कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु… (गजल) - आशा ‘विदीर्ण’

November 8th, 2008

कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु…

- आशा ‘विदीर्ण’

‘नारी पुरुष समान भनी’ संसार ढाट्ने मान्छेहरु,
हामी पनि हेरौ लौन कुरा काट्ने मान्छेहरु ।

जतै पनि छरिया’छन् पौरुषता त्यो देखाउंदै,
पैसासंग आफ्ना छोरी चेली साट्ने मान्छेहरु ।

‘दुबैलाई समान हक’ भनी व्यवहार अर्को गरी,
आफैले नै थुकेको थुक ‘लप्प’ चाट्ने मान्छेहरु ।

मुखले भन्दा ‘समान अवसर समान कार्य’ भनिदिने,
घरमा चाहिं पुरुषराजको हैकम छाँट्ने मान्छेहरु ।

अब नारी चुप लाग्दैन होश गरे सबैजना,
नारी जातलाई खुट्टामुनि थिच्न आँट्ने मान्छेहरु ।

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15 प्रतिक्रियाहरू / Comments आफ्नो प्रतिक्रिया दिनुहोस् / Add your own

  • 1. raj shrestha  |  November 12th, 2008 at 1:40 pm

    hi asha
    this is raj shrestha from nepal
    i really like your GAZAL the way you wrote, you are 100% write all the nepali wopmen are always dominated by the man because they always think they are most powerful in the world, but i do not think so and i totally do not agree with them the way they think, i know i am also a man but it dose not matter, what i am it dose not make any different to you, but your GAZAL owoooooooooo ……it really makes me so happy and make me so proud we have women such like you who can fight alone with all man who has really negative thinking about women, and you gave them really great lesson i personally requested to all man to read this GAZAL and please don’t do those kind of activities which makes really hurt to our nepali women, at last would you mind to be my friend? if yes please mail me i will be waiting to your reply. let me say hi not bye till next coments.

  • 2. परिहास सुब्बा  |  November 13th, 2008 at 1:59 am

    आशा जी तपाँइ, पाठकहरुका लागी जहिले सुन्दर बिषयबस्तुहरु शब्दहार भित्र उन्नु हुन्छ। जो साहजै सित मगजहरु संग ठोक्किन्छन्। तपाँइको लेखनमा मलाई मन पर्ने पक्ष पनि यहि नै हो।

    परिहास सुब्बा
    parihass_subba@yahoo.com

  • 3. Abhimat  |  November 17th, 2008 at 4:49 pm

    Raj Shreshta ko kurama ma sahmat chhu.
    ani ho ek lekhika lai sayad dherai samay nahuna sakchha dherai fan harulai lekhna wa samparka garna maile pani dherai nai palta
    asha ji lai yahi nai kura dohoryaudai aayeko chhu.
    ended i ll wish you all the best. Asha ji.

  • 4. bharu pal  |  November 20th, 2008 at 6:26 am

    it is simppy a supurb gajal. I liked it and I believe every paathak loved it. wish you good luck

    bharu pal
    uk

  • 5. Loyem Bharapa-3 panthar  |  November 25th, 2008 at 4:30 am

    Bahinee Aasa!
    Gazal lekhiecha yo gatilena kalam agadi jawas

  • 6. Lara  |  November 27th, 2008 at 3:00 pm

    Asha Di,
    Simply great “gazal” loved it and expecting as always to read more from you.

    Bahini

  • 7. firefly  |  November 28th, 2008 at 12:07 am

    Really appreciate u r rite!! keep it flowing Asha. .

  • 8. RATIVA K.C. Canada  |  December 12th, 2008 at 9:42 am

    After long time, i could be able to read your beautiful creation. Thanks a lot. Every time you give very touchy expression in you writing that gives slight pat in heart. Although, this gajal hurts some DAJU-BHAI, (sorry for that) I am impressed and I really enjoyed it thinking it will give lesion to them who, unusually, think that they are much more…. than women. Pheri pani padhna pai rahun. Thank you. - Prativa, canada

  • 9. aemx  |  January 31st, 2009 at 1:00 pm

    waaaaaaaaaa aja ka nari good
    dhakune cha banaune cha ane key gara dhakunu cha good
    i like humm

    keep see its NariNepal.com
    more about nepalinari

  • 10. raj shrestha  |  February 4th, 2009 at 6:14 pm

    hi asha
    raj here
    how are you
    it is so nice GAZAL it really makes me proud yourself becaues this is all about the situation whiat is going on with nepaliese society,hanks very much and keep on writeing
    thanks bye for now
    your friend and bro raj

  • 11. sanu thapa  |  March 6th, 2009 at 10:51 pm

    hi asha g namaste ma sanu thapa magar hajur kojallai thax sibaye dina ta k nai sak6ura hai my no0060167266425,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,okbye asha?

  • 12. nir  |  June 20th, 2009 at 5:38 pm

    hi!asha g!namaste!
    so nice gazal harpal astai prakarko gazal ani lekha haru padna paun.it is nice & great realy makes me proud yours self.
    thanks malai lagchha ajhai ramro ramro ani gahakila sabda haruko sathma agadi badnuhos yahi chha mero vanai yours friends

  • 13. nir  |  June 22nd, 2009 at 12:40 pm

    hello! namaste…………..

    ani kina tapaiko sayhitay haru kami mattra ma pauna thaliyo ni k lekhanai chhadnu vo ki kaso?nari vayara nriko sanman ra adhikar lai pardarson grnu pareu ni asha ji! ani ramro ramro lekha haru ko sathma bihaniko kiran sari dekhna pau harpal pargatiko paila haruma……i like it.who knows that.mitha ani gahakila sabdaru sangai mirmire bihani sangai aaidinu hola asha g……bye

  • 14. mani  |  December 12th, 2009 at 4:27 pm

    yaha ko gajal ranro lageko chha thap prayas garthai janu hola hai
    ok .
    season

  • 15. Tiratth  |  June 13th, 2010 at 6:07 pm

    Hi Asha K cha Hajur Ko Halkhaber Malai Ekdamai man Paryo Hajur Le Lekheko Gajal Ajai Yo Bhanda Pani Ramro Lekhnu Hola Arko vhoti

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