37:56 +0000

kabita sarai ramro lagyo dhannyabad kamsekam euta man chhune kabita!!!

Comment on कवि टंक वनेम, साँघुरी र बुढासुब्बा (समीक्षा) - मुलीवीर राई by: Tilak Rai

Sun, 25 Mar 2007 15:22:23 +0000

Kanchha keep its up and all the best.

Comment on मेरो सपना (कविता) - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ्ग by: yang pitang chhu dharan haal hk

Sun, 25 Mar 2007 14:32:10 +0000

pratik chamling bhailai hridayasparshi kabitaako laagi dherai dherai dhanyabaad

Comment on प्रवासबाट श्रद्धाञ्जलि रंग र अक्षरमा (कविता) - मोति चाम्लीङ्ग by: K Chamling

Sun, 25 Mar 2007 11:51:18 +0000

Very nice poem able to tuch anybody.

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: बिनय लामा

Fri, 23 Mar 2007 04:38:53 +0000

कविता मर्मश्पर्शी छ र मातृभुमीप्रतिको प्रगाढ आस्था पनि। धन्यवाद…………………

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: gopal magar myagdi beni hal doha Qatar

Thu, 22 Mar 2007 13:13:18 +0000

आहा क्या मिठो कबिता आसा जि मेरो मात्र होइन हामी सबै नेपाली को मन छुने कबिता लेख्नुनु भए छ र तपाईं को यस कबिता ले अबसे पनि हामी हरु को मन जित्ने पुरुषकार जरुर पाए को छ ।

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: prakash rai malaysia

Tue, 20 Mar 2007 09:52:59 +0000

आशा जि! वह्ह्ह्ह्ह्ह्ह्ह्ह्ह्ह्ह्ह तपाईंको साहित्य लेखन सैलीलाई मैले माने!!!!!!!!!

Comment on जानलाई त आको हजुर मकाउलाई भनेर (गीत) - नबिन बिक by: maila

Tue, 20 Mar 2007 07:49:42 +0000

this is very sad news .recently i have read a news about the involvment of some hk id holder peoples as well if so lets find out this culprit

Comment on कवि टंक वनेम, साँघुरी र बुढासुब्बा (समीक्षा) - मुलीवीर राई by: sanjog laaphaa magar

Tue, 20 Mar 2007 06:00:16 +0000

mulibir dai dhanyabad,aafno guru ji ra guru ji ko kabita samiksha ramrari garnu bhayekoma,tapaiko sahitik goreto bhari aadibasi chap ra gurasle swagat garirahun.
sanjog laaphaa magar
kehi dinko japani pardesi

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: bekub gurung

Mon, 19 Mar 2007 13:16:25 +0000

bigatka kunaipani kura birsana sakinna birsana nasakne baaneele sarai pirolcha pani… ki kaso…?j hos asha ji kabita ramro 6.

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: bharat limbu

Sun, 18 Mar 2007 22:48:25 +0000

ओह भुटिया ‘बिदिर्ण्’ जी, कृष्ण ‘अवीरल्’ को गीतको भाकाम रचित तपाईंको रचना उत्क्रष्ट छ है । कोशीश जारी राखनु होला ।

Comment on कवि टंक वनेम, साँघुरी र बुढासुब्बा (समीक्षा) - मुलीवीर राई by: bharat limbu

Sat, 17 Mar 2007 23:56:04 +0000

those kind of poems with wonderful MITHAK & BIMBAHARU, should have been created (writen) long ago. tanka wanem is a great poet with a lasting future. I read saguri and budhasubbaharu once. I am really great fan of him and mulibir dai who has come such a far away in the field of literature. with his genuine masterpiece - HARIYO PARKHAL as well as Bisayat ra Chhal haru, he can be singled out. I am expecting a new creation of him in the future. good luck both of you!!!!

Comment on मनभित्र गाउँघर…( कविता) - आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ by: fishtail

Sat, 17 Mar 2007 19:37:14 +0000

Hotani man bhari akha bhari gau ko samjhana tyasai kaha mettinchha ra? yadi sachchai nai gau ko goreto ma hideko, phalaicha ma baseko inar ko pani piyeko tyo purano balti le tyasai kaha birsana sakinchha ra? jhan tapaiko kabita ma ta tarai dekhi pahad ani himal samma ko tirshana ko jhajhalko chha tyo jhan birshane ta kurai nai bhayena ni? keep up going for poetry i love it. 100% appreciation from my side. bye

Comment on कवि टंक वनेम, साँघुरी र बुढासुब्बा (समीक्षा) - मुलीवीर राई by: तबला TJ.हरि श्रेष्ठ

Sat, 17 Mar 2007 09:23:57 +0000

समिछा राम्रो छ कृपया यस्तै कोसेलीहरु भविश्यामा पनि पस्कदै जानु होला भन्ने “आशा” लिएको छु यस्तो मान्छे सँग फेरी नजर नजुधाउनु होला है । ठट्टा गरेको मात्रै, Just jocking अन्यथा नलिनु होला । । नेपाली साहित्यमा तपाईंको योग्दान बढ्दै जावोस् यही मेरो तपाईंलाइ शुभ-कामना छ ।
एउटा समिछा पारखी तबला हरि श्रेष्ठ

Comment on गजल - कृष्ण के सी “छाल” by: bishnu hari paudel

Fri, 16 Mar 2007 10:40:29 +0000

Please in nepali font usrd for comment
thinks

Comment on कवि टंक वनेम, साँघुरी र बुढासुब्बा (समीक्षा) - मुलीवीर राई by: kaalsing

Tue, 13 Mar 2007 22:42:00 +0000

I have previously heard about Poet Tanka Banem’s ‘Sanghuri and Budhasubba’ hence would like to read even for once. Meantime, my sincere thanks goes to Mr. Mulibir Rai who have written such a nice ’samiksha’ about it. For both of you, please keep up the good work ! Thank you.
Kaalsing (London, UK)

Comment on लौ न ! (कविता) नगेन्द्र ईङनाम by: R.K.PHOMBO

Tue, 13 Mar 2007 19:37:01 +0000

1oo% caught my small heart by your poem, just keep it up.
your-
lisibung@yahoo.com

Comment on भूपिको सम्झना (कविता)- चन्द्र सिं गुरुङ by: Nogen limbu

Mon, 12 Mar 2007 19:39:29 +0000

this is nice poem… the things which are written as symbols are really nice…

Comment on कवि टंक वनेम, साँघुरी र बुढासुब्बा (समीक्षा) - मुलीवीर राई by: Nogen limbu

Mon, 12 Mar 2007 19:32:56 +0000

Tanka Wonem is one of the great poiet. i like to read his poems… thanks Murali Bir Rai …..

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: HK100

Mon, 05 Mar 2007 23:31:14 +0000

राम्रो धेरै राम्रो… गन्तव्य टाढा छैन.. यदि अनवरत हिडिरहयो भने..
शुभकामना…

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Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: baba+rajesh+sudiksha maden {limbu}

Fri, 02 Mar 2007 18:22:11 +0000

मनको ब्यथा नपोख आशा संसार स्वार्थी छ¦ बरु सक्छौ भने एकान्त मा एक थोपा आशु खसाल्¦¦

Comment on यो बाटो - चन्द्र गुरुंग by: mr rai

Thu, 01 Mar 2007 20:10:13 +0000

Great poem. touched my heart.

mr rai, uk

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: gopal magar

Thu, 01 Mar 2007 09:05:55 +0000

छैन कुनै ठेगाना जहाँ पायो तेही ।
एक हात्मा गैची अर्को हात्मा गास् छ ।
यस उजाड मरभुमिमा चारको घाम्ले ।ताती रहेको बालुवा मा बास् छ ।
तेही पनि बचेँ भने मेरो बुधी आमा को ।
एक मुथि परान भेट्न पाउछु कि भन्ने आस् छ ।
thanxxxx a lots

Comment on गजल - कृष्ण के सी “छाल” by: dhanegopal doha Qatar

Thu, 01 Mar 2007 08:50:44 +0000

धन्ने बाद हजुर लाई साह्रै मिठो मुक्तक लेख नु भए को मा अनि हजुर ले अजै पनि यस्तै यस्तै मुक्तक लेखेर दर्सक हरु को मन जित्नु होला । थ्यांक्उ बा बाइ

Comment on मान्छे (कविता) - आकाश by: dhan lama& gopal

Thu, 01 Mar 2007 08:31:34 +0000

ramrai chha hajur le lekhe ko kabita tesaile ajai pani yestai ramraa ramraa kabita lekhnu hola hasta bye

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: suku limbu

Mon, 26 Feb 2007 08:32:57 +0000

Hello Aasha didi namaskar malai tapaiko lekha rachana haru sarai man parcha kavita gajal haru ma jahile pani herne garchu akdam ramro lagcha vabisyama yasarinai pragati gardai januhosh yahi suvakamana tapailai . ma bahini sukubata

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: baba+rajesh+sudiksha maden {limbu}

Sun, 25 Feb 2007 12:14:46 +0000

hi ashaa

Comment on बैँस (कविता) - टंक वनेम by: raju dhakal

Sat, 24 Feb 2007 16:04:20 +0000

congratulation for poem friend

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Bantawa Rai (Hong Kong)

Fri, 23 Feb 2007 09:17:59 +0000

Gajalta afnai katha-betha jasto lagyo hai!!!

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: durga

Tue, 13 Feb 2007 14:27:37 +0000

hi durga ji hajurko lekhai bahut ram ro chha
lekhane paryas garhu hos
o k bye

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: bishnu p dhital

Tue, 06 Feb 2007 08:35:06 +0000

aasha ji jiban ma dekhaoti sathi,banaoti sathi jati pani bhetinchan tara asal sathi & pareko samayama athawa jiban ko antim samayasamma sath dine sathi bhane kamai bhetinchan sayad tapai ko jiban ma yastai nikainai udaharan le nai hola tapaibat bhabhu gajal padne maukamatra haina tapai ko gajal bata malai pani sajag banayako anubhuti mileko chh tyasko lagi dherai dhanyabad chh hai ani jiban ma tapai ko yastai yastai nikainai gajal padna pau ra tapai ko uttotar ko kamana pani chh hai mero tarphabat.
Bishnu Prasad Dhital
now from, afghanistan

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: niwa shaa

Fri, 02 Feb 2007 03:57:46 +0000

ZINDAGI
zindagi auta mandir rahechha jun mandirr vitra hudo rahechha
thapana,, thapana vitra hudo rahechha sapana,,
sapana vitra hudo rahechha phul ko thuga
Tyo phul ko komal Thuga le chhudo rahechha
zindagima nachhahada nachhahadai hudo rahechha bhul

Comment on फगत म टुक्रिएं, निचोरिएं… - ऋचा तिवारी शिवाकोटी by: reeki

Mon, 29 Jan 2007 20:03:28 +0000

hi richa ur poetry reminded me of a few who speak the mind n heart of billions obviously through verses…. in ur present poetry u caught my emotions… so cant help thanking u… looking forward to read u again!!!
kishor, UK

Comment on मान्छेको परिचय ! - शिव प्रकाश by: reeki

Fri, 26 Jan 2007 22:50:01 +0000

very interesting!!! speaks the mind and heart of many… at least mine did… however i was expeting more to follow as if what happens next– sheer anxiousness really!!!
fabulous… keep it going!!!
Stafford, Midland, UK

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: fishtail

Mon, 22 Jan 2007 20:29:17 +0000

dhanyabad tapaiko pushtyailai ma ta jhandai arkai po socheko aasha ji. ulto comment bhanna khojeko jassto po lagyo, pahila ta.

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: ASHA BHUTIYA 'BIDEERNA'

Mon, 22 Jan 2007 09:18:15 +0000

Maaph garnuhola hai ‘Aadaraneeya mahanubhawharu. Yo unicode ma ‘AMULYA’ lekhna khojwko ke po bhayo. Je bhae pani ‘AMULYA’ bhanera padhidinu hola bhanne anurodh chha. -ASHA

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: ASHA BHUTIYA 'BIDEERNA'

Mon, 22 Jan 2007 09:04:00 +0000

Hi everybody, आदरणीय महानुभावहरु, सर्वप्रथम त म ब्लगमा आउन ढिला गरेकोमा क्षमा याचना गर्न चाहान्छु। समयको व्यस्तताले त्यसो भएको पनि अनुरोध गर्दछु। तपाइहरुको अ्उल्य कमेन्ट्को लगि हृदयबाट नै धन्यवाद ट्क्राउछु। धेरै धेरै धन्यवातपाइहरुको। - आशा

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: fishtail

Sun, 21 Jan 2007 17:59:10 +0000

aru naya tapai ko geet gazal ko chhito padna paune aasha ma , ani yo gazal ko ke kura garau sahrai nai yathartha chha sayad yo gazal tapailai tyasai phureko haina jasto chha? gazalkar sahrai marmik ra yathartha hunchhan bhanne kura tapaiko gazalle pusti gareko jasto po lagyo hau. Nadhati bhannus hai, biththama hai yo chai , ani tapaiko dinanudin pragati ko kamana garchhu hai , ma

Comment on फगत म टुक्रिएं, निचोरिएं… - ऋचा तिवारी शिवाकोटी by: ashicq shah

Thu, 18 Jan 2007 17:39:16 +0000

hi richa ji
tapaile lai pani mero jastai betha rahe chha . i like yr kabita. duniya yastai ho dhoko didia rahechhana. i wish could become tru your dream. u got your love.

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: tirtha tamang

Tue, 16 Jan 2007 12:29:49 +0000

दुर्गा जि तपाईंको साहित्यिक यात्राको शुभकामना
म तपाईंको सुभेक्छुक तिर्थ दोषी

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: kanchhi

Mon, 15 Jan 2007 13:54:15 +0000

Di hajur ko lekha haru
jati padyo tetipadna man parchha;)) kahile kahi ta padda padai ma pani lekhanu man lagchha…hehehe….tara kaha D kaha ma:(( tara k hi chhaina mero D ko lekhaharu padna pauda ekdam khusi lagchha…….ani yespali pani “saari” launa payena…kabu ta vayeko chhuina D tara chance nai payeko chhuina tehi vayera ho D hehehhe….ok D ..
aru ni padnapau vanne KAMANA gardachhu

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: dhruba

Sat, 13 Jan 2007 22:02:52 +0000

आशा जी जिन्दगीमा झुक्किएर पनि यस्तो मान्छे सँग फेरी नजर नजुधाउनु होला है । ठट्टा गरेको मात्रै, अन्यथा नलिनु होला । गजल राम्रो छ कृपया यस्तै कोसेलीहरु भविश्यामा पनि पस्कदै जानु होला भन्ने “आशा” लिएको छु । नेपाली साहित्यमा तपाईंको योग्दान बढ्दै जावोस् यही मेरो तपाईंलाइ शुभ-कामना छ ।
एउटा गजल पारखी

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: RAI

Mon, 08 Jan 2007 05:36:00 +0000

यस् सेवा संचालक महोधय मेरो एउटा समाज नामक कबिता कमेन्ट बक्समा पर्न गयकोले त्यस् लाई कमेन्ट्को रुप मा
नलिनु हुन अनुरोध गर्द छु|
अन्तेरे राई चुन वान

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: RAI

Sun, 07 Jan 2007 02:06:24 +0000

समाज
प्रतेक मानिस् हरुको भिडमा
हरेक अनुहारहरु निहल्दा
केही खोजी रहेको आभाष हुन्छ
हराए झै महत्यो पूर्ण केही
अनि कोही कोही केही नपाएर
वीरक्तिएका अनुहारहरु
अरु कोही केही पाएझै
मुश्कान अर्ध मुश्कान
अ मन्, चै नमा रमाएका छ्न
सब थोक प्राप्त गर्नु नै जीवन को जीत होइन
हारेर हार खानुमा एक मजा छ
बिड्म्ब ना उल्टो छ
कसैलाई दिनुको सट्टा
खोस्ने हरुको धुइरो छ
खोसिएर लुटिएका हरुको भिड मा
सरमले लाज छोप्न नपाँउदै
फेरी खोसिएर लुटिएका हरु
अटुट रुपमा चिच्याई-चिच्याई
समर्पित प्रतेक पल
पिडादाई अनुभुती सँगालेर बा चे का

छन

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: PRATIVA K.C. CANADA

Thu, 04 Jan 2007 11:59:21 +0000

Ashaji, ramro man chhune kisimko bhawuk gajalko lagi thank you. Ma tapaiko rachanaharuko hridaya dekhikai FAN hu. Malai lagchha, there are only a small number of wemen writers in Nepali literature. Woman, especially like you, should struggle to be stablished in our contemprary Nepali literature. And, I hope you can do it by yourself. I, always, wish you for your success. ‘Asha’ gardachhu, ek din awashya tapaiko ‘nam’ Nepali sahityako itihasma korine chha. Lekhna nachhadnu hola. Best of luck. -Prativa

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Tez Gurung

Thu, 04 Jan 2007 10:19:03 +0000

Namaste !!!
Though delayed I got to read a beautiful creation. It really swept me away, it really made my eyes wet so unnoticed. Pashan jee, undoubtedly it’s a master piece, it’s a beautiful creation, just keep it up.
I have due respect specially being a Tamu for a Tamu who deserves. We all hope more creations from you, keep up the spirit, keep writing.

Comment on गजल - दुर्गा राई by: Mausam Rai

Tue, 02 Jan 2007 06:18:49 +0000

नमस्ते दिदी दुर्गा
तपाईंको गजल मलाई एकदम मन पर्‍यो अझै पनि तपाईंले यो भन्दा म्रो राम्रो गजल हरु लेख्दै जानु होला भन्ने मेरो आशा छ र तपाईं को गजल नयाँ पढ्न पाउने आशाम छु है दिदी दुर्गा भाई को आशा नमारी दिनु होला है दिदी ल त दिदी भाई मौसम काठमाडौं नेपाल
home khotang

Comment on गजल - दुर्गा राई by: Ram rai

Tue, 02 Jan 2007 06:15:30 +0000

Durga ji tapai kahan basera yasto yasto gajala lekhnu huncha tapai ahile kahan ho ni hk ma nai ho k Nepal ma ho ni tapai lai herna paya ma kasto khusi hunthe hola plz saknu huncha vane malai tapai ko pic. send gari dinu na hai

Comment on गजल - दुर्गा राई by: Mausam Rai

Tue, 02 Jan 2007 06:06:40 +0000

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: krishna kc

Tue, 26 Dec 2006 02:25:43 +0000

आशा जी अन्यथा नलिनु ल

स्वर्थी हुन्छन् मान्छे हरु भर पर्नु हुन्न
राम्रो सँग नजान्दै मा बिश्वस गर्नु हुन्न

जाली छ दुनियाँ स्वर्थी हुन्छन् मान्छेहरु
मिठो बोली बोल्यो भन्दैमा त्यतै सर्नु हुन्न

आफ्नो स्वर्थे पुरा गर्ने जसो पनि गर्ने गर्छन्
देखावटी आशु झर्यो भन्दैमा त्यसैले मन भर्नु हुन्न

कृष्ण के सी “छाल”

Comment on गजल - कृष्ण के सी “छाल” by: krishna kc

Tue, 26 Dec 2006 02:04:13 +0000

प्रतिकृया लेख्नु हुने सबै साथीहरु लाई धन्यबाद दिन चाहान्छु अनि आशा जि एक पटक मेल गर्नु न ल

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: DESHBHAKTA

Mon, 25 Dec 2006 13:49:14 +0000

A very nice Gajal. Ati nai yatharthaparak ra marmik Gajal lekhnu bhaekoma didi lai dherai dherai dhanyabad. Tara yasari lamo samaya samma naharaunu hola hai didi. Je bhae pani malai chahi yo Gajal le bhitrai samma chhoyo. Thank you very much. Ani didi aajkal ta bhaiharuko tira pani auna chhadnu bhayo. Nana Nepal gae pachhi ta aunu pani hunna. Ehe, sachchi asti nanale Nepal bata phone ma sodhdai hunuhunthyo hai tapai lai. Bye. -DESH

Comment on बैँस (कविता) - टंक वनेम by: ASHA BHUTIYA 'BIDEERNA'

Mon, 25 Dec 2006 09:43:09 +0000

टंकजी, कति सुन्दर तथा विशिस्ट शैलिमा बैशको बारे विम्व र प्रतीक प्रयोग गर्नु भएको रहेछ, साह्रै मन छोयो । भावपरक र स्तरीय कविताको लागि धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद। फेरि पनि यस्तै सारगर्भित कविताको अपेक्षा गर्दछु। - शुभचिन्तक, आशा ।

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Tilak

Sun, 24 Dec 2006 14:52:29 +0000

Dear Asha ji
you are really nice
tapai saga testa kabita aaja badi bhaya malai mail garera pathaunu na hai.mero nsme Tilak ho hal ma Afghanistan ma chhu.
id suparpower@yahoo.com

Comment on लुट्यौ श्रीपेच …- देव गुरुङ by: Tilak

Sun, 24 Dec 2006 14:44:54 +0000

relly nice
bakya gathan sabda chayan sarai isthariya chha.

Comment on गजल - कृष्ण के सी “छाल” by: Tilak

Sun, 24 Dec 2006 14:39:54 +0000

its really nice.
mailing me hai

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: raj thapa

Thu, 21 Dec 2006 17:22:44 +0000

didi nikai lamo samaye pachhi yesto khalko gajal padne mauka pauda khushi lagyo. pragati ko kamana gardachhu

Comment on गजल - कृष्ण के सी “छाल” by: ASHA BHUTIYA 'BIDEERNA'

Thu, 21 Dec 2006 15:40:37 +0000

आखिर घरै भत्किएर गएपछि थामको के कुरा गर्ने?
सवारी नै भीरबाट खसेपछि जामको के कुरा गर्ने?
सहनै नसक्ने पीडा अनि चोट हृदयमा भए
बाहिर देखिने घाउ अनि डामको के कुरा गर्ने?
सदा समुद्रमा मात्र उर्लिरहने ‘छाल’ लाई पनि
घरि घरि फेरिइ रहने तुच्छ यामको के कुरा गर्ने?
फेरि एक पटक प्रयास गर्नुहोला न ।
Just kidding, Shubhachintak -Asha

Comment on मान्छे (कविता) - आकाश by: ASHA BHUTIYA 'BIDEERNA'

Thu, 21 Dec 2006 15:11:56 +0000

sahrai nai marma-sparsi lagyao ‘AKASH’ JI, Please keep on writting such type of beautiful poems. Thanks. -Asha

Comment on मान्छे (कविता) - आकाश by: ASHA BHUTIYA 'BIDEERNA'

Thu, 21 Dec 2006 15:10:43 +0000

Jyadai nai marma-sparsi lagyao ‘AKASH’ JI, Please keep on writting such type of beautiful poems. Thanks. -Asha

Comment on गजल - कृष्ण के सी “छाल” by: ramu

Thu, 21 Dec 2006 11:53:53 +0000

la la lekdai jau na hami hardi janchau
haaaaaaaaaaa

Comment on सपना ( कविता ) - अतीत मुखिया by: Farnborogh, UK

Thu, 21 Dec 2006 02:00:45 +0000

“JIRAFRUPI” gauthali prem
“panipuri” ko swadma atma birodhi ganaeko “sas” ferne mukhbhitraka “gohijibro” ko
snehapurak chatai ko awasthama sapan kewal sapan matra narahera “JIRAFRUPI” gauthali ko prem ra “GOHIJIBRO” ko chatai “aham SOLHE” santulan ko sthitima takka rokinda “sunyata” lai atmasath garnusiwaya kunai pani “think tank” ko “mutupinda” ko bhugolkendrabata “maskara filtration” ko dristipat farak tawarma prakat hudai drisyabilin hunchha hola hoina ra mukhia and bhutia mitra.

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: gurung labkumar

Sun, 17 Dec 2006 17:00:06 +0000

Aasha Aunty Namaste
What a sweet Gazal? I liked them very much. Just keep on writing. I have seen a lot of lot of friends have already put on their comments on your Gazal it really touched me !!! Thank you very much for such a sweet Gazal.. Regards Labkumar

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: raj thapa

Sat, 16 Dec 2006 18:04:09 +0000

didi that was good ‘’gajal'’ i read after a long time.keep it up

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Atit Mukhiya

Sat, 16 Dec 2006 09:59:48 +0000

बिदीर्न लोलिमा बोली मिलाउदा……..

थाहा छ पात लाइ पत्झ्ड्मा झर्नु पर्छ
बुझेरै यो नियती हागा सधैं सिगार्छ

खपेर च्रको घाम बटुवा हरु का लागि
दिएर सिँयाल हर दम हृदय सितल पार्छ

पत्कर बनेर झर्छ आँफै मटोमा सढ्छ
बनेर मल माटोमा जराको आहारा टार्छ

गुनी गुनिनै हुन्छ जिवित रहोस् वा मृत
बैगुनिहरु लाई पनि गुनै ले सेखी झार्छ

चेतन भएरै मानिस् उल्टै कृतघ्न किन
टेकेर मान्छेकै लास् आफ्नै सिहासन स्याहार्छ

अतीत् मुखिया
ओखल्ढुङा

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: milan rasaily

Thu, 14 Dec 2006 06:54:05 +0000

namaste aasha jee…gazal sarai mitho chha ati mitho ani yethartha ghatna haru sanga sametiye ko chha…jeevan yeuta anubhab batulne maidan ho…tapain ko anubhab lai ma kadar garchhu…aasha jee____i hope that all your dream come’s true.god bless you…

Comment on गजल - कृष्ण के सी “छाल” by: nanu

Tue, 12 Dec 2006 01:17:49 +0000

hi ramro cha ne kina yati dukha garako ta kham ra dam ko nash banayako

Comment on रिसाई दिंदा (गजल) - राकेश कार्की by: Jeevan Rai

Mon, 11 Dec 2006 09:28:08 +0000

यो गजल राम्रो लाग्यो है मलाई त ।

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Durga Rai

Mon, 11 Dec 2006 08:34:08 +0000

Assha, Hajur ko Gazal le samasamaik yatharthalai chuuyako chha, hamro social nature nai yastai chha, jun tapaile gazal marphat pokhnu bhayako chha, Ani aasha ji yo hamro kartabya pani ho ki jun bikriti lai aulyaudai samaj ko unnati ko kamana garnu parchha,

Har pragati ko kamana chha tapailai

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: Durga Rai

Mon, 11 Dec 2006 08:25:58 +0000

Aasha ji Hajur ko comment, malai swikarya chha, tapai haru kai haushala le ta aaja ma yash sthan ma chhu, Assha ji hajurko pani gaati pragati ko hardik kamana chha

Comment on रिसाई दिंदा (गजल) - राकेश कार्की by: Antao Adhikari

Sun, 10 Dec 2006 20:58:37 +0000

Gaja is nice. This is heart touching.

A. Adhikari

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: arun rai (korea)

Fri, 08 Dec 2006 11:23:41 +0000

ASHA JI TAPAI KO GAJAL LE MALAI YEAUTA BASTABIKTA JHALKAYEKO VAN VAYEKO CHA KHUSI LAGEU … HOPE CHA ARU SAMAYA MA PANI YESTAI KOSELI HARU PADNA PAU HAI LA THANKS

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Anju Sharma

Fri, 08 Dec 2006 07:56:10 +0000

Very nice poem , I liked it .

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: gokarna poudel

Fri, 08 Dec 2006 07:51:17 +0000

i read this gajal very weel .thank u so much asa ji.

Comment on गजल - कृष्ण के सी “छाल” by: yang pitang chhu

Thu, 07 Dec 2006 15:03:23 +0000

KCjee kavita dherai ramro chha.aauda dinharuma pani yastai kavitako apechchha gardachhu.

Comment on मान्छे (कविता) - आकाश by: Indra Narthunge

Thu, 07 Dec 2006 12:13:33 +0000

I read your beautyful poem. Tanka sir now I m in malaysia .We r stablish literatur faroum in malaysia .We r publishing one book”bimba,sahityik sangalo” .Please We want your one poetry queckly .Please youse my mail mount_everest88@yahoo.com.ok bye

Comment on मान्छे (कविता) - आकाश by: yang pitang chhu

Wed, 06 Dec 2006 13:51:17 +0000

benami kavijeelai utkrishta kavitako laagi murmuri dhanyabaad chha.

Comment on सपना ( कविता ) - अतीत मुखिया by: surya rai sangpang (korea)

Wed, 06 Dec 2006 11:30:29 +0000

ohhh thanks AAsha BHUTIYA ……..tapai ko sapan ko dui sabdha ramro lageu and Atit Mukiya bro lai pani thanks ramro lageu

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: buddhi thapa

Sat, 02 Dec 2006 06:34:24 +0000

आशा जी तपाँइको गजल माँ सत्य छ |
एस्तो गजल त मन को गहराई बाट नै निस्किन्
स्क्छ |
भविश्यामा पनि लेखदै जानु होला भन्ने “आशा” लिएको छु । नेपाली साहित्यमा तपाईंको योग्दान बढ्दै जावोस् यही मेरो तपाईंलाइ शुभ-कामना छ ।

एउटा गजल पारखी
buddhi thapa

buddhi_34@yahoo.com

Comment on लांकुरीको रुख अनि म ( कविता)-आशा भुटिया by: chandra gurung(ramailo)

Fri, 01 Dec 2006 22:02:42 +0000

hi asha greetings

yati ramro kabita lekhne manchhele kina ho lakuri ko rukh lai comment no 7 ma “jaslai ani tyasko” bhanera sambodhan gareko yo ta direct you are point out some one bhayena ra ? ke lakuri ko bot lai jaslai ani tyaslai byakti sombodhan garinchha ra? Is that not a nature? How you made a mistake? try to post as much as suitable word dear. thanx for remember power that you still not forget the lakuri ko rukh. Just kidding. keep on your feeling.

Comment on लांकुरीको रुख अनि म ( कविता)-आशा भुटिया by: chandra gurung(ramailo)

Fri, 01 Dec 2006 21:37:17 +0000

hi, it seems that you are influenced from “shirish ko phool” though you did great job dear. liked it. sorry for delay responsed. chandra_gurung31@yahoo.com

Comment on लांकुरीको रुख अनि म ( कविता)-आशा भुटिया by: chandra gurung(ramailo)

Fri, 01 Dec 2006 21:31:28 +0000

hi asha, is that you? well there is no doubt. you are the princess of poem. and i know you are …….. …………. really …………my …… who making me crazy with your beautiful geet gazal. I appreciated on your khubi. chandra_gurung31@yahoo.com

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: chandra gurung(ramailo)

Fri, 01 Dec 2006 21:23:05 +0000

wow its amazing i like it but i m really being delay dear.

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: chandra gurung(ramailo)

Fri, 01 Dec 2006 21:08:21 +0000

well, asha timile gazal lekheko ta thaha thiyo ani padheko pani thiye, tara aaja hknepalma nai padna pauda ta ati khusi bhayeko chhu. why ? because i m really far from you and i dont really need your note book which you used to hide under the pilow to read your beautiful gazal. And one thing keep up going writing through hknepal you really getting good response from reader dear. And i dont know really who is making you apart from your heart but i know selfish made someone really heart broken dear sometimes that could be some one and sometimes that could be you dear. Any way keep on i like your gazal and your geet. bye. take care

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Tilak Bhandari

Fri, 01 Dec 2006 06:24:03 +0000

jeewana bhari ko yaatraama saatha timeelaaii .basantako wahaa**ra timeelaaii .chhaatee bharikoashhima pyaara timeelaaii .phula ko dalee dalee upahaara timeelaaii .arutaa ka nai dina sakchu ra bichhoDale bhijeka parelee aauliyako anuhaara thaakeeta ujaaDa saareera phikka otha haru baaTa gunjiyako aaudai gareko nyoo ears ko anjulee shubhakaamanaa shubhakaamanaa shubhakaamanaa
meree aparichita pri^ya pri^yasi laaii Tilak bhandari

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Ghayal

Tue, 28 Nov 2006 23:37:51 +0000

Comment on सपना ( कविता ) - अतीत मुखिया by: ASHA BHUTIYA 'BIDEERNA'

Sun, 26 Nov 2006 12:27:34 +0000

मुखियाको सपनालाई यो दुखियाको दुई शब्द सहानुभूति -

यी दुई जोडी नयनहरु,
वेपर्वाहसित बन्द होस्,
एउटा मीठो कल्पना
मष्तिष्कमा शनै शनै सजियोस्,
निश्छल् हृदयको कुनामा
सकारात्मक विचार फुलोस्,
यो शरीर सहसा सहसा
स्वर्गीय आनन्दमा रमोस्
केही छिनलाई नै सही
यही हो मीठो सपना ।
अनि,
सपना आफै खराब हुदैन,
न सपना सग दुर्नियत हुन्छ,
देख्नेले देखिदिए पछि
बिचरा सपना त आउनैपर्छ ।
सपना आफै दोषी हुदैन,
न सपना सग छल कपट हुन्छ,
सजाउनेले सजाईदिए पछि
बिचरा सपना त आउनै पर्छ ।
सपना आफै वाधक पनि हुदैन,
न सपना सग अस्त्र नै हुन्छ
बोलाउनेले बोलाइदिए पछि
बिचरा सपना त आउनै पर्छ ।
त्यसैले, सपना जे जस्तो छ,
सपनालाई सपनै हुन दिऔ ।

भविष्यमा राम्रो देख्नु होला भन्ने कामनासहित्,
-आशा भुटिया ‘विदीर्ण’ (दुखिया पनि….)

Comment on रिसाई दिंदा (गजल) - राकेश कार्की by: Keshav

Sun, 26 Nov 2006 12:02:44 +0000

कविता राम्रो छ तर यदि सत्यकथामा आधारित हो भने चाहि कठै भन्दा उपर केहि भन्न सक्दिन है कार्की जी भन्छन नि भीरबाट खस्ने गोरूलाई राम राम भन्न सकिन्छ कांध थाप्न सकिंदैन । जे होस्, कविता राम्रो अनि व्यवहारिक छ ।
केशव
मध्यपूर्व, एशिया

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Keshav

Sun, 26 Nov 2006 11:55:31 +0000

सारै मीठो कविता ! तपाई को लेखाई ज्यादै राम्रो लाग्यो सविना जी, तपाईको कलम कहिल्यै नथाकोस् अनि सधै यस्ता राम्रा राम्रा कविताहरु पढ्न पाइयोस् नेपाली चेलीलाई यहि आशिर्वाद
केशव
मध्यपूर्व, एशिया

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: ASHA BHUTIYA 'BIDEERNA'

Sun, 26 Nov 2006 11:34:53 +0000

फुल्नु पर्छ फूलहरुले बगैचामा झारै झार किन नहोस्,
हास्नु पर्छ जीवनमा हृदयमाथि भारै भार किन नहोस् ।

कसैले जे देखोस् अरुलाई सुखी देखोस् या दुखी,
सहनु आफैले पर्छ चाहे पीडाको तारै तार किन नहोस् ।

हतोत्साही औ निराश हुने होइन अब ‘दुर्गा’ ले यसरी,
चाहे त्यहा वेदनाको पहाड अनि टारै टार किन नहोस् ।

जिन्दगीमा सफलता मिलोस्, कामना । -शुभचिन्तक, आशा ।

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Kumar karki

Thu, 23 Nov 2006 16:39:35 +0000

Aasha ji
I read your gazal that is devotee gazal for nepali literature.
tahnks
Keep it up……………………

kumar1985karki@yahoo.com

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: jaulo(hk)

Thu, 23 Nov 2006 14:24:41 +0000

ASHA JI TAPAIKO SABDAHARUMA ASHA BHATKAIDINE TYO SWARTHI ANI NISTHURILAI SAYAD CHELIKO SARAP LAGNE CHHA. KI KASO, BHANDAI YESARI DHILO NAGARNU HOLA. THANKS,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ANTAMA TAPAIKO SUBHACHINTAK.

Comment on मनको फूलबारी - राजेन्द्र by: Umesh Shrestha

Fri, 17 Nov 2006 05:27:10 +0000

HI Rajendra jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sarai ramro lagyo hou hajur kabita yesta yesta kabita haru pathaundai garnu hola kina bhane hami jasto rchna nasakne ani aru le racheka kabita padra manoranjan line lai kehi rahat milchha ni taaaaaaaaaaaaa

Comment on यो बाटो - चन्द्र गुरुंग by: Dal Bahadur Gurung

Sat, 11 Nov 2006 05:47:40 +0000

यहाँ टाईप गर्नुहोस् ।खै किन नेपाल सरकारले बेवस्ता गरेको छ? बेवारीसे बम खेलएर ( अन्जान नानी हरुको ज्यान गएको ) समाचार म सुन्नु पहिलो पल्ट अब्स्यै होइन? यो हुनु को कारण सरकारको लपर्बाइ हो भन्दा दुई मत नहोला? सरकारले देश भरि बम को बारेमा राम्रो प्रचार-प्रसारान गरेको भए? हिजो अज अनि भोली भबिस्याका कर्णधार अन्जन नानी हरुको ज्यान बिकाल्मा जने थिएन? एदि तेस् घाटन्मा ति सरकारमा बस्नेहारुका नानी हरु परेको भए तीनको हल्त के हुन्थ्यो? जनतालाई बिकास गरेर दिनु त परै जओस् , जबो एउटा रेडियो को मय्दम् देकि प्रचर्-प्रसरन् र मा
ओबदी प्रभाववित ईलाकाम तस्वीर सहित सुचन तसेको भए? कसैले आफ्नो आँखा नानी गुमानु पर्ने पनि थिएन र आँखामा आसुको धर चुहनु पनि पर्ने पनि थिएन? संसारले के के गरी सक्यो? ता नेपालको कुर्शी वाला थुक्का तेरो बिचार

Comment on यो बाटो - चन्द्र गुरुंग by: Dal Bahadur Gurung

Sat, 11 Nov 2006 05:03:27 +0000

Killing Innocent children around the Nation…..Its not a new accident ?

Why blady Nepalese government doesn’t notice introduce about BOMB ! If someone fine it in somewhere else….? Its not a toy
Beware of Bomb, must put notice description around the nation…..Not blady talk for king & queen & own seat….?
If involve such accident in own family members ….? How they feel fuck top Nepal seat owner…..?
Must bring the system in country…..giving announcement by radio….is that difficult ????

Comment on लुट्यौ श्रीपेच …- देव गुरुङ by: Gopal

Fri, 10 Nov 2006 04:04:15 +0000

कविता अति सान्दर्भिक लाग्यो । तपाईंको कवितको जती गुणगान गाएपनि पुग्दैन । अव भनेको तपाइ हामिले सकारात्मक् कुरा मात्रै गरेर सबै दल र नेताहरुका मनोवल् उच्च बनाउने काम् गर्नुपर्छ । तानाशाह भाग्छ ।
पुनह् तपाइलाई धन्यबाद ।

गोपालप्रसाद
वोस्तन्

Comment on गजल -आशा ‘विदीर्ण’ by: Atit Mukhiya

Fri, 03 Nov 2006 18:45:11 +0000

——भुटिया सङै मुखिया गजल् मा रुदा—– अतीत् मुखिया

धुवा उडयो जिन्दगी यो कता सल्क्यो कुन्नी
हाँसो भित्र भित्रै आसू कता छल्क्यो कुन्नी

आन्ध्यरो छ आफ्नो आकाश धुम्मिएर सधैं
पत्तो छैन मन्को घाम कता झुल्क्यो कुन्नी

साह्रै मिठो हुन्छ भन्छन बैसलु आनुभूती
थाहै नपाई आफ्नो बैस कता ढल्क्यो कुन्नी

उत्शाह र उमङगमा सबै रम्छन झुम्छन
यो मन भने उदासीमा किन पल्क्यो कुन्नी

अधुरो भयी हराउदो छ सारा सुखसन्तुस्टी
असन्तुस्टी झझल्कोमा किन झल्क्यो कुन्नी

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: Buddhi Thapa

Wed, 01 Nov 2006 12:51:17 +0000

दुर्गा राइ जी हजुर त बेमी साल हुनुहुन्छ ?

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: gr paudel

Tue, 31 Oct 2006 03:17:04 +0000

pasan jee you write very great poem in hk nepal so keep on writing more …..thanks

gr paudel
belgium

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: seema

Sat, 28 Oct 2006 11:53:30 +0000

PASHAN DAI
SARAI BHABUK ANI SATYA
KABITA PADHDA TA MERO AAKHA NAI RASAYO
ANI TYI DIN HARU AALO BANER AAKHAMA AAYO.
HAMI GARIB HUNU NAI
SAYAD HAMRO DURVAGYA HUNA SAK6A
YASTO MADAN HARU TA KATI MARI SAKE KATI SULI CHADI SAKE
TYO SAYAD LAXMI PRASADHARU BHANDA GIRIJA PRASAD HARULE NI DHYAN DINU PARNE,
TAR PANI KHAI K ,KHAI K,
KURO GARYO KURAIKO DUKHA
SEEMA

Comment on वर्तमान परिस्थितीको रमिते हामी - टंक सम्वाहाम्फे by: himal

Fri, 27 Oct 2006 14:14:45 +0000

nice poem dude. keep it up but harrar drisya bhaneko k ho ? i think the scene what you have said would not be hararr.

thanks

Comment on दीपावलीको शुभ-कामाना ! - शिव प्रकाश by: pravat sharma. nepal

Mon, 23 Oct 2006 21:01:02 +0000

kavita ati sandarvik ra rasilo lagyo. chhoto ra mitho ani laya purna kavita ko lagi kavi jee shiva prakash lai thank you.

Comment on दीपावली ११२७ को शुभकामना ! - महेश्वर श्रेष्ठ by: prakash karki

Fri, 20 Oct 2006 13:15:59 +0000

तपाईंले लेख्न्नु भयको तिहारको बारेमा मलाई साह्रै राम्रो लाग्यो!

Comment on दीपावली ११२७ को शुभकामना ! - महेश्वर श्रेष्ठ by: jayaramadhikari

Fri, 20 Oct 2006 11:04:33 +0000

कसै लाई आकाश हुने चाह ना कशै लाई धर्ती हुने चाहना दिपबली को सम्पूर्ण नेपाली दाजु भाई दिदी बैनी आमा बुवा हरु म मेरो तर्फ बाट धरै धरै मङ्लामाय शुभ कामना ( जय राम अधिकारि मिजुरे ७ गोर्जे कास्की पोखरा हाल मुम्बई बाट धन्यवाद

Comment on दीपावली ११२७ को शुभकामना ! - महेश्वर श्रेष्ठ by: milan

Fri, 20 Oct 2006 10:28:12 +0000

tapaile lekhanu bhayako tiharako kura haru sabai ramro chha

Comment on मेरी माया कस्ती छिन्? - नवीन वि.क. by: dilip kumar gotame

Fri, 20 Oct 2006 10:17:22 +0000

नबिन जि तपाइले लेख्न्नु भएको कबिता धेरै राम्रो लाग्यो फेरि फेरि पनि यस्तै गरेर लेख्दै गर्नु होला भन्दै तपाइको कबिताको आशामा बसेको छु ल
my E- mail add
dilip_k41@yahoo.com

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: sanjib

Fri, 20 Oct 2006 08:08:14 +0000

ani tapaikohi lai masanga patrra wa mail garnu saknu hunechha
my E-mail add dilip_k41@yahoo.com

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: sanjib

Fri, 20 Oct 2006 08:02:33 +0000

tapai harule lekheko sabai lekha haru atinai ramro chhan yastai garera lekhadai garnu la ok bye

Comment on लुट्यौ श्रीपेच …- देव गुरुङ by: yang pitang chhu

Tue, 17 Oct 2006 14:54:10 +0000

kabita ati ramro ra wastabik pani

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Hariman Gurung

Thu, 12 Oct 2006 21:30:33 +0000

Pashan kaka, Tapaiko yo sarai ramro kabitako lagi dherai dherai dhanyabad,Yesle sara nepaliko manma santyona dinechha bhanne malai lagchha, tapai jati lekhi rakhnu vayeko chha sabai ramrai chha, feri feri yestai ramro ramro padna paune asha gardachhu.

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Bir Bahadur Rokaya

Sat, 07 Oct 2006 04:16:33 +0000

Your poem, story and everything are really usefull our life thatswhy i can’t forget you. so that i have sympathy you .thanks.
kind regards.

Comment on ईच्छा - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ्ग by: kumar karki

Thu, 05 Oct 2006 19:54:12 +0000

wauuuuuuuuuuu devotee poem.

Comment on गजल - देव गुरुङ by: Krishna Kumar Thapa

Wed, 04 Oct 2006 22:58:42 +0000

ye hajur ! hajur ko pahilo gajal bhaye pani nikai nai man chhune khako chha jasle je bhane pani malai ta atinai man paryo sayed….ani agami din haru ma pani asha………
Krish
America

Comment on यो बाटो - चन्द्र गुरुंग by: suman lama

Mon, 02 Oct 2006 05:49:39 +0000

[MAYA]

kina diyau maya time le malai jhuto maya
yadi time mero aafno banne thiyanau bhane
kina diyau time le malai jhuto aaswasan
yadi time aadha bato ma harauthau bhane?

kina time kasam khai bachha garau
yadi timro bichar thiyana bhane
kina time sadhai bhanne garthau timee mero aatma bhane ra
yadi timro aatma aarkai ko bhaisakeko thiyo bhane.
kina time bhan ne gharthau time mero pranho bhane .
yadi timro dhuk dhuki aarkai thiyo bhane ……sabina

Comment on बौलाहाको बखान ! (कविता ) - शिव प्रकाश by: Best Resource Place

Sun, 01 Oct 2006 13:29:48 +0000

surya

Can u provide more information about this ?

Comment on ईच्छा - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ्ग by: dh babu

Sat, 30 Sep 2006 18:48:01 +0000

wah wah yesto po man yesto po prem ani yesto sahitya

Comment on मनको फूलबारी - राजेन्द्र by: dh babu

Sat, 30 Sep 2006 18:45:38 +0000

राजेन्द्र sarahai ramro lagyo

Comment on चोट… (गीत) दुर्गा राई by: suman lama

Sat, 30 Sep 2006 05:23:24 +0000

thanku durga rai jeramroo chot ko khani bata gau nu bhaya ko ma

i love u durga rai

sumanjisumanbhai@yahoo.co.in

suman lama
from sat lond
uk

Comment on गजल -तुफान प्रसून by: Sameer

Fri, 29 Sep 2006 10:12:43 +0000

O Tufan jee k ho testo gajal lekhnu huncha mero ta purano tyo mayako din haru feri ekchoti zivit bhayeko chha.

Comment on गजल -तुफान प्रसून by: दीपक रिमाल ' अन्जान '

Fri, 29 Sep 2006 09:54:33 +0000

i have found gazal very heart touchy….. but what i want to say Tufan G… she broke ur heart to make u feel … what the true love is …. and you will feel this experiance will give you so many things in your life …. keep it on …. it is really wonderful gazal …and thx to Rohan for providing me this link .

Comment on गजल -तुफान प्रसून by: rajan

Fri, 29 Sep 2006 05:58:07 +0000

tufan jee,
tapain ko gajal le mero dil nai choyo bhaneko….
malai thaha nai bhaneko tapain le kasari yasto kuro byakta garnu hunchha……..
yo bichhod bhaneko sabai lai ruhaune kuro rahechha…….kahile pani yasle manchhe lai khusi parna sakena…….
tara aaba maile tapain ko gajal bata aauta tyo bichhod samjhanemauka payain….
thank u for this gajal………….
keep going…………
u will be in the peak one day……..

Comment on गजल - कुमार कार्की by: Tufan Prasun

Wed, 27 Sep 2006 09:57:51 +0000

तिमीले छोड्दा को जस्तै छ मेरो आकस त !
तर तिम्रो त ताराहरु ले सजिएछन
बर्बाद भो दुनियाँ मेरो त , तिम्रो त आचल खुशिले भरियेछन्

Comment on गजल -तुफान प्रसून by: manu

Wed, 27 Sep 2006 09:35:05 +0000

Hi,
its great gazal. keep on continue to make more other gazal.oh it touch my heart . i like it so much n love ur gazal.

Comment on गीत - दिलिप योन्जन by: suman lama

Sun, 24 Sep 2006 06:49:48 +0000

yastai rahi chhau Dilip je zandagi ko gore to ma .same fainal bhan ne lee aaghat panee gardo rahi chhau .

suman lama
uk

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: minu singapore

Sat, 23 Sep 2006 17:40:58 +0000

dai kabita sarai ramro chha tara sarai dukha lagne tapaiko kabitale sachi nai ruwayo

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: patriot

Wed, 20 Sep 2006 22:11:50 +0000

pashan ji
tapai ko lekh le mutu chuyo yaar!tapai ko kalam lai nirantata dinu mero yehi subha kamana cha ra yo lekh neta haru le pani padhi dine ki ! katai arko desh ma yestai ghatana hamra nepali daju bhai lai naghatla bhanna sakinna tesaile katai hamro desh ma pani yesto mahol banaune tira lagau ki hami nepali haru badhayte bideshina naparosh!!!

Comment on गजल - दुर्गा राई by: दिनेशराज पुरी

Tue, 19 Sep 2006 07:39:38 +0000

Durga ji tpaili bhadai chha . ma pani tapai jastai sahitya premi bhaeko namtale malai pani yo side ma mera rchhana haru prasarana garne ichha bhaeko hunale ke garnu prachha kirpaya thegana dinusana la mlai mail garera hai
sahayoga gridiema dhannebad
Mero Email ho rajkpuri@gmail.com

Comment on एउटा ढाडे बिरालोको कथा (कविता) -चन्द्र सिंग गुरुंग by: दिनेशराज पुरी

Tue, 19 Sep 2006 07:28:07 +0000

Mero gajala
-दिनेशराज पुरी
सुनारपानी-९ रामेछाप
हाल: आर.आर. क्याम्पस्
पहिलो वर्षमा अध्ध्यनरत

निरङकुशता ढलाइ देशमा स्वतन्त्रता आएको छ
इतिहासमा लोकतन्त्रले छुट्टै स्थान् पाएको छ ।।

इतिहासलाइ पल्टाएर देशले कोल्टे फेर्दा बल्ल
शान्ति आउँछ भन्ने आशा नेपालीमा छाएको छ ।।

शान्ति ल्याउन देवताले रगत बली मागेपनि
शहिदको आलो रगत यै देशले खाएको छ ।।

शोषण, दमन अन्त्य गर्दै समानताको दीप बाल्न
आँट साहस बटुलेर आम नेपाली धाएको छ ।।

बर्तमानलाई थाँति राख्दै भबिष्यको भाग्य कोर्दै
कोइलिले’नि शान्ति ! शान्ति !! शान्ति !!! गीत गाएको छ ।।

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: bhogen 'akle'

Mon, 18 Sep 2006 06:17:41 +0000

Pasan dai namaste, kabita pheri padhna payekoma khusi lagyo, thanks,

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: reecha tiwari

Sun, 17 Sep 2006 06:32:19 +0000

durga timro yo creation khub ramro cha sadhai yestai kehdai jau la .
reecha

Comment on संदेश - दुर्गा राई by: chij kumar stha

Tue, 12 Sep 2006 05:29:05 +0000

दुर्गा जी
तपाइको सन्देश पढें निकै नै खुशी लाग्यो । देशलाई माया गर्नेहरु आज पनि नेपालभित्र नै रहेछन् । हो, हामी पनि देशलाई माया गर्नेहरुमध्येमा पर्दछौ तर के गर्नु परिस्थिति र वाध्यताले मुग्लान पस्नु पर्‍यो । तर पनि सिद्धिचरणले लेखे जस्तै “तर खेद छैन तिम्रो आकृति लेखिएको छ यो हृदय भरि” भनेर मन बुझाउनु परेको छ । यस सन्देशबाट परदेसिएका नेपालीहरुले स्वदेशी गन्ध पाउँने छन् । लक्ष्य आफ्नो पूरा भएपछि नेपाल आमाको काखमा लुटपुटिन पुग्ने छन् भन्ने ठानेको छु ।
हवस् त विदा, यस्ता आवाजहरु साहित्यद्धारा फेरि फेरि पनि पस्कनु हुनेछ साथसाथै एच के नेपाललाई पनि धन्यवाद।
चिज, प्रवासबाट
email: chij.shrestha@aramco.com
URL: http://www.chijkumar.tk
Mobile# 00966 501867609

Comment on गीत - दिलिप योन्जन by: roshan yonjan

Mon, 11 Sep 2006 10:42:24 +0000

abueeeeeeeee dilip kahile gayako tya ? japan bata kamayakole pugena ? tya k gardai chou yar ?

Comment on यो बाटो - चन्द्र गुरुंग by: chij kumar stha

Mon, 11 Sep 2006 10:03:27 +0000

Chandra Ji,
Your poem is really fantastic. Keep continue.
thx
chij

Comment on ईच्छा - प्रतीक चाम्लिङ्ग by: yang pitang chhu

Sun, 10 Sep 2006 15:33:22 +0000

dherai dherai dhanyabaad chha,pratik chamling bhailai ati hridaysparsi ra marmik kabitako lagi.yasari nai lekhdai garnu
hola safaltale tapailai awasya chumnechha.

Comment on नदी किनाराका लाशहरु (कविता) - सबिना सिन्धु by: Tufan

Sun, 10 Sep 2006 13:14:39 +0000

Maile ta kehi leknai naparla ni , sabina G…..

Kavita tarif ko kabil chaa …………
Great Job ,

have great litreary career……

Comment on मान्छेको परिचय ! - शिव प्रकाश by: sharma pawan,nepal ,KTM

Sat, 09 Sep 2006 05:01:58 +0000

कविताले मानवलाई मानवको वेरमा राम्रो सन्देश दिएको जस्तो लाग्यो । अनावश्यक शब्दको बोझ बिनको यो कविता सरल र सुबोध छ । कविजिलाई साधुवाद ! KTM, NEPAL

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: neelam angboohang

Fri, 08 Sep 2006 13:23:02 +0000

pashan ji, man chhune yathaarta parak kabita paskanu vayecha dherai dherai dhanyabad cha yaha lai. aagami dinharuma pani yahako kalam nirantar chali rahos vanne kamana cha .

nilam yu ke

Comment on गीत - दिलिप योन्जन by: Schoole Sathi

Thu, 07 Sep 2006 09:44:39 +0000

Hi Dilip,
I guess! you are the same Dilip nah?? “SAKURA” Album nikalne???

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Dil

Thu, 07 Sep 2006 04:04:09 +0000

Nice Poem Pashan ji, Keep it up.
~DIL~

Comment on गजल - कुमार कार्की by: reecha tiwari

Wed, 06 Sep 2006 05:37:27 +0000

hi kina yesto ramro ghazal lekheko kumu (kumar).man jydai choyo yo ghazal ley.good luck
bye

Comment on मान्छेको परिचय ! - शिव प्रकाश by: reecha tiwari

Wed, 06 Sep 2006 05:34:49 +0000

hi yo poem is perfectly good in sense of humanity .i like it .

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Bikash Sharma, Thailand

Wed, 06 Sep 2006 03:30:45 +0000

Dear Pashan Tamu ji,

Your poem is really appreciable. It really shows the picture of our poverty driven consequences and compulsion to be like Madan as in the poem Muna-Madan. I think it is also a shatire to our political leaders who distribute a lot of dreams about national development and in fact they concerns only with the development of their personal households.

Comment on लुट्यौ श्रीपेच …- देव गुरुङ by: jaya ram adhikari

Mon, 04 Sep 2006 12:25:01 +0000

देव दाई जान त के जन्थे कशी कुखुरा को साप्रो र त्रुबोग बियर पोखरा को दरबार मा खै रहेछ न बशी ग्नत्रन्त्र प्रेमी जनता को अझै पनि घाटी मा बादी र हेछ न रशी खशै जनता ले मगे र खोजे को जस् तो शासन प्रडाली अझै पनि नेपालि जणटा ले पयका छैनन २१सौ सप्तब्दी म पनि पहिला राजा हरु को राणा हरु को गुलाम अहैले भर्स्ट नेता हरु को चकारी गुलम गिरी ले नेपाली हरु को बहादुरि इमन्दरी गोर्खालि को देश भक्ती छोडेर चकारी र गुलम गिरी नोकर शा हि प्र बिटी ले गर्ढा अफ्हनो घटि रेतियर मर्ने अमर सिङ थापा र बल भल्भात्र कुबर जस्त नेपाली को ईतिहास नेपाली नेता हरु ले त भुली सके सेन क भर्दर हरु राजा पर्ती भफदर देश र जनता को पर्ती शमर्तिथ न्भयको कारण राजा दरबार अझै श्कृया हुँदै राजा बलियो जनतकम्ज र हुँदै घयो अझै पनि राजा काशी जला न जस्तो लग दैन यम बि हरु को उमिद थियो जनता लाई अन्तिम बिल्कल्प हेरम उ इ हरु को शान्ति पूर्ण जन क्रान्ति ले कश्तो रुप लिन्छ जुङल न जने हटियर पनि न त्यग्ने निण्रएए लियर गनत्रन्त्र म जने सकृया अन्धोलन अख्तियर गेरे को राम्रै हो सरकार ले पनि उनि हरु को कुरा सुन्न पर्द छाझै पनि नेता हरु राजा दरबार लाई बलियो पर्दै छ न केको कशी जाने दरबार म नै बश्ने हो

Comment on लुट्यौ श्रीपेच …- देव गुरुङ by: prakash ghatane(bisswokarma)

Mon, 04 Sep 2006 11:20:09 +0000

nice poim, thanks deb ji

Comment on गीत - दिलिप योन्जन by: Balk Gurung

Sat, 02 Sep 2006 17:24:07 +0000

Hello ! Dilip jeeeeee. Hi there.
Very good to reading your song. Fantastic. It does touched deeply into grief soul. Please, keep up contineuing.
Hopefully you may provide me your email address. - to balk_grg@yahoo.co Wishing you all the best. A missing friend.

Comment on गजल -दुर्गा राई by: minu singapore

Sat, 02 Sep 2006 15:58:12 +0000

good job durgaji

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Kishore

Sat, 02 Sep 2006 12:25:47 +0000

Dear Pasan,
Good Day,

Realy I love your feeling. What a great thinking!!!!
We are hoping such feeling….

we want to see your photo, may you send..

Thanks & Regards,

Kishore
Doha,
Qatar.

Comment on मनको फूलबारी - राजेन्द्र by: sagar

Sat, 02 Sep 2006 08:03:09 +0000

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Suman

Sat, 02 Sep 2006 06:46:27 +0000

Pashan ji,
Kawita sarai bhabuk lagyo, tapai ko kawita le dhukhi Nepali ko man lai kehi ber jhan dukhai diyo..,

Thanks

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Priya

Fri, 01 Sep 2006 13:37:47 +0000

Pashan Dai

उफ्, कस्तो नमिठो नियति छ हाम्रो
कोही / कोही देश बिर्सेर रुन सक्छन्
कोही / कोही देश सम्झेर रुन सक्छन्
त्यसैले फेरि फेरि लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु कविता लेख्छन्
कसैले माने के भो ? नमाने के भो?
लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु अचेल पनि मुनामदन लेख्छन् /
लेखिरहन्छन् ।

It’s really Great Poem.. heart touchable..words!!! Keep on writing..
प्रिया

Comment on लक्ष्मीप्रसादहरु मुनामदन लेख्छन् / लेखिरहन्छन् … - पशन तमू by: Priya

Fri, 01 Sep 2006 13:36:11 +0000

Pashan Dai
It’s really Great Poem.. heart touchable..words!!! Keep on writing..
प्रिया

Comment on गजल - दुर्गा राई by: suman

Sun, 27 Aug 2006 06:11:04 +0000

HI DURGA JI
NAMASKAR
VERY NICE UR POEM

Comment on आई लभ यू - देव गुरुङ by: bhesh raj gurung

Fri, 25 Aug 2006 17:26:20 +0000

dev dai, namaskaar.
kavita nikkai stariya laagyo, ajhai aagaami din haru maa pani feri tapai ko sahitya srijana maajhidai ra khaaridai jawos bhanne subhechhya sahit,
Bhai : Bhesh. Japan bata…

Comment on देश नै नरहेपछि (कविता) - केशर के राई by: minu singapore

Fri, 25 Aug 2006 14:46:40 +0000

wowow malaita sarai man paryo hau

Comment on ‘राईफलको नालबाट…’ (समीक्षा)-रामकृष्ण बान्तावा by: minu singapore

Fri, 25 Aug 2006 14:39:16 +0000

attiiiiiii ramro

Comment on नेपाल (गीत) -सञ्जीव राई by: minu singapore

Fri, 25 Aug 2006 14:30:29 +0000

goooooooooood job sanjeevji

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: Durga Rai

Thu, 24 Aug 2006 09:11:04 +0000

स मित्र साथिहरु,
तपाई हरु कै सल्लहा सुझाब को खुड्किलो चढ्दै आज यो हरफ सम्म आइपुगेको छु, यो शाब्दिक यात्रको साहारा जो तपाई हरु नै हुनुहुन्छ, केहि लेख्छु जुन जिन्दगिको तितो मिठो, उहि जिन्दगिमा पाए भेटिएको अनुभव अनि अनुभुतिहरु, यहि दुनियाले भन्ने भाग्य, कर्म, बाध्यता, बिबस्ता मै मेरो लेखाई सिमित छ, किनकि म पनि यहि दुनियाको एउट प्राणि हुँ, तपाई हरु जस्तै अनि तपाई हरु सङ्गै, यस्तै सब्दहरु बटुल्छु, जस्लाई तपाईहरु हेरि दिनु हुन्छ पढिदिनुहुन्छ, आशा छ अझै तपाईहरु को सामु अरु नया नौलो लिएर आउने छु अनि आईरहने छु, हवस्त मित्रहरु नमस्ते ।।

दुर्गा राई, भोजपुर, हाल काठमण्डौ

Comment on धर्ती, प्राण र प्रतिविम्व - मोती चाम्लीङ्ग by: minu singapore

Tue, 22 Aug 2006 16:23:42 +0000

motije ekdam ramro chha tapaiko lekh

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: naren chamling ( from germany)

Tue, 22 Aug 2006 12:23:09 +0000

दुर्गा जि तपाईको कबिता धेरेइ राम्रो छ। तर जति दुख भय् पनि हरेस् नखानु होस्। प्रयास् गर्देई जानु होस् अबस्य् येक् दिन् तपाईले चाहेको पाउनु हुने छ।

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: frustrate, bro, phuket, thailand

Tue, 22 Aug 2006 08:56:06 +0000

Jagadish Samal lai didinus yo Gajal, yesle saar paunechha pakkei pani, Hridaya chhune sabda haru chhan, sayad tapaiko pahilo pahilo prayas hola, tarif garna layak 6.
Keep it up……..

Comment on गजल - दुर्गा राई by: suman

Tue, 22 Aug 2006 04:44:53 +0000

DURGA JI YASTO MUTU CHUNE KABITA TAPAI KO READ GARDA MERO TA MUTU KUTUKA KHANCHHA
SUMAN SHRESTHA
DOHA QATAR
SUMAN_SHRESTHA433@YAHOO.COM

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: suman

Tue, 22 Aug 2006 04:37:39 +0000

DURGA JI GHAR TA AAUTAI DISTRICT RAHICHHA BHOJPUR KATA HO MERO PANI BHOJPUR TAXAR MA HO ANI TAPAI CO KABITA AKDAM MAAN PARYO PHERI PANI YASTAI KABITA LIHERA AAUNU HOLA LA I WILL WAIT ALWAYS FOR UR POEM
FRIEND KATA BATA HO AAHELE ABOARD NEPAL OR FROM MERO JINDAGI SAGA MILNE GARI KABITA LEKHNU BHAYACO MA THANK YOU OK U CAN SEND MAIL THIS ADD MA
SUMAN_SHRESTHA433@YAHOO.COM
OK BYE SEE YOU NEXT TIME

Comment on आई लभ यू - देव गुरुङ by: suman

Tue, 22 Aug 2006 04:29:42 +0000

hi deeb i like ur poem
try again for next poem ok good bless

Comment on असत् - खेति ! - शिव प्रकाश by: shiva prakash

Mon, 21 Aug 2006 21:05:38 +0000

thank u
sagar jee nad tarun jee
shiva prakash

Comment on असत् - खेति ! - शिव प्रकाश by: Tarun

Mon, 21 Aug 2006 17:57:32 +0000

very nice and messageful poem in Nepali from Boston.
Shivaji keep on your pen active.
Tarun Poudel

Comment on कविता बाँच्नेलाई (कविता) - रमेश पौडेल by: yangya luitel akalyatri

Sun, 20 Aug 2006 11:27:44 +0000

bishnu bhai timro lekh rachana haru dhaerai ramra chan phari pani yastai yasstai l;ekhja rachana haru timara pathana pau ra uter uter pargatko garna chancu timi bata sirjit lekha haru jo kohi prami huko pani man chune kghalaka chan tesaile pani timile yasta lekhaharu lekhana nachad la ok
uhi timro vholo chichune brother
yangya luitel yakelyatri
putalisadak kathmandu nepal

Comment on नेपाल (गीत) -सञ्जीव राई by: yangya luitel akalyatri

Sun, 20 Aug 2006 11:17:37 +0000

sanjib jee tapaiko lekha rachana le mero man chayo mero manma anek parkarka vawanaha ubjekachan tivawanaharu ma taspai samu kasari bekta garna skatheya ra tehi pani yo sano comment marpfta tapaile phari pani yasati yastai vawana haru korna navhulnu hola bhandai tapaibata tada huna chanchu ok
yangya luitel yakalyatri
putalisadak kathamandu nepal

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: RAI Hemraj

Sun, 20 Aug 2006 09:15:15 +0000

Durga jee!!
Kati ramro geet rahechha! Dhanyabaad yati ramro geet rachera hamee jasta pathatk laai paskanu bhaekoma. Geet ekdum ramro chha tatha shabda samyojan wah wah!!!
Yastai yastai geet tatha anya lekhharu ajhai ajhai padhna paau…..yahako pragatiko kaamana.

RAI Hemraj

Comment on गजल - कुमार कार्की by: caspina

Thu, 17 Aug 2006 17:00:08 +0000

कुमार I LOVE YR GAJALतर यसरि कहिलेकाहीं माtर पढन पाउदा दुख लाgछ तेसैले continute दिनुहोला…………..

Comment on आई लभ यू - देव गुरुङ by: Dev Gurung

Thu, 17 Aug 2006 14:34:13 +0000

बादल कमल जी,
कविता मन पराउनु भएकोमा धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद र गुरुङ्को छोराले लेखेको कविता भएर होकि अलि शङ्कालु दृस्टिले हेर्नु भाको छ हेहे,,,हे,हे,कसैको चोरेको होइन आफैले कोरेको हो । आगमी दिनहरुमा अझ राम्रो कविता हरु पस्काउने बचन दिदै हजुरहरुको माया निरन्तर पाउने आशामा छु ।

धन्याबाद ।

Comment on आई लभ यू - देव गुरुङ by: badal kamal

Tue, 15 Aug 2006 20:10:31 +0000

DEB JEE
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Comment on कविता बाँच्नेलाई (कविता) - रमेश पौडेल by: roshan

Tue, 15 Aug 2006 16:23:19 +0000

i want to send u my some poem but i didn’t found that where to i stsrt

Comment on धन्दुकारी धनको लागि - उत्तम श्रेष्ठ ‘सेन’ by: ashish chhetri

Tue, 15 Aug 2006 13:45:30 +0000

Kavitama thorai bhab bhaepani bhanna khojeko chahi k ho bujhiena bhetera kura garaula uttam jee .

Comment on आई लभ यू - देव गुरुङ by: Dev Gurung

Tue, 15 Aug 2006 13:23:46 +0000

आदर्णिय पाठक बृन्द्,
मैले छरेको अक्षर हरुलाई कविताको रुपमा मन पराइदिनु भएकोमा यहाँहरु प्रती हार्दिक अभार ब्यक्त गर्न चाहन्छु । साथै अगामी दिनहरुमा यहाँहरु समक्ष अझ राम्रो कविता हरु पस्काउने जमर्को गर्ने छु ।

तपाइहरुको देव गुरुङ्

Comment on असत् - खेति ! - शिव प्रकाश by: sagar shree

Mon, 14 Aug 2006 05:03:36 +0000

कवितमा गहन् बिचार छ, राम्रो लाग्यो । धन्यबाद ।

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: Indra Rai

Sun, 13 Aug 2006 13:05:16 +0000

I like this web site.Now I m in Malaysia .We stablish here one letrary foroum “Parbasi Nepali Sahitya Manch Malaysia”.So we want send our letrucher,please help us.

Comment on आई लभ यू - देव गुरुङ by: GRG JHAM BDR.

Sun, 13 Aug 2006 07:58:26 +0000

yes Dev Dai very well, i thing you are really like kabi.yes bro. you are not only kabi you are good Artist, have a good luck.
Thanks JHAM GRG.

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: suju

Sat, 12 Aug 2006 11:59:24 +0000

wa wa durga ji tahpahi ko kabita ta mali ak dam man pareyo

Comment on आई लभ यू - देव गुरुङ by: Rai

Fri, 11 Aug 2006 07:05:57 +0000

kabita mitho cha, Hk ko subject ma lekheko kabita more nice to read.. Hope we get chance to read…….

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: yang pitang chhu

Mon, 07 Aug 2006 16:03:04 +0000

durgajee dherai marmik ani mitho kavitako laagi dherai dherai
dhanyabaad chha

Comment on मेरी माया कस्ती छिन्? - नवीन वि.क. by: prakash bisswokarma

Mon, 07 Aug 2006 07:00:48 +0000

nice poim thanks to u and god bless u

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: Mausam

Sat, 05 Aug 2006 23:52:06 +0000

durga jee
very nice one gajal keep it up
thanks

mausam
pokhara

Comment on आई लभ यू - देव गुरुङ by: Mausam

Sat, 05 Aug 2006 23:50:06 +0000

sorry Dev jee,

Comment on आई लभ यू - देव गुरुङ by: Mausam

Sat, 05 Aug 2006 23:49:24 +0000

Durga jee !

wouuuuuu ! nice poem, thanks alots, keep it up.

thank you
Mausam
Pokhara.

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: niiiiiiiiii

Fri, 04 Aug 2006 19:46:51 +0000

durga ji, kabita parne awasar milyo aaja, tapai haraye pani rachana haru naharaos vanne kamana cha….mitho lagyo dherai dherai dhanyabad suvakaman aajha tapaiko kalam haru abiral bagdai jaos, niiiiiiiiiiiiiii uk

Comment on जिन्दगीको खेल… - दुर्गा राई by: daswon

Fri, 04 Aug 2006 09:11:33 +0000

wah kohi jawaf chhaina durga rai ji carry on

very nice one

Comment on गजल - देव गुरुङ by: bishnu sharma

Tue, 01 Aug 2006 12:41:06 +0000

हाँस्दै वोल्दै दुई मुटु वीच खोई कहिले देखि ,
गहिरो माया वसि सकेछ थाहै भएन मलाई ।
झट्टै हेर्दा वगैचामा फूल मात्रै देखे ,
काँढा पनि हुदो रहेछ थाहै भएन मलाई ।

ठड्याईसके थिए मैले सपनाको महल ,
सपना त सपना नै हुन्छ यादै भएन मलाई ।
समाज नामको धमिरोले हाम्रो प्रेमको डोरी ,
शनै शनै काटि दिएछ थाहै भएन मलाई ।

अभावले चाट्यो अनि कति वेदनाले पोल्यो ,
जिन्दगीले ढाँट्यो कसरी विश्वासै भएन मलाई ।
आफ्नै भाग्य खोटो रहेछ दोष कसैको छैन ,
मनपर्नेलाई वेहोर्ने त भाग्यै भएन मलाई ।

थाकि सके मन मेरो घाउ सिउदा सिउदै ,
हृदय नै फाट्यो कति यादै भएन मलाई ।
आँट गरेर ठूलै दाउमा जुवा खेले मैले ,
जिन्दगी नै हारेपछि होसै भएन मलाई

Comment on कविता बाँच्नेलाई (कविता) - रमेश पौडेल by: bishnu sharma

Tue, 01 Aug 2006 10:31:50 +0000

मीनाको याद मा

हरपल तिम्रो यादमा म तडपि रहेको छु |
निष्ठुरि तिमि मेरो साथ छोडि दियौ तर
हरपल तिम्रो यादमा म लेटर लेखिरहेको छु |
कबिता काहनि लेखछु भनेको थिए तर
हरपल कपिमा तिम्रो नाम लेखिरहेको छु |
तिमिलाइ छोड्ने मन त थिएन नै तर
हरपल तिमिलाइ भुलने कोशिश गरि रहेको छु|
तिम्रो नाम न लिने कशम तो खाएको थिए तर
हरपल म तिम्रो नाम कल्पीरहेको छु|
तिमि लाइ मायां लाउनु मेरो भुल भयो
हरपल म तिमिलाइ सम्झी मुटु पोली रहेको छु|
तिमिले गाउंमा गरेको बचा कसमको याद ले
हरपल तिम्रो याद मा म रोइ रहेको छु|

Comment on कविता बाँच्नेलाई (कविता) - रमेश पौडेल by: kamal shrma

Tue, 01 Aug 2006 09:04:58 +0000

हाँस्दै वोल्दै दुई मुटु वीच खोई कहिले देखि ,
गहिरो माया वसि सकेछ थाहै भएन मलाई ।
झट्टै हेर्दा वगैचामा फूल मात्रै देखे ,
काँढा पनि हुदो रहेछ थाहै भएन मलाई ।
ठड्याईसके थिए मैले सपनाको महल ,
सपना त सपना नै हुन्छ यादै भएन मलाई ।
समाज नामको धमिरोले हाम्रो प्रेमको डोरी ,
शनै शनै काटि दिएछ थाहै भएन मलाई ।
अभावले चाट्यो अनि कति वेदनाले पोल्यो ,
जिन्दगीले ढाँट्यो कसरी विश्वासै भएन मलाई ।
आफ्नै भाग्य खोटो रहेछ दोष कसैको छैन ,
मनपर्नेलाई वेहोर्ने त भाग्यै भएन मलाई ।
थाकि सके मन मेरो घाउ सिउदा सिउदै ,
हृदय नै फाट्यो कति यादै भएन मलाई ।
आँट गरेर ठूलै दाउमा जुवा खेले मैले ,
जिन्दगी नै हारेपछि होसै भएन मलाई ।

Comment on गजल - देव गुरुङ by: Dev Gurung

Sun, 30 Jul 2006 14:32:39 +0000

आदर्णीय पाठक बृन्द्,
गजल बिधामा यो मेरो पहिलो सिर्जना हो र यसमा केही त्रुटिहरु छन । र पनि यहाँहरुले मन परिदिनु भएकोमा यहाँ हरुप्रती हार्दिक अभार ब्यक्त गर्न चाहन्छु । अनि आगमी दिनहरुमा राम्रो सिर्जनाहरु पस्काउने कोशीस् गर्नेछु ।

धन्यवाद,

Comment on गजल - देव गुरुङ by: deepa

Sun, 30 Jul 2006 12:38:11 +0000

Dev ji Namasthe ! tapai ko gajal kati sundar ra kati marmik chha really gajal parera dherai happy bhaye .la yesari nai aphu rachana haru pathaudai granu hola .

tapai ko pathakh
deepa am
from
nepal

Comment on शुभ-कामना, देशलाई ! (कविता) - शिव प्रकाश by: deepa

Sun, 30 Jul 2006 12:27:09 +0000

shiva ji lai thanks hai nice poem rachana granu bhayeko ma.

deepa