हंगकंगभित्रको मेरो नेपाल ! (कविता)-प्रकाश के.सी.

December 9th, 2005

-प्रकाश के.सी.

एकसरो ईज्जतलाई
तन्काएर
आत्माको पीँघमा गाँठो बाँधी
एकहूल ‘कवि मन’
कवितामा उचालिन्छन्


‘मधूरस’मा आकासिन्छन् ।
भन्ने मात्र हो,
कम्मर त भाँच्चिँदैन,
जत्ति नै मट्काए पनि ।
‘झयाउरे’ शिरमाथि
‘लै बरी’ पाखुरामा
बलिवुड मच्चिन्छ
एकहूल कान्छी रहरहरु ।
माइली फुपु,
जेठी दिदी र उनकी बहिनीहरु
मामा र भान्जाहरुसँगै
धर्का धर्का आँशुहरु
नीःशब्द पिउँछन्,
अहा !
कस्तो राम्रो सिरियल !!
आत्माश्लाघाको विदीर्ण शहर
किंकर्तव्यविमुढ सम्वेदनाहरु,
मन हराएकाहरुका
बेमनहरु
कहिल्यै नझुक्ने, कहिल्यै नदब्ने
गीतका ‘नेपाली शिरहरु’
बुख्याचामा अडाईएका
हंगकंगको मेरो ‘नेपाल’ !
साँध पारेर
एउटाले उद्याउँछ,
अर्कैले ‘पाइन’ चढाउँछ,
केराका दाम्चा जस्ता स्वाभिमानमा
‘दक्षिण’कोले बाराम्बार परिक्षण गर्छ
छ्याक् छ्याक्….छ्याक् छ्याक्
अँगालोभरिका उष्णताहरुले
कुना-काप्चा
सेकाउँदै ‘कान्छी’
एउटा छेउमा उभिन्छे,
ढुंगा चपाउने बैँशहरु
डण्डामा गाभेर
तनक्क ढोकाको आसपास
जोश उभ्याउँदै ‘बहादूर’
देशलाई उकेरा दिन्छ,
ख्वै -
हाँस्छन् कि रुन्छन् !
तर,
गल्लीमा
भीर पाखामा
पहाडका दुल्काहरुमा
होटेलका रछ्यानहरुमा
सेलूनका हेडटवहरुमा
गेटमा,डोरमा,ढोकामा
अविच्छिन्न लम्पसार
हंगकंगको मेरो नेपाल ।
लाचार नीःसार समयहरुभित्र
लगातार बलात्कृत आत्माहरुमा
बारम्बार हीनताको स्खलन हुन्छ,
साहित्यकारहरु बीबीक्यू चपाउँदै
अभिमान उघ्राउँछन्,
उतैका ‘दक्षिण’ आउँछन्
उसैगरी नँग्याउँछन्,चिथोर्छन्,रगड्छन्,
स्वाभिमान मरेका आत्माहरु,
अहा !
कस्तो राम्रो सिरियल ।
खण्ड खण्डमा विखण्डित
सतासझैँ किनारा परेको
‘ने’ गुमाएर आघातले पालिएको
मर्लान्त रहरहरुले झयाँग्गिएको
कण्डमभित्रको वीर्य जस्तो
हंगकंगको मेरो ‘नेपाल’ ।

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  • 1. Lara  |  December 9th, 2005 at 6:27 pm

    Oho ! KCJee absouletly correct! Reality that we can’t denied as Sperm inside the Condom.

  • 2. Chandra S. Gurung  |  December 10th, 2005 at 4:29 am

    Kalaatmak & Bejood Poem with the higheest level of reality and artistic touch… The poet has become successful to give the poetic expression to the reality faced by the Neplis abroad, not only in HK but in all other countries too.
    Keep up the good work!

    chandra gurung/saudi

  • 3. MASKEY,ILL. USA  |  December 10th, 2005 at 4:34 am

    Haha, it is fact n reality, Prakash KC. jiu.
    but i felt , little bitter for literature, which u have been focused for
    literary.
    any way , u may have ur own feeling to complete ur poem this way.
    but if you won’t mind then i would like to suggest u, if u will get chance to drop next poem then u can use it is very common iN hong kong who are those guys extremely hanging around for their own name and fame in the peak of diff. ORGANIZATION.
    IT IS SIUTABLE poem for those guys not for literary.
    well, ur poem is real nice.
    thanks,
    expecting to read more poem just like this

  • 4. Prakash K.C.  |  December 10th, 2005 at 1:02 pm

    Thanks…friends…….!!
    Last month…the KaABHYaANJALI TEAM from Indian TV serial, had arrived here in HK, some Nepalese went to meet them and greet them. The days followed, they did shoot some episodes and sent them to India to broadcast, in one of that episodes…they humiliated Nepali circle in HK. At the very moment, all of so called BARISTHA KAVIs AND SAAHITYAKAARs had had a BBQ party at yuen long for the sake of their prosperities in terms of influences, and popularities. Somebodies are fuc….ing our sentiments at that time on media and at the other hand, those so called highly sentimental and JANNE SUNNE were having their great time….what a shame!!!
    I was trying to express my dissapointments on that,
    Hey…the great JANNE SUNNEs……don’t take me personally…okay?
    be fine with your so called historic gatherism
    Prakash K.C.

  • 5. Asha Bhutiya  |  December 10th, 2005 at 1:58 pm

    Dear Prakash K. C. Ji, I Read your comment. But, how can i express on your comment. You have said that all the sahityakaars and ‘barista kavis’, who went to the B.B.Q., were foolish and not intersted in our Nepalese society. Okay, you are the one who cares for Nepalese, in your word. But, i am really wonder that if you are in your right way, why are you wasting your time to watct Hindi serial instead of going to Neopalese Sahityik bhela ? If one loves his own community, he always listen, read and keep interest in his own language, his own natives and his own literature. And another way, you have used a nasty word ‘fuc….ing’, what does it mean ? This is a public blog, you sould not use such type of words. Okay, you are the greatest Nepalese sahityakar ( in my opinioni you think so), at least, you have to undersand that every Nepalese loves their nation and their language. Please, every time think positively before you write.

  • 6. Desh Bhakta  |  December 10th, 2005 at 2:10 pm

    Thik ho, thik ho Ashaji,.He rata makai, yo Prakash K.C. le ke lekhya’ ho yasto ? Aaphu bhane Hindi serial herera basne, arule aaphno Nepali bhashako lagi kehi garaun bhanda pani bhanjo halna khoje jasto ke lehkeko ? Pwakka mukhan hannu jasto, aaphi bideshi serialma ramaune, aphai kahin nabhaeko rastrabadi huna khojne. Pheri tyo ke lekheko apashabda ? Aaphule matra tyasto shabda janeko chha ki ke ho ? Laraji, Chandra S. Gurungji ra Maskeji le yasto manislai kina ukaseko ho bujhna sakina. Meaningless kura lekhera ke phaida ?

  • 7. Lara  |  December 10th, 2005 at 7:39 pm

    Prakash,
    It’s fine you are trying to express your disappointment and saying it is so called historic gatherism………..that’s your personal opinion yeah ! you can express whatever you have inside your heart great man!
    But, what’s your problem ? if JANNE SUNNE were having their great time. MALAI TA TIMI PO AJJA DHERAI JANNE SUNNE JASTO LAGYO after reading your comments by the way, ‘Phul ko ankha ma phulai sansar……….kanda ko ankha ma kandai sansar……………’ Kalo chasma lagayera sabai kalo dekhe jasto kura chai nagara na be positive kya.

  • 8. MASKEY,ILL. USA  |  December 10th, 2005 at 8:56 pm

    OHo, Desh bahkta Jiu , ma ta kaha tyo comment herekai po thien ni!
    ra po tyo uchhrinkhal kabita lae upadhi dieko ta.
    He Rata Makai , jyammai mukha hannu ranthanine gari hannu parne ho ni. ki kaso??
    maele ta tyo rangreji nepali apsabda ma ta akha lagaekai thien po, HE Rata Makkai, mukhhan jyammai hannu parne rathanine gari! ki kaso??

    i support ur comment HE Rata Makai. ur right.
    ur suporter
    Bhawani

  • 9. MASKEY,ILL. USA  |  December 10th, 2005 at 9:24 pm

    Well, sajjan bhaladmi Beikuff, Kabi jiu.
    thueek, nepali Nagrik bhaer sahitya lae apsabd pryog gari afno seer afai jhukaune ho ? murkh?
    i support ur kabita ko haraf just a few words which is i m gonna read for ur kavita.

    “Sadh parer euta le ughauchha ”
    “arko le paaen chadhauhh”
    “kera ko damcha jasto swabhiman ma”

    bhanne yati haraf matra le po maele tetika thulo upadhi dieko ta , Kavi jiu.
    baki kavita ka haraf le ta mero kansiri Ranan bhaesakeko thiyo, jhyam mukhaan ma ranthanine gari.
    any way, IF U want to be real pure respectable LITERARY then , please learn to be smart urself.
    i hate to read ur such as nasty word to using through chokho nepali sahityakar bhaer.
    regarding ur wording i thought u have lack of parenthood so u drop such a nasty word.
    otherwise u will respect ur self through this literature.
    be a modern , new generation smart hot blood but not with nasty word.
    ever i stay in USA, I NEVER heard such a nasty word in this place. ever never see in any kind of newpaper.
    it should go through only IN “PRONO” MAGAZINE, BUT U WROTE SUCH A CRITISIZE POEM THROUGH NASTY WORD.
    Don’t become Garbage position through ur poem.
    Hopefuly , u can learn by ur own mistake .
    be smart. we r human being so i don’t make big deal for ur such mistake.everyone have mistake n try to imporve through our own mistake, it will be perfect person,
    ur welcome for next poem with respectable wording for ur own goodwil.
    maskey

  • 10. Prakash K.C.  |  December 11th, 2005 at 1:20 am

    Hei…friends!!!
    Once again, you have coated me wrong. And at my comment, I had pointed that, don’t take me personally, but you took it and I don’t think why?
    I was with my comment on behalf of readers..those readers who would get knowledges, news, leteratures, or all in one,who would update themselves by you guys’s articles,stories etc,like, you are reader’s mind..and what we should expect from you guys is, spread the awareness about us and our surroundings, or another way,let us to be acknowledged our positions. Otherways, we all are working, you all are working, and we are reading you, you separate your time for literature and we separate our time to read them,so, on that way, you have responsibilities to let us know that we have been humiliated by other and you should rise our voice on that concerns, but, you did nothing.
    The next day, you filled the papers with your historic poets gatherism, some one described, what you did there, how much fun you had there, bla…..bla..like you have made us recoznible, how could you judge that ?
    Now, what I said about that, and you all try to let my voice down, how can you do that? If you think you are LITERATURE CREATER, then accept any kinda critics, ask, how many people here are in Hong Kong, who don’t miss to watch regular Indian TV serials? They all know about that, a lot of people have told me that..there should be concerned movement regarding the humiliations….! But,no one did nothing.
    Now, world is getting smaller day after day,and no matter what, in which language, you write, or read…literature be the literature..and nowadays..there are a lof of shadow words fo a lot of concrete words, I’m supporting that so called nast word….that is common….it’s a part of life, you can hear everywhere, don’t separate yourselves with that, even Hangyug Agyat had written on his Prateek Poem collection, just now, DR. Dhruba chandra Gautam has written something like that on his latest book JELIARA, and you all are in HK, be a little mordern, the fuc..king meant on that sentence was playing roughly, ok?
    Everytime, we can’t stick with our own values and regulations for language..it has to be grown wider, accept that.
    I was not staying at home and watching that god damn serials on that day, some body told me about that and I had checked then, I’m not a poet and not janne sunne indeed ,I’m just a reporter, who gathers news and sends them to Nepal, and on that vey day…I had a lunch meeting with an International photo journalist Keli Daily from Time Paper regarding the maoists problems in Nepal.
    If, my above mentioned comments did ruin your current status, I would say I did not mean that…
    That’s all..
    and one person..who wrote..pyanchcha mukhma hannu jasto, you can see me around anywhere…if you want, I can give you my address….come and show me your anger..you are always..welcome…
    just broaden your mind…grow up…ok?
    Prakash

  • 11. MASKEY,ILL. USA  |  December 11th, 2005 at 2:22 am

    NO BODY COATED U WRONG BUT IT RECALLED U BY UR MODERNIZE WORD FUCKING,
    IS IT , IT IS SUITABLE WORDS TO USE IN THIS BLOG????
    OFCOURSE, IT IS COMMON , NO MATTER WHAT DO U WANT TO SAY FOR UR OWN WORDS. THOUGH I WAS IN HK, N I HEARD VERY COMMONLY FROM VERY OLD PEOPLE WHO ARE READY TO HUG THEIR WON GRAND CHILD BUT THEY WERE HUGGING NEW RUPMATI AND EXPRESSING THEIR NASY WORD INFRONT OF NEPALI DIDI BAHINI OR AMA OR DAI BHAI, SO WHAT ? U CAN COMPARED WITH THAT TYPES OF PERSON.OF COURSE NEPALI ARE NOT STILL MATURE N ENOUGH CAPACITY TO DIGEST SUCH TYPES OF UR MODERN WORDS, WE MUST WAIT TWENTY YEARS,

    AND I WOULD LIKE TO QUESTION JUST ONE IF U WON’T MIND.

    FOR EXAMPLE, IF YOUR OWN TEEN CHILD WILL READ UR MODERN WORD IN UR COMMENT OR POEM AND AFTER THAT HE CAN COPY SAME AS U FOR HER OR HIS MOTHER OR SISTER OR NEIGHBOUR.
    THEN WHAT IS YOUR RESPONCED FOR UR CHILD??
    BUT STILL I RESPECT UR SOME OF BYANGYATAMAK WORDS OF UR POEM.
    AND U FELT MUKHAAN PYACHHA HANNU PARNE WORD HURT U SO MUCH IS IT??
    IT IS JUST THEGO , NO MATTER LIKE UR FUCKING NAST PRONO WORDS.

    OFCOURSE WE MUST USE SUCH KIND OF WORD BUT NOT LIKE UR STYLE, OUR GENERATION NEED TO KNOW BUT NOT THIS WAY, IF U CONSIDER FOR NEW GENERATION FOR TEEN OR TODLER THEN U MUST USE SOME ACKNOWLEDGEMENT TO FEEDBACK THEM.
    I M TAKING A COURSE FOR EARLY CHILDHOOD EDUCATION N THEIR ATTITUE WITH DIFFERENT AGE, AND CERTIFY NURSE COURSES . I KNEW WHICH WORDS WILL INFLEUNCED FOR OUR NEW GENERATION ?? SO I CAN SAY U IF U DON’T MIND PLEASE DON’T DROP UR NEW MODERN WORD IN THIS BLOG.
    BETTER U CAN PUBLISH ONE BOOK WITH ONLY MODERN WORDS , IF U NEED SUGGESTION THEN I CAN HELP U PUBLISH SUCH KIND OF BOOK TO RISE THE INNER HEART FOR OUR SOCIETY.NOT MAKE DUMP N MAKE GARBAGE THE HUMANITY.
    THANK U.

  • 12. Desh Bhakta  |  December 11th, 2005 at 6:39 am

    He Prakash rata makai, that is not other than me to say ‘Pwakka mukhan hannu jasto’. At first, I would like to express my vision on you. There should be only one thing, either you are highly educated and want to show your capacity in English-writing or you are fond of writing English. Otherwise you could express your view in Nepali (in Roman). Okay leave it. Now come to the point, have you ever checked the ‘News blog’ in hknepal.com ? I, always, use this words, derived from Nepali serial ‘Jeere khorsani’ as a jock. Although, I am also not interested to watch Hindi serials, i do not hate them too. Yea, most of the Nepalese have been watching them for years. I do not want to disturb them. This is upon them. you depicted about the episode which has humiliated our community, so why you did not write yourself against that as you mentioned yourself to be a reporter ? And you have given challenge to see you at your address, so what ? Should i give you my address that leads you to me ? If you wish, do not hesitate and write again. And other hand, you have insulted those writers who have been trying to preserve and develop Nepali language in their way. you also have insulted even to Nepalese news papers in HK saying they did nothing and filled the paper with valueless (in your vision) ’sahityik bhela’. what do you think of yourself ? A well-known journalist ? Or only one patriot ? If you really love ‘Nepali bhasha’ you should attend that gathering. And you should confess that you have used the slang and informal words. To conceal your guilt you gave some examples of some writers. Here, for instance, if your friends address you ‘ja..n..tha’ or ‘machi….ne’ , can you write all of them in your news that you send to Nepal ? That’s why, do not be smart to deceive other. Nepali bhashama lekhne koshish garnu, okay !

  • 13. MASKEY,ILL. USA  |  December 11th, 2005 at 7:19 am

    WELDONE, HE RATA MAKAI, MUKKHAN JYAMMAI RANTHANINE GARI!
    YES, ABSOLUTELY RIGHT, I M SUPPORTING UR COMMENT WITH HUNDRED%.
    BHANEKO HO NI TESO TA MAELE PANI,
    KAHA PO , SEER N PUCCHAR KO KHALPI JASTO SHOCHAI LE PANI ADHUNIK BANINACHHA RA???

  • 14. Niru Koirala  |  December 11th, 2005 at 11:14 am

    I read and understood, what you meant to say….thanks for taking the realities out of the society.It is really hard to come up with such words….
    I don’t think, there is any problem with those words….why you people making this a bis deal ? This is literature…there shouldn’t be any bar on language..it is a litarature and there shouldn]t be any restriction on it.
    well done KCji…keep it up.

  • 15. N.B. Gunung  |  December 11th, 2005 at 1:41 pm

    KC JI, tapaneeko kabita malae sahrai man paryao. Bastabma, hamrao Kavi and sahityajyuharu bbqma matrai ramayera khas kurama awaj uthauna birsechhan..SANGHATHIT HUNU RAMRO TARA ..hamilae indianle hepekai ho..kahile nepal india ko yeuta pranta ho bjanne, kahile nepalma ayera nepalidekhi ghreena lagchha bhanne, nepalma chori hundaina..kinaki sabai chaukidar chha bhanne..yesari barambar hamilai balatkar hamro manma gariraheko chha.
    kura chanhi satya ho..aankha chimlinu bhayena.
    Prakash ji,
    tapanee..yestai lekhdai garnush..
    best of luck
    N.B. GURUNG

  • 16. ROHINI CHHETRI(PEAK ROAD)HK  |  December 11th, 2005 at 4:11 pm

    ho, ho, DEar HONEY NIRU jiu,
    U BABE HOT HOT, PINK PINK
    tesle garda ta
    anterastryia mudra ko binimaya dur jhai
    shreeman ra shreemati ko binimaya hunegarchha
    laterature ra words ko Bar nbhaer nai hola!

    CHHORA ko GIRLFRIEND buwa LE use garne garchh???
    tesle hola jivan ma sadhai utAar ra chadhaw auchha???
    any way, i found ur also 100% modernize.

    ofcourse, it is not big deal HONEY.it is minor,
    so keep it moderize babe keep it with commmon wording with sexual words,
    do u know
    what??, only i heard in the labour department
    they said,
    there are so many sexual abuse
    no matter people have sexual intercourse then it belongs sexual abuse
    but HK labour department said in the seminar
    we have diff. kind of sexual abuse
    verbal sex, rape , wordings sex.
    so this time i found new babes are using written sex,
    but it is not big deal.
    keep it up dear Honey and smart new generation laterary
    with ur new words,
    can u tell me Honey , in our society! how many parents OR SCHOOL OR SOME COUNCIL are feeding back to teen for sex education??
    and at atlast what is result for such kind of child??
    i m sure, not only mature laterary will read this peom , it may be have chance to read by young literary,, then what is their feeling on elder literary???

    is IT , they have clear concept to give up with big deal??

    HOT HOT..BABE,

  • 17. Niru Koirala  |  December 12th, 2005 at 2:22 am

    Hi…Rohini..
    I don’t know..why you wrote hot hot babe…
    I was just releasing my views towards this poem, but you did select me to make comment.KINA HOLA?
    ARKO KURA MA TIMRO AAMAKO UMERKI HUN….DHUKH LAGYAO…
    SONCHEKO THINYA…HONGKONGKO NEPALI WEB SITE MA EKAICHHIN BHAYEPANI RAMAUNLA BHANI….TARA…YANHA TA YESTO PO HUNDO RAICHHA..
    DHUKH LAGYAO…
    GARNU CHAINA KUNEI COMMENT ABA..
    TIMIHARUKO WEB SITE TIMIHARULAI NEI MUBARAK

  • 18. KANCHA BIWAS  |  December 12th, 2005 at 2:49 am

    Namaskar!
    The best comment is made by NB GURUNG ji. I would like to thank him for understanding the theme and the conclusions made by the poem. And special thanks goes to the poet himself as well, for writing such a nice poem. Yes, the words are too tangled; even then the poem has been successfully able to show the situation of Nepalis abroad.
    Yes a very little of Nepalis might have been able to do great jobs abroad, but the most of the number is really the same as mentioned in the poet’s poem. We are tortured physically, humiliated mentally and ached at the hearts abroad. Most of ours souls are raped, our pride has been changed to the pieces and we are just living senseless life abroad for a few dollars.

    And we are responsible for it, the poor and uneducated ones can do nothing to change this situation. Yes, the educated ones have to do and can do a lot, but our educated generation is lost in some different world. They are lost in the parties dancing in the English and Hindi tunes. When we are too blindly supporting others culture, achievements and doings, then surely they will have no excuse to insult us. And they will go humiliating us without any hesitation.

    Once again thanking the poet for writing such realistic poem. It is far better than the THAHA NA BITHA KO poems.
    Kancha Biwas ilamelik@yahoo.com

  • 19. ROHINI CHHETRI(PEAK ROAD)HK  |  December 12th, 2005 at 2:58 am

    e hoiN Ba, HONEY NIRU, yi hknepal.com
    ta hamra pewa ta hoinan kya,
    teso ta nabhani honey.
    yi ta sabai ka sajha hun tar sabda le garda po testa comment aeka hun ni.
    e meri basai ke bhaneka hun ti ARKO KURA MA TIMRO AAMAKO UMERKI HUN…KATHAI MERI HONEY, MALAI TA SABAI KO COMMENT padhe pachhi timro chahi comment ko responced garnu mun lager po hun ni honey,
    maaf gari deu honey, kathai testari narisau na honey, feri feri pani jhulk hai.
    Kaha feri MUBARAK BHANNE SABDA PANI BHUJHIN NI HONEY, KIRPAYA DHUKHA NAMANI BHANCHHEU KI??
    YOUR SUPPORT FOR FU….KING SO MY DROP WITH HOT HOT BABE HONEY.

  • 20. KANCHA BIWAS  |  December 12th, 2005 at 5:26 am

    chung king mansion

    I am too sorry for your poor mentality. You are blaming Prakash KC for using that foul word (he has used it for once only). But in your response, u count that word urself, you have used this word many times. Now know urself, how dirty is ur mind set? Even I am sorry for that reader, who did not care for the theme of the poem, but directly went for this word in Prakash ji’s response and started this discussion. You ppl must know that we see, what is in ur mentality…

    No more discussions.
    Kancha biwas…

  • 21. N.B. Gurung  |  December 12th, 2005 at 10:37 am

    sarirko mailalai ta sajilei dhuna sakinchha..tara…manko maila?….kohi kina bhulchha ki…paradeshma saath katti pyaro hunchha bhanne.
    Reality ta chhandaichha…shahityama tyeslai najan andaaj garnu hundaina….lekhinchha..tyeslai…tesari nai bujhnu parchha.slil sandhai slil hundaina ra aslil sandhai aslil hundaina…..sabda na ho…sahityama khelnu parchha.
    yesma kabita ra tyesko rachanakarlai kina badnaam garne?
    Tyo rohini chhetri nam gareko manchhe lai ke bhayeko? sirms chhaina ki kyaho..? ahaan aune ketiko naam gareko sandhai taruni matra hunchha bhanne shamjhanchha ki kyaho?
    Tesari barambar…jiskai rahane? Bekufle garne jasto garne lai ke bhanne?
    Narilai ijjat dina sike hune. kasaiki wife, mother hun sakdina tyo?
    je hos..yeta utako bhanda damdar kabita ho yo. Garantee chha yesma..
    dhanyabaad kanchha bishwas bhai..
    satyalai satya nai bhannu parchha.
    NB Gurung

  • 22. Prativa K.C., Canada  |  December 12th, 2005 at 12:28 pm

    I was able to read all of yours comments and wondered that some of you have encouraged poet for writing bold (immodest) and bashless (impudent) words. Yes, the word he used is vogue-word and can be used in common talking, but not in writing. I have been living in Canada for ten years, even Canadians use such type of words in speaking not in writing. In my thought, the poet should not use such word which ruins his writing career. And rest of things, writers are also humanbeing, they need unity, no matter whether by means of gatherings or BBQ. who says writers should not attend BBQ ? Or writers should cancel all their programs if there is some probablity (forecasted by fortune-teller !) to occur any incident against their nation ? Or everytime writers must be responsible for unexpected event whether they have organised any ceremonial function months ago ? so, let’s think before accusing them for their deed. Finally, i would like to request all of you not to argue on worthless matter and uinte each other being NEPALI. Thank you.

  • 23. N.B. Gunung  |  December 12th, 2005 at 1:04 pm

    kancha biwas bhai….thank you for thik lai thik bhanekoma,…kasto kasto bebakuf aunchhan.yahan,
    Bichari tyo bainilai ke lekheko tyo bebakufle? tyesko gharma didi bahini,ama chhaina ki kya ho?
    yo kabitale kasaiko charitra thyakkai parechha kyare,…
    thik bjannubho bhai,,
    discussion garne thaun haina raichha yo..
    no more form me either
    NB Gurung

  • 24. Chandra S. Gurung  |  December 12th, 2005 at 3:04 pm

    Kabita ta ati ramro ho. Tara hami Nepaliharu ko dheraei bolne bani le sab kura bigaryo.
    Prativa KC ji ra NB Gurung ji ko comments ta saraei naei ramro.
    Dhanyabaad
    Chandra S. Gurung

  • 25. lara  |  December 13th, 2005 at 10:26 am

    Anawakyak charcha badi bhayo. Should be cloe this chapter and rethink about new issues, ki kaso kcjee?

  • 26. Prakash K.C.  |  December 13th, 2005 at 2:30 pm

    Laxmiji..!

    I have moved ahead long time ago. It was a really unusual experience for me. People hated me, people encouraged me, people gave equivocal coment to let me hover on my own imaginations.
    Yes, it was indeed a extra experience.
    I just wanted to have my say…whatever but I had this.
    I’m sending a report to nepal about the humiliation….people have to look again and again onto the mirror…whether they have their head on it’s position or not, because…bowing for every this and that sort of blow ,might have made dis-balanced.
    Just, today, I have posted one story here and it is not rough indeed, but I don’t know,whether it’s gonna get published or not.
    If it was, then would see you guys here with your another whole lot of differences and hatred.
    prakash

  • 27. Akash  |  December 13th, 2005 at 3:20 pm

    Prakash ji, Maile dekheko ra bhageko hk ko bastabikta tapaile yaha prasphutan garayeko dekhda khusi lagyo..wowwe ranro byangya ani ramro kala…
    -Akash jordan

  • 28. lara  |  December 13th, 2005 at 5:45 pm

    Prakashjee,
    Wonder? do I know you personally? Well, people they just wanted to have their say……..nobody hates you coz this is open blog and they are just trying to express their comments and views so you have to accept both black & white. I think this will help you more to write instead of pull you behind. Keep it up ! as a reader I love to read both negative and positive all taste of articles not only Prem ka kura, Good Friday, ra Sunday Dance Party ka Wine ra Taquila ka kura haru ………I appreciate all types of fact that people are unware though they are living and called them selves modern and civilized at nite life, ki kaso?

  • 29. Prakash K.C.  |  December 14th, 2005 at 2:55 am

    Laxmiji..!
    Do you know me personally? I think, you do.
    If not…..it’s not the big deal…
    That’s why I stressed in my poem..
    SAAHITYAKAARHARU………..ABHAIMAAN UGHRAAUNCHHAN…
    prakash

  • 30. puja  |  December 14th, 2005 at 5:34 am

    This poem shows reality.TITTO SATYA,which people don’t accept easily.Very few people dare to accept and the others refuse.
    Anyway good job,keep it up.
    puja,yau ma tei

  • 31. Desh Bhakta  |  December 14th, 2005 at 9:06 am

    Hoina hau, kalle ‘kabita naramro chha’ bhaneko chha ? Kabita ta ekdamai bimba ra pratikatmak ani kalatmak chha, yasma dui mat chhaina. Yasto bimbatmak kabita biralaile lekhchhan.Malai kabita lekhaiko starle atyanta prabhabit pareko chha. Tara, ‘Nasty word’ ko kura ta lekhakle aaphno commentma (comment No. 4 ko paragraph 8 ma) prayog gareko shabda ko lagi bhanieko ho bhanne kura sabailai chetana bhaya….!

  • 32. lara  |  December 14th, 2005 at 9:16 am

    Hehe…………….Pakashjee pani! Dhatterika ! manchhe chine pani sayad nam chai ‘tapai uhi Prakash’ bhanera nachine ko hola maile…………….ma kaha sahityakar ho ra ! abhiman ugrauna sakne, ma ta yaso tapai haru jasto ‘Barishtha’ agi padhi tople matrai ho.

  • 33. SANJU  |  December 14th, 2005 at 1:08 pm

    hi’kc
    ani timlay jasta ko teastai kasari lakhaknu sakai ko ni ho.
    i like it . pargati ramro cha. asha cha pachi2 pani yastai
    thuprai laik haru padna pauchu vannai. j hos all the best.
    coungraissssss
    sanju form hk

  • 34. ROHINI CHHETRI(PEAK ROAD)HK  |  December 14th, 2005 at 3:05 pm

    oho, Lal, slam hai maha manav nyaydhish N.B. Gurung jiu
    yo rohini bhanne lae kdhi bhaeko chhaen , hunu ta tyaha hajur laee po hun samma bheko rahechha ta.
    ki ksao??
    ke tyo apsubda jasta wakya haru le yo blog bharny hune ani ke hot hot babe bhane lekhnu nahune ???
    yo hot hot babe ta tyo ,COOMENT N. 4 KO somebody are fuc..ing bhanne sabda bhnada ta ati ijjatilo chha anI tes mathi hajur haru jasta kalo chasma lagaee comment padhane haru ko lagi mero comment tihik chha.
    be smart to read comment. malae biswash chha tyo kavita laee kasai le pani murkh rup le hereko chhan tar kavi jiu afnai kavita bhitra ko commnet n. 4 le yo sabai baadhi paero lyaeko ho.
    dhanya baad.
    mata no discussion from me either bhaner bhandin kin bhane yo bhaneko open blog ho, ho ysama comment n.4 ko fuc…ing jasto sabad le thau ogtachh bhane?? maele bhaneko hot hot babe bahneko chahi jhan ati uttam sthan le sambodhan garko ho.
    tapaele matrai satya lae satya bhannu janeko jasto lagyo ni???
    comment number 4 ko fuc…ing bhanne sabda chahi sajilae DIGEST hunsakne tar hot hot babe r pink pink bhanda chahi kasaiko wife r mother hun nsakne bhaner attinu bhae jasto chha,??? ofcourse m chhitai nai yo HK ma nai chhitai nai kasai ko srimati hunu gaeraheko chhu, yadi yo HK MA nai N.B. jiu basnu hunchha bhAne yaso PEAK MA dec ko 27 ma aunush mero WEDDING KO LAGO NIMTO CHHA HAI.
    so don’t worry N.B. gurung jiu.
    better try to read well comment n. 4/ and begin to bark same as DONALD CHHAN KO BODY GUARD JASTO…..
    PEAK ROAD ,HK.

  • 35. ROHINI CHHETRI(PEAK ROAD)HK  |  December 14th, 2005 at 3:11 pm

    COMMENT N. 34 MA HUNU PARNE WAKYA SACHAIEKO
    KASAELE PANI YO KAVITA LAE MURKHA RUP LE HEREKO CHAEN , I MEAN NOBODY COMMENT WITH BAD IMAGE HERE ABOUT KAVITA JUST FOR HIS OWN COOMENT N. 4 KO LAGI YATRO MAHABHARAT.

  • 36. newarni keti, NY.USA  |  December 14th, 2005 at 3:21 pm

    I got chance to read nice poem , it is nice, but poet himself focused about BBQ AND LITERATURE.
    I have confused on poet . What is the different with BBQ. and literature??
    well, but poet himself wrote coment n. 4 with such a nasty words.I found very messed .
    Any way mistake is the one media to get more experience in life.I would like to thanks for great suggestion to LARA JI.
    Thank you.
    Keep it up cont’ your poem.
    we must keep co-operate for being NEPALI.

  • 37. Dilu Gurung, Wan Chai,hk.  |  December 14th, 2005 at 3:32 pm

    Hey, Prakash ji,
    very nice poem, It is reality of nepali life either in nepal or in hk, but different commentator have different comment.
    somebody comment about educated are lost in the world somewhere to dance and busy for BBQ. party but somebody comment satya lae satya .
    but i found there are big misunderstanding between commnetator and poet himself.
    Well, I m not a real Janne suneko machhe but all the comments are screaming with misunderstanding. It is happening because of comment number 4 . poet himself.
    choi kin.

  • 38. chung king mansion  |  December 14th, 2005 at 3:48 pm

    Hello, Kanchha Biwas jiu.
    I m very sorry for your poor mental too. You are counting with multpe method of my cooment. But why did u not mentioned one word equel 12 are same. though he wrote one time, but that is belongs nasty word ever i wrote 12 times that is the same,I m very sorry for your poor mind to support commnet number 4 with such a nasty word.
    did u read the commnet ? Nobody hate to poem, but most of commentator hate to read comment n. 4 which poet himself focused with Fuc…ing word. It is big deal in this open blog.
    Thanks

  • 39. Tilak Tamu  |  December 14th, 2005 at 5:08 pm

    K.C. JI RAMMRO KABITAKO LAGI DHYANBAD.MERO BICHARMA KABITA SAMAJKO AAINA HO RA HUNU PARCHHA. K.C.JIKO KABITA KO SARMA TYO PRASTIYAKO CHHA. BIBHINNA SATHIHARU K.C. JILE CHAYAN GARNU BHAYAKO SABDAMA ALJHIYAKO JASTO LAGYO. LEKHMA ULEKH BHAYAKO SABDA LE SAMAJLAI NAKARATMOK ASAR PARDAINA YATIHO KABITALE DARSAUNA LAGEKO TATHYA SAKARATMOK RUPMA LINU PARYO,BAS.

  • 40. Prakash K.C.  |  December 15th, 2005 at 12:20 am

    Hi…..All.
    It’s getting nasty itself.
    All I want to ask one question.
    It may be my justification for my own word.
    In which dictionary, you can find the bad and vulger meaning for ‘FUC……..ING’ ? what does it mean ? That because, you think ,you know the missing word. But, I haven’t used that. Why you people are making this as a big deal ? Somebody from other countries who have commented here, don’t know that real issue. I don’t have problems with SAHITYAKAR’s BBQ, I just wanted them to express a little bit concerns about the humiliation for Nepali in HK, humiliated by Indian TV serial, which they didn’t, and we just could read, their gatherism’s descriptions.
    But, still, people are not speaking anything on that.
    I’m fade up with hypocrisy.
    Anyway, thanks for appreciating my poem .
    For that, comment no 4,
    I would like to stick on my question…
    In which dictionary, you can find the bad meaning for ‘fuc….ing’ ?
    Infact, it’s not even a word.
    Thanks.
    Please, don’t take an oath to take me down.
    And don’t pretend to be what you are not, actually.
    Thanks.
    Have healthy discussions !!
    Prakash K.C.

  • 41. Kiran Singh  |  December 15th, 2005 at 2:34 am

    I am sorry I could not get back to you any earlier. I read your poem and I liked it. Even if I am not out there, I can understand the pain and disgust you have expressed in the poem because it is like that here too. I am in the USA since 2001 but I still feel the humilation, well not as bad as you have expressed but it is always there. Being a ‘pareshi’ in itself is a bitter pill to swallow.

    I have always liked your style. Remember, ‘abamulyan bhayako manasthiti’, man you got it in you. Keep writing. But most of all I liked your poem ‘Ghumti bata’ or was it ‘Ghumti ma’.

    I have always known you and would like to suggest you that you have to change your style a little bit. Well, this is what I think, right, so it may not be right, as far as you are concerned but, try and be little optimistic in your approach. You don’t have to look for pain, it is always there, but pleasrue, happiness you have to go out of your way to get. That’s what as a friend and as a fan of your poems, I like to see more of your ‘Ghumti’ poem in the days to come.

    Best of luck.

    Hey, why don’t you write songs, man. You know how terrible those pop songs are. Try and give it your touch.

    Love
    Kiran

  • 42. Y Rai  |  December 4th, 2008 at 8:52 pm

    Publication of such a piece of work containing language that readers might find offensive, is deplorable and breach of ethics.

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