लांकुरीको रुख अनि म ( कविता)-आशा भुटिया

October 26th, 2005

-आशा भुटिया

आज म फेरि अनायसै
त्यही जमीनमा उभिन आएं
जहां वर्षौं वर्षपहिले
तिमीले मलाई छाडेका थियौ । सबै सबै उस्तै त रहेछन् !
हामीले सुस्ताउने चप्लेटी ढुंगा
त्यो त्यसरी नै पल्टिरहेकोरहेछ,
जसरी हाम्रो स्वागतको लागि विगतमा त्यो लम्पसार परिरहन्थ्यो ।
हावाको सुरिलो वेग पनि
उसरी नै मन्दचालमा चल्दोरहेछ,
जसरी हाम्रो मिलनमा रमाएर
झनझन अधीर र चञ्चल बनी
सुस्तरी सुस्तरी हामीलाई स्पर्षगरिरहन्थ्यो ।
हामीले ऐंसेलु टिप्ने ऐंसेलुघारी पनि
केही थोरै पातलो मात्र भएछ,
तर ऐंसेलु त त्यसरी नै फल्दोरहेछ
जसरी तिमी र मैले कांडाको पर्वाह नगरी
टिपेर खांदाको बेला फल्ने गथ्र्यो ।
अनि पारि डांडाबाट खसिरहने झरना
त्यो उसरी नै उलूदै झर्दोरहेछ,
जसरी हाम्रो हृदयलाई पुलकित पार्दै
त्यतिखेर अनवरत बगिरहन्थ्यो ।
पश्चिमतिरको क्षितिज पनि उस्तै रहेछ
जसरी विगतको गोधुली सांझमा
हाम्रो तडपाईलाई निहारी निहारी
उपहासमा त्यो हामीप्रति हांस्ने गरथ्यो ।
तर अफशोच !
यो लांकुरीको रुख मात्र त्यस्तो रहेन,
यो त ज्यादै रुग्ण र बुढो भएछ !
यस्मा त पातहरु नै लाग्न छाडेछ !
मेरो मनभित्रको खडेरी झैं
यस्को भित्रमा पनि खडेरी लागेछ ।
मेरो अन्तरभित्रको व्यथाहरु जस्तै
यस्को भित्रमा पनि रोगहरु लागेछ ।
मैले उदाशीमा जिन्दगी बिताए जस्तै
यस्ले पनि पतझडमा समय बिताउनु परेछ ।
मेरो जिन्दगीको एक्लोपन झैं
यो पनि एकलासमा एक्लै परेछ ।
आखिर तिमीले चाहे झैं
यो लांकुरीको रुख र मेरो जीवन
एउटै ढांचामा रुपान्तरित भइसकेछ ।

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24 प्रतिक्रियाहरू / Comments आफ्नो प्रतिक्रिया दिनुहोस् / Add your own

  • 1. Lara Thapa  |  October 27th, 2005 at 5:44 am

    Wow ! sachhai man chhuyo………..

  • 2. Asha Bhutiya  |  October 27th, 2005 at 6:23 am

    Thank you Lara.Tariph gari diyau, muri-muri dhanybad. Timro appreciation lai i’ll keep in mind…..always !

  • 3. NISHAN  |  October 27th, 2005 at 4:22 pm

    HO KABITA RAMRO CHHA……………………….

  • 4. Binay Lama  |  October 28th, 2005 at 10:56 am

    Ashaji,
    Kavita saral bhayera pani marmasparak chha, Ajha dherai kavita haruko apeksha gardachhu.. sathai “HAPPY TIHAR.”

  • 5. Nima Gyaltsen Sherpa'Goparma'- Sysdney, Australia  |  October 28th, 2005 at 12:59 pm

    Mitra Asha

    Kavita ko lagi dhanya bad ! Sisir ko Jadole kathang riyera, Lakuri ko pat jhareko huna sakcha, Tara Basanta ko Sumadhur agamon le Sukomol paluwa haru firna sakcha. Tapaiko jindagi ma mo yahi Asha gardachu. ‘Keep your head high up,there is a light at the end of the tunnel.’

    Bas, Uhi tapaiko Suva chintak
    Nima

  • 6. jaulo yuenlong  |  October 29th, 2005 at 1:50 am

    asaji bhautik sworup, manchheko akriti, ani prakirtik pakkai pani ustai hunchha, tehi hunchha, tesari nai banchi raheko hunchha. lakuriko pat kina napalayeko hola bhannu bhayechha, ani buta pani budho bhayechha, tyota samayako prabha ho. sayad usali pani sadhai basantamai ramna man thiyo hola usai gari aphno jindagilai pani tehi lakuriko rukh sangai kelaunu bhayechha, j bhaye pani sansarko paristhiti bujherai sammahalina khojnus, bisam pristhitima pani hansna siknus mero anurodh chha. pherika dinharuma pani stai samagirika sath upasthiti hunuhos………..k.thapa.

  • 7. Asha Bhutiya  |  October 30th, 2005 at 4:58 am

    Hi Nishan, Binay, Nima and Jauloji, thanks for comments. Yo ta kewal mero kalpanako ‘Lankuriko rukh’ ho jaslai maile kehi barsha agadi pahadko euta ukalo batoma bheteki thien. Malai Tyasko awasthale kata kata chwassa chhoeko thiyo. I just tried to express it…! Comment ko lagi pheri pani dherai dherai DHANYABAD. Yours Asha.

  • 8. Balk Gurung  |  October 30th, 2005 at 8:36 am

    My self, I’m from Kuwait. My origin homeland is Dharan.
    When I visit hknepal.com realy I feel grate and glad and poet is more much interested. I hv been everyday hknepal. Thank you very much for organization. Please, I hv some article regarding poets. If I send it by attached email you may provide opportunity if the article is sweetable?

    Once again Thanks to Organizatioin.

    Regards

    Balk

  • 9. Asha Bhutiya  |  October 31st, 2005 at 12:14 am

    Balkji, Actually, i’m not an authorised person to tell you the procesure for sending articles. Althouhg, in my opinion, you can do as you said. Try to be one of the literary-friends of ours. Best luck. -Asha

  • 10. Nima Gyaltsen Sherpa'Goparma'- Sysdney, Australia  |  October 31st, 2005 at 11:57 am

    Asha Jee
    Maile sanoma padeko thiya- Jaha pugai na Rabi (sun) Teha pugchan kabi… Maile tehi paye tapai ko prastutima feri pani dui sabda lekhna kautu hal jageu. Tapako kalpana ko gagan chulidai jawos. Taiko sahitik koseli le mo jasta aru dherai pathak haruko trishna mateu sahayog milna sakcha. yeso kam bata fursad milayer computer cheuma (dil) basi tapai haruko rachana aka kudaua kasko po thakai nametiye la ra ? Je hos agami din haruma yestai Vadrase, thotney, baisa ra bakai na ko rukharu liyera aunu hola. Tapai lai sadhu bad cha.
    Hardik suva kama sahit- tapai ko priya pathk
    Nima

  • 11. Asha Bhutiya  |  November 2nd, 2005 at 7:47 am

    Nimaji, Tapainle jun yo utsah ra prerana dinu bhayo, ma ati nai anugrihit chhu. Yaslai sandhai samjhirakhne chhu. Mero bicharma lekhai herda tapain pani pakkai lekhnuhunchha. Kabita lekhera pathaunus, la… ? -Yours Asha.

  • 12. Bewar!se  |  November 9th, 2005 at 1:36 am

    Wah…Wah…Asha Ji, Kati ramro Kavita,Ani kati saral bhav ma Himalko Chiso pani Sa…la…..la……la…bage jastai,Tapai pani yo kavita ma ati Sundar bhawana ma bagnu bhayeko rahechha,Kavita BIYOGANTA bhaye pani Tapaiko yo kosheli le HKNepal ka pathak haru ko man pakkai chhoyeko chha.Tapaiko namle nai bhanchha ki future ma pani aru yestai Kosheli ko ASHA
    garna sakinchha.Ani Tyo lakuriko rukh muni Tapai lai chhodera jane kaha Pugyo hola…..Hahaha I’m just Kidding. Keep it up
    Your Well Wisher
    Bewar!se

  • 13. sabi  |  November 15th, 2005 at 7:38 pm

    darsan aasha di
    you are great di… i dont belived it…… maile kahile soche ko thiye na mero di yeti mitho kabi ta ra gazal lekhnu hunchha vanera..
    u know di aaja first time ho maile kabita pade ko…….. ekdamai man paryo……tyo patai ko pratek sabda ma bastabik jastai lagyo….. really nice di…… keep it up…
    u r sis
    kanchhi

  • 14. dinesh dai  |  November 20th, 2005 at 2:59 pm

    kabita ramro lagio.kabita saral chha tara bishaya bastu yatharthama sametekole garda saarai marmik ra dristipurna(visible-a whole picture can be seen) chha.Timi hami rahadai naw tara tio chapleti dhunga annya premi premika ko lagi bhetne sthan hunenai chha.sanai sanai kabita lekhindai janechha.

  • 15. kumar  |  December 31st, 2005 at 7:54 am

    asha jee
    tapaika sabai kavita haru padhe .HAmi pani Qatar ma muglani saugat namko paktri (sahityik bulletine) publish gari raheka chhau tyasko lagi tapaiko rachana pathauna saknu hunchha hamro patrikako email adress muglanisaugat@yahoo.com

    contact:-
    kumar karki mobile no.09745996407
    email:- kumar1985karki@yahoo.com
    Tilu aviral
    Mobile no:-09745379598

  • 16. chandra gurung(ramailo)  |  December 2nd, 2006 at 5:31 am

    hi asha, is that you? well there is no doubt. you are the princess of poem. and i know you are …….. …………. really …………my …… who making me crazy with your beautiful geet gazal. I appreciated on your khubi. chandra_gurung31@yahoo.com

  • 17. chandra gurung(ramailo)  |  December 2nd, 2006 at 5:37 am

    hi, it seems that you are influenced from “shirish ko phool” though you did great job dear. liked it. sorry for delay responsed. chandra_gurung31@yahoo.com

  • 18. chandra gurung(ramailo)  |  December 2nd, 2006 at 6:02 am

    hi asha greetings

    yati ramro kabita lekhne manchhele kina ho lakuri ko rukh lai comment no 7 ma “jaslai ani tyasko” bhanera sambodhan gareko yo ta direct you are point out some one bhayena ra ? ke lakuri ko bot lai jaslai ani tyaslai byakti sombodhan garinchha ra? Is that not a nature? How you made a mistake? try to post as much as suitable word dear. thanx for remember power that you still not forget the lakuri ko rukh. Just kidding. keep on your feeling.

  • 19. BJ Bnatawa Rai  |  January 17th, 2008 at 7:39 pm

    Assha sis tis is really very nice to know your feelings all as a poem, which people can explain his/her feelings from the bottom of heart really that is a one nice poem or nobel. Very nice poem keep it up.

  • 20. Deepak rana Magar bhanu-8 turture  |  May 18th, 2008 at 12:28 pm

    अनायासै के भो मलाई
    तिम्म्रो कवितामा हराइ सकेछुम
    दर्पण भयो वेदना मलाई
    आफैलाई त्येहा पयेछु म
    ………
    निर्णय रहेछ ज़िंदगी
    मुटुको चिता जल्ने नै भयो .
    येस्तै हो भने ज़िंदगी
    चादनी रात ले पोल्ने नै भयो .

  • 21. P.Rai  |  October 19th, 2008 at 4:27 pm

    Manai chhoyo. Sarei ramro. dhannebad. P. Rai, malaysia.

  • 22. Amar  |  December 12th, 2008 at 9:59 am

    Ma ta first time hknepal ko pathak huna pugeko chhu. malai thahei thiena sathile bhaneko ho. sarai ramro raicha. malai kabitaharu padna man parcha, yo kabita sarai ramro lagyo. karan 1 ta mero gauma pani lakuriko jangal cha dosro kura mero jibanma pani yestai kehi bhaeko thiyo. kabi lai dhannebat chha. tara euta kura mathi git gajal lekhne kabi pani uha nai hunuhuncha ki arkai almalma pare. thank you. Assam, India.

  • 23. Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar  |  December 17th, 2008 at 6:48 am

    Aasha g!
    matrai kabita lekhiechha

  • 24. sanu thapa  |  March 6th, 2009 at 10:53 pm

    hi ahsa g namaste call me plz this my no 0060167266425 sanu thapa bye asha………………………………………….

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